राम

7

उत्तरकाण्ड

Uttara Kanda

Ram's coronation, the nature of bhakti, and Shiva-Parvati's dialogue on devotion.

270 verses

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केकीकण्ठाभनीलं सुरवरविलसद्विप्रपादाब्जचिह्नं

शोभाढ्यं पीतवस्त्रं सरसिजनयनं सर्वदा सुप्रसन्नम्।

पाणौ नाराचचापं कपिनिकरयुतं बन्धुना सेव्यमानं

नौमीड्यं जानकीशं रघुवरमनिशं पुष्पकारूढरामम्।।1।।

कोसलेन्द्रपदकञ्जमञ्जुलौ कोमलावजमहेशवन्दितौ।

जानकीकरसरोजलालितौ चिन्तकस्य मनभृङ्गसड्गिनौ।।2।।

कुन्दइन्दुदरगौरसुन्दरं अम्बिकापतिमभीष्टसिद्धिदम्।

कारुणीककलकञ्जलोचनं नौमि शंकरमनंगमोचनम्।।3।।

Kekeekanthaabhaneelan suravaravilasadviprapaadaabjachihnan

Shobhaadhyan peetavastran sarasijanayanan sarvadaa suprasannam

Paanau naaraachachaapan kapinikarayutan bandhunaa sevyamaanan

Naumeedyan jaanakeeshan raghuvaramanishan pushpakaaroodharaamam (1)

Kosalendrapadakanjamanjulau komalaavajamaheshavanditau

Jaanakeekarasarojalaalitau chintakasy manabhringasadginau (2)

Kundaindudaragaurasundaran ambikaapatimabheeshtasiddhidam

Kaaruneekakalakanjalochanan naumi shankaramanangamochanam (3)

श्लोक 3

Blue as peacock's throat he gleams, | with lotus eyes serene;

Yellow-robed, with bow in hand, | served by monkeys seen.

Lakshmana waits upon his Lord, | on Pushpaka he rides;

To Janaki's beloved Rama | my ceaseless praise abides.

I bow unceasingly to Sri Rama, Lord of Janaki, best of Raghu's line, seated upon the Pushpaka chariot.

His complexion shines blue-green like a peacock's throat. His feet bear the auspicious marks that grace the lotus-feet of brahmins.

Radiant in yellow silk, with lotus eyes ever serene, He holds bow and arrow in hand. The monkey host surrounds Him, and His brother Lakshmana serves Him.

To this praiseworthy Lord I bow without end.

The lovely, tender lotus-feet of the Lord of Kosala, worshipped by Brahma and Maheshvara alike, caressed by the lotus-hands of Janaki: upon those feet the bee of the devotee's mind alights and never leaves.

I bow to Shankara, fair as jasmine and the inner glow of the moon, Lord of Ambika, grantor of all heart's desires, whose eyes are compassionate blue lotuses, the destroyer of Kama.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

मोरके कण्ठकी आभाके समान (हरिताभ) नीलवर्ण, देवताओंमें श्रेष्ठ, ब्राह्मणके चरणकमलके चिह्नसे सुशोभित, शोभासे पूर्ण, पीताम्बर धारण किये, कमलनेत्र, सदा परम प्रसन्न, हाथोंमें बाण और धनुष धारण किये हुए, वानरसमूहसे युक्त, भाई लक्ष्मणजीसे सेवित, स्तुति किये जाने योग्य, श्रीजानकीजीके पति, रघुकुलश्रेष्ठ, पुष्पकविमानपर सवार श्रीरामचन्द्रजीको मैं निरन्तर नमस्कार करता हूँ।

Notes

Invocatory shloka comprising three Sanskrit verses (numbered 1, 2, 3 in the original). Verse 1: 'Kekeekanthaabhaneelan' praises Rama returning victorious on the Pushpaka, surrounded by devoted companions. Verse 2: 'Kosalendrapadakanjamanjulau' praises Rama's lotus-feet, worshipped by Brahma and Shiva, caressed by Sita's lotus-hands, and beloved of the devotee's bee-like mind. Verse 3: 'Kundaindudaragaurasundaran' salutes Shankara, fair as jasmine and moon, who grants all wishes and destroys Kama. Poddarji notes this triple invocation sets the devotional frame for Uttara Kanda: Rama as triumphant Lord, His feet as the refuge of all devotees, and Shiva as the narrator whose grace makes the telling possible.

रहा एक दिन अवधि कर अति आरत पुर लोग।

जहँ तहँ सोचहिं नारि नर कृस तन राम बियोग।।

सगुन होहिं सुंदर सकल मन प्रसन्न सब केर।

प्रभु आगवन जनाव जनु नगर रम्य चहुँ फेर।।

कौसल्यादि मातु सब मन अनंद अस होइ।

आयउ प्रभु श्री अनुज जुत कहन चहत अब कोइ।।

भरत नयन भुज दच्छिन फरकत बारहिं बार।

जानि सगुन मन हरष अति लागे करन बिचार।।

Rahaa eka din avadhi kar ati aarat pur log

Jahan tahan sochahin naari nar kris tan raam biyog

Sagun hohin sundar sakal man prasann sab ker

Prabhu aagavan janaav janu nagar ramy chahun pher

Kausalyaadi maatu sab man anand asa hoi

Aayau prabhu shree anuj jut kahan chahat aba koi

Bharat nayan bhuj dachchhin pharakat baarahin baar

Jaani sagun man harash ati laage karan bichaar

दोहा 1

One day remains of promise-time, | the townfolk pine and yearn;

Men and women everywhere, | thin with love, await return.

Only one day remained of the promised time. The people of Ayodhya were beside themselves with longing.

Men and women everywhere were lost in anxious thought, their bodies grown thin from separation from Rama.

Beautiful omens appeared on all sides and every heart felt glad. It was as though the charming city itself announced the Lord's arrival from every quarter.

All the mothers, Kausalya and the rest, felt a surge of joy in their hearts, as if someone were about to say: 'The Lord has come, together with Shri and His younger brother!'

Bharat's right eye and right arm began to throb again and again. Recognizing these as auspicious signs, his heart leapt with boundless joy, and he began to reflect.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

श्रीरामजीके लौटनेकी अवधिका एक ही दिन बाकी रह गया, अतएव नगरके लोग बहुत आतुर (अधीर) हो रहे हैं। स्त्री-पुरुष जहाँ-तहाँ विचार कर रहे हैं कि क्या बात है, श्रीरामजी क्यों नहीं आये।

Notes

Doha 1 (with Sortha). Four couplet-pairs plus one closing doha. This verse establishes Ayodhya's collective yearning as the emotional ground of the entire Kanda. 'Krish tan Raam biyog': their bodies have grown thin (krisha) from fourteen years of separation. Poddarji reads the auspicious omens (sagun) as nature itself responding to the Lord's imminent arrival. Bharat's throbbing right eye and right arm are traditional Hindu signs of coming good fortune for men. The verse oscillates between communal anguish and dawning hope.

चौपाई 1
रहेउ एक दिन अवधि अधारा। समुझत मन दुख भयउ अपारा।।

Raheu eka din avadhi adhaaraa. samujhat man dukh bhayau apaaraa

One day remained of the promised time, and thinking about it, my mind became filled with immense sorrow.

कारन कवन नाथ नहिं आयउ। जानि कुटिल किधौं मोहि बिसरायउ।।

Kaaran kavan naath nahin aayau. jaani kutil kidhaun mohi bisaraayau

What could be the reason that my Lord has not come? Perhaps knowing my deceitful nature, He has forgotten me.

अहह धन्य लछिमन बड़भागी। राम पदारबिंदु अनुरागी।।

Ahah dhany lachhiman badabhaagee. raam padaarabindu anuraagee

Ah, blessed and most fortunate is Lakshmana, who is devoted to Rama's lotus feet.

कपटी कुटिल मोहि प्रभु चीन्हा। ताते नाथ संग नहिं लीन्हा।।

Kapatee kutil mohi prabhu cheenhaa. taate naath sang nahin leenhaa

My Lord has recognized me as deceitful and crooked, therefore He did not take me along.

जौं करनी समुझै प्रभु मोरी। नहिं निस्तार कलप सत कोरी।।

Jaun karanee samujhai prabhu moree. nahin nistaar kalap sat koree

If my Lord truly understands my deeds, then even in a hundred million ages there would be no salvation for me.

जन अवगुन प्रभु मान न काऊ। दीन बंधु अति मृदुल सुभाऊ।।

Jan avagun prabhu maan na kaaoo. deen bandhu ati mridul subhaaoo

The Lord never considers the faults of His devotees; He is the friend of the humble with an extremely gentle nature.

मोरि जियँ भरोस दृढ़ सोई। मिलिहहिं राम सगुन सुभ होई।।

Mori jiyan bharos dridh soee. milihahin raam sagun subh hoee

This firm faith remains in my heart - I shall meet Rama when auspicious signs appear.

बीतें अवधि रहहि जौं प्राना। अधम कवन जग मोहि समाना।।

Beeten avadhi rahahi jaun praanaa. adham kavan jag mohi samaanaa

If I remain alive after the time period passes, then who in this world would be more wretched than me?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

अहा! लक्ष्मण बड़े धन्य एवं बड़भागी हैं, जो श्रीरामचन्द्रजीके चरणकमलोंमें अनुरागी हैं। मुझे तो प्रभुने कपटी और कुटिल पहचान लिया, इसीसे नाथने मुझे साथ नहीं लिया! यदि प्रभु मेरी करनीपर ध्यान दें, तो सौ करोड़ कल्पोंतक भी मेरा निस्तार नहीं हो सकता। परन्तु प्रभु सेवकका अवगुण कभी नहीं मानते। वे दीनबन्धु हैं और अत्यन्त ही कोमल स्वभावके हैं। मेरे हृदयमें वही दृढ़ भरोसा है कि राम मिलेंगे, शकुन बड़े शुभ हो रहे हैं। किन्तु अवधि बीत जानेपर यदि मेरे प्राण रह गये तो जगत्में मेरे समान नीच कौन होगा? भरतजीकी दाहिनी आँख और दाहिनी भुजा बार-बार फड़क रही है। इसे शुभ शकुन जानकर उनके मनमें अत्यन्त हर्ष हुआ और वे विचार करने लगे;प्राणोंकी आधाररूप अवधिका एक ही दिन शेष रह गया। यह सोचते ही भरतजीके मनमें अपार दुःख हुआ। क्या कारण हुआ कि नाथ नहीं आये? प्रभुने कुटिल जानकर कहीं भुला तो नहीं दिया? यह सब गुप्त बात मैं अपने ज्ञानके अनुसार कहता हूँ; सुकवि सुनते ही समझ जाएंगे। कहते और सुनते हुए रसके अधीन हो जाओ;रामकथा जगत्में मंगलकारी है। जगत्में रामकथाकी सीमा नहीं है, उनके मनमें ऐसी प्रतीति है। रामजीके अवतार अनेक प्रकारके हैं। हे उदार! रामकथा सुनो।

Notes

Chaupai 1. Bharat's soliloquy, eight couplet-pairs. This is one of Tulsidas's most psychologically penetrating passages. Bharat accuses himself of being 'kutil' (crooked) and 'kapatee' (deceitful), convinced that Rama left him behind for good reason. Yet in the very next breath he declares 'jan avagun prabhu maan na kaaoo' (the Lord never reckons His servant's faults). Poddarji highlights this oscillation between self-blame and unshakeable trust as the hallmark of mature devotion. The verse also introduces the dramatic tension: the promised fourteen years are about to expire. Bharat has vowed to enter the fire if Rama does not return on time.

राम बिरह सागर महँ भरत मगन मन होत।

बिप्र रूप धरि पवन सुत आइ गयउ जनु पोत।।1(क)।।

बैठि देखि कुसासन जटा मुकुट कृस गात।

राम राम रघुपति जपत स्त्रवत नयन जलजात।।1(ख)।।

Raam birah saagar mahan bharat magan man hot

Bipr roop dhari pavan sut aai gayau janu pot.1(ka)

Baithi dekhi kusaasan jataa mukut kris gaat

Raam raam raghupati japat stravat nayan jalajaat.1(kha)

दोहा 2

In Rama's absence-ocean vast, | Bharat's heart was drowned;

The Wind-god's son came like a boat, | brahmin-robed, and found.

Bharat's mind was sinking in the ocean of separation from Rama. Just then, the Son of the Wind arrived, disguised as a brahmin, like a boat reaching one who drowns.

Seated on a mat of kusha grass, wearing matted locks for a crown, his body grown thin, Bharat was chanting 'Rama, Rama, Raghupati,' and tears streamed ceaselessly from his eyes.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

श्रीरामजीके विरहरूपी समुद्रमें भरतजीका मन डूब रहा था, उसी समय पवनपुत्र हनुमानजी ब्राह्मणका रूप धारण करके आ गये, मानो उन्हें डूबनेसे बचानेके लिये नाव आ गयी।

Notes

Doha 1(ka) and 1(kha). Two tightly paired dohas. The first uses the drowning metaphor: Bharat is 'magan' (submerged) in the 'saagar' of viraha, and Hanuman arrives 'janu pot' (like a boat). The second doha paints Bharat's physical state: kusha-grass seat, jata-mukut (matted-hair crown), emaciated body. He chants Rama's name while tears flow. Poddarji notes the deliberate contrast: Bharat in the garb of a renunciant, Hanuman in the disguise of a brahmin. Both are consumed by Rama-prema, expressed through radically different forms.

चौपाई 2
देखत हनूमान अति हरषेउ। पुलक गात लोचन जल बरषेउ।।

Dekhat hanoomaan ati harasheu. pulak gaat lochan jal barasheu

Seeing Hanuman, Bharata was filled with great joy. His body thrilled with emotion and tears of happiness flowed from his eyes.

मन महँ बहुत भाँति सुख मानी। बोलेउ श्रवन सुधा सम बानी।।

Man mahan bahut bhaanti sukh maanee. boleu shravan sudhaa sam baanee

In his heart he felt happiness in many ways. He spoke words that were like nectar to the ears.

जासु बिरहँ सोचहु दिन राती। रटहु निरंतर गुन गन पाँती।।

Jaasu birahan sochahu din raatee. ratahu nirantar gun gan paantee

He for whose separation you grieve day and night, constantly chanting His endless virtues and qualities.

रघुकुल तिलक सुजन सुखदाता। आयउ कुसल देव मुनि त्राता।।

Raghukul tilak sujan sukhadaataa. aayau kusal dev muni traataa

The crown jewel of Raghu's dynasty, the giver of joy to the virtuous, the protector of gods and sages has come safely.

रिपु रन जीति सुजस सुर गावत। सीता सहित अनुज प्रभु आवत।।

Ripu ran jeeti sujas sur gaavat. seetaa sahit anuj prabhu aavat

Having conquered enemies in battle, with the gods singing His glorious fame, the Lord comes with Sita and His younger brother.

सुनत बचन बिसरे सब दूखा। तृषावंत जिमि पाइ पियूषा।।

Sunat bachan bisare sab dookhaa. trishaavant jimi paai piyooshaa

Hearing these words, all sorrows were forgotten, like a thirsty person finding nectar.

को तुम्ह तात कहाँ ते आए। मोहि परम प्रिय बचन सुनाए।।

Ko tumh taat kahaan te aae. mohi param priy bachan sunaae

Who are you, dear one, and from where have you come? You have spoken words most dear to me.

मारुत सुत मैं कपि हनुमाना। नामु मोर सुनु कृपानिधाना।।

Maarut sut main kapi hanumaanaa. naamu mor sunu kripaanidhaanaa

I am the son of the wind, the monkey Hanuman. Listen to my name, O treasure of compassion.

दीनबंधु रघुपति कर किंकर। सुनत भरत भेंटेउ उठि सादर।।

Deenabandhu raghupati kar kinkar. sunat bharat bhenteu uthi saadar

I am the servant of Raghupati, the friend of the humble. Hearing this, Bharata rose and embraced him with reverence.

मिलत प्रेम नहिं हृदयँ समाता। नयन स्त्रवत जल पुलकित गाता।।

Milat prem nahin hridayan samaataa. nayan stravat jal pulakit gaataa

In their meeting, love could not be contained in the heart. Water flowed from their eyes and their bodies thrilled with joy.

कपि तव दरस सकल दुख बीते। मिले आजु मोहि राम पिरीते।।

Kapi tav daras sakal dukh beete. mile aaju mohi raam pireete

O monkey, seeing you all my sorrows have ended. Today I have met one who is beloved of Rama.

बार बार बूझी कुसलाता। तो कहुँ देउँ काह सुनु भ्राता।।

Baar baar boojhee kusalaataa. to kahun deun kaah sunu bhraataa

Again and again he inquired about welfare. What shall I give you in return, listen brother?

एहि संदेस सरिस जग माहीं। करि बिचार देखेउँ कछु नाहीं।।

Ehi sandes saris jag maaheen. kari bichaar dekheun kachhu naaheen

In this world there is nothing comparable to this message. I have considered and found nothing else.

नाहिन तात उरिन मैं तोही। अब प्रभु चरित सुनावहु मोही।।

Naahin taat urin main tohee. aba prabhu charit sunaavahu mohee

I am not free from debt to you, dear one. Now tell me the story of my Lord's deeds.

तब हनुमंत नाइ पद माथा। कहे सकल रघुपति गुन गाथा।।

Tab hanumant naai pad maathaa. kahe sakal raghupati gun gaathaa

Then Hanuman, bowing his head at Bharata's feet, narrated all the virtuous deeds of Raghupati.

कहु कपि कबहुँ कृपाल गोसाईं। सुमिरहिं मोहि दास की नाईं।।

Kahu kapi kabahun kripaal gosaaeen. sumirahin mohi daas kee naaeen

Tell me, O monkey, does the compassionate Lord ever remember me like a devoted servant?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

शत्रुको रणमें जीतकर सीताजी और लक्ष्मणजीसहित प्रभु आ रहे हैं; देवता उनका सुयश गा रहे हैं। ये वचन सुनते ही भरतजीको सारे दुःख भूल गये, जैसे प्यासेको अमृत पाकर प्यासके दुःखको भूल जाय। भरतजीने पूछा;हे तात! तुम कौन हो? और कहाँसे आये हो? जो तुमने मुझको ये परम प्रिय वचन सुनाये। हनुमानजीने कहा;हे कृपानिधान! सुनिये, मैं पवनका पुत्र और जातिका वानर हूँ; मेरा नाम हनुमान है। मैं दीनोंके बन्धु श्रीरघुनाथजीका दास हूँ। यह सुनते ही भरतजी उठकर आदरपूर्वक हनुमानजीसे गले लगकर मिले। मिलते समय प्रेम हृदयमें नहीं समाता। नेत्रोंसे आनन्द और प्रेमके आँसुओंका जल बहने लगा और शरीर पुलकित हो गया। भरतजीने कहा;हे हनुमान! तुम्हारे दर्शनसे मेरे समस्त दुःख समाप्त हो गये। तुम्हारे रूपमें आज मुझे प्यारे रामजी ही मिल गये। भरतजीने बार-बार कुशल पूछी और कहा;हे भाई! सुनो, इस शुभ संवादके बदलेमें तुम्हें क्या दूँ? भरतजीको देखते ही हनुमानजी अत्यन्त हर्षित हुए। उनका शरीर पुलकित हो गया और नेत्रोंसे प्रेमाश्रुओंका जल बरसने लगा। मनमें बहुत प्रकारसे सुख मानकर वे कानोंके लिये अमृतके समान वाणी बोले;जिनके विरहमें आप दिन-रात सोच करते रहते हैं और जिनके गुणसमूहोंकी पंक्तियोंको आप निरन्तर रटते रहते हैं, वे ही रघुकुलके तिलक, सज्जनोंको सुख देनेवाले और देवताओं तथा मुनियोंके रक्षक श्रीरामजी सकुशल आ गये। इस सन्देशके समान जगत्में कुछ भी नहीं है, मैंने यह विचार कर देख लिया है। इसलिये हे तात! मैं तुमसे किसी प्रकार भी उऋण नहीं हो सकता। तब हनुमानजीने भरतजीके चरणोंमें मस्तक नवाकर श्रीरघुनाथजीकी सारी गुणगाथा कही। भरतजीने पूछा;कहो, कृपालु स्वामी श्रीरामचन्द्रजी कभी मुझे अपने दासकी तरह याद भी करते हैं? मैं आपसे बार-बार यही वरदान माँगता हूँ कि मुझे आपके चरणकमलोंकी अचलभक्ति और आपके भक्तोंका सत्संग सदा प्राप्त हो। हे लक्ष्मीपते! हर्षित होकर मुझे यही दीजिये। जैसे गोशालामें मुकुटधारी राजा आ जाय, वैसे भक्तोंके संसारमें भगवान्‌ नहीं होते। प्रकृति, जीव, अज्ञान और ज्ञान;इनका रहस्य भगवान्‌ का जलपान करनेके समान सरल है। जिनका नाम एक बार स्मरण करनेसे मनुष्य अपार भवसागरसे पार उतर जाते हैं, क्या उनके दूत भी बन्धनमें आ सकते हैं? प्रभु सर्वज्ञ हैं, उन्होंने वह मर्म नहीं पाया। ऐसा वह अत्यन्त भयंकर काल आपको नहीं व्यापता, इसका क्या कारण है? हे कृपालु! मुझे कहिये, यह ज्ञानका प्रभाव है या योगका बल है? जप, तप, व्रत, यज्ञ और यज्ञ-ये सब उत्तम हैं, पर इनसे श्रीराम कभी नहीं मिलते। प्रेमसहित नाम जपनेसे अमृत-समुद्र सुंदर श्रीराम अवश्य मिलते हैं। युद्धमें प्रभुका नागपाशसे बन्धन देखकर मुझे अत्यन्त मोह हो गया था कि श्रीरामजी तो सच्चिदानन्दघन हैं, वे किस कारण व्याकुल हैं॥ ६८ (ख)॥ हे भ्राता! वह सब देखो। देवता, मनुष्य, मुनि;सब एक मत हैं। प्रभुकी प्रतापकी बड़ाई कोई नहीं कह सकता; वह वही जानता है जिसको उसने बुझाया है। हे गिरिजा! मैंने रामकथा वर्णन की जो कलियुगके मलको नाश करनेवाली और मनके मैलको हरनेवाली है। संसारका मूल अविद्या है, अविद्यासे शेष, शेषसे मोहने मनको घेर लिया। इस प्रकार नगरके स्त्री-पुरुष श्रीरामजीका गुणगान करते हैं और कृपानिधान सदा सबपर अत्यन्त प्रसन्न रहते हैं।

Notes

Chaupai 2. Hanuman delivers the good news. 'Shravan sudhaa sam baanee' (words like nectar to the ears) is a classic Manas trope for divine tidings. 'Raghukul tilak sujan sukhdaataa' names Rama as the crown-jewel (tilak) of the Raghu dynasty and the bestower of joy (sukhdaataa) to the virtuous (sujan). Poddarji emphasizes the emotional reversal: Bharat passes from suicidal despair to speechless ecstasy in a single moment. The final couplet pair is expanded slightly from Tulsidas's compressed style for clarity; the Hindi commentary confirms Bharat embraces Hanuman repeatedly.

छन्द 1
निज दास ज्यों रघुबंसभूषन कबहुँ मम सुमिरन कर् यो।

सुनि भरत बचन बिनीत अति कपि पुलकित तन चरनन्हि पर् यो।।

रघुबीर निज मुख जासु गुन गन कहत अग जग नाथ जो।

काहे न होइ बिनीत परम पुनीत सदगुन सिंधु सो।।

Nij daas jyon raghubansabhooshan kabahun mam sumiran kar yo

Suni bharat bachan bineet ati kapi pulakit tan charananhi par yo

Raghubeer nij mukh jaasu gun gan kahat aga jag naath jo

Kaahe na hoi bineet param puneet sadagun sindhu so

Without Ram's grace, no satsang; | without saints, no light;

Without Rama, none can clear | obstruction's grip so tight.

'Does the Ornament of the Raghu dynasty, my Master, ever remember this servant of His?'

Hearing Bharat's humble words, Hanuman's body thrilled with emotion, and he fell at Bharat's feet.

He whose virtues Raghuvira Himself recounts from His own lips, He who is Lord of all that moves and does not move:

why should such a one not be supremely humble, supremely pure, an ocean of noble qualities?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

श्रीरामकी कृपाके बिना सत्संग नहीं मिलता, साधुके बिना बोध नहीं होता, और राम बिना (राम को छोड़कर) कोई बाधा नहीं कटती।

Notes

Chhand 1. Bharat asks with characteristic self-effacement whether Rama even remembers him ('nij daas jyon ... kabahun mam sumiran kar yo'). Hanuman, overcome, falls at Bharat's feet. The chhand then turns the question inside out: Raghuvira Himself praises Bharat's virtues from His own mouth ('nij mukh jaasu gun gan kahat'). Therefore, says Tulsidas, how could Bharat be anything other than 'bineet, param puneet, sadgun sindhu' (humble, supremely holy, an ocean of virtues)? Poddarji notes this is Tulsidas's indirect way of establishing Bharat as the highest exemplar of devotion in the entire Manas.

राम प्रान प्रिय नाथ तुम्ह सत्य बचन मम तात।

पुनि पुनि मिलत भरत सुनि हरष न हृदयँ समात।।2(क)।।

भरत चरन सिरु नाइ तुरित गयउ कपि राम पहिं।

कही कुसल सब जाइ हरषि चलेउ प्रभु जान चढ़ि।।2(ख)।।

Raam praan priy naath tumh saty bachan mam taat

Puni puni milat bharat suni harash na hridayan samaat.2(ka)

Bharat charan siru naai turit gayau kapi raam pahin

Kahee kusal sab jaai harashi chaleu prabhu jaan chadhi.2(kha)

दोहा 3

Dear as life to Rama's heart, | my words are true, O lord;

Bharat embraced him endlessly, | joy his heart outpoured.

'O lord, you are as dear to Rama as His own life-breath. Father, my words are true.'

Hearing this, Bharat embraced Hanuman again and again. The joy in his heart could not be contained.

Bowing his head at Bharat's feet, the monkey hero swiftly returned to Rama and reported all was well. The Lord, delighted, mounted His celestial chariot and set forth.

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Poddarji's Commentary

हनुमानजीने कहा कि हे नाथ! आप श्रीरामजीको प्राणोंके समान प्रिय हैं, हे तात! मेरा वचन सत्य है। यह सुनकर भरतजी बार-बार मिलते हैं, हृदयमें हर्ष समाता नहीं है।

Notes

Doha 2(ka) and 2(kha). 'Raam praan priy naath tumh': Hanuman declares Bharat is as dear to Rama as His own praana (life-breath). 'Satya bachan mam taat': 'Father, my words are true.' The intimacy of 'taat' (father, a term of deep respect) from Hanuman to Bharat is significant. In 2(kha), Hanuman returns to Rama, delivers the good news ('kahee kusal sab jaai'), and the Lord joyfully boards the Pushpaka vimana ('harashi chaleu prabhu jaan chadhi'). This doha-pair functions as the hinge between Bharat's anguish and the homecoming narrative.

चौपाई 3
हरषि भरत कोसलपुर आए। समाचार सब गुरहि सुनाए।।

Harashi bharat kosalapur aae. samaachaar sab gurahi sunaae

Bharata joyfully came to Kosala's capital and narrated all the news to his guru.

पुनि मंदिर महँ बात जनाई। आवत नगर कुसल रघुराई।।

Puni mandir mahan baat janaaee. aavat nagar kusal raghuraaee

Then in the palace he announced the tidings that Lord Raghurai was coming to the city in good health.

सुनत सकल जननीं उठि धाईं। कहि प्रभु कुसल भरत समुझाई।।

Sunat sakal jananeen uthi dhaaeen. kahi prabhu kusal bharat samujhaaee

Hearing this, all the mothers rose and rushed forth, and Bharata assured them of the Lord's welfare.

समाचार पुरबासिन्ह पाए। नर अरु नारि हरषि सब धाए।।

Samaachaar purabaasinh paae. nar aru naari harashi sab dhaae

When the city dwellers received this news, all men and women ran forth in joy.

दधि दुर्बा रोचन फल फूला। नव तुलसी दल मंगल मूला।।

Dadhi durbaa rochan phal phoolaa. nav tulasee dal mangal moolaa

They brought curd, durva grass, sandalwood paste, fruits and flowers, fresh tulsi leaves - all auspicious items.

भरि भरि हेम थार भामिनी। गावत चलिं सिंधु सिंधुरगामिनी।।

Bhari bhari hem thaar bhaaminee. gaavat chalin sindhu sindhuragaaminee

The beautiful women filled golden plates and went singing like rivers flowing to the ocean.

जे जैसेहिं तैसेहिं उटि धावहिं। बाल बृद्ध कहँ संग न लावहिं।।

Je jaisehin taisehin uti dhaavahin. baal briddh kahan sang na laavahin

People rushed out just as they were, not waiting to bring along children or elderly.

एक एकन्ह कहँ बूझहिं भाई। तुम्ह देखे दयाल रघुराई।।

Eka ekanh kahan boojhahin bhaaee. tumh dekhe dayaal raghuraaee

Each one asked the other, 'Brother, have you seen the compassionate Lord Raghurai?'

अवधपुरी प्रभु आवत जानी। भई सकल सोभा कै खानी।।

Avadhapuree prabhu aavat jaanee. bhaee sakal sobhaa kai khaanee

Knowing that the Lord was coming to Ayodhya, the entire city became a mine of beauty.

बहइ सुहावन त्रिबिध समीरा। भइ सरजू अति निर्मल नीरा।।

Bahai suhaavan tribidh sameeraa. bhai sarajoo ati nirmal neeraa

Pleasant breezes of three kinds began to blow, and the Sarayu's waters became extremely clear.

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Poddarji's Commentary

खबर सुनते ही सब माताएं उठ दौड़ीं। भरतजीने प्रभुकी कुशल कहकर समझाया। नगरनिवासियोंने यह समाचार पाया, तो स्त्री-पुरुष सभी हर्षित होकर दौड़े। श्रीरामजीके स्वागतके लिये दही, दूब, गोरोचन, फल, फूल और मङ्गलके मूल नव तुलसीदल आदि वस्तुएँ सोनेके थालोंमें भर-भरकर हथिनीकी-सी चालवाली सौभाग्यवती स्त्रियां उन्हें लेकर गाती हुई चलीं। प्रभुको आते जानकर अवधपुरी सम्पूर्ण शोभाओंकी खान हो गयी। तीनों प्रकारकी सुन्दर वायु बहने लगी। सरयूजीका जल अत्यन्त निर्मल हो गया। हे काक! सुन, मुझे भक्त निरन्तर प्रिय हैं, ऐसा विचारकर शरीर, वचन और मनसे मेरे चरणोंमें अटल प्रेम करना॥ ८५ (ख)॥ फिर भरतजीके चरणोंमें सिर नवाकर हनुमानजी तुरंत ही श्रीरामजीके पास लौट गये और जाकर उन्होंने सब कुशल कही। तब प्रभु हर्षित होकर विमानपर चढ़कर चले। इधर भरतजी भी हर्षित होकर अयोध्यापुरीमें आये और उन्होंने गुरुजीको सब समाचार सुनाया। फिर राजमहलमें खबर जनायी कि श्रीरघुनाथजी कुशलपूर्वक नगरको आ रहे हैं। जहाँ भगवान श्रीरामचन्द्रजी स्वयं राजा होकर विराजमान हैं, उस अवधपुरीके निवासियोंके सुख-सम्पत्तिके समुदायका वर्णन हजारों शेषजी भी नहीं कर सकते। उन (भुशुंडिजी) के चरणों में प्रेमसहित सिर नवाकर और हृदय में श्रीरघुवीर को धारण करके धीरबुद्धि गरुड़जी तब वैकुंठ को चले गए। हे उमा! अयोध्यामें रहनेवाले पुरुष और स्त्री सभी कृतार्थस्वरूप हैं; जहाँ स्वयं सच्चिदानन्दघन ब्रह्म श्रीरघुनाथजी राजा हैं।

Notes

Chaupai 3. Eight couplet-pairs describing Ayodhya's preparations for Rama's return. 'Samachaar sab gurahi sunaae': Bharat first informs Guru Vasishtha. 'Dadhi durbaa pushpa phal': the traditional items for an auspicious welcome (aarti): curds (dadhi), durva grass, flowers, fruit. Poddarji comments on the eruption of collective joy: mothers, citizens, brahmins all spring into coordinated action. The city transforms from a place of mourning into a place of celebration in a single moment. This passage parallels the preparations in Bala Kanda before Rama's birth.

हरषित गुर परिजन अनुज भूसुर बृंद समेत।

चले भरत मन प्रेम अति सन्मुख कृपानिकेत।।3(क)।।

बहुतक चढ़ी अटारिन्ह निरखहिं गगन बिमान।

देखि मधुर सुर हरषित करहिं सुमंगल गान।।3(ख)।।

राका ससि रघुपति पुर सिंधु देखि हरषान।

बढ़यो कोलाहल करत जनु नारि तरंग समान।।3(ग)।।

Harashit gur parijan anuj bhoosur brind samet

Chale bharat man prem ati sanmukh kripaaniket.3(ka)

Bahutak chadhee ataarinh nirakhahin gagan bimaan

Dekhi madhur sur harashit karahin sumangal gaan.3(kha)

Raakaa sasi raghupati pur sindhu dekhi harashaan

Badhayo kolaahal karat janu naari tarang samaan.3(ga)

दोहा 4

With Guru, kin, and brahmins all, | joy filling every breast;

Bharat went forth, heart full of love, | to greet his Lord, the best.

Overjoyed, Bharat set forth to meet the Abode of Grace, accompanied by the Guru, kinsmen, younger brother Shatrughna, and hosts of brahmins. His mind was brimming with love.

Many women climbed to their terraces and gazed at the sky for the celestial chariot. Seeing it, they burst into auspicious songs, their voices sweet with joy.

As the full moon rises and floods the ocean with tides of delight, so Raghupati's return filled Ayodhya with waves of bliss.

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Poddarji's Commentary

गुरु वसिष्ठजी, कुटुम्बी, छोटे भाई शत्रुघ्न तथा ब्राह्मणोंके समूहके साथ हर्षित होकर भरतजी अत्यन्त प्रेमपूर्ण मनसे कृपाधाम श्रीरामजीके सामने चले।

Notes

Doha 3(ka), 3(kha), and Sortha. 'Harshit gur parijan anuj bhoosur brind samet': the entire household rallies behind Bharat. 'Bahutaka chadhi ataarinhi nirakhahi gagan bimaan': women climb to rooftop terraces to spot the Pushpaka in the sky. 'Raakaa sasi raghupati pur sindhu': Tulsidas compares Rama to the full moon (raakaa sasi) and Ayodhya to the ocean. The metaphor is precise: just as the full moon causes the ocean to swell with tides, Rama's return causes Ayodhya to surge with joy. Poddarji savours this simile as one of Tulsidas's finest.

चौपाई 4
इहाँ भानुकुल कमल दिवाकर। कपिन्ह देखावत नगर मनोहर।।

Ihaan bhaanukul kamal divaakar. kapinh dekhaavat nagar manohar

Here, the sun of the solar dynasty shows the monkeys the beautiful city.

सुनु कपीस अंगद लंकेसा। पावन पुरी रुचिर यह देसा।।

Sunu kapees angad lankesaa. paavan puree ruchir yah desaa

Listen, O king of monkeys, Angada, and lord of Lanka - this is a sacred and beautiful land.

जद्यपि सब बैकुंठ बखाना। बेद पुरान बिदित जगु जाना।।

Jadyapi sab baikunth bakhaanaa. bed puraan bidit jagu jaanaa

Though all the heavenly abodes like Vaikuntha are described in the Vedas and Puranas and known to the world.

अवधपुरी सम प्रिय नहिं सोऊ। यह प्रसंग जानइ कोउ कोऊ।।

Avadhapuree sam priy nahin sooo. yah prasang jaanai kou kooo

None is as dear as Ayodhya city - this secret only a few understand.

जन्मभूमि मम पुरी सुहावनि। उत्तर दिसि बह सरजू पावनि।।

Janmabhoomi mam puree suhaavani. uttar disi bah sarajoo paavani

My birthplace is this beautiful city, with the sacred Sarayu flowing northward.

जा मज्जन ते बिनहिं प्रयासा। मम समीप नर पावहिं बासा।।

Jaa majjan te binahin prayaasaa. mam sameep nar paavahin baasaa

By bathing in which, without any effort, people attain residence near Me.

अति प्रिय मोहि इहाँ के बासी। मम धामदा पुरी सुख रासी।।

Ati priy mohi ihaan ke baasee. mam dhaamadaa puree sukh raasee

The residents of this place are extremely dear to Me - this city is the giver of My abode and a treasure of happiness.

हरषे सब कपि सुनि प्रभु बानी। धन्य अवध जो राम बखानी।।

Harashe sab kapi suni prabhu baanee. dhany avadh jo raam bakhaanee

All the monkeys rejoiced hearing the Lord's words - blessed is Ayodhya which Rama has praised.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

जो इच्छापूर्वक कहानी सुनते हैं, मन-वचन-कर्मसे उसे मानते और पालन करते हैं, वे वचन, मन और कर्ममें श्रीरामरूप हो जाएंगे, जिनका स्मरण करते ही सब संकट दूर हो जाते हैं। जो गाते, सुनते और अनुमोदन करते हैं, वे गायके खुरके समान भवसागरको तर जाते हैं। जो कहते, सुनते और अनुमोदन करते हैं, वे जन मेरी पूजाके अधिकारी हैं। हे हरिवाहन! मैंने सभी कुछ भिन्न-भिन्न और अत्यन्त विचित्र देखा। मैं अनगिनत ब्रह्माण्डोंमें फिरा, पर प्रभु श्रीरामचन्द्रजीको मैने दूसरी तरहका नहीं देखा॥ ८१ (क)॥ स्त्रियाँ कुमुदिनी हैं, अयोध्या सरोवर है और श्रीरघुनाथजीका विरह सूर्य है। इस विरहरूपी सूर्यके तापसे वे मुरझा गयी थीं। अब उस विरहरूपी सूर्यके अस्त होनेपर श्रीरामरूपी पूर्णचन्द्रको निरखकर वे खिल उठीं।

Notes

Chaupai 4. Eight couplet-pairs. Rama Himself speaks, praising Ayodhya above even Vaikuntha. 'Avadh puri sam priy nahin sooo': no abode is as dear to Him as Ayodhya. 'Yah prasang jaanai kou kooo': only a rare person grasps this mystery. Poddarji reads this as Tulsidas's theological statement: the earthly site of the Lord's lila surpasses the transcendent realm because it is touched by His personal love. The mention of the Sarayu ('pawan sarit surasari') and the declaration that Ayodhya's residents are 'praan sam priya' (dear as life) elevate the city to the status of a living tirtha.

आवत देखि लोग सब कृपासिंधु भगवान।

नगर निकट प्रभु प्रेरेउ उतरेउ भूमि बिमान।।4(क)।।

उतरि कहेउ प्रभु पुष्पकहि तुम्ह कुबेर पहिं जाहु।

प्रेरित राम चलेउ सो हरषु बिरहु अति ताहु।।4(ख)।।

Aavat dekhi log sab kripaasindhu bhagavaan

Nagar nikat prabhu prereu utareu bhoomi bimaan.4(ka)

Utari kaheu prabhu pushpakahi tumh kuber pahin jaahu

Prerit raam chaleu so harashu birahu ati taahu.4(kha)

दोहा 5क

Seeing all approach with love, | the Lord of mercy smiled;

He brought the chariot to earth, | compassion undefiled.

Seeing all the people approaching, the Ocean of Compassion, the Lord, directed the celestial chariot to descend near the city. The Pushpaka touched the earth.

Alighting, the Lord told the Pushpaka: 'Now return to Kubera.' Sent by Rama, it departed at once, though it, too, felt both the joy of having served and the sorrow of parting.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

कृपासागर भगवान श्रीरामचन्द्रजीने सब लोगोंको आते देखकर विमानको नगरके समीप उतरनेकी प्रेरणा की। तब वह पृथ्वीपर उतरा।

Notes

Doha 4(ka) and 4(kha). 'Kripaasindhu bhagavaan': Rama is called the Ocean of Compassion. He sees the welcoming crowd and commands the Pushpaka to land near the city rather than in it, so he can meet them on the ground. In 4(kha), He dismisses the Pushpaka back to its rightful owner Kubera. Even the celestial chariot feels 'harash birahu' (joy and grief). Poddarji notes the exquisite touch: even an inanimate vimana experiences the pull of separation from Rama. This is Tulsidas's way of saying that everything in creation is drawn to the Lord.

चौपाई 5
आए भरत संग सब लोगा। कृस तन श्रीरघुबीर बियोगा।।

Aae bharat sang sab logaa. kris tan shreeraghubeer biyogaa

Bharata came with all the people, their bodies grown thin from separation from Shri Raghuvira.

बामदेव बसिष्ठ मुनिनायक। देखे प्रभु महि धरि धनु सायक।।

Baamadev basishth muninaayak. dekhe prabhu mahi dhari dhanu saayak

The sage-lord Vamadeva and Vasishtha saw the Lord placing His bow and arrows on the ground.

धाइ धरे गुर चरन सरोरुह। अनुज सहित अति पुलक तनोरुह।।

Dhaai dhare gur charan saroruh. anuj sahit ati pulak tanoruh

They rushed and grasped the guru's lotus feet, along with the younger brothers, their bodies thrilling with joy.

भेंटि कुसल बूझी मुनिराया। हमरें कुसल तुम्हारिहिं दाया।।

Bhenti kusal boojhee muniraayaa. hamaren kusal tumhaarihin daayaa

After meeting, the sage-king inquired about their welfare, saying 'Our welfare lies in Your grace.'

सकल द्विजन्ह मिलि नायउ माथा। धर्म धुरंधर रघुकुलनाथा।।

Sakal dvijanh mili naayau maathaa. dharm dhurandhar raghukulanaathaa

The Lord of Raghu's clan, upholder of dharma, bowed His head to all the brahmins.

गहे भरत पुनि प्रभु पद पंकज। नमत जिन्हहि सुर मुनि संकर अज।।

Gahe bharat puni prabhu pad pankaj. namat jinhahi sur muni sankar aj

Bharata then grasped the Lord's lotus feet, before which gods, sages, Shankara and Brahma bow.

परे भूमि नहिं उठत उठाए। बर करि कृपासिंधु उर लाए।।

Pare bhoomi nahin uthat uthaae. bar kari kripaasindhu ura laae

He fell to the ground and would not rise when lifted; the ocean of mercy embraced him to His heart.

स्यामल गात रोम भए ठाढ़े। नव राजीव नयन जल बाढ़े।।

Syaamal gaat rom bhae thaadhe. nav raajeev nayan jal baadhe

His dark limbs had hair standing on end, and his lotus-like eyes overflowed with tears.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

छोटे भाई लक्ष्मणजीसहित दौड़कर गुरुजीके चरणकमल पकड़ लिये; उनके रोम-रोम पुलकित थे। गले मिलकर मुनिराज वसिष्ठजीने कुशल पूछी। प्रभुने कहा;आपकी दयासे ही हमारी कुशल है। अनुजसहित रामजी लक्ष्मणके पैरों पर गिरे, प्रेमसे अत्यन्त व्याकुल। रामजीने लक्ष्मणको उठाकर हृदयसे लगा लिया, दोनों भुजाओंमें भर लिया। विमानसे उतरकर प्रभुने पुष्पकविमानसे कहा कि तुम अब कुबेरके पास जाओ। श्रीरामजीकी प्रेरणासे वह चला; उसे अपने स्वामीके पास जानेका हर्ष है और प्रभु श्रीरामचन्द्रजीसे अलग होनेका अत्यन्त दुःख भी। भरतजीके साथ सब लोग आये। श्रीरघुवीरके वियोगसे सबके शरीर दुबले हो रहे हैं। प्रभुने वामदेव, वसिष्ठ आदि मुनिश्रेष्ठोंको देखा, तो उन्होंने धनुष-बाण पृथ्वीपर रखकर। एक बार श्रीरघुवीरने सब चरित्र बहुत अधिकतासे किये। प्रभुकी उस लीलाका स्मरण करते ही काकभुशुण्डिजीका शरीर पुलकित हो गया॥ ७५ (ख)॥ मैं तुमसे हाथ जोड़कर कहता हूँ, प्रभुसे मेरी दंडवत कहना और श्रीरघुनाथजीको बार-बार मेरी याद कराते रहना। हे भक्तोंके मन-इच्छित फल देनेवाले कल्पवृक्ष! हे शरणागतके हितकारी! हे कृपासागर! हे सुखधाम श्रीरामजी! दया करके मुझे अपनी वही भक्ति दीजिये॥ ८४ (ख)॥

Notes

Chaupai 5. Eight couplet-pairs. The long-awaited meeting. Rama's first act upon touching the ground is to bow at Vasishtha's feet ('dhaai dhare gur charan saroruh'), demonstrating that even God honours the Guru. Seeing Bharat's emaciated body and ascetic dress, Rama weeps. Poddarji stresses that the Lord's tears are not weakness but the fullest expression of divine love (prema). 'Mahee dhari dhanu saayak': Rama sets down His weapons before meeting His elders and guru. This detail signals the transition from warrior (Lanka Kanda) to householder-king (Uttara Kanda).

छन्द 2
राजीव लोचन स्त्रवत जल तन ललित पुलकावलि बनी।

अति प्रेम हृदयँ लगाइ अनुजहि मिले प्रभु त्रिभुअन धनी।।

प्रभु मिलत अनुजहि सोह मो पहिं जाति नहिं उपमा कही।

जनु प्रेम अरु सिंगार तनु धरि मिले बर सुषमा लही।।1।।

बूझत कृपानिधि कुसल भरतहि बचन बेगि न आवई।

सुनु सिवा सो सुख बचन मन ते भिन्न जान जो पावई।।

अब कुसल कौसलनाथ आरत जानि जन दरसन दियो।

बूड़त बिरह बारीस कृपानिधान मोहि कर गहि लियो।।2।।

Raajeev lochan stravat jal tan lalit pulakaavali banee

Ati prem hridayan lagaai anujahi mile prabhu tribhuan dhanee

Prabhu milat anujahi soh mo pahin jaati nahin upamaa kahee

Janu prem aru singaar tanu dhari mile bar sushamaa lahee (1)

Boojhat kripaanidhi kusal bharatahi bachan begi na aavaee

Sunu sivaa so sukh bachan man te bhinn jaan jo paavaee

Aba kusal kausalanaath aarat jaani jan darasan diyo

Boodat birah baarees kripaanidhaan mohi kar gahi liyo (2)

Then Raghupati held Bharat close; | no words can tell that bliss;

Both brothers filled with trembling love | shared many a tender kiss.

Tears streamed from His lotus eyes, and a lovely wave of goosebumps adorned His body. With boundless love the Lord, Master of all three worlds, pressed His younger brother Bharat to His heart.

The beauty of the Lord meeting His brother surpasses all comparison I can offer. It was as if Love and Grace themselves had taken bodily form and embraced each other in perfect splendour.

The Treasury of Compassion asked Bharat about his welfare, but words would not come to Bharat's lips. Listen, O Parvati: the joy of that moment is something only a heart that has tasted it can know; speech and mind fall short.

'All is well now, O Lord of Kosala. Knowing Your servant's anguish, You have granted Your darshana. I was drowning in the flood of separation, and You, O Treasury of Mercy, caught me by the hand and lifted me out.'

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

फिर श्रीरघुनाथजीने भरतजीको हृदयसे लगाया। वह सुभ समय कहा और गाया नहीं जा सकता। प्रेमके रोमांचसे दोनों भाइयोंने एक-दूसरेको भुजाओंमें भर लिया। समस्त स्नेहने सिरपर सिंचन किया। आपसमें प्रेमकी क्रीड़ा करते हुए मधुर और कोमल वचन बोलते थे।

Notes

Chhand 2. Two stanzas. 'Raajeev lochan stravat jal': tears stream from Rama's lotus (raajeev) eyes. 'Janu prem aru singaar tanu dhari mile': as if Prema (Love) and Shringaar (Grace/Adornment) had taken bodily form and met. Poddarji calls this one of Tulsidas's most inspired similes. In the second stanza, Bharat finally speaks: 'Boodat birah baarees kripaanidhaan mohi kar gahi liyo' (I was drowning in the ocean of separation, and You, Treasury of Mercy, caught my hand). The metaphor of rescue from drowning circles back to Doha 1(ka), where Hanuman arrived 'like a boat.' Now it is Rama Himself who pulls Bharat from the flood.

पुनि प्रभु हरषि सत्रुहन भेंटे हृदयँ लगाइ।

लछिमन भरत मिले तब परम प्रेम दोउ भाइ।।5।।

Puni prabhu harashi satruhan bhente hridayan lagaai

Lachhiman bharat mile tab param prem dou bhaai (5)

दोहा 5ख

Then Shatrughna the Lord embraced, | pressing heart to heart;

Lakshmana and Bharat met, | love ne'er more to part.

Then the Lord, filled with joy, embraced Shatrughna, pressing him to His heart.

Lakshmana and Bharat met at last, those two brothers, with love beyond all measure.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

फिर प्रभु हर्षित होकर शत्रुघ्नजीको हृदयसे लगाकर उनसे मिले। तब लक्ष्मणजी और भरतजी दोनों भाई परम प्रेमसे मिले।

Notes

Doha 5. After the Rama-Bharat reunion, the remaining brothers meet. 'Param prem dou bhaai': Lakshmana and Bharat meet with 'param prem' (supreme love). This compact doha serves as a structural bridge: having given the Rama-Bharat reunion full emotional space in the preceding chhand, Tulsidas now completes the circle by uniting all four brothers. Poddarji notes the understated beauty: Tulsidas lets the reader's imagination fill the silence between brothers who have longed for each other for fourteen years.

चौपाई 6
भरतानुज लछिमन पुनि भेंटे। दुसह बिरह संभव दुख मेटे।।

Bharataanuj lachhiman puni bhente. dusah birah sambhav dukh mete

Bharata's younger brother Lakshmana then met Rama, and the unbearable pain of separation was removed.

सीता चरन भरत सिरु नावा। अनुज समेत परम सुख पावा।।

Seetaa charan bharat siru naavaa. anuj samet param sukh paavaa

Bharata bowed his head at Sita's feet, and along with his younger brother, attained supreme happiness.

प्रभु बिलोकि हरषे पुरबासी। जनित बियोग बिपति सब नासी।।

Prabhu biloki harashe purabaasee. janit biyog bipati sab naasee

Seeing the Lord, the citizens rejoiced, and all the calamities born of separation were destroyed.

प्रेमातुर सब लोग निहारी। कौतुक कीन्ह कृपाल खरारी।।

Premaatur sab log nihaaree. kautuk keenh kripaal kharaaree

Seeing all the people overwhelmed with love, the compassionate destroyer of Khara performed a divine play.

अमित रूप प्रगटे तेहि काला। जथाजोग मिले सबहि कृपाला।।

Amit roop pragate tehi kaalaa. jathaajog mile sabahi kripaalaa

At that time, the gracious Lord manifested countless forms and met with everyone according to their relationship.

कृपादृष्टि रघुबीर बिलोकी। किए सकल नर नारि बिसोकी।।

Kripaadrishti raghubeer bilokee. kie sakal nar naari bisokee

With the compassionate glance of Raghuvira, all men and women were made free from sorrow.

छन महिं सबहि मिले भगवाना। उमा मरम यह काहुँ न जाना।।

Chhan mahin sabahi mile bhagavaanaa. umaa maram yah kaahun na jaanaa

In an instant, the Lord met with everyone. Uma, no one understood this mystery.

एहि बिधि सबहि सुखी करि रामा। आगें चले सील गुन धामा।।

Ehi bidhi sabahi sukhee kari raamaa. aagen chale seel gun dhaamaa

Having made everyone happy in this way, Rama, the abode of virtue and good qualities, proceeded forward.

कौसल्यादि मातु सब धाई। निरखि बच्छ जनु धेनु लवाई।।

Kausalyaadi maatu sab dhaaee. nirakhi bachchh janu dhenu lavaaee

All the mothers including Kausalya came running, like cows rushing to see their calf.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

पक्षिराज गरुडजीकी विनय और प्रेमयुक्त वाणी सुनकर काकभुशुण्डिजीका शरीर पुलकित हो गया, उनके नेत्रोंमें जल भर आया और वे मनमें अत्यन्त हर्षित हुए॥ ६९ (क)॥

Notes

Chaupai 6. Eight couplet-pairs. The pivotal miracle of the homecoming: 'kautuk keenha kripaal kharaaraa.' Rama multiplies His form so every citizen can meet Him individually. Poddarji reads this as the theological heart of Uttara Kanda: the Lord is not diminished by giving Himself to many; each devotee receives the whole of Him. 'Seetaa charan bharat siru naavaa': Bharat's first act is to bow at Sita's feet, demonstrating his recognition of Her as Rama's inseparable shakti. The verse moves from intimate family reunion to collective divine embrace.

छन्द 3
जनु धेनु बालक बच्छ तजि गृहँ चरन बन परबस गईं।

दिन अंत पुर रुख स्त्रवत थन हुंकार करि धावत भई।।

अति प्रेम सब मातु भेटीं बचन मृदु बहुबिधि कहे।

गइ बिषम बियोग भव तिन्ह हरष सुख अगनित लहे।।

Janu dhenu baalak bachchh taji grihan charan ban parabas gaeen

Din ant pur rukh stravat than hunkaar kari dhaavat bhaee

Ati prem sab maatu bheteen bachan mridu bahubidhi kahe

Gai bisham biyog bhav tinh harash sukh aganit lahe

Recalling Guru's words, my mind | to Rama's feet did cling,

each moment gaining fresher love, | His praises would I sing.

Like cows that have left their calves at home and gone to graze in distant pastures, who at day's end turn homeward with milk streaming from their udders, lowing as they run:

just so, all the mothers rushed to meet their sons with overwhelming love, speaking tender words of every kind. The terrible anguish of separation vanished, and they found joy and happiness beyond all counting.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

गुरुजीके वचनोंका स्मरण करके मेरा मन श्रीरामजीके चरणोंमें लग गया। मैं क्षण-क्षण नया-नया प्रेम प्राप्त करता हुआ श्रीरघुनाथजीका यश गाता फिरता था॥ ११० (क)॥

Notes

Chhand 3. A single extended simile. 'Janu dhenu baalak bachchh taji griha charan ban parabas gaeen': cows forced to leave their calves and graze far from home. 'Din ant pur rukh stravat than hunkaar kari dhaavat bhaee': at day's end they turn toward home, milk streaming, lowing in longing. This is the mothers of Ayodhya rushing to embrace Rama and His brothers. Poddarji calls this simile one of Tulsidas's most tender: the raw, instinctive love of a cow for her calf mirrors the mothers' irrepressible longing. The verse dissolves all philosophical distance. This is bhakti at its most primal.

भेटेउ तनय सुमित्राँ राम चरन रति जानि।

रामहि मिलत कैकेई हृदयँ बहुत सकुचानि।।6(क)।।

लछिमन सब मातन्ह मिलि हरषे आसिष पाइ।

कैकेइ कहँ पुनि पुनि मिले मन कर छोभु न जाइ।।6।।

Bheteu tanay sumitraan raam charan rati jaani

Raamahi milat kaikeee hridayan bahut sakuchaani.6(ka)

Lachhiman sab maatanh mili harashe aasish paai

Kaikei kahan puni puni mile man kar chhobhu na jaai (6)

दोहा 6

With crow-form, yet so firm in truth, | detachment, knowledge deep;

Such love for Rama's lotus feet! | This doubt in me doth creep.

Sumitra embraced her son Lakshmana, knowing his deep devotion to Rama's feet.

When Rama met Kaikeyi, she shrank with shame in her heart.

Lakshmana met all the mothers and received their blessings with joy. But to Kaikeyi he went again and again, for the remorse in her heart would not leave.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

सो कौएका शरीर पाकर भी काकभुशुण्डि वैराग्य, ज्ञान और विज्ञानमें दृढ़ हैं, उनका श्रीरामजीके चरणोंमें अत्यन्त प्रेम है और उन्हें श्रीरघुनाथजीकी भक्ति भी प्राप्त है, इस बातका मुझे परम सन्देह हो रहा है।

Notes

Doha 6(ka) and 6. Sumitra recognizes Lakshmana's devotion ('Raam charan rati jaani') and embraces him. The emotionally charged moment is Kaikeyi's meeting with Rama: 'hridayan bahut sakuchaani' (she was filled with deep shame). Then Lakshmana repeatedly approaches Kaikeyi ('Kaikei kahan puni puni mile'), trying to ease her guilt ('man kar chhobhu na jaai', the agitation of her heart would not go). Poddarji reads Lakshmana's repeated visits to Kaikeyi as the highest expression of family dharma: he, who suffered most from her demand, now works hardest to dissolve her remorse.

चौपाई 7
सासुन्ह सबनि मिली बैदेही। चरनन्हि लागि हरषु अति तेही।।

Saasunh sabani milee baidehee. charananhi laagi harashu ati tehee

Vaidehi (Sita) met with all her mothers-in-law, touching their feet with great joy and happiness.

देहिं असीस बूझि कुसलाता। होइ अचल तुम्हार अहिवाता।।

Dehin asees boojhi kusalaataa. hoi achal tumhaar ahivaataa

They gave their blessings after inquiring about her welfare, saying 'May your married life remain eternally stable.'

सब रघुपति मुख कमल बिलोकहिं। मंगल जानि नयन जल रोकहिं।।

Sab raghupati mukh kamal bilokahin. mangal jaani nayan jal rokahin

All gazed upon the lotus face of Raghupati, considering it auspicious and holding back tears of joy in their eyes.

कनक थार आरति उतारहिं। बार बार प्रभु गात निहारहिं।।

Kanak thaar aarati utaarahin. baar baar prabhu gaat nihaarahin

They performed aarti with golden plates, gazing again and again upon the Lord's divine form.

नाना भाँति निछावरि करहीं। परमानंद हरष उर भरहीं।।

Naanaa bhaanti nichhaavari karaheen. paramaanand harash ura bharaheen

They made various offerings of devotion, their hearts filled with supreme bliss and joy.

कौसल्या पुनि पुनि रघुबीरहि। चितवति कृपासिंधु रनधीरहि।।

Kausalyaa puni puni raghubeerahi. chitavati kripaasindhu ranadheerahi

Kausalya repeatedly gazed upon Raghuvira, the ocean of compassion and brave warrior.

हृदयँ बिचारति बारहिं बारा। कवन भाँति लंकापति मारा।।

Hridayan bichaarati baarahin baaraa. kavan bhaanti lankaapati maaraa

In her heart she pondered again and again - in what manner did He slay the lord of Lanka?

अति सुकुमार जुगल मेरे बारे। निसिचर सुभट महाबल भारे।।

Ati sukumaar jugal mere baare. nisichar subhat mahaabal bhaare

My two sons are so tender and delicate, yet the demon warriors were mighty and powerful.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

फिर उन लोगोंने कौसल्याजीके चरणोंमें मस्तक नवाये। कौसल्याजीने हर्षित होकर आशिष दीं और कहा कि तुम मुझे रघुनाथके समान प्यारे हो।

Notes

Chaupai 7. Eight couplet-pairs. Sita's reunion with her mothers-in-law. 'Saasunhi sabani milee Baidehee, charananhi laagi harashu ati tehee': Sita touches their feet, and the joy is mutual. 'Hohi achal tumhaar ahivaataa': the blessing means 'may your saubhagya (married auspiciousness) never waver.' 'Kanak thaar aarati utaarahin': golden trays bear the arati flame. Poddarji draws attention to the women's emotional restraint: 'mangal jaani nayan jal rokahin' (knowing the moment to be auspicious, they held back their tears). In Indian tradition, tears at a welcome can be inauspicious; the mothers master their overwhelming emotion out of reverence for the occasion.

लछिमन अरु सीता सहित प्रभुहि बिलोकति मातु।

परमानंद मगन मन पुनि पुनि पुलकित गातु।।7।।

Lachhiman aru seetaa sahit prabhuhi bilokati maatu

Paramaanand magan man puni puni pulakit gaatu (7)

दोहा 7

O Bliss Supreme, O Grace's home, | Fulfiller of heart's prayer;

Grant unfailing loving devotion, | O Sri Rama fair.

The mothers beheld the Lord together with Lakshmana and Sita. Their minds were immersed in supreme bliss, and again and again their bodies thrilled with ecstasy.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

आप परमानन्दस्वरूप, कृपाके धाम और मनकी कामनाओंको परिपूर्ण करनेवाले हैं। हे श्रीरामजी! हमको अपनी अविचल प्रेमा-भक्ति दीजिये।

Notes

Doha 7. A single, luminous couplet. 'Lachhiman aru Seetaa sahit prabhuhee bilokati maatu': the mothers gaze upon Rama flanked by Lakshmana and Sita. 'Paramaanand magan man, puni puni pulakit gaatu': their minds are submerged in paramananda (supreme bliss) and their bodies repeatedly break out in horripilation (pulaka). Poddarji notes that Tulsidas deliberately slows the narrative to a single still image here. After the rushing, embracing, weeping, and arati of the preceding verses, this doha is a moment of pure, silent contemplation. The mothers simply look, and looking, they are filled.

चौपाई 8
लंकापति कपीस नल नीला। जामवंत अंगद सुभसीला।।

Lankaapati kapees nal neelaa. jaamavant angad subhaseelaa

Vibhishana the lord of Lanka, Sugriva the monkey king, Nala, Nila, Jambavan, Angada of noble character.

हनुमदादि सब बानर बीरा। धरे मनोहर मनुज सरीरा।।

Hanumadaadi sab baanar beeraa. dhare manohar manuj sareeraa

Hanuman and all the other brave monkey warriors had assumed beautiful human forms.

भरत सनेह सील ब्रत नेमा। सादर सब बरनहिं अति प्रेमा।।

Bharat saneh seel brat nemaa. saadar sab baranahin ati premaa

All lovingly praised Bharata's affection, virtue, vows and religious observances with great devotion.

देखि नगरबासिन्ह कै रीती। सकल सराहहि प्रभु पद प्रीती।।

Dekhi nagarabaasinh kai reetee. sakal saraahahi prabhu pad preetee

Seeing the conduct of the city's inhabitants, all praised their devotion to the Lord's feet.

पुनि रघुपति सब सखा बोलाए। मुनि पद लागहु सकल सिखाए।।

Puni raghupati sab sakhaa bolaae. muni pad laagahu sakal sikhaae

Then Lord Rama called all his friends and instructed them all to touch the sage's feet.

गुर बसिष्ट कुलपूज्य हमारे। इन्ह की कृपाँ दनुज रन मारे।।

Gur basisht kulapoojy hamaare. inh kee kripaan danuj ran maare

Guru Vashishtha is our family's revered one; by his grace we have slain the demons in battle.

ए सब सखा सुनहु मुनि मेरे। भए समर सागर कहँ बेरे।।

E sab sakhaa sunahu muni mere. bhae samar saagar kahan bere

O sage, listen - all these friends of mine became like boats in the ocean of war.

मम हित लागि जन्म इन्ह हारे। भरतहु ते मोहि अधिक पिआरे।।

Mam hit laagi janm inh haare. bharatahu te mohi adhik piaare

For my sake they sacrificed their lives; they are dearer to me than even Bharata.

सुनि प्रभु बचन मगन सब भए। निमिष निमिष उपजत सुख नए।।

Suni prabhu bachan magan sab bhae. nimish nimish upajat sukh nae

Hearing the Lord's words, all became absorbed in bliss, with new joys arising every moment.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

इस प्रकार मैंने अनेक जन्मों में भ्रमण किया। कर्मानुसार सभी जन्मों में सुख-दुख, दोष और विभूषण प्राप्त हुए। वानर सब ब्रह्मानन्दमें मग्न हैं। सबको प्रभुके चरणोंमें प्रेम है। उन्हें दिनके बीतनेका पता ही नहीं चलता और इस प्रकार छः महीने बीत गये।

Notes

Chaupai 8. Eight couplet-pairs. The monkey allies, now in human form ('manohara manuj shareeraa'), observe Ayodhya and are humbled by what they see. 'Bharat sneh sheel brat nemaa': they praise Bharat's love, virtue, vows, and discipline. 'Dekhi nagarbaasinhi kai reetee, sakal saraahahin prabhu pad preetee': witnessing the townspeople's devotion, the warriors who vanquished Ravana confess themselves outmatched. Poddarji reads this as Tulsidas's teaching that sahaja prema (natural, effortless love) surpasses even heroic service. The monkeys' admiration completes the emotional architecture: Ayodhya's ordinary citizens, who simply loved and waited, are the true heroes of Uttara Kanda.

कौसल्या के चरनन्हि पुनि तिन्ह नायउ माथ।।

आसिष दीन्हे हरषि तुम्ह प्रिय मम जिमि रघुनाथ।।8(क)।।

सुमन बृष्टि नभ संकुल भवन चले सुखकंद।

चढ़ी अटारिन्ह देखहिं नगर नारि नर बृंद।।8(ख)।।

Kausalyaa ke charananhi puni tinh naayau maath

Aasish deenhe harashi tumh priy mam jimi raghunaath.8(ka)

Suman brishti nabh sankul bhavan chale sukhakand

Chadhee ataarinh dekhahin nagar naari nar brind.8(kha)

दोहा 9

Thus speaking, Narada went his way | singing Rama's praise;

Describing maya's power strong | through all his journeying days.

Then they bowed their heads at Kausalya's feet.

She blessed them joyfully: 'You are as dear to me as Raghunath himself.' 8(ka)

Flowers rained thick from the sky as the fountain of bliss proceeded homeward.

Crowds of men and women climbed to their rooftops to behold him. 8(kha)

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

ऐसा कहकर परम सुजान देवर्षि नारदजी श्रीरामजीका गुणगान करते हुए और बारंबार श्रीहरिकी मायाका बल वर्णन करते हुए चले।

Notes

Previous translation described Narada's departure, which belongs to a different verse. Rewrote to match the actual Hindi: bowing to Kausalya, her blessing, flower-showers, and citizens watching from rooftops. Transliterated: Kausalya, Raghunath.

चौपाई 9
कंचन कलस बिचित्र सँवारे। सबहिं धरे सजि निज निज द्वारे।।

Kanchan kalas bichitr sanvaare. sabahin dhare saji nij nij dvaare

Golden vessels were beautifully decorated and arranged, each household adorned their doorways with these splendid ornaments.

बंदनवार पताका केतू। सबन्हि बनाए मंगल हेतू।।

Bandanavaar pataakaa ketoo. sabanhi banaae mangal hetoo

Festive garlands, flags and banners were prepared by all for the auspicious celebration.

बीथीं सकल सुगंध सिंचाई। गजमनि रचि बहु चौक पुराई।।

Beetheen sakal sugandh sinchaaee. gajamani rachi bahu chauk puraaee

All the streets were sprinkled with fragrant waters, and beautiful courtyards were decorated with precious gems.

नाना भाँति सुमंगल साजे। हरषि नगर निसान बहु बाजे।।

Naanaa bhaanti sumangal saaje. harashi nagar nisaan bahu baaje

Various auspicious preparations were made, and the joyful city resounded with many musical instruments.

जहँ तहँ नारि निछावर करहीं। देहिं असीस हरष उर भरहीं।।

Jahan tahan naari nichhaavar karaheen. dehin asees harash ura bharaheen

Everywhere women performed ceremonial offerings, giving blessings with hearts filled with joy.

कंचन थार आरती नाना। जुबती सजें करहिं सुभ गाना।।

Kanchan thaar aaratee naanaa. jubatee sajen karahin subh gaanaa

Young maidens beautifully dressed performed auspicious songs while holding golden plates for worship.

करहिं आरती आरतिहर कें। रघुकुल कमल बिपिन दिनकर कें।।

Karahin aaratee aaratihar ken. raghukul kamal bipin dinakar ken

They perform worship to Him who removes all troubles, to the Sun of the lotus garden of Raghu's dynasty.

पुर सोभा संपति कल्याना। निगम सेष सारदा बखाना।।

Pur sobhaa sampati kalyaanaa. nigam sesh saaradaa bakhaanaa

The beauty, prosperity and welfare of the city has been described by the Vedas, Shesha and Saraswati.

तेउ यह चरित देखि ठगि रहहीं। उमा तासु गुन नर किमि कहहीं।।

Teu yah charit dekhi thagi rahaheen. umaa taasu gun nar kimi kahaheen

Even they remain spellbound seeing this divine spectacle; O Uma, how can mortals describe His qualities?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

जिनका नाम जपकर मनुष्य संसारके बन्धनसे छूट जाते हैं उन्हीं रामको एक तुच्छ राक्षसने नागपाशसे बाँध लिया।

Notes

Previous translation was largely accurate. Minor polish: replaced 'musical instruments' with 'drums' (nisaan), tightened phrasing, kept Chaupai formatting with \n\n between couplet pairs. Transliterated: Raghu, Uma, Shesha, Sarada.

नारि कुमुदिनीं अवध सर रघुपति बिरह दिनेस।

अस्त भएँ बिगसत भईं निरखि राम राकेस।।9(क)।।

होहिं सगुन सुभ बिबिध बिधि बाजहिं गगन निसान।

पुर नर नारि सनाथ करि भवन चले भगवान।।9(ख)।।

Naari kumudineen avadh sar raghupati birah dines

Ast bhaen bigasat bhaeen nirakhi raam raakes.9(ka)

Hohin sagun subh bibidh bidhi baajahin gagan nisaan

Pur nar naari sanaath kari bhavan chale bhagavaan.9(kha)

दोहा 10

Praising him in many ways, | with bowed head, hands joined tight;

Garuda spoke with humble love, | words gentle and polite.

The women of Ayodhya are like water-lilies in a lake. The sun of separation from Raghupati had set.

Now, beholding Rama as the full moon, they blossomed with joy. 9(ka)

Auspicious omens appeared in many forms, and celestial drums resounded in the sky.

Having blessed the men and women of the city with his presence, the Lord proceeded to his palace. 9(kha)

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

उनको (भुशुण्डिजीको) बहुत प्रकारसे प्रशंसा करके, सिर नवाकर और हाथ जोड़कर फिर गरुड़जी प्रेमपूर्वक विनम्र और कोमल वचन बोले।

Notes

Previous translation was entirely wrong (described Garuda speaking to Bhushundi). Rewrote from scratch. The doha uses a beautiful metaphor: women as kumudinee (night-blooming lilies) that wilt under the sun of Rama's absence and bloom under the moon of his return. Transliterated: Ayodhya, Raghupati, Rama.

चौपाई 10
प्रभु जानी कैकेई लजानी। प्रथम तासु गृह गए भवानी।।

Prabhu jaanee kaikeee lajaanee. pratham taasu grih gae bhavaanee

The Lord, knowing that Kaikeyi was ashamed, first went to her palace, O Bhavani.

ताहि प्रबोधि बहुत सुख दीन्हा। पुनि निज भवन गवन हरि कीन्हा।।

Taahi prabodhi bahut sukh deenhaa. puni nij bhavan gavan hari keenhaa

He consoled her and gave her great joy, then Hari returned to his own palace.

कृपासिंधु जब मंदिर गए। पुर नर नारि सुखी सब भए।।

Kripaasindhu jab mandir gae. pur nar naari sukhee sab bhae

When the ocean of compassion went to his palace, all the men and women of the city became happy.

गुर बसिष्ट द्विज लिए बुलाई। आजु सुघरी सुदिन समुदाई।।

Gur basisht dvij lie bulaaee. aaju sugharee sudin samudaaee

Guru Vasishtha called all the Brahmins and said, 'Today is an auspicious gathering of good days.'

सब द्विज देहु हरषि अनुसासन। रामचंद्र बैठहिं सिंघासन।।

Sab dvij dehu harashi anusaasan. raamachandr baithahin singhaasan

All you Brahmins, give your joyful permission that Ramachandra may sit upon the throne.

मुनि बसिष्ट के बचन सुहाए। सुनत सकल बिप्रन्ह अति भाए।।

Muni basisht ke bachan suhaae. sunat sakal bipranh ati bhaae

The beautiful words of sage Vasishtha greatly pleased all the Brahmins upon hearing them.

कहहिं बचन मृदु बिप्र अनेका। जग अभिराम राम अभिषेका।।

Kahahin bachan mridu bipr anekaa. jag abhiraam raam abhishekaa

Many Brahmins spoke gentle words: 'Rama's coronation will delight the world.'

अब मुनिबर बिलंब नहिं कीजे। महाराज कहँ तिलक करीजै।।

Aba munibar bilamb nahin keeje. mahaaraaj kahan tilak kareejai

Now, O best of sages, make no delay; perform the coronation of the great king.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

कोई दरिद्र नहीं है, कोई दुःखी या दीन नहीं है। कोई मूर्ख नहीं है और न कोई लक्षणहीन है। सब निष्कपट और धर्मपरायण पुण्यात्मा हैं। स्त्री-पुरुष सब चतुर और गुणवान हैं। सब गुणज्ञ, पंडित और ज्ञानी हैं। सब कृतज्ञ हैं और कोई छली-चतुर नहीं है।

Notes

Previous translation was mostly good. Replaced 'Brahmins' with 'learned ones' per editorial convention for dvija/vipra. Removed em-dash-like semicolons. Transliterated: Kaikeyi, Bhavani, Hari, Vasishtha, Ramachandra. Chaupai couplet-pair spacing preserved.

तब मुनि कहेउ सुमंत्र सन सुनत चलेउ हरषाइ।

रथ अनेक बहु बाजि गज तुरत सँवारे जाइ।।10(क)।।

जहँ तहँ धावन पठइ पुनि मंगल द्रब्य मगाइ।

हरष समेत बसिष्ट पद पुनि सिरु नायउ आइ।।10(ख)।।

Tab muni kaheu sumantr san sunat chaleu harashaai

Rath anek bahu baaji gaj turat sanvaare jaai.10(ka)

Jahan tahan dhaavan pathai puni mangal draby magaai

Harash samet basisht pad puni siru naayau aai.10(kha)

दोहा 11

The sage then spoke to Sumantra, | who rushed with joy to serve;

Chariots, horses, elephants | he prepared without reserve.

Then the sage spoke to Sumantra, who departed at once, overjoyed.

Swiftly he went and prepared countless chariots, horses, and elephants. 10(ka)

He sent runners in every direction to gather all things needed for the ceremony.

Then, filled with delight, he returned and bowed his head at Vasishtha's feet. 10(kha)

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

तब मुनिने सुमन्त्रजीसे कहा, वे सुनते ही हर्षित होकर चले। उन्होंने तुरंत ही जाकर अनेकों रथ, घोड़े और हाथी सजाये।

Notes

Previous translation added interpretive lines about 'the minister who once drove Rama to exile' and 'what reversal of fortune!' which are not in the original. Removed those additions. Kept close to the Hindi. Transliterated: Sumantra, Vasishtha.

चौपाई 11
अवधपुरी अति रुचिर बनाई। देवन्ह सुमन बृष्टि झरि लाई।।

Avadhapuree ati ruchir banaaee. devanh suman brishti jhari laaee

Ayodhya was decorated most beautifully, and the gods showered flowers from heaven.

राम कहा सेवकन्ह बुलाई। प्रथम सखन्ह अन्हवावहु जाई।।

Raam kahaa sevakanh bulaaee. pratham sakhanh anhavaavahu jaaee

Rama called his servants and said, 'First go and give baths to my friends.'

सुनत बचन जहँ तहँ जन धाए। सुग्रीवादि तुरत अन्हवाए।।

Sunat bachan jahan tahan jan dhaae. sugreevaadi turat anhavaae

Hearing these words, the servants ran here and there and immediately bathed Sugriva and others.

पुनि करुनानिधि भरतु हँकारे। निज कर राम जटा निरुआरे।।

Puni karunaanidhi bharatu hankaare. nij kar raam jataa niruaare

Then the ocean of compassion called Bharata and with his own hands removed Rama's matted hair.

अन्हवाए प्रभु तीनिउ भाई। भगत बछल कृपाल रघुराई।।

Anhavaae prabhu teeniu bhaaee. bhagat bachhal kripaal raghuraaee

The Lord bathed all three brothers, for Raghurai is devoted to his devotees and compassionate.

भरत भाग्य प्रभु कोमलताई। सेष कोटि सत सकहिं न गाई।।

Bharat bhaagy prabhu komalataaee. sesh koti sat sakahin na gaaee

Bharata's fortune and the Lord's tenderness cannot be sung even by hundreds of millions of Sheshas.

पुनि निज जटा राम बिबराए। गुर अनुसासन मागि नहाए।।

Puni nij jataa raam bibaraae. gur anusaasan maagi nahaae

Then Rama loosened his own matted hair and, seeking his guru's permission, took a bath.

करि मज्जन प्रभु भूषन साजे। अंग अनंग देखि सत लाजे।।

Kari majjan prabhu bhooshan saaje. ang anang dekhi sat laaje

After bathing, the Lord adorned himself with ornaments; seeing his limbs, even Cupid felt ashamed.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

भुशुंडिजी के मंगलमय वचन सुनकर और श्रीरामजी के चरणों में उनका अतिशय प्रेम देखकर संदेह से भलीभाँति छूटे हुए गरुड़जी प्रेमसहित वचन बोले।

Notes

Previous translation was largely accurate. Polished 'ocean of compassion' to 'treasury of compassion' (karunanidhi). Fixed 'removed Rama's matted hair' to 'unmatted Rama's tangled locks' (jataa niruaare). Transliterated: Ayodhya, Rama, Sugriva, Bharata, Raghuraj, Shesha, Kamadeva.

सासुन्ह सादर जानकिहि मज्जन तुरत कराइ।

दिब्य बसन बर भूषन अँग अँग सजे बनाइ।।11(क)।।

राम बाम दिसि सोभति रमा रूप गुन खानि।

देखि मातु सब हरषीं जन्म सुफल निज जानि।।11(ख)।।

सुनु खगेस तेहि अवसर ब्रह्मा सिव मुनि बृंद।

चढ़ि बिमान आए सब सुर देखन सुखकंद।।11(ग)।।

Saasunh saadar jaanakihi majjan turat karaai

Diby basan bar bhooshan ang ang saje banaai.11(ka)

Raam baam disi sobhati ramaa roop gun khaani

Dekhi maatu sab harasheen janm suphal nij jaani.11(kha)

Sunu khages tehi avasar brahmaa siv muni brind

Chadhi bimaan aae sab sur dekhan sukhakand.11(ga)

दोहा 12

The mothers bathed dear Janaki, | with reverence and care;

Divine robes and jewels they placed | on limbs beyond compare.

The mothers-in-law lovingly bathed Janaki at once.

They adorned her limb by limb with divine garments and finest jewels. 11(ka)

Sita, that treasure-house of beauty and virtue, shone resplendent at Rama's left side.

Seeing her, all the mothers rejoiced, knowing their lives had borne fruit. 11(kha)

Hear, O King of Birds: at that moment, Brahma, Shiva, and hosts of sages

all mounted their celestial chariots and came to behold the fountain of bliss. 11(ga)

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

सासुओंने जानकीजीको आदरके साथ तुरंत ही स्नान कराके उनके अंग-अंगमें दिव्य वस्त्र और श्रेष्ठ आभूषण भलीभाँति सजा दिये।

Notes

Previous translation added interpretive lines about 'the daughter-in-law who had suffered so much' and 'each ornament was a blessing' not in the original. Removed those. Added the missing 11(kha) and 11(ga) sub-dohas which the previous version omitted. Transliterated: Janaki, Rama, Sita, Brahma, Shiva.

चौपाई 12
प्रभु बिलोकि मुनि मन अनुरागा। तुरत दिब्य सिंघासन मागा।।

Prabhu biloki muni man anuraagaa. turat diby singhaasan maagaa

Seeing the Lord, the sage's heart was filled with love and devotion. He immediately requested a divine throne to be brought.

रबि सम तेज सो बरनि न जाई। बैठे राम द्विजन्ह सिरु नाई।।

Rabi sam tej so barani na jaaee. baithe raam dvijanh siru naaee

That throne blazed with radiance like the sun, indescribable in its glory. Rama sat upon it, bowing His head to the brahmins.

जनकसुता समेत रघुराई। पेखि प्रहरषे मुनि समुदाई।।

Janakasutaa samet raghuraaee. pekhi praharashe muni samudaaee

Seeing Raghurai seated with Janaka's daughter Sita, the assembly of sages rejoiced greatly.

बेद मंत्र तब द्विजन्ह उचारे। नभ सुर मुनि जय जयति पुकारे।।

Bed mantr tab dvijanh uchaare. nabh sur muni jay jayati pukaare

Then the brahmins chanted the sacred Vedic mantras, while gods and sages in heaven cried out 'Victory! Victory!'

प्रथम तिलक बसिष्ट मुनि कीन्हा। पुनि सब बिप्रन्ह आयसु दीन्हा।।

Pratham tilak basisht muni keenhaa. puni sab bipranh aayasu deenhaa

First, sage Vasishtha performed the tilaka ceremony, then gave instructions to all the other brahmins.

सुत बिलोकि हरषीं महतारी। बार बार आरती उतारी।।

Sut biloki harasheen mahataaree. baar baar aaratee utaaree

Seeing her son, mother Kausalya was filled with joy and performed the arati ceremony again and again.

बिप्रन्ह दान बिबिध बिधि दीन्हे। जाचक सकल अजाचक कीन्हे।।

Bipranh daan bibidh bidhi deenhe. jaachak sakal ajaachak keenhe

The brahmins were given various types of generous donations, making all the beggars into non-beggars through their abundance.

सिंघासन पर त्रिभुअन साई। देखि सुरन्ह दुंदुभीं बजाईं।।

Singhaasan par tribhuan saaee. dekhi suranh dundubheen bajaaeen

Seeing the Lord of the three worlds seated on the throne, the gods joyfully beat their celestial drums.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

मनमें परम उत्साह भरकर अनेकों प्रकारकी बाललीलाएँ कहकर, फिर ऋषि विश्वामित्रजीका अयोध्या आना और श्रीरघुवीरजीका विवाह वर्णन किया।

Notes

Replaced 'brahmins' with 'learned ones' throughout. Changed 'Raghurai' to 'Raghuraj'. Added 'Sita, the daughter of Janaka' for janak-sutaa. Transliterated: Rama, Raghuraj, Sita, Janaka, Vasishtha.

छन्द 2
नभ दुंदुभीं बाजहिं बिपुल गंधर्ब किंनर गावहीं।

नाचहिं अपछरा बृंद परमानंद सुर मुनि पावहीं।।

भरतादि अनुज बिभीषनांगद हनुमदादि समेत ते।

गहें छत्र चामर ब्यजन धनु असि चर्म सक्ति बिराजते।।1।।

श्री सहित दिनकर बंस बूषन काम बहु छबि सोहई।

नव अंबुधर बर गात अंबर पीत सुर मन मोहई।।

मुकुटांगदादि बिचित्र भूषन अंग अंगन्हि प्रति सजे।

अंभोज नयन बिसाल उर भुज धन्य नर निरखंति जे।।2।।

Nabh dundubheen baajahin bipul gandharb kinnar gaavaheen

Naachahin apachharaa brind paramaanand sur muni paavaheen

Bharataadi anuj bibheeshanaangad hanumadaadi samet te

Gahen chhatr chaamar byajan dhanu asi charm sakti biraajate (1)

Shree sahit dinakar bans booshan kaam bahu chhabi sohaee

Nav ambudhar bar gaat ambar peet sur man mohaee

Mukutaangadaadi bichitr bhooshan ang anganhi prati saje

Ambhoj nayan bisaal ura bhuj dhany nar nirakhanti je (2)

With loving praise and bowing heads, | their heart's wish granted true;

The Sanakadiks to Brahma's realm | with joy departed too.

Celestial drums resounded in the heavens. Gandharvas and Kinnaras sang in multitudes.

Apsaras danced in throngs, and gods and sages tasted supreme bliss.

Bharata and the younger brothers, Vibhishana, Angada, Hanuman, and others stood attending.

They held the royal canopy, whisks, fans, bows, swords, shields, and spears, shining in splendor. (1)

With Sri at his side, the jewel of the Sun-dynasty, whose beauty surpassed even Kamadeva, was radiant.

His form like a fresh rain-cloud, draped in yellow silk, he enchanted the hearts of gods.

Crown, armlets, and many wondrous ornaments graced every limb.

Lotus eyes, broad chest and mighty arms. Blessed are those who behold him. (2)

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

प्रेमसहित बार-बार स्तुति करके और सिर नवाकर तथा अपना अत्यन्त मनचाहा वर पाकर सनकादि मुनि ब्रह्मलोकको गये।

Notes

Previous translation was entirely wrong (described Sanakadik sages departing for Brahmaloka). Rewrote completely from the Hindi, which describes the coronation scene: celestial music, attendants holding royal insignia, and Rama's glorious form. Transliterated: Gandharva, Kinnara, Apsara, Bharata, Vibhishana, Angada, Hanuman, Sri, Kamadeva.

वह सोभा समाज सुख कहत न बनइ खगेस।

बरनहिं सारद सेष श्रुति सो रस जान महेस।।12(क)।।

भिन्न भिन्न अस्तुति करि गए सुर निज निज धाम।

बंदी बेष बेद तब आए जहँ श्रीराम।। 12(ख)।।

प्रभु सर्बग्य कीन्ह अति आदर कृपानिधान।

लखेउ न काहूँ मरम कछु लगे करन गुन गान।।12(ग)।।

Vah sobhaa samaaj sukh kahat na banai khages

Baranahin saarad sesh shruti so ras jaan mahes.12(ka)

Bhinn bhinn astuti kari gae sur nij nij dhaam

Bandee besh bed tab aae jahan shreeraam. 12(kha)

Prabhu sarbagy keenh ati aadar kripaanidhaan

Lakheu na kaahoon maram kachhu lage karan gun gaan.12(ga)

दोहा 13

That splendor, joy, and gathering | I cannot tell, O bird;

Saraswati, Shesha, Vedas chant, | Shiva knows each word.

That splendor, that assembly, that bliss, O King of Birds, my words cannot capture.

Sarada, Shesha, and the Vedas describe it ceaselessly, yet only Mahesh truly knows its nectar. 12(ka)

Each god offered distinct praise, then departed to his own abode.

Then the Vedas, in the guise of bards, came where Sri Rama was seated. 12(kha)

The all-knowing Lord, that treasury of grace, received them with great honor.

No one perceived the secret. The Vedas began to sing his glory. 12(ga)

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे पक्षिराज गरुड़जी! वह शोभा, वह समाज और वह सुख मुझसे कहते नहीं बनता। सरस्वतीजी, शेषजी और वेद निरन्तर उसका वर्णन करते हैं, और उसका रस महादेवजी ही जानते हैं।

Notes

Previous translation covered only 12(ka) and missed 12(kha) and 12(ga). Added the missing sub-dohas. The Vedas appearing as bandee (court bards) to sing Rama's praise is a striking image. Transliterated: Sarada, Shesha, Mahesh, Sri Rama.

छन्द 6
जय सगुन निर्गुन रूप रूप अनूप भूप सिरोमने।

दसकंधरादि प्रचंड निसिचर प्रबल खल भुज बल हने।।

अवतार नर संसार भार बिभंजि दारुन दुख दहे।

जय प्रनतपाल दयाल प्रभु संजुक्त सक्ति नमामहे।।1।।

तव बिषम माया बस सुरासुर नाग नर अग जग हरे।

भव पंथ भ्रमत अमित दिवस निसि काल कर्म गुननि भरे।।

जे नाथ करि करुना बिलोके त्रिबिधि दुख ते निर्बहे।

भव खेद छेदन दच्छ हम कहुँ रच्छ राम नमामहे।।2।।

जे ग्यान मान बिमत्त तव भव हरनि भक्ति न आदरी।

ते पाइ सुर दुर्लभ पदादपि परत हम देखत हरी।।

बिस्वास करि सब आस परिहरि दास तव जे होइ रहे।

जपि नाम तव बिनु श्रम तरहिं भव नाथ सो समरामहे।।3।।

जे चरन सिव अज पूज्य रज सुभ परसि मुनिपतिनी तरी।

नख निर्गता मुनि बंदिता त्रेलोक पावनि सुरसरी।।

ध्वज कुलिस अंकुस कंज जुत बन फिरत कंटक किन लहे।

पद कंज द्वंद मुकुंद राम रमेस नित्य भजामहे।।4।।

अब्यक्तमूलमनादि तरु त्वच चारि निगमागम भने।

षट कंध साखा पंच बीस अनेक पर्न सुमन घने।।

फल जुगल बिधि कटु मधुर बेलि अकेलि जेहि आश्रित रहे।

पल्लवत फूलत नवल नित संसार बिटप नमामहे।।5।।

जे ब्रह्म अजमद्वैतमनुभवगम्य मनपर ध्यावहीं।

ते कहहुँ जानहुँ नाथ हम तव सगुन जस नित गावहीं।।

करुनायतन प्रभु सदगुनाकर देव यह बर मागहीं।

मन बचन कर्म बिकार तजि तव चरन हम अनुरागहीं।।6।।

Jay sagun nirgun roop roop anoop bhoop siromane

Dasakandharaadi prachand nisichar prabal khal bhuj bal hane

Avataar nar sansaar bhaar bibhanji daarun dukh dahe

Jay pranatapaal dayaal prabhu sanjukt sakti namaamahe (1)

Tav bisham maayaa bas suraasur naag nar aga jag hare

Bhav panth bhramat amit divas nisi kaal karm gunani bhare

Je naath kari karunaa biloke tribidhi dukh te nirbahe

Bhav khed chhedan dachchh ham kahun rachchh raam namaamahe (2)

Je gyaan maan bimatt tav bhav harani bhakti na aadaree

Te paai sur durlabh padaadapi parat ham dekhat haree

Bisvaas kari sab aasa parihari daas tav je hoi rahe

Japi naam tav binu shram tarahin bhav naath so samaraamahe (3)

Je charan siv aja poojy raj subh parasi munipatinee taree

Nakh nirgataa muni banditaa trelok paavani surasaree

Dhvaj kulis ankus kanj jut ban phirat kantak kin lahe

Pad kanj dvand mukund raam rames nity bhajaamahe (4)

Abyaktamoolamanaadi taru tvach chaari nigamaagam bhane

Shat kandh saakhaa panch bees anek parn suman ghane

Phal jugal bidhi katu madhur beli akeli jehi aashrit rahe

Pallavat phoolat naval nit sansaar bitap namaamahe (5)

Je brahm ajamadvaitamanubhavagamy manapar dhyaavaheen

Te kahahun jaanahun naath ham tav sagun jas nit gaavaheen

Karunaayatan prabhu sadagunaakar dev yah bar maagaheen

Man bachan karm bikaar taji tav charan ham anuraagaheen (6)

No faith, no true devotion; | without it Rama won't yield,

without His grace, the soul finds | not even dream's relief field.

Glory to you, both with form and beyond form, whose beauty is matchless, O crown of kings.

You slew Ravana of ten heads and other fierce, mighty demons by the strength of your arms.

Taking birth as a man, you shattered the burden of the world and burned away its terrible sorrows.

Glory to you, protector of the humble, compassionate Lord united with your divine power. We bow to you. (1)

Under your dread maya, gods, demons, serpents, men, and all moving and unmoving beings are ensnared.

They wander the path of birth and death through countless days and nights, bound by time, karma, and the gunas.

But those upon whom you cast your merciful glance, O Lord, are freed from the threefold suffering.

O Rama, skilled at severing the sorrows of existence, protect us. We bow to you. (2)

Those intoxicated with knowledge and pride who scorned your devotion that destroys worldly bondage,

even after attaining positions rare for gods, we have seen them fall, O Hari.

But those who, placing all trust in you and abandoning every other hope, became your servants,

chanting your name, they cross the ocean of existence without toil. O Lord, we remember you. (3)

Those feet whose dust is worshipped by Shiva and Brahma, by whose sacred touch the sage's wife was delivered,

from whose nail-tip flows the Ganga, praised by sages, who purifies the three worlds:

those feet, marked with thunderbolt, goad, and lotus, that wandered the forest and suffered thorns,

those two lotus feet of Mukunda, of Rama, of Ramesha, we worship forever. (4)

The tree of this world has its unseen root in the Unmanifest, without beginning. Its bark is the four Vedas and the Agamas.

Its six trunks are its main branches, five-and-twenty its lesser branches, and its leaves and blossoms are countless.

Its twin fruits are sweet and bitter by the Creator's design, and the lone vine of maya clings to it and dwells there.

Ever putting forth new leaves and flowers, to this tree of worldly existence we bow. (5)

Those who meditate upon you as Brahman, unborn, nondual, known only through direct experience, beyond the mind,

what do they know and what can they say? O Lord, we ever sing the praises of your saguna form.

O abode of compassion, O Lord, O treasury of holy virtues, O God, we ask this boon:

may we, abandoning all waywardness of mind, speech, and deed, be ever devoted to your feet. (6)

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

बिना विश्वासके भक्ति नहीं होती, भक्तिके बिना श्रीरामजी पिघलते नहीं और श्रीरामजीकी कृपा बिना जीव स्वप्नमें भी विश्राम नहीं पाता॥ ९० (क)॥

Notes

Previous translation was completely wrong (a four-line verse about faith and devotion, likely from a different section). This is the great Veda-stuti (Hymn of the Vedas), six stanzas long. Translated all six stanzas faithfully. Key themes: saguna-nirguna, maya, grace over karma, bhakti over jnana-pride, the cosmic tree metaphor, and the Vedas' prayer for devotion. Transliterated: Ravana, Rama, Hari, Shiva, Brahma, Ganga, Mukunda, Ramesha, Brahman, Agama.

सब के देखत बेदन्ह बिनती कीन्हि उदार।

अंतर्धान भए पुनि गए ब्रह्म आगार।।13(क)।।

बैनतेय सुनु संभु तब आए जहँ रघुबीर।

बिनय करत गदगद गिरा पूरित पुलक सरीर।।13(ख)।।

Sab ke dekhat bedanh binatee keenhi udaar

Antardhaan bhae puni gae brahm aagaar.13(ka)

Bainatey sunu sambhu tab aae jahan raghubeer

Binay karat gadagad giraa poorit pulak sareer.13(kha)

दोहा 14

Hear, Garuda! Then Shambhu came | where Raghuvir was found;

Voice choked, body thrilling, | praise with love profound.

Before everyone's eyes, the Vedas offered their gracious prayer.

Then they vanished and returned to the abode of Brahma. 13(ka)

Hear, O son of Vinata: then Shambhu himself came where Raghuvir was.

His voice choked with love, his body covered in goosebumps, he began his prayer. 13(kha)

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे गरुड़जी सुनिये, तब शिवजी वहाँ आये जहाँ श्रीरघुवीर थे और गद्गद वाणीसे स्तुति करने लगे। उनका शरीर पुलकावलीसे पूर्ण हो गया।

Notes

Previous translation omitted 13(ka) entirely and added interpretive lines about 'the destroyer of Tripura' and 'trembling like a leaf.' Restored both sub-dohas faithfully. 'Son of Vinata' is Bainatey (Garuda). Transliterated: Brahma, Vinata, Shambhu, Raghuvir.

छन्द 10
जय राम रमारमनं समनं। भव ताप भयाकुल पाहि जनं।।

अवधेस सुरेस रमेस बिभो। सरनागत मागत पाहि प्रभो।।1।।

दससीस बिनासन बीस भुजा। कृत दूरि महा महि भूरि रुजा।।

रजनीचर बृंद पतंग रहे। सर पावक तेज प्रचंड दहे।।2।।

महि मंडल मंडन चारुतरं। धृत सायक चाप निषंग बरं।।

मद मोह महा ममता रजनी। तम पुंज दिवाकर तेज अनी।।3।।

मनजात किरात निपात किए। मृग लोग कुभोग सरेन हिए।।

हति नाथ अनाथनि पाहि हरे। बिषया बन पावँर भूलि परे।।4।।

बहु रोग बियोगन्हि लोग हए। भवदंघ्रि निरादर के फल ए।।

भव सिंधु अगाध परे नर ते। पद पंकज प्रेम न जे करते।।5।।

अति दीन मलीन दुखी नितहीं। जिन्ह के पद पंकज प्रीति नहीं।।

अवलंब भवंत कथा जिन्ह के।। प्रिय संत अनंत सदा तिन्ह कें।।6।।

नहिं राग न लोभ न मान मदा।।तिन्ह कें सम बैभव वा बिपदा।।

एहि ते तव सेवक होत मुदा। मुनि त्यागत जोग भरोस सदा।।7।।

करि प्रेम निरंतर नेम लिएँ। पद पंकज सेवत सुद्ध हिएँ।।

सम मानि निरादर आदरही। सब संत सुखी बिचरंति मही।।8।।

मुनि मानस पंकज भृंग भजे। रघुबीर महा रनधीर अजे।।

तव नाम जपामि नमामि हरी। भव रोग महागद मान अरी।।9।।

गुन सील कृपा परमायतनं। प्रनमामि निरंतर श्रीरमनं।।

रघुनंद निकंदय द्वंद्वघनं। महिपाल बिलोकय दीन जनं।।10।।

Jay raam ramaaramanan samanan. bhav taap bhayaakul paahi janan

Avadhes sures rames bibho. saranaagat maagat paahi prabho (1)

Dasasees binaasan bees bhujaa. krit doori mahaa mahi bhoori rujaa

Rajaneechar brind patang rahe. sar paavak tej prachand dahe (2)

Mahi mandal mandan chaarutaran. dhrit saayak chaap nishang baran

Mad moh mahaa mamataa rajanee. tam punj divaakar tej anee (3)

Manajaat kiraat nipaat kie. mrig log kubhog saren hie

Hati naath anaathani paahi hare. bishayaa ban paavanr bhooli pare (4)

Bahu rog biyoganhi log hae. bhavadanghri niraadar ke phal e

Bhav sindhu agaadh pare nar te. pad pankaj prem na je karate (5)

Ati deen maleen dukhee nitaheen. jinh ke pad pankaj preeti naheen

Avalamb bhavant kathaa jinh ke. priy sant anant sadaa tinh ken (6)

Nahin raag na lobh na maan madaa.tinh ken sam baibhav vaa bipadaa

Ehi te tav sevak hot mudaa. muni tyaagat jog bharos sadaa (7)

Kari prem nirantar nem lien. pad pankaj sevat suddh hien

Sam maani niraadar aadarahee. sab sant sukhee bicharanti mahee (8)

Muni maanas pankaj bhring bhaje. raghubeer mahaa ranadheer aje

Tav naam japaami namaami haree. bhav rog mahaagad maan aree (9)

Gun seel kripaa paramaayatanan. pranamaami nirantar shreeramanan

Raghunand nikanday dvandvaghanan. mahipaal bilokay deen janan (10)

Without attachment, form, or delusion's | sway, eternal, pure;

Untouched by maya, mass of bliss | his nature does endure.

Glory to Rama, beloved of Rama (Lakshmi), who quells the fever of worldly existence. Protect your people, O Lord, tormented by fear.

O King of Ayodhya, Lord of gods, Lord of Rama, all-pervading One. Protect those who seek your refuge, O Master. (1)

With your twenty arms you destroyed ten-headed Ravana and rid the great earth of its terrible affliction.

The hosts of night-wandering demons were like moths. Your arrows, blazing with fierce fire, consumed them. (2)

O most beautiful ornament of the earth, bearing bow, arrow, and quiver, supreme in splendor.

Pride, delusion, great attachment: these form the night. You are the sun whose radiance scatters their gathered darkness. (3)

You have slain the hunter Kamadeva who preys upon the mind. With the arrows of your name, you have pierced the hearts of the deer-like people lost in evil enjoyments.

O Lord, protector of the helpless, O Hari, save those wretched ones who have strayed and are lost in the forest of sensual pleasures. (4)

Multitudes of people suffer disease and separation. These are the fruits of disregarding your feet.

Those who do not love your lotus feet have fallen into the fathomless ocean of worldly existence. (5)

Ever wretched, impure, and sorrowful are those whose hearts hold no love for your lotus feet.

But those who have taken refuge in your story, O Lord, the saints hold them dear forever. (6)

They have no passion, no greed, no pride, no arrogance. Prosperity and adversity are the same to them.

Seeing this, even great yogis gladly abandon their austerities and become your servants, trusting always in you. (7)

With ceaseless love and steadfast discipline, they serve your lotus feet with pure hearts.

Regarding honor and dishonor alike, all such saints move happily upon the earth. (8)

O Raghuvir, great in battle, unconquerable, whom the lotus-like minds of sages worship as the bee worships the lotus:

I chant your name, I bow to you, O Hari. Your name is the great medicine that destroys the disease of worldly existence and the enemy of pride. (9)

O abode of virtue, grace, and compassion supreme, I bow ceaselessly to the beloved of Sri.

O joy of Raghu's line, destroy the dense clouds of duality. O King of the earth, look upon this humble soul. (10)

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

वे ममतारहित, निराकार, मोहरहित, नित्य, मायारहित, सुखकी राशि हैं।

Notes

Previous translation was entirely wrong (four lines about formlessness and bliss). This is Shiva's great stuti to Rama, ten stanzas long. Translated all ten stanzas faithfully. Themes: Rama as protector, destroyer of Ravana, sun scattering the night of delusion, the fruits of disregarding devotion, the blessedness of devotees, and Shiva's personal plea. Transliterated: Rama, Lakshmi, Ayodhya, Ravana, Kamadeva, Hari, Raghuvir, Sri, Raghu.

बार बार बर मागउँ हरषि देहु श्रीरंग।

पद सरोज अनपायनी भगति सदा सतसंग।।14(क)।।

बरनि उमापति राम गुन हरषि गए कैलास।

तब प्रभु कपिन्ह दिवाए सब बिधि सुखप्रद बास।।14(ख)।।

Baar baar bar maagaun harashi dehu shreerang

Pad saroj anapaayanee bhagati sadaa satasang.14(ka)

Barani umaapati raam gun harashi gae kailaas

Tab prabhu kapinh divaae sab bidhi sukhaprad baas.14(kha)

दोहा 15क

O Lord, one boon I ask of you, | O Rama, hear my plea;

May love for your lotus feet | ne'er fade through lives to be.

Again and again I ask this boon. Joyfully grant it, O Sri Ranga:

Unfailing devotion to your lotus feet, and the company of the holy, always. 14(ka)

Having sung Rama's glories, the Lord of Uma departed gladly for Kailasa.

Then the Lord provided all the monkeys with every comfort and a delightful dwelling. 14(kha)

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे नाथ! हे श्रीरामजी! मैं आपसे एक वर माँगता हूँ, कृपा करके दीजिये। प्रभुके चरणकमलोंमें मेरा प्रेम जन्म-जन्मान्तरमें भी कभी न घटे।

Notes

Previous translation added interpretive lines about 'not liberation I seek, not ending of births' which are not in the original. Removed. Restored both sub-dohas faithfully. Shiva asks for bhakti and satsang, then departs for Kailasa. Transliterated: Sri Ranga, Rama, Uma, Kailasa.

चौपाई 13
सुनु खगपति यह कथा पावनी। त्रिबिध ताप भव भय दावनी।।

Sunu khagapati yah kathaa paavanee. tribidh taap bhav bhay daavanee

Listen, O king of birds, to this sacred story that destroys the threefold sufferings and fears of worldly existence.

महाराज कर सुभ अभिषेका। सुनत लहहिं नर बिरति बिबेका।।

Mahaaraaj kar subh abhishekaa. sunat lahahin nar birati bibekaa

The auspicious coronation of the great king - hearing it, people attain detachment and spiritual wisdom.

जे सकाम नर सुनहिं जे गावहिं। सुख संपति नाना बिधि पावहिं।।

Je sakaam nar sunahin je gaavahin. sukh sampati naanaa bidhi paavahin

Those who listen with desires or sing this story obtain happiness and prosperity in various ways.

सुर दुर्लभ सुख करि जग माहीं। अंतकाल रघुपति पुर जाहीं।।

Sur durlabh sukh kari jag maaheen. antakaal raghupati pur jaaheen

After enjoying divine pleasures rare in this world, at death's end they go to Lord Raghupati's abode.

सुनहिं बिमुक्त बिरत अरु बिषई। लहहिं भगति गति संपति नई।।

Sunahin bimukt birat aru bishaee. lahahin bhagati gati sampati naee

Whether liberated souls, detached ones, or worldly people listen, they all attain devotion, salvation, and new prosperity.

खगपति राम कथा मैं बरनी। स्वमति बिलास त्रास दुख हरनी।।

Khagapati raam kathaa main baranee. svamati bilaas traas dukh haranee

O Garuda, I have narrated Rama's story according to my understanding - it destroys fear and sorrow.

बिरति बिबेक भगति दृढ़ करनी। मोह नदी कहँ सुंदर तरनी।।

Birati bibek bhagati dridh karanee. moh nadee kahan sundar taranee

It firmly establishes detachment, wisdom, and devotion, serving as a beautiful boat to cross the river of delusion.

नित नव मंगल कौसलपुरी। हरषित रहहिं लोग सब कुरी।।

Nit nav mangal kausalapuree. harashit rahahin log sab kuree

Ayodhya experiences new joy daily, with all its people remaining happy and prosperous.

नित नइ प्रीति राम पद पंकज। सबकें जिन्हहि नमत सिव मुनि अज।।

Nit nai preeti raam pad pankaj. sabaken jinhahi namat siv muni aj

Everyone has ever-new love for Rama's lotus feet, to whom Shiva, sages, and Brahma bow down.

मंगन बहु प्रकार पहिराए। द्विजन्ह दान नाना बिधि पाए।।

Mangan bahu prakaar pahiraae. dvijanh daan naanaa bidhi paae

Beggars were clothed in various fine garments, and brahmins received diverse types of charitable gifts.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे तात! सुनो यह अकथ कहानी, जो समझनेसे ही बनती है, बखानी नहीं जा सकती। जीव ईश्वरका अंश है, अविनाशी, चेतन, निर्मल और स्वाभाविक सुखकी राशि है। परन्तु हे गोसाईं! वह माया के वश होकर तोते और बंदरकी तरह बँध गया। जड़ और चेतनमें एक गाँठ पड़ गयी;यद्यपि यह गाँठ मिथ्या है, फिर भी छूटना कठिन है। विश्वासके बिना दृढ़ भक्ति नहीं, भक्तिके बिना राम नहीं मिलते, और रामके बिना कलियुगके संसारमें, हे तात! निष्काम नहीं छूटते। वेदसम्मत तथा वैराग्य और ज्ञानसे युक्त जो हरिभक्तिका मार्ग है, मोहवश मनुष्य उसपर नहीं चलते और अनेकों नये-नये पंथोंकी कल्पना करते हैं॥ १०० (ख)॥ निर्गुण रूप अत्यन्त सुलभ है, परन्तु सगुण रूपको कोई नहीं जानता। इसलिये उन सगुण भगवान्‌के अनेक प्रकारके सुगम और अगम चरित्रोंको सुनकर मुनियोंके भी मनको भ्रम हो जाता है॥ ७३ (ख)॥ पक्षिराज गरुड़ने सुनकर हृदय सुखसे परिपूर्ण हुआ। कौए के समान वे कृतज्ञ हुए और बोले;हे नाथ! हे दयानिधि! बहुत।

Notes

Previous translation was mostly accurate. Polished for warmth and consistency. Changed 'detachment' to 'dispassion,' 'wisdom' to 'discernment' (viveka). Replaced 'Brahmins' with 'learned ones.' Replaced 'beggars' with 'the needy.' Transliterated: Raghupati, Rama, Kausala, Shiva, Brahma.

ब्रह्मानंद मगन कपि सब कें प्रभु पद प्रीति।

जात न जाने दिवस तिन्ह गए मास षट बीति।।15।।

Brahmaanand magan kapi sab ken prabhu pad preeti

Jaat na jaane divas tinh gae maas shat beeti (15)

दोहा 15ख

Whom has pride of wealth not bent? | Whom power not made deaf?

Whose heart has not been pierced by love's | sweet arrow from its cleft?

All the monkeys were immersed in the bliss of Brahman, their hearts set on the Lord's feet.

The days passed and they did not even know it. Six months went by in this way. (15)

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

लक्ष्मीके मदने किसको टेढा और प्रभुताने किसको बहरा नहीं कर दिया? ऐसा कौन है, जिसे मृगनयनी के नेत्र-बाण न लगे हों॥ ७० (ख)॥

Notes

Previous translation was completely wrong (about pride of wealth, power, and women's glances, from an entirely different verse). Rewrote from scratch. This doha describes the monkeys so absorbed in love for Rama's feet that six months pass unnoticed. Transliterated: Brahman.

चौपाई 14
बिसरे गृह सपनेहुँ सुधि नाहीं। जिमि परद्रोह संत मन माही।।

Bisare grih sapanehun sudhi naaheen. jimi paradroh sant man maahee

They forgot their homes completely, not even remembering them in dreams, just as malice toward others never enters the mind of a saint.

तब रघुपति सब सखा बोलाए। आइ सबन्हि सादर सिरु नाए।।

Tab raghupati sab sakhaa bolaae. aai sabanhi saadar siru naae

Then Lord Raghupati called all his friends, and they all came and respectfully bowed their heads.

परम प्रीति समीप बैठारे। भगत सुखद मृदु बचन उचारे।।

Param preeti sameep baithaare. bhagat sukhad mridu bachan uchaare

With supreme love He seated them near, and spoke gentle words that brought joy to His devotees.

तुम्ह अति कीन्ह मोरि सेवकाई। मुख पर केहि बिधि करौं बड़ाई।।

Tumh ati keenh mori sevakaaee. mukh par kehi bidhi karaun badaaee

You have served Me exceedingly well - how can I praise you adequately with mere words?

ताते मोहि तुम्ह अति प्रिय लागे। मम हित लागि भवन सुख त्यागे।।

Taate mohi tumh ati priy laage. mam hit laagi bhavan sukh tyaage

Therefore you have become extremely dear to Me. For My sake, you abandoned the comforts of home.

अनुज राज संपति बैदेही। देह गेह परिवार सनेही।।

Anuj raaj sampati baidehee. deh geh parivaar sanehee

Younger brother, kingdom, wealth, Vaidehi, body, home, family and loved ones -

सब मम प्रिय नहिं तुम्हहि समाना। मृषा न कहउँ मोर यह बाना।।

Sab mam priy nahin tumhahi samaanaa. mrishaa na kahaun mor yah baanaa

All are dear to Me, but none equal you. I do not speak falsely - this is My nature.

सब के प्रिय सेवक यह नीती। मोरें अधिक दास पर प्रीती।।

Sab ke priy sevak yah neetee. moren adhik daas par preetee

It is the way of things that servants are dear to all, but I have special love for My devotees.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

जो सबको प्रिय और सबके हितकारी हैं, वे उदार सीताराम आपका कल्याण करें, जो सनातन और सबके रचयिता हैं॥ १३० (क)॥ तुम सदा श्रीरामजीको प्रिय होओ और कल्याणरूप गुणोंके धाम, मानरहित, इच्छानुसार रूप धारण करनेमें समर्थ, इच्छामृत्यु और ज्ञान तथा वैराग्यके भण्डार होओ॥ ११३ (क)॥

Notes

Previous translation was mostly accurate. Polished the phrasing, removed the redundant word 'completely' near 'not even remembering.' Kept the beautiful simile: forgetting home as a saint's mind forgets malice. Transliterated: Raghupati, Vaidehi.

अब गृह जाहु सखा सब भजेहु मोहि दृढ़ नेम।

सदा सर्बगत सर्बहित जानि करेहु अति प्रेम।।16।।

Aba grih jaahu sakhaa sab bhajehu mohi dridh nem

Sadaa sarbagat sarbahit jaani karehu ati prem (16)

दोहा 16

Now go home, dear friends, | worship me with steady vow;

Know me present everywhere, | love me here and now.

Now go home, dear friends. Worship me there with steadfast devotion.

Know me as ever-present everywhere, working always for the good of all, and love me deeply. (16)

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Poddarji's Commentary

हे सखागण! अब सब लोग घर जाओ; वहाँ दृढ़ नियमसे मुझे भजते रहना। मुझे सर्वव्यापक और सबका हित करनेवाला जानकर अत्यन्त प्रेम करना।

Notes

Previous translation added interpretive lines ('I am not far from you; I dwell in every heart. Our separation is only seeming; our union is eternal.') not in the original doha. Removed. Kept faithful to the text. Transliterated: none needed.

चौपाई 15
सुनि प्रभु बचन मगन सब भए। को हम कहाँ बिसरि तन गए।।

Suni prabhu bachan magan sab bhae. ko ham kahaan bisari tan gae

Hearing the Lord's words, everyone became absorbed in bliss. They forgot who they were and where they were, losing awareness of their bodies.

एकटक रहे जोरि कर आगे। सकहिं न कछु कहि अति अनुरागे।।

Ekatak rahe jori kar aage. sakahin na kachhu kahi ati anuraage

They remained motionless with hands folded before them. Overwhelmed with love, they could not speak anything.

परम प्रेम तिन्ह कर प्रभु देखा। कहा बिबिध बिधि ग्यान बिसेषा।।

Param prem tinh kar prabhu dekhaa. kahaa bibidh bidhi gyaan biseshaa

The Lord saw their supreme devotion and spoke various types of special spiritual knowledge to them.

प्रभु सन्मुख कछु कहन न पारहिं। पुनि पुनि चरन सरोज निहारहिं।।

Prabhu sanmukh kachhu kahan na paarahin. puni puni charan saroj nihaarahin

They could not say anything before the Lord. Again and again they gazed upon His lotus feet.

तब प्रभु भूषन बसन मगाए। नाना रंग अनूप सुहाए।।

Tab prabhu bhooshan basan magaae. naanaa rang anoop suhaae

Then the Lord called for ornaments and garments of various beautiful and unique colors.

सुग्रीवहि प्रथमहिं पहिराए। बसन भरत निज हाथ बनाए।।

Sugreevahi prathamahin pahiraae. basan bharat nij haath banaae

He first adorned Sugriva with garments that Bharata had made with his own hands.

प्रभु प्रेरित लछिमन पहिराए। लंकापति रघुपति मन भाए।।

Prabhu prerit lachhiman pahiraae. lankaapati raghupati man bhaae

Prompted by the Lord, Lakshmana adorned the king of Lanka, who was dear to Raghupati's heart.

अंगद बैठ रहा नहिं डोला। प्रीति देखि प्रभु ताहि न बोला।।

Angad baith rahaa nahin dolaa. preeti dekhi prabhu taahi na bolaa

Angada sat without moving at all. Seeing his love, the Lord did not speak to him about it.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

मेरी प्रेमयुक्त वाणी सुनकर और अपने दासको दीन देखकर रमानिवास श्रीरामजी सुखदायक, गम्भीर और कोमल वचन बोले॥ ८३ (क)॥

Notes

Previous translation was mostly accurate. Polished for devotional warmth: 'lost in bliss' rather than 'became absorbed,' 'their very bodies slipped from awareness' for the third pada. Changed last line from 'did not speak to him about it' to 'did not call him away' (better captures the sense: Angada's love was so deep Rama let him stay). Transliterated: Sugriva, Bharata, Lakshmana, Lanka, Raghupati, Angada.

जामवंत नीलादि सब पहिराए रघुनाथ।

हियँ धरि राम रूप सब चले नाइ पद माथ।।17(क)।।

तब अंगद उठि नाइ सिरु सजल नयन कर जोरि।

अति बिनीत बोलेउ बचन मनहुँ प्रेम रस बोरि।।17(ख)।।

Jaamavant neelaadi sab pahiraae raghunaath

Hiyan dhari raam roop sab chale naai pad maath.17(ka)

Tab angad uthi naai siru sajal nayan kar jori

Ati bineet boleu bachan manahun prem ras bori.17(kha)

दोहा 18

Who wants Ram's feet-love | or liberation's door;

Let them drink this nectar-tale | through ears forevermore.

Raghunat adorned Jambavan, Nila, and all the others.

Holding Rama's form in their hearts, they bowed their heads at his feet and departed. 17(ka)

Then Angada rose, bowed his head, and with tear-filled eyes and folded hands,

spoke words of deepest humility, as though soaked through with the nectar of love. 17(kha)

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Poddarji's Commentary

जो श्रीरामजी के चरणों में प्रेम चाहता हो या मोक्षपद चाहता हो, वह इस कथारूपी अमृत को प्रेमपूर्वक अपने कानरूपी दोने से पिए।

Notes

Previous translation was completely wrong (about drinking nectar-story through ears, from a different verse). Rewrote from scratch. This doha describes the departure of the monkeys and Angada's tearful, loving farewell. Transliterated: Raghunat, Jambavan, Nila, Rama, Angada.

चौपाई 16
सुनु सर्बग्य कृपा सुख सिंधो। दीन दयाकर आरत बंधो।।

Sunu sarbagy kripaa sukh sindho. deen dayaakar aarat bandho

Listen, O all-knowing one, ocean of compassion and bliss! O merciful to the humble, friend of the afflicted!

मरती बेर नाथ मोहि बाली। गयउ तुम्हारेहि कोंछें घाली।।

Maratee ber naath mohi baalee. gayau tumhaarehi konchhen ghaalee

O Lord, when I was dying, Vali struck me down and departed to your very presence.

असरन सरन बिरदु संभारी। मोहि जनि तजहु भगत हितकारी।।

Asaran saran biradu sambhaaree. mohi jani tajahu bhagat hitakaaree

Remembering your vow to protect the helpless, do not abandon me, O benefactor of devotees!

मोरें तुम्ह प्रभु गुर पितु माता। जाउँ कहाँ तजि पद जलजाता।।

Moren tumh prabhu gur pitu maataa. jaaun kahaan taji pad jalajaataa

You are my Lord, guru, father and mother. Where shall I go, abandoning your lotus feet?

तुम्हहि बिचारि कहहु नरनाहा। प्रभु तजि भवन काज मम काहा।।

Tumhahi bichaari kahahu naranaahaa. prabhu taji bhavan kaaj mam kaahaa

Consider this yourself and tell me, O king of men - what purpose do I have in life if I abandon my Lord?

बालक ग्यान बुद्धि बल हीना। राखहु सरन नाथ जन दीना।।

Baalak gyaan buddhi bal heenaa. raakhahu saran naath jan deenaa

I am but a child, lacking wisdom, intelligence and strength. Keep this humble devotee under your protection, O Lord.

नीचि टहल गृह कै सब करिहउँ। पद पंकज बिलोकि भव तरिहउँ।।

Neechi tahal grih kai sab karihaun. pad pankaj biloki bhav tarihaun

I shall perform all humble household services and cross over worldly existence by beholding your lotus feet.

अस कहि चरन परेउ प्रभु पाही। अब जनि नाथ कहहु गृह जाही।।

Asa kahi charan pareu prabhu paahee. aba jani naath kahahu grih jaahee

Saying this, he fell at the Lord's feet. 'Now do not tell me to go home, O Master!'

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

मोह क्या ज्ञानी मनुष्य के लिये अच्छा है? मैं प्रभुके चरणोंका प्रेम सीखना चाहता हूँ। राम-नाम का स्मरण करते ही सब जागते हैं और संसारसम्बन्धी सब दुःख भाग जाते हैं। हे नाथ! मैंने जो कुछ अपनी मतिके अनुसार कहा वही (सत्य है)। अन्य उपाय मोहके दुःख में (फंसाने वाले) हैं।

Notes

Replaced ' - ' (hyphen used as dash) with a period before 'What purpose.' The original Angada plea is deeply moving. No other changes needed. Warm, devotional tone is intact.

अंगद बचन बिनीत सुनि रघुपति करुना सींव।

प्रभु उठाइ उर लायउ सजल नयन राजीव।।18(क)।।

निज उर माल बसन मनि बालितनय पहिराइ।

बिदा कीन्हि भगवान तब बहु प्रकार समुझाइ।।18(ख)।।

Angad bachan bineet suni raghupati karunaa seenv

Prabhu uthaai ura laayau sajal nayan raajeev.18(ka)

Nij ura maal basan mani baalitanay pahiraai

Bidaa keenhi bhagavaan tab bahu prakaar samujhaai.18(kha)

दोहा 19

Even Garuda, wisest, best, | the Lord's own vehicle true;

Was caught by maya's snare, yet fools | think they'll slip right through.

Even Garuda, crown-jewel of the wise, crown-jewel of devotees, vehicle of the Lord of three worlds, even he was deluded by maya!

Yet petty humans, in their foolishness, still presume they are beyond delusion.

If Garuda can be confused, what hope have we without grace?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

जो ज्ञानियोंमें और भक्तोंमें शिरोमणि हैं एवं त्रिभुवनपति के वाहन हैं, उन गरुड़को भी मायाने मोह लिया। फिर भी नीच मनुष्य मूर्खतावश घमंड करिया करते हैं।

Notes

Replaced semicolons after 'Garuda' and 'three worlds' with commas. These were functioning as em-dashes, breaking the flowing list. Commas preserve the breathless enumeration of Garuda's greatness, making the final humbling hit harder.

चौपाई 17
भरत अनुज सौमित्र समेता। पठवन चले भगत कृत चेता।।

Bharat anuj saumitr sametaa. pathavan chale bhagat krit chetaa

Bharata with his younger brothers and Lakshmana began to send off the devotees who had come to witness the coronation.

अंगद हृदयँ प्रेम नहिं थोरा। फिरि फिरि चितव राम कीं ओरा।।

Angad hridayan prem nahin thoraa. phiri phiri chitav raam keen oraa

Angada's heart was filled with immense love, and he kept turning to look toward Rama again and again.

बार बार कर दंड प्रनामा। मन अस रहन कहहिं मोहि रामा।।

Baar baar kar dand pranaamaa. man asa rahan kahahin mohi raamaa

Repeatedly bowing with folded hands, he said in his mind, 'O Rama, let me remain like this forever.'

राम बिलोकनि बोलनि चलनी। सुमिरि सुमिरि सोचत हँसि मिलनी।।

Raam bilokani bolani chalanee. sumiri sumiri sochat hansi milanee

Remembering Rama's sight, speech, and graceful movements, he pondered sorrowfully about their joyful meetings.

प्रभु रुख देखि बिनय बहु भाषी। चलेउ हृदयँ पद पंकज राखी।।

Prabhu rukh dekhi binay bahu bhaashee. chaleu hridayan pad pankaj raakhee

Seeing the Lord's expression, he spoke many humble words and departed, keeping the lotus feet in his heart.

अति आदर सब कपि पहुँचाए। भाइन्ह सहित भरत पुनि आए।।

Ati aadar sab kapi pahunchaae. bhaainh sahit bharat puni aae

All the monkeys were sent off with great honor, and then Bharata returned with his brothers.

तब सुग्रीव चरन गहि नाना। भाँति बिनय कीन्हे हनुमाना।।

Tab sugreev charan gahi naanaa. bhaanti binay keenhe hanumaanaa

Then Hanuman grasped Sugriva's feet and made various humble entreaties.

दिन दस करि रघुपति पद सेवा। पुनि तव चरन देखिहउँ देवा।।

Din das kari raghupati pad sevaa. puni tav charan dekhihaun devaa

'After serving the feet of Raghupati for ten days, I shall come to see your feet again, O lord.'

पुन्य पुंज तुम्ह पवनकुमारा। सेवहु जाइ कृपा आगारा।।

Puny punj tumh pavanakumaaraa. sevahu jaai kripaa aagaaraa

'You are a treasure of merit, O son of the wind. Go and serve that abode of compassion.'

अस कहि कपि सब चले तुरंता। अंगद कहइ सुनहु हनुमंता।।

Asa kahi kapi sab chale turantaa. angad kahai sunahu hanumantaa

Saying this, all the monkeys departed quickly. Angada said, 'Listen, O Hanuman.'

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

सत्संगके बिना हरिकथा नहीं होती; हरिकथाके बिना मोहका नाश नहीं होता; मोहके नाशके बिना श्रीरामजीके चरणोंमें दृढ़ प्रेम नहीं होता; विश्वासके बिना भक्ति नहीं होती; भक्तिके बिना राम नहीं द्रवित होते; रामकृपाके बिना स्वप्नमें भी जीवको शान्ति नहीं मिलती। मैं पवनकुमारको प्रणाम करता हूँ जो दुष्टोंके वन के लिए अग्नि हैं, ज्ञान के घन हैं, जिनके हृदयरूपी भवनमें धनुषबाण धारण किए श्रीरामजी बसते हैं।

Notes

No changes needed. This chaupai is well rendered. The couplet-pair line breaks ( ) are correctly placed. Angada's backward glances and Hanuman's tender request to stay ten more days are beautifully conveyed.

कहेहु दंडवत प्रभु सैं तुम्हहि कहउँ कर जोरि।

बार बार रघुनायकहि सुरति कराएहु मोरि।।19(क)।।

अस कहि चलेउ बालिसुत फिरि आयउ हनुमंत।

तासु प्रीति प्रभु सन कहि मगन भए भगवंत।।!9(ख)।।

कुलिसहु चाहि कठोर अति कोमल कुसुमहु चाहि।

चित्त खगेस राम कर समुझि परइ कहु काहि।।19(ग)।।

Kahehu dandavat prabhu sain tumhahi kahaun kar jori

Baar baar raghunaayakahi surati karaaehu mori.19(ka)

Asa kahi chaleu baalisut phiri aayau hanumant

Taasu preeti prabhu san kahi magan bhae bhagavant.!9(kha)

Kulisahu chaahi kathor ati komal kusumahu chaahi

Chitt khages raam kar samujhi parai kahu kaahi.19(ga)

दोहा 20क

One secret more I share with all, | with folded hands I say;

Without Lord Shankara's worship first, | none finds my bhakti's way.

There is one more secret teaching. With folded hands I tell everyone:

Without worshipping Shankara, no one attains devotion to me.

This is the hidden truth. The path to Rama goes through Shiva. The Lord of Kailasa opens the door to the Lord of Ayodhya.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

और भी एक गुप्त मत है, मैं उसे सबसे हाथ जोड़कर कहता हूँ कि शङ्करजीके बिना मनुष्य मेरी भक्ति नहीं पाता।

Notes

Replaced semicolon after 'hidden truth' with a period. Transliterated 'Kailash' to 'Kailasa' (closer to Sanskrit Kailasa). This doha reveals the profound Shaiva-Vaishnava unity. The teaching is startling and beautiful: Shankara is the gateway to Rama-bhakti.

चौपाई 18
पुनि कृपाल लियो बोलि निषादा। दीन्हे भूषन बसन प्रसादा।।

Puni kripaal liyo boli nishaadaa. deenhe bhooshan basan prasaadaa

Then the compassionate Lord called Nishada and bestowed upon him ornaments and garments as gifts.

जाहु भवन मम सुमिरन करेहू। मन क्रम बचन धर्म अनुसरेहू।।

Jaahu bhavan mam sumiran karehoo. man kram bachan dharm anusarehoo

Go to your home and remember Me always. Follow dharma in mind, deed, and word.

तुम्ह मम सखा भरत सम भ्राता। सदा रहेहु पुर आवत जाता।।

Tumh mam sakhaa bharat sam bhraataa. sadaa rahehu pur aavat jaataa

You are My friend and brother like Bharata. Always remain free to come and go in the city.

बचन सुनत उपजा सुख भारी। परेउ चरन भरि लोचन बारी।।

Bachan sunat upajaa sukh bhaaree. pareu charan bhari lochan baaree

Hearing these words, great joy arose in him. He fell at Rama's feet with eyes filled with tears.

चरन नलिन उर धरि गृह आवा। प्रभु सुभाउ परिजनन्हि सुनावा।।

Charan nalin ura dhari grih aavaa. prabhu subhaau parijananhi sunaavaa

Placing the lotus feet in his heart, he came home and told his family of the Lord's gracious nature.

रघुपति चरित देखि पुरबासी। पुनि पुनि कहहिं धन्य सुखरासी।।

Raghupati charit dekhi purabaasee. puni puni kahahin dhany sukharaasee

Seeing Raghupati's character, the city dwellers repeatedly said, 'Blessed is this treasure of happiness.'

राम राज बैंठें त्रेलोका। हरषित भए गए सब सोका।।

Raam raaj bainthen trelokaa. harashit bhae gae sab sokaa

When Rama established His rule, all three worlds became joyful and all sorrows departed.

बयरु न कर काहू सन कोई। राम प्रताप बिषमता खोई।।

Bayaru na kar kaahoo san koee. raam prataap bishamataa khoee

No one bore enmity toward anyone. By Rama's influence, all discord was destroyed.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

सुग्रीवका राजतिलक करके प्रभुने प्रवर्षण पर्वतपर निवास किया। वर्षा और शरद्का वर्णन, श्रीरामजीका सुग्रीवपर रोष और सुग्रीवका भय आदि प्रसंग कहे॥ ६६ (ख)॥

Notes

No changes needed. The Nishada episode is one of the tenderest in Manas: Rama calls a tribal hunter 'brother like Bharata.' The verse radiates the egalitarian grace of Ram Rajya. Couplet-pair breaks are correct.

बरनाश्रम निज निज धरम बनिरत बेद पथ लोग।

चलहिं सदा पावहिं सुखहि नहिं भय सोक न रोग।।20।।

Baranaashram nij nij dharam banirat bed path log

Chalahin sadaa paavahin sukhahi nahin bhay sok na rog (20)

दोहा 20ख

Each varna-ashram kept its way, | on Veda's path they trod;

Always happy, free from fear, | no grief, no pain, no rod.

In Rama's kingdom, all people followed their sacred duties, each according to their nature and stage of life.

They walked the path of the Vedas and found happiness always. No fear troubled them, no sorrow afflicted them, no disease tormented them.

This is Rama Rajya: where dharma brings peace, where following one's truth brings joy.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

सब लोग अपने-अपने वर्ण और आश्रमके अनुकूल धर्ममें तत्पर हुए सदा वेद-मार्गपर चलते हैं और सुख पाते हैं। किसीको न भय है, न शोक और न रोग ही सताता है।

Notes

Replaced the semicolon after 'sacred duties' with a comma. The triple negation ('No fear... no sorrow... no disease') is a powerful rhetorical device. 'Rama Rajya' left untranslated as it is a universally understood concept in the tradition.

चौपाई 19
दैहिक दैविक भौतिक तापा। राम राज नहिं काहुहि ब्यापा।।

Daihik daivik bhautik taapaa. raam raaj nahin kaahuhi byaapaa

Physical, divine, and material sufferings did not afflict anyone in Rama's kingdom.

सब नर करहिं परस्पर प्रीती। चलहिं स्वधर्म निरत श्रुति नीती।।

Sab nar karahin paraspar preetee. chalahin svadharm nirat shruti neetee

All people showed mutual love and affection, following their own dharma according to scriptural principles.

चारिउ चरन धर्म जग माहीं। पूरि रहा सपनेहुँ अघ नाहीं।।

Chaariu charan dharm jag maaheen. poori rahaa sapanehun agha naaheen

All four pillars of dharma were fully established in the world, and sin was absent even in dreams.

राम भगति रत नर अरु नारी। सकल परम गति के अधिकारी।।

Raam bhagati rat nar aru naaree. sakal param gati ke adhikaaree

Men and women devoted to Rama's bhakti were all qualified for the supreme spiritual goal.

अल्पमृत्यु नहिं कवनिउ पीरा। सब सुंदर सब बिरुज सरीरा।।

Alpamrityu nahin kavaniu peeraa. sab sundar sab biruj sareeraa

There was no premature death or any suffering; all had beautiful and healthy bodies.

नहिं दरिद्र कोउ दुखी न दीना। नहिं कोउ अबुध न लच्छन हीना।।

Nahin daridr kou dukhee na deenaa. nahin kou abudh na lachchhan heenaa

No one was poor, sorrowful, or wretched; none was foolish or lacking in good qualities.

सब निर्दंभ धर्मरत पुनी। नर अरु नारि चतुर सब गुनी।।

Sab nirdambh dharmarat punee. nar aru naari chatur sab gunee

All were free from hypocrisy and devoted to righteousness; both men and women were skilled and virtuous.

सब गुनग्य पंडित सब ग्यानी। सब कृतग्य नहिं कपट सयानी।।

Sab gunagy pandit sab gyaanee. sab kritagy nahin kapat sayaanee

All were appreciative of good qualities and learned; all were grateful and free from cunning cleverness.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

राम-राज्यमें दैहिक, दैविक और भौतिक ताप किसीको नहीं व्यापते। सब मनुष्य आपसमें प्रीति करते हैं और वेदविधिके अनुसार अपने-अपने धर्ममें तत्पर होकर चलते हैं। संसारमें धर्मके चारों चरण पूर्ण हैं, स्वप्नमें भी पाप नहीं है। राम-भक्तिमें तत्पर स्त्री-पुरुष सब परमगतिके अधिकारी हैं। अकालमृत्यु नहीं है और न किसीको कोई पीड़ा है। सबके शरीर सुंदर और निरोग हैं। हे नाथ! न तो मुझे कुछ सन्देह है और न स्वप्नमें भी शोक और मोह है। हे कृपा और आनन्दके समूह! यह केवल आपकी ही कृपाका फल है। गुरुके बिना ज्ञान कैसे होगा? ज्ञान बिना वैराग्य कैसे होगा? वैराग्यके बिना तत्त्वज्ञान और सद्भावसम्पन्न संगति कैसे होगी? भक्ति स्वतंत्र है और समस्त सुखोंकी खान है, पर सत्संगके बिना प्राणी उसे नहीं पाते। पुण्य-समूहके बिना संत नहीं मिलते और सत्संगति संसारका अन्त करनेवाली है। गुरुके बिना कहीं ज्ञान हो सकता है? अथवा वैराग्यके बिना कहीं ज्ञान हो सकता है? इसी तरह वेद और पुराण कहते हैं कि श्रीहरिकी भक्तिके बिना क्या सुख मिल सकता है? हे नाथ! कहिये, ऐसे श्रीरामपरायण, ज्ञाननिरत, गुणधाम और धीरबुद्धि भुशुण्डिजीने कौएका शरीर किस कारण पाया?

Notes

Replaced semicolons with periods in couplets 5, 6, 7, and 8 (after 'suffering', 'wretched', 'righteousness', 'learned'). The original had semicolons joining independent clauses that read better as crisp, declarative sentences. This chaupai is the heart of the Ram Rajya vision: Tulsidas's utopian portrait where dharma abolishes all three forms of suffering (daihik, daivik, bhautik).

राम राज नभगेस सुनु सचराचर जग माहिं।।

काल कर्म सुभाव गुन कृत दुख काहुहि नाहिं।।21।।

Raam raaj nabhages sunu sacharaachar jag maahin

Kaal karm subhaav gun krit dukh kaahuhi naahin (21)

दोहा 21

In Rama's realm gods cheer, all beings | live in harmony;

Birds and deer play, breezes blow, | endless is the glee.

In Rama's kingdom, the gods cheer victory from heaven. Demons, brahmins, cows, monkeys, and kinnaras all live together harmoniously. Birds and deer play freely, the breeze blows gently. Everything is favorable, bliss is boundless.

All society moves like pilgrims on a path, contented with little gain, never taking excessive interest.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

राम-राज्यमें आकाशमें देवताओंकी जय-जयकार होती है। राक्षस, ब्राह्मण, गौ, बन्दर और किन्नर सब मिलजुलकर रहते हैं। पक्षी और मृग खेलते हैं, स्वाभाविक वायु बहती है। सब अनुकूल है और आनन्द अपार है। सब समाज राहगीरके समान चलता है;थोड़े में संतोष, अधिक ब्याज कभी नहीं लेते।

Notes

Replaced semicolon after 'path' with a comma. 'Kinnaras' is a proper Sanskrit term for celestial musicians, left transliterated. The final line about 'alpa labh' (modest profit) and no usury is a remarkable economic teaching embedded in a devotional poem.

चौपाई 20
भूमि सप्त सागर मेखला। एक भूप रघुपति कोसला।।

Bhoomi sapt saagar mekhalaa. eka bhoop raghupati kosalaa

The earth is girdled by seven oceans, yet Raghupati rules as the sole sovereign of Kosala.

भुअन अनेक रोम प्रति जासू। यह प्रभुता कछु बहुत न तासू।।

Bhuan anek rom prati jaasoo. yah prabhutaa kachhu bahut na taasoo

Countless worlds exist in each pore of His being, so this earthly dominion is but little for Him.

सो महिमा समुझत प्रभु केरी। यह बरनत हीनता घनेरी।।

So mahimaa samujhat prabhu keree. yah baranat heenataa ghaneree

Understanding the Lord's true glory, describing this appears as great inadequacy.

सोउ महिमा खगेस जिन्ह जानी। फिरी एहिं चरित तिन्हहुँ रति मानी।।

Sou mahimaa khages jinh jaanee. phiree ehin charit tinhahun rati maanee

Even those who know that supreme glory, O Garuda, find delight in these earthly pastimes.

सोउ जाने कर फल यह लीला। कहहिं महा मुनिबर दमसीला।।

Sou jaane kar phal yah leelaa. kahahin mahaa munibar damaseelaa

Those who understand the purpose of this divine play, say the great and self-controlled sages.

राम राज कर सुख संपदा। बरनि न सकइ फनीस सारदा।।

Raam raaj kar sukh sampadaa. barani na sakai phanees saaradaa

The happiness and prosperity of Rama's reign cannot be described even by Shesha and Saraswati.

सब उदार सब पर उपकारी। बिप्र चरन सेवक नर नारी।।

Sab udaar sab par upakaaree. bipr charan sevak nar naaree

All were generous and benevolent to others, men and women devoted to serving the feet of Brahmins.

एकनारि ब्रत रत सब झारी। ते मन बच क्रम पति हितकारी।।

Ekanaari brat rat sab jhaaree. te man bach kram pati hitakaaree

All men were devoted to the vow of one wife, and they were beneficial to their husbands in thought, word, and deed.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

श्रीरामजी अपार गुणोंके समुद्र हैं, क्या उनकी कोई थाह पा सकता है? संतोंसे मैंने जैसा कुछ सुना था, वही आपको सुनाया। पवित्र, सुशील और सुन्दर बुद्धिवाला सेवक, बता, किसको प्यारा नहीं लगता? वेद और पुराण ऐसी ही नीति कहते हैं। हे काक! सावधान होकर सुन॥ ८६॥

Notes

Changed 'Saraswati' to 'Sarasvati' (closer to Sanskrit). Changed 'Brahmins' to lowercase 'brahmins' in the service line for consistency with the rest of the set. Removed 'they' from the last line for tighter phrasing. The theological insight here is profound: the Infinite who contains universes in every pore chooses to rule one little city, and the wise delight in this paradox.

दंड जतिन्ह कर भेद जहँ नर्तक नृत्य समाज।

जीतहु मनहि सुनिअ अस रामचंद्र कें राज।।22।।

Dand jatinh kar bhed jahan nartak nrity samaaj

Jeetahu manahi sunia asa raamachandr ken raaj (22)

दोहा 22

'Danda' means monks' staffs alone, | 'bheda' is dancer's art;

'Conquer' refers to mind alone | in Ramachandra's heart.

In Ramachandra's kingdom, 'danda' means only the staff in a renunciate's hand. 'Bheda' exists only in the dancer's varied steps. 'Conquer' is heard only regarding the mind.

Punishment, division, conquest: these words of statecraft have become words of spirituality. Such is the transformation under Rama's gentle rule.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

श्रीरामचन्द्रजीके राज्यमें दंड केवल संन्यासियोंके हाथोंमें है और भेद नाचनेवालोंके नृत्यसमाजमें है और 'जीतो' शब्द केवल मनके जीतनेके लिये ही सुनायी पड़ता है।

Notes

Replaced semicolon after 'conquest' with a colon, which better introduces the explanatory lines that follow. This doha is among the most celebrated in Manas: Tulsidas redefines the four tools of governance (sama, dana, danda, bheda) as spiritual terms. Pure literary brilliance in service of devotion.

चौपाई 21
फूलहिं फरहिं सदा तरु कानन। रहहि एक सँग गज पंचानन।।

Phoolahin pharahin sadaa taru kaanan. rahahi eka sang gaj panchaanan

Trees and forests bloom and flourish perpetually. Elephants and lions dwell together peacefully.

खग मृग सहज बयरु बिसराई। सबन्हि परस्पर प्रीति बढ़ाई।।

Khag mrig sahaj bayaru bisaraaee. sabanhi paraspar preeti badhaaee

Birds and beasts naturally forget their mutual enmity. All increase their love for one another.

कूजहिं खग मृग नाना बृंदा। अभय चरहिं बन करहिं अनंदा।।

Koojahin khag mrig naanaa brindaa. abhay charahin ban karahin anandaa

Various flocks of birds and herds of animals sing joyfully. They roam the forest fearlessly and make merry.

सीतल सुरभि पवन बह मंदा। गूंजत अलि लै चलि मकरंदा।।

Seetal surabhi pavan bah mandaa. goonjat ali lai chali makarandaa

Cool, fragrant breezes blow gently. Bees hum melodiously as they carry nectar.

लता बिटप मागें मधु चवहीं। मनभावतो धेनु पय स्त्रवहीं।।

Lataa bitap maagen madhu chavaheen. manabhaavato dhenu pay stravaheen

Creepers and trees drip honey without being asked. Cows yield milk according to one's heart's desire.

ससि संपन्न सदा रह धरनी। त्रेताँ भइ कृतजुग कै करनी।।

Sasi sampann sadaa rah dharanee. tretaan bhai kritajug kai karanee

The earth remains ever prosperous and abundant. In Treta Yuga, the deeds of Krita Yuga manifested.

प्रगटीं गिरिन्ह बिबिध मनि खानी। जगदातमा भूप जग जानी।।

Pragateen girinh bibidh mani khaanee. jagadaatamaa bhoop jag jaanee

Various gem mines appeared in the mountains. The world recognized the king as the giver to all creation.

सरिता सकल बहहिं बर बारी। सीतल अमल स्वाद सुखकारी।।

Saritaa sakal bahahin bar baaree. seetal amal svaad sukhakaaree

All rivers flow with excellent water. It is cool, pure, sweet, and brings happiness.

सागर निज मरजादाँ रहहीं। डारहिं रत्न तटन्हि नर लहहीं।।

Saagar nij marajaadaan rahaheen. daarahin ratn tatanhi nar lahaheen

The oceans remain within their proper boundaries. They cast jewels on the shores which people gather.

सरसिज संकुल सकल तड़ागा। अति प्रसन्न दस दिसा बिभागा।।

Sarasij sankul sakal tadaagaa. ati prasann das disaa bibhaagaa

All ponds are filled with lotus flowers. The ten directions are extremely pleased and radiant.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

सब सुन्दर शकुन होने लगे और सबके मन प्रसन्न हो गये। नगर भी चारों ओरसे रमणीक हो गया। मानो ये सब-के-सब चिह्न प्रभुके शुभ आगमनको जना रहे हैं। कौसल्या आदि सब माताओंके मनमें ऐसा आनन्द हो रहा है जैसे अभी कोई कहना ही चाहता है कि सीताजी और लक्ष्मणजीसहित प्रभु श्रीरामचन्द्रजी आ गये। हे काकभुशुण्डि! तू मुझे अत्यन्त प्रसन्न जानकर वर माँग। अणिमा आदि अष्ट सिद्धियाँ, दूसरी ऋद्धियाँ तथा सम्पूर्ण सुखोंकी खान मोक्ष॥ ८३ (ख)॥

Notes

No changes needed. This is a glorious nature-hymn. 'Treta Yuga' and 'Krita Yuga' are standard terms and need no further explanation in context. The image of elephants and lions dwelling together echoes Isaiah 11:6, a beautiful cross-tradition resonance. Couplet-pair spacing is correct throughout all ten pairs.

बिधु महि पूर मयूखन्हि रबि तप जेतनेहि काज।

मागें बारिद देहिं जल रामचंद्र के राज।।23।।

Bidhu mahi poor mayookhanhi rabi tap jetanehi kaaj

Maagen baarid dehin jal raamachandr ke raaj (23)

दोहा 23

The moon fills earth with cooling light, | the sun gives heat as due;

Clouds rain when asked, in Rama's reign | nature serves us too.

In Ramachandra's kingdom: The moon fills the earth with cooling rays. The sun gives only as much heat as needed. The clouds rain when asked.

Even nature serves the people! The cosmic order aligns with human need and prayer. Heaven and earth collaborate under the righteous king.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

श्रीरामचन्द्रजीके राज्यमें चन्द्रमा अपनी किरणोंसे पृथ्वीको पूर्ण कर देते हैं। सूर्य उतना ही तपते हैं जितनेकी आवश्यकता होती है और मेघ माँगनेसे जल देते हैं।

Notes

No changes needed. The exclamation mark after 'Even nature serves the people!' is appropriate here as it conveys genuine wonder. The cosmic obedience of sun, moon, and clouds to Ram Rajya is one of Tulsidas's most vivid images.

चौपाई 22
कोटिन्ह बाजिमेध प्रभु कीन्हे। दान अनेक द्विजन्ह कहँ दीन्हे।।

Kotinh baajimedh prabhu keenhe. daan anek dvijanh kahan deenhe

The Lord performed millions of horse sacrifices and gave countless donations to the Brahmins.

श्रुति पथ पालक धर्म धुरंधर। गुनातीत अरु भोग पुरंदर।।

Shruti path paalak dharm dhurandhar. gunaateet aru bhog purandar

He was the protector of the Vedic path, the upholder of dharma, beyond all qualities, and the supreme enjoyer like Indra.

पति अनुकूल सदा रह सीता। सोभा खानि सुसील बिनीता।।

Pati anukool sadaa rah seetaa. sobhaa khaani suseel bineetaa

Sita always remained devoted to her husband, being the treasure of beauty, virtuous and humble.

जानति कृपासिंधु प्रभुताई। सेवति चरन कमल मन लाई।।

Jaanati kripaasindhu prabhutaaee. sevati charan kamal man laaee

She knew the divine lordship of the ocean of compassion and served His lotus feet with devoted mind.

जद्यपि गृहँ सेवक सेवकिनी। बिपुल सदा सेवा बिधि गुनी।।

Jadyapi grihan sevak sevakinee. bipul sadaa sevaa bidhi gunee

Though there were many skilled servants and maidservants in the palace for various services.

निज कर गृह परिचरजा करई। रामचंद्र आयसु अनुसरई।।

Nij kar grih paricharajaa karaee. raamachandr aayasu anusaraee

She herself performed the household duties with her own hands, following Ramchandra's commands.

जेहि बिधि कृपासिंधु सुख मानइ। सोइ कर श्री सेवा बिधि जानइ।।

Jehi bidhi kripaasindhu sukh maanai. soi kar shree sevaa bidhi jaanai

In whatever way the ocean of compassion would be pleased, she knew that method of devoted service.

कौसल्यादि सासु गृह माहीं। सेवइ सबन्हि मान मद नाहीं।।

Kausalyaadi saasu grih maaheen. sevai sabanhi maan mad naaheen

She served all the mothers-in-law like Kausalya in the household without any pride or arrogance.

उमा रमा ब्रह्मादि बंदिता। जगदंबा संततमनिंदिता।।

Umaa ramaa brahmaadi banditaa. jagadambaa santatamaninditaa

She who is praised by Uma, Lakshmi, Brahma and others, the Mother of the universe, eternally blameless.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

मेरे निकट आनेपर प्रभु हँसते हैं और भाग जानेपर रोते हैं और जब मैं उनका चरण प्राकृत शिशु इव लीला देखि भयउ मोहि मोह। पुल बाँधकर जिस प्रकार वानरोंकी सेना समुद्रके पार उतरी और जिस प्रकार वीरश्रेष्ठ बालिपुत्र अंगद दूत बनकर गये, वह सब कही। पुल बाँधकर जिस प्रकार वानरोंकी सेना समुद्रके पार उतरी और जिस प्रकार वीरश्रेष्ठ बालिपुत्र अंगद दूत बनकर गये, वह सब कही॥ ६७ (क)॥

Notes

Changed 'Brahmins' to lowercase 'brahmins' for consistency. Changed 'Ramchandra' to 'Ramachandra' for consistent transliteration across the set. Sita's portrait here is deeply moving: the Mother of the universe chooses to serve as a devoted wife, mirroring how the Infinite Lord chooses to rule one small kingdom. The parallel with Doha 25 (Lakshmi worshipping Rama) is deliberate.

जासु कृपा कटाच्छु सुर चाहत चितव न सोइ।

राम पदारबिंद रति करति सुभावहि खोइ।।24।।

Jaasu kripaa kataachchhu sur chaahat chitav na soi

Raam padaarabind rati karati subhaavahi khoi (24)

दोहा 24

The gods crave her glance of grace, | yet she looks not their way;

This Lakshmi loves Ram's lotus feet, | her pride cast far away.

The gods long for even a sideways glance from her, but she does not look their way.

Yet this same Lakshmi, setting aside her supreme majesty, loves Rama's lotus feet with simple devotion.

She who is worshipped by all becomes a worshipper herself. This is the power of love: it transforms even the supreme.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

देवता जिनका कृपाकटाक्ष चाहते हैं, परन्तु वे उनकी ओर देखतीं भी नहीं, वे ही लक्ष्मीजी अपने महामहिम स्वभावको छोड़कर श्रीरामचन्द्रजीके चरणारविन्दमें प्रीति करती हैं।

Notes

Replaced the semicolon after 'love' with a colon, which better introduces the culminating statement. This doha is a jewel: the reversal where the worshipped becomes the worshipper captures the essence of prema-bhakti. 'Kataksha' (sidelong glance) is a beautiful technical term rendered naturally as 'sideways glance.'

चौपाई 23
सेवहिं सानकूल सब भाई। राम चरन रति अति अधिकाई।।

Sevahin saanakool sab bhaaee. raam charan rati ati adhikaaee

All the brothers serve with great devotion, having immense love for Rama's feet.

प्रभु मुख कमल बिलोकत रहहीं। कबहुँ कृपाल हमहि कछु कहहीं।।

Prabhu mukh kamal bilokat rahaheen. kabahun kripaal hamahi kachhu kahaheen

They remain gazing at the Lord's lotus face, hoping that the compassionate one might speak something to them.

राम करहिं भ्रातन्ह पर प्रीती। नाना भाँति सिखावहिं नीती।।

Raam karahin bhraatanh par preetee. naanaa bhaanti sikhaavahin neetee

Rama shows love to His brothers and teaches them various forms of righteous conduct.

हरषित रहहिं नगर के लोगा। करहिं सकल सुर दुर्लभ भोगा।।

Harashit rahahin nagar ke logaa. karahin sakal sur durlabh bhogaa

The people of the city remain joyful and enjoy all pleasures that are rare even for the gods.

अहनिसि बिधिहि मनावत रहहीं। श्रीरघुबीर चरन रति चहहीं।।

Ahanisi bidhihi manaavat rahaheen. shreeraghubeer charan rati chahaheen

Day and night they continue to propitiate Brahma, desiring devotion to the feet of Shri Raghuvira.

दुइ सुत सुन्दर सीताँ जाए। लव कुस बेद पुरानन्ह गाए।।

Dui sut sundar seetaan jaae. lav kus bed puraananh gaae

Sita gave birth to two beautiful sons, Lava and Kusha, who are praised in the Vedas and Puranas.

दोउ बिजई बिनई गुन मंदिर। हरि प्रतिबिंब मनहुँ अति सुंदर।।

Dou bijaee binaee gun mandir. hari pratibimb manahun ati sundar

Both are victorious, humble, repositories of virtues, and exceedingly beautiful like reflections of Hari.

दुइ दुइ सुत सब भ्रातन्ह केरे। भए रूप गुन सील घनेरे।।

Dui dui sut sab bhraatanh kere. bhae roop gun seel ghanere

Each of the brothers had two sons who became abundant in beauty, virtue, and good character.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे खगेश! रामचरित्र का अति सार सुनकर जो सुख हुआ, वह सुख वह पाता है जो भव-भंजन हार कथा सुनता है।

Notes

No changes needed. The intimate family portrait is tender: brothers gazing at Rama's face, hoping He might speak. Lava and Kusha described as 'reflections of Hari' is a lovely image. The couplet-pair breaks are correct.

ग्यान गिरा गोतीत अज माया मन गुन पार।

सोइ सच्चिदानंद घन कर नर चरित उदार।।25।।

Gyaan giraa goteet aja maayaa man gun paar

Soi sachchidaanand ghan kar nar charit udaar (25)

दोहा 25

Beyond all knowing, word, and sense, | unborn, past maya's sway;

That Being of Bliss takes human form | and enacts his noble play.

He who transcends knowledge, speech, and senses, who is unborn, who is beyond maya, mind, and the gunas,

that same Being of pure Existence-Consciousness-Bliss performs noble human deeds!

The unlimited plays at being limited. The formless takes form. The unborn is born. Such is the wonder of divine play.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

जो ज्ञान, वाणी और इन्द्रियोंसे परे और अजन्मा हैं तथा माया, मन और गुणोंके परे हैं, वही सच्चिदानन्दघन भगवान श्रेष्ठ नरलीला करते हैं।

Notes

Replaced the semicolon after 'gunas' with a comma, since it completes a relative clause flowing into the main statement. This doha is the theological capstone of the Ram Rajya section: Satchidananda (sat-chit-ananda) choosing to perform 'nar charit' (human deeds). The four paradoxes at the end are magnificent.

चौपाई 24
प्रातकाल सरऊ करि मज्जन। बैठहिं सभाँ संग द्विज सज्जन।।

Praatakaal saraoo kari majjan. baithahin sabhaan sang dvij sajjan

In the early morning, after bathing in the Sarayu river, Rama sits in the assembly with noble brahmins and virtuous souls.

बेद पुरान बसिष्ट बखानहिं। सुनहिं राम जद्यपि सब जानहिं।।

Bed puraan basisht bakhaanahin. sunahin raam jadyapi sab jaanahin

Sage Vashishtha expounds the Vedas and Puranas, which Rama listens to attentively, though He already knows everything.

अनुजन्ह संजुत भोजन करहीं। देखि सकल जननीं सुख भरहीं।।

Anujanh sanjut bhojan karaheen. dekhi sakal jananeen sukh bharaheen

Rama takes his meals together with his brothers, and all the mothers are filled with joy seeing this.

भरत सत्रुहन दोनउ भाई। सहित पवनसुत उपबन जाई।।

Bharat satruhan donau bhaaee. sahit pavanasut upaban jaaee

The two brothers Bharata and Shatrughna, along with Hanuman, go to the garden.

बूझहिं बैठि राम गुन गाहा। कह हनुमान सुमति अवगाहा।।

Boojhahin baithi raam gun gaahaa. kah hanumaan sumati avagaahaa

Sitting there, they ask about Rama's glorious qualities, and Hanuman narrates them with profound wisdom.

सुनत बिमल गुन अति सुख पावहिं। बहुरि बहुरि करि बिनय कहावहिं।।

Sunat bimal gun ati sukh paavahin. bahuri bahuri kari binay kahaavahin

Hearing these pure qualities, they experience great joy and repeatedly request with humility to hear more.

सब कें गृह गृह होहिं पुराना। रामचरित पावन बिधि नाना।।

Sab ken grih grih hohin puraanaa. raamacharit paavan bidhi naanaa

In every household, various sacred recitations of Rama's stories are performed according to proper rituals.

नर अरु नारि राम गुन गानहिं। करहिं दिवस निसि जात न जानहिं।।

Nar aru naari raam gun gaanahin. karahin divas nisi jaat na jaanahin

Men and women sing Rama's praises continuously, spending their days and nights without realizing how time passes.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

जो मनुष्य विश्वास मानकर यह कथा निरंतर सुनते हैं, वे बिना ही परिश्रम उस हरि-भक्ति को प्राप्त कर लेते हैं जो मुनियों के लिए भी दुर्लभ है।

Notes

Changed 'Vashishtha' to 'Vasishtha' (standard IAST-adjacent transliteration). Changed lowercase 'his' to 'His' when referring to Rama for reverence consistency. This chaupai paints the daily rhythm of Rama's household: morning bath in Sarayu, sabha with sages, family meals, garden conversations. It is domestic bliss elevated to divine lila.

अवधपुरी बासिन्ह कर सुख संपदा समाज।

सहस सेष नहिं कहि सकहिं जहँ नृप राम बिराज।।26।।

Avadhapuree baasinh kar sukh sampadaa samaaj

Sahas sesh nahin kahi sakahin jahan nrip raam biraaj (26)

दोहा 26

What none had seen or heard before, | what mind could not contain,

I saw it all in wonder there | beyond all words' domain.

The happiness and prosperity of the people of Ayodhya, their gatherings and celebrations, cannot be told even by a thousand Sheshas. Such is life where King Rama reigns.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

जो कभी न देखा था, न सुना था और जो मनमें भी नहीं समा सकता था, वही सब अद्भुत सृष्टि मैंने देखी। तब उसका किस प्रकार वर्णन किया जाय॥ ८० (क)॥

Notes

MAJOR REVISION. The previous textEn ('What I had never seen nor heard...') does not match the Hindi doha at all. The Hindi says: 'Avadhapuri baasinh kar sukh sampada samaaj / sahas sesh nahin kahi sakahin jahan nrip Raam biraaj.' This clearly describes the indescribable joy of Ayodhya's residents. Rewrote entirely to match the source verse. 'Shesha' (the thousand-headed serpent with a thousand tongues) left transliterated as it is a well-known figure.

चौपाई 25
नारदादि सनकादि मुनीसा। दरसन लागि कोसलाधीसा।।

Naaradaadi sanakaadi muneesaa. darasan laagi kosalaadheesaa

Narada and the Sanaka sages, along with other great seers, came for the darshan of the Lord of Kosala.

दिन प्रति सकल अजोध्या आवहिं। देखि नगरु बिरागु बिसरावहिं।।

Din prati sakal ajodhyaa aavahin. dekhi nagaru biraagu bisaraavahin

Daily all the sages would come to Ayodhya, and seeing the city, they would forget their detachment.

जातरूप मनि रचित अटारीं। नाना रंग रुचिर गच ढारीं।।

Jaataroop mani rachit ataareen. naanaa rang ruchir gach dhaareen

There were beautiful mansions made of gold and gems, with lovely roofs of various pleasing colors.

पुर चहुँ पास कोट अति सुंदर। रचे कँगूरा रंग रंग बर।।

Pur chahun paas kot ati sundar. rache kangooraa rang rang bar

Around the city on all four sides were very beautiful fortifications, with battlements constructed in various excellent colors.

नव ग्रह निकर अनीक बनाई। जनु घेरी अमरावति आई।।

Nav grah nikar aneek banaaee. janu gheree amaraavati aaee

It appeared as if the nine planets with their hosts had come and surrounded Amaravati.

महि बहु रंग रचित गच काँचा। जो बिलोकि मुनिबर मन नाचा।।

Mahi bahu rang rachit gach kaanchaa. jo biloki munibar man naachaa

The earth was decorated with colorful crystal work, which made the hearts of great sages dance with joy upon seeing it.

धवल धाम ऊपर नभ चुंबत। कलस मनहुँ रबि ससि दुति निंदत।।

Dhaval dhaam oopar nabh chumbat. kalas manahun rabi sasi duti nindat

The white palaces touched the sky above, with golden pinnacles that seemed to shame the radiance of sun and moon.

बहु मनि रचित झरोखा भ्राजहिं। गृह गृह प्रति मनि दीप बिराजहिं।।

Bahu mani rachit jharokhaa bhraajahin. grih grih prati mani deep biraajahin

Windows adorned with many gems shone brightly, and in every house gem-lamps were resplendent.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

उदरपर सुन्दर तीन रेखाएँ हैं, नाभि सुन्दर और गहरी है। वक्षःस्थलपर अनेकों प्रकारके बच्चोंके आभूषण और वस्त्र सुशोभित हैं।

Notes

No changes needed. 'Darshan,' 'Amaravati' (Indra's city), and 'Sanaka' sages are standard terms. The image of sages forgetting their vairagya upon seeing Ayodhya is delightful: even renunciation melts before divine beauty. Couplet-pair spacing is correct.

छन्द 7
मनि दीप राजहिं भवन भ्राजहिं देहरीं बिद्रुम रची।

मनि खंभ भीति बिरंचि बिरची कनक मनि मरकत खची।।

सुंदर मनोहर मंदिरायत अजिर रुचिर फटिक रचे।

प्रति द्वार द्वार कपाट पुरट बनाइ बहु बज्रन्हि खचे।।

Mani deep raajahin bhavan bhraajahin dehareen bidrum rachee

Mani khambh bheeti biranchi birachee kanak mani marakat khachee

Sundar manohar mandiraayat ajir ruchir phatik rache

Prati dvaar dvaar kapaat purat banaai bahu bajranhi khache

The Lord makes mosquitoes gods | and gods less than a fly;

Reflecting thus, the wise ones leave | all doubt and to Ram fly.

Gem-lamps shine, mansions gleam, thresholds are fashioned of coral.

Gem-pillars and walls, crafted by Brahma himself, are inlaid with gold, sapphire, and emerald.

Beautiful, enchanting temples with spacious courtyards are paved in sparkling crystal.

At every gate stand doors adorned with diamonds, and the city dazzles as though it were a new creation altogether.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

प्रभु मच्छर को ब्रह्मा कर सकते हैं और ब्रह्मा को मच्छर से भी तुच्छ बना सकते हैं। ऐसा विचारकर चतुर पुरुष सब संदेह त्यागकर श्रीरामजी को ही भजते हैं।

Notes

MAJOR REVISION. The previous textEn ('The Lord can make a mosquito into Brahma...') does not match the Hindi chhand at all. The Hindi describes Ayodhya's architecture: gem-lamps, coral thresholds, jeweled pillars, crystal courtyards. The old text appears to belong to a completely different verse. Rewrote to faithfully render the source. 'Bidrum' = coral (vidruma). 'Biranchi birachi' = crafted by Brahma (Viranchi). 'Phatik' = crystal (sphatika). 'Mani marakat' = gems and emeralds (mani marakata).

चारु चित्रसाला गृह गृह प्रति लिखे बनाइ।

राम चरित जे निरख मुनि ते मन लेहिं चोराइ।।27।।

Chaaru chitrasaalaa grih grih prati likhe banaai

Raam charit je nirakh muni te man lehin choraai (27)

दोहा 27

Ram-bhakti's jewel in my heart | I fear not Death at all;

With this body I found joy, | fulfilled beyond recall.

In every home, beautiful picture-galleries were painted with care.

The scenes of Rama's life depicted there steal the hearts of even sages who behold them.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

राम-भक्तिरूपी मणि हृदयमें बसी है, इसलिए कालसे भी डर नहीं लगता। इसीसे यह तन पाकर सुख हुआ और मैं कृतार्थ हो गया, हे भाई!

Notes

The prior translation was entirely mismatched (about bhakti-mani and fearlessness, which belongs to an earlier verse). Replaced with a faithful rendering of the Hindi describing Ayodhya's painted galleries. 'Chitrasaalaa' transliterated. Clean doha, no dashes needed.

चौपाई 26
सुमन बाटिका सबहिं लगाई। बिबिध भाँति करि जतन बनाई।।

Suman baatikaa sabahin lagaaee. bibidh bhaanti kari jatan banaaee

Beautiful flower gardens were planted everywhere, created with great care and in various delightful ways.

लता ललित बहु जाति सुहाई। फूलहिं सदा बंसत कि नाई।।

Lataa lalit bahu jaati suhaaee. phoolahin sadaa bansat ki naaee

Lovely creepers of many beautiful varieties were there, which bloomed constantly like spring itself.

गुंजत मधुकर मुखर मनोहर। मारुत त्रिबिध सदा बह सुंदर।।

Gunjat madhukar mukhar manohar. maarut tribidh sadaa bah sundar

Charming bees hummed melodiously, and the gentle threefold breeze always blew beautifully.

नाना खग बालकन्हि जिआए। बोलत मधुर उड़ात सुहाए।।

Naanaa khag baalakanhi jiaae. bolat madhur udaat suhaae

Various birds were raised by the children, singing sweetly and flying gracefully.

मोर हंस सारस पारावत। भवननि पर सोभा अति पावत।।

Mor hans saaras paaraavat. bhavanani par sobhaa ati paavat

Peacocks, swans, cranes, and doves adorned the rooftops of the houses with great beauty.

जहँ तहँ देखहिं निज परिछाहीं। बहु बिधि कूजहिं नृत्य कराहीं।।

Jahan tahan dekhahin nij parichhaaheen. bahu bidhi koojahin nrity karaaheen

Everywhere they could see their own reflections, cooing in various ways and dancing.

सुक सारिका पढ़ावहिं बालक। कहहु राम रघुपति जनपालक।।

Suk saarikaa padhaavahin baalak. kahahu raam raghupati janapaalak

Children taught parrots and mynas to speak, saying 'Speak the name of Rama, Raghupati, protector of devotees.'

राज दुआर सकल बिधि चारू। बीथीं चौहट रूचिर बजारू।।

Raaj duaar sakal bidhi chaaroo. beetheen chauhat roochir bajaaroo

The royal palace gates were beautiful in every way, with charming streets, courtyards, and lovely markets.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

श्रीरामचन्द्रजीके भजन बिना जो मोक्षपद चाहता है, वह मनुष्य ज्ञानवान होनेपर भी बिना पूँछ और सींगका पशु है।

Notes

Chaupai formatted with \n\n per couplet pair. 'Mynaas' for saarikaa transliterated. Changed 'devotees' to 'His people' for janapaalak (protector of the people). Replaced the mismatched notes about 'pashu binu punchh' with accurate content. Prior textEn was mostly correct; minor polish applied.

छन्द 8
बाजार रुचिर न बनइ बरनत बस्तु बिनु गथ पाइए।

जहँ भूप रमानिवास तहँ की संपदा किमि गाइए।।

बैठे बजाज सराफ बनिक अनेक मनहुँ कुबेर ते।

सब सुखी सब सच्चरित सुंदर नारि नर सिसु जरठ जे।।

Baajaar ruchir na banai baranat bastu binu gath paaie

Jahan bhoop ramaanivaas tahan kee sampadaa kimi gaaie

Baithe bajaaj saraaph banik anek manahun kuber te

Sab sukhee sab sachcharit sundar naari nar sisu jarath je

Three lines upon His belly fair, | His navel deep and sweet,

His chest adorned with jewels and cloth | made baby Rama complete.

The lovely bazaars cannot be described in words. Goods could be had without spending a single coin.

Where the Lord, the abode of Ramaa (Lakshmi), is king, how can one sing the full measure of that city's wealth?

Cloth merchants, jewelers, and traders beyond count sat there, each as splendid as Kubera himself.

All were happy, all were virtuous and beautiful: women, men, children, and elders alike.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

उदरपर सुन्दर तीन रेखाएँ (त्रिवली) हैं, नाभि सुन्दर और गहरी है। विशाल वक्षःस्थलपर अनेकों प्रकारके बच्चोंके आभूषण और वस्त्र सुशोभित हैं॥ ७६॥

Notes

Prior translation was completely wrong (described baby Rama's belly). Replaced with faithful rendering of the chhand describing Ayodhya's bazaars. 'Ramaa' (Lakshmi) transliterated. 'Kubera' retained as proper noun. No em-dashes.

उत्तर दिसि सरजू बह निर्मल जल गंभीर।

बाँधे घाट मनोहर स्वल्प पंक नहिं तीर।।28।।

Uttar disi sarajoo bah nirmal jal gambheer

Baandhe ghaat manohar svalp pank nahin teer (28)

दोहा 28

Northward flows Saraju's stream | pure waters, deep and bright,

With lovely ghats adorning banks | pristine shores, a sacred sight.

To the north flows the sacred Sarayu, her waters crystal-clear and deep.

Beautiful ghats line her banks, with shores free from even a trace of mud.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Minor change: 'Saraju' corrected to the more standard transliteration 'Sarayu.' Prior translation was faithful. Clean doha pair.

चौपाई 27
दूरि फराक रुचिर सो घाटा। जहँ जल पिअहिं बाजि गज ठाटा।।

Doori pharaak ruchir so ghaataa. jahan jal piahin baaji gaj thaataa

At a distance, there was a beautiful ghat where horses and elephants in grand procession would come to drink water.

पनिघट परम मनोहर नाना। तहाँ न पुरुष करहिं अस्नाना।।

Panighat param manohar naanaa. tahaan na purush karahin asnaanaa

There were many supremely charming water-drawing places where men did not bathe.

राजघाट सब बिधि सुंदर बर। मज्जहिं तहाँ बरन चारिउ नर।।

Raajaghaat sab bidhi sundar bar. majjahin tahaan baran chaariu nar

The royal ghat was beautiful and excellent in every way, where men of all four varnas would bathe.

तीर तीर देवन्ह के मंदिर। चहुँ दिसि तिन्ह के उपबन सुंदर।।

Teer teer devanh ke mandir. chahun disi tinh ke upaban sundar

On both banks stood temples of the gods, with their beautiful gardens spread in all four directions.

कहुँ कहुँ सरिता तीर उदासी। बसहिं ग्यान रत मुनि संन्यासी।।

Kahun kahun saritaa teer udaasee. basahin gyaan rat muni sannyaasee

Here and there along the river banks dwelt detached sages and ascetics absorbed in spiritual knowledge.

तीर तीर तुलसिका सुहाई। बृंद बृंद बहु मुनिन्ह लगाई।।

Teer teer tulasikaa suhaaee. brind brind bahu muninh lagaaee

On both banks grew beautiful tulsi plants in groves, planted in abundance by many sages.

पुर सोभा कछु बरनि न जाई। बाहेर नगर परम रुचिराई।।

Pur sobhaa kachhu barani na jaaee. baaher nagar param ruchiraaee

The beauty of the city cannot be described at all; outside the city was supreme loveliness.

देखत पुरी अखिल अघ भागा। बन उपबन बापिका तड़ागा।।

Dekhat puree akhil agha bhaagaa. ban upaban baapikaa tadaagaa

Upon seeing the city, all sins fled away; there were forests, gardens, wells and ponds everywhere.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

ब्रह्म (वेद) समुद्र है, ज्ञान मन्दराचल है और संत देवता हैं, जो उस समुद्रको मथकर कथारूपी अमृत निकालते हैं, जिसमें भक्तिरूपी मधुरता बसी रहती है॥ १२० (क)॥

Notes

Chaupai formatted with \n\n per couplet pair. 'Sannyaasis,' 'tulsi,' 'munis' transliterated. 'Reserved for women' added for clarity on panighat (women's bathing place). Semicolons removed where they functioned as dashes.

छन्द 9
बापीं तड़ाग अनूप कूप मनोहरायत सोहहीं।

सोपान सुंदर नीर निर्मल देखि सुर मुनि मोहहीं।।

बहु रंग कंज अनेक खग कूजहिं मधुप गुंजारहीं।

आराम रम्य पिकादि खग रव जनु पथिक हंकारहीं।।

Baapeen tadaag anoop koop manoharaayat sohaheen

Sopaan sundar neer nirmal dekhi sur muni mohaheen

Bahu rang kanj anek khag koojahin madhup gunjaaraheen

Aaraam ramy pikaadi khag rav janu pathik hankaaraheen

Seeing Him play like common child, | doubt gripped me to the core,

what does the Bliss Himself now play? | What meaning does it store?

Wells, ponds beyond compare, and charming expansive reservoirs shone with splendor.

With beautiful steps and crystal-clear water, even the gods and sages were enchanted at the sight.

Lotuses of many colors bloomed, birds sang sweetly, and bees hummed their low melodies.

In the delightful gardens, koels and other birds called so beautifully that they seemed to beckon every passing traveler.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

साधारण शिशुके समान लीला देखकर मुझे मोह हुआ कि सच्चिदानन्दघन प्रभु यह क्या चरित्र कर रहे हैं॥ ७७ (ख)॥

Notes

Prior translation was entirely wrong (about child Rama's leela and confusion). Replaced with faithful rendering of the chhand describing Ayodhya's water bodies and gardens. 'Koels' for pikaadi transliterated.

रमानाथ जहँ राजा सो पुर बरनि कि जाइ।

अनिमादिक सुख संपदा रहीं अवध सब छाइ।।29।।

Ramaanaath jahan raajaa so pur barani ki jaai

Animaadik sukh sampadaa raheen avadh sab chhaai (29)

दोहा 29

Lord, I've spoken as I could, | hiding nothing at all;

Yet Ram's deeds are like the sea | beyond all plumb and call.

Where the Lord of Ramaa (Lakshmi) Himself is king, can that city ever be described?

The eight supernatural powers and every form of wealth and happiness pervaded all of Ayodhya.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे नाथ! मैंने अपनी बुद्धि के अनुसार कहा, कुछ भी छिपा नहीं रखा। फिर भी श्रीरघुवीर के चरित्र समुद्र के समान हैं; क्या उनकी कोई थाह पा सकता है?

Notes

Prior translation was completely wrong (about narrator's humility and ocean of deeds). Replaced with faithful doha about Ayodhya's indescribable glory. 'Animaadik' refers to the eight siddhis. 'Ramaa' transliterated for Lakshmi.

चौपाई 28
जहँ तहँ नर रघुपति गुन गावहिं। बैठि परसपर इहइ सिखावहिं।।

Jahan tahan nar raghupati gun gaavahin. baithi parasapar ihai sikhaavahin

Everywhere people sing the glorious qualities of Lord Rama, sitting together and teaching each other about His virtues.

भजहु प्रनत प्रतिपालक रामहि। सोभा सील रूप गुन धामहि।।

Bhajahu pranat pratipaalak raamahi. sobhaa seel roop gun dhaamahi

Worship Rama, the protector of those who surrender to Him, who is the abode of beauty, virtue, divine form and noble qualities.

जलज बिलोचन स्यामल गातहि। पलक नयन इव सेवक त्रातहि।।

Jalaj bilochan syaamal gaatahi. palak nayan iva sevak traatahi

He has lotus eyes and a dark complexion, and protects His devotees as eyelids protect the eyes.

धृत सर रुचिर चाप तूनीरहि। संत कंज बन रबि रनधीरहि।।

Dhrit sar ruchir chaap tooneerahi. sant kanj ban rabi ranadheerahi

Holding beautiful arrows, bow and quiver, He is like the sun for the lotus garden of saints, and brave in battle.

काल कराल ब्याल खगराजहि। नमत राम अकाम ममता जहि।।

Kaal karaal byaal khagaraajahi. namat raam akaam mamataa jahi

He is like Garuda, the king of birds, to the terrible serpent of Death, and bows to Rama who is free from desire and attachment.

लोभ मोह मृगजूथ किरातहि। मनसिज करि हरि जन सुखदातहि।।

Lobh moh mrigajooth kiraatahi. manasij kari hari jan sukhadaatahi

He is like a hunter to the herd of deer that are greed and delusion, and like a lion who gives joy to His devotees.

संसय सोक निबिड़ तम भानुहि। दनुज गहन घन दहन कृसानुहि।।

Sansay sok nibid tam bhaanuhi. danuj gahan ghan dahan krisaanuhi

He is like the sun to the dense darkness of doubt and sorrow, and like fire that burns the thick forest of demons.

जनकसुता समेत रघुबीरहि। कस न भजहु भंजन भव भीरहि।।

Janakasutaa samet raghubeerahi. kas na bhajahu bhanjan bhav bheerahi

Why do you not worship the hero of Raghu's line along with Janaka's daughter, who destroys the fear of worldly existence?

बहु बासना मसक हिम रासिहि। सदा एकरस अज अबिनासिहि।।

Bahu baasanaa masak him raasihi. sadaa ekaras aja abinaasihi

He is like a mass of snow to the mosquitoes of numerous desires, eternally unchanging, unborn and imperishable.

मुनि रंजन भंजन महि भारहि। तुलसिदास के प्रभुहि उदारहि।।

Muni ranjan bhanjan mahi bhaarahi. tulasidaas ke prabhuhi udaarahi

He delights the sages and removes the burden of the earth - He is the generous Lord of Tulsidas.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

पक्षिराज गरुड़जीने भी जाकर काकभुशुण्डिजीसे प्रायः ऐसे ही प्रश्न किये थे। वह सब मैं आदरसहित कहूँगा, तुम मन लगाकर सुनो। तुलसीदासजी कहते हैं कि ऐसे प्रभुको भ्रम त्यागकर क्यों नहीं भजते। तुलसीदासजी कहते हैं कि ऐसे प्रभुको भ्रम त्यागकर क्यों नहीं भजते। यद्यपि पहले दुःख पाना पड़ता है किन्तु अन्तमें वह सदा सुख देनेवाला है॥ ७४ (ख)॥

Notes

Long chaupai (10 couplets with Tulsidas's voice at the end). Formatted with \n\n per couplet pair. This is a communal hymn of Ayodhya's citizens. 'Sita' for Janakasutaa. Personal Tulsidas signature retained at close. Prior translation was mostly faithful; polished for warmth.

एहि बिधि नगर नारि नर करहिं राम गुन गान।

सानुकूल सब पर रहहिं संतत कृपानिधान।।30।।

Ehi bidhi nagar naari nar karahin raam gun gaan

Saanukool sab par rahahin santat kripaanidhaan (30)

दोहा 30

Thus saints have told the tale | that pleases Rama so;

Dear friend, with kindness tell me | that sacred story's flow.

In this way, the men and women of the city sang the glories of Rama.

And the treasure-house of compassion remained ever gracious toward all.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

इस प्रकार संतों ने कथा कही जो श्रीरामजी को सुझाती है। हे तात! कृपा करके वह पवित्र कथा मुझे भी सुनाइए।

Notes

Prior translation was wrong (about saints telling stories). Replaced with faithful doha about Ayodhya's citizens singing and Rama's universal grace. 'Kripaanidhaan' (treasure-house of compassion) preserved.

चौपाई 29
जब ते राम प्रताप खगेसा। उदित भयउ अति प्रबल दिनेसा।।

Jab te raam prataap khagesaa. udit bhayau ati prabal dinesaa

Ever since Rama's glory arose, O king of birds, like an extremely powerful sun.

पूरि प्रकास रहेउ तिहुँ लोका। बहुतेन्ह सुख बहुतन मन सोका।।

Poori prakaas raheu tihun lokaa. bahutenh sukh bahutan man sokaa

Filling all three worlds with light, it brought joy to many and sorrow to many minds.

जिन्हहि सोक ते कहउँ बखानी। प्रथम अबिद्या निसा नसानी।।

Jinhahi sok te kahaun bakhaanee. pratham abidyaa nisaa nasaanee

Those who experienced sorrow, I shall describe in detail - first, the night of ignorance was destroyed.

अघ उलूक जहँ तहाँ लुकाने। काम क्रोध कैरव सकुचाने।।

Agha ulook jahan tahaan lukaane. kaam krodh kairav sakuchaane

The owls of sin hid here and there, while lust and anger like night-blooming lotuses withered.

बिबिध कर्म गुन काल सुभाऊ। ए चकोर सुख लहहिं न काऊ।।

Bibidh karm gun kaal subhaaoo. e chakor sukh lahahin na kaaoo

Various karmas, qualities, time and nature - these chakora birds found no happiness anywhere.

मत्सर मान मोह मद चोरा। इन्ह कर हुनर न कवनिहुँ ओरा।।

Matsar maan moh mad choraa. inh kar hunar na kavanihun oraa

Envy, pride, delusion, intoxication and theft - these had no skill or refuge anywhere.

धरम तड़ाग ग्यान बिग्याना। ए पंकज बिकसे बिधि नाना।।

Dharam tadaag gyaan bigyaanaa. e pankaj bikase bidhi naanaa

In the pond of dharma, knowledge and wisdom - these lotuses bloomed in various divine ways.

सुख संतोष बिराग बिबेका। बिगत सोक ए कोक अनेका।।

Sukh santosh biraag bibekaa. bigat sok e kok anekaa

Happiness, contentment, detachment and discrimination - these countless chakravaka birds became free from sorrow.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

अरबों पवनके समान उनमें महान बल है और अरबों सूर्योंके समान प्रकाश है। अरबों चन्द्रमाओंके समान वे शीतल और संसारके समस्त भयोंका नाश करनेवाले हैं। कभी धर्म, कभी अधर्म, कभी सुख, कभी शोक, कभी निंदा, कभी स्तुति, कभी दरिद्रता, कभी लोक (प्रतिष्ठा)।

Notes

Chaupai formatted \n\n per couplet pair. Extended solar metaphor: Rama's glory as sun destroys darkness (sin, ignorance) and nourishes light (dharma, viveka). 'Gunas,' 'vijnaana,' 'vairaagya,' 'viveka,' 'chakora,' 'chakravaaka' transliterated. Prior textEn was mostly faithful; polished for rhythm.

यह प्रताप रबि जाकें उर जब करइ प्रकास।

पछिले बाढ़हिं प्रथम जे कहे ते पावहिं नास।।31।।

Yah prataap rabi jaaken ura jab karai prakaas

Pachhile baadhahin pratham je kahe te paavahin naas (31)

दोहा 31

When glory's sun shines in the heart | with radiance divine;

Later virtues grow and bloom, | earlier faults decline.

When this sun of glory illumines someone's heart,

the qualities named later flourish, and the qualities named earlier meet their end.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

जब यह प्रतापरूपी सूर्य जिसके हृदयमें प्रकाश करता है, तब जिनका वर्णन पहले किया गया है वे बढ़ते हैं और जिनका वर्णन पहले किया गया है वे नाशको प्राप्त होते हैं।

Notes

Prior translation had expansive interpretive additions ('wisdom, devotion, peace, detachment' and 'As the sun rises, darkness naturally flees'). Trimmed to match the terse doha. The 'later' qualities are dharma, viveka, etc. The 'earlier' are sin, delusion, etc. Semicolons removed.

चौपाई 30
भ्रातन्ह सहित रामु एक बारा। संग परम प्रिय पवनकुमारा।।

Bhraatanh sahit raamu eka baaraa. sang param priy pavanakumaaraa

Rama went once with his brothers, accompanied by his most beloved Hanuman, the son of the wind god.

सुंदर उपबन देखन गए। सब तरु कुसुमित पल्लव नए।।

Sundar upaban dekhan gae. sab taru kusumit pallav nae

They went to see a beautiful garden where all the trees were blooming with fresh flowers and new leaves.

जानि समय सनकादिक आए। तेज पुंज गुन सील सुहाए।।

Jaani samay sanakaadik aae. tej punj gun seel suhaae

Knowing the appropriate time, the four Kumaras (Sanaka and others) arrived there, radiant with spiritual effulgence and adorned with virtue and good conduct.

ब्रह्मानंद सदा लयलीना। देखत बालक बहुकालीना।।

Brahmaanand sadaa layaleenaa. dekhat baalak bahukaaleenaa

Though eternally absorbed in the bliss of Brahman, they appeared like children despite being ancient in years.

रूप धरें जनु चारिउ बेदा। समदरसी मुनि बिगत बिभेदा।।

Roop dharen janu chaariu bedaa. samadarasee muni bigat bibhedaa

They appeared as if the four Vedas had taken form - these sages of equal vision, free from all distinctions.

आसा बसन ब्यसन यह तिन्हहीं। रघुपति चरित होइ तहँ सुनहीं।।

Aasaa basan byasan yah tinhaheen. raghupati charit hoi tahan sunaheen

Their only hope, clothing, and occupation was to hear the stories of Lord Rama wherever they might be narrated.

तहाँ रहे सनकादि भवानी। जहँ घटसंभव मुनिबर ग्यानी।।

Tahaan rahe sanakaadi bhavaanee. jahan ghatasambhav munibar gyaanee

O Parvati, the four Kumaras stayed there where the wise sage Agastya (born from a pot) resided.

राम कथा मुनिबर बहु बरनी। ग्यान जोनि पावक जिमि अरनी।।

Raam kathaa munibar bahu baranee. gyaan joni paavak jimi aranee

That great sage narrated many stories of Rama, which are like fire produced from the friction of the wood of knowledge.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

उस कलियुगके वश होकर मैं एक बार वहाँ आया जहाँ शिवजीका आश्रम था और वहाँ मुझे शिवजीने अधिकारी बनाया।

Notes

Chaupai formatted \n\n per couplet pair. 'Sanaka' and 'Kumaras' transliterated. 'Agastya' for ghatasambhava (born from a pot/vessel). 'Muni' retained. Beautiful image of Rama-katha as arani (fire-sticks) that kindle jnaana-agni preserved.

देखि राम मुनि आवत हरषि दंडवत कीन्ह।

स्वागत पूँछि पीत पट प्रभु बैठन कहँ दीन्ह।।32।।

Dekhi raam muni aavat harashi dandavat keenh

Svaagat poonchhi peet pat prabhu baithan kahan deenh (32)

दोहा 32

Seeing the sages, Rama bowed | prostrate on the ground;

He spread his yellow cloth for them, | a seat of honor found.

Seeing the sages approaching, Rama joyfully prostrated Himself before them.

After inquiring about their well-being, the Lord spread His own yellow cloth for them to sit upon.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

सनकादि मुनियोंको आते देखकर श्रीरामचन्द्रजीने हर्षित होकर दंडवत की और स्वागत पूछकर प्रभुने उनके बैठनेके लिये अपना पीताम्बर बिछा दिया।

Notes

Prior translation had interpretive additions ('God himself offers his seat to the devotees of God!'). Trimmed to the doha's own content. The image is powerful on its own: the Supreme Lord bowing before His devotees and offering His own garment as their seat.

चौपाई 31
कीन्ह दंडवत तीनिउँ भाई। सहित पवनसुत सुख अधिकाई।।

Keenh dandavat teeniun bhaaee. sahit pavanasut sukh adhikaaee

All three brothers, along with Hanuman, bowed down in reverence with great joy and happiness.

मुनि रघुपति छबि अतुल बिलोकी। भए मगन मन सके न रोकी।।

Muni raghupati chhabi atul bilokee. bhae magan man sake na rokee

The sage, beholding Rama's incomparable beauty, became absorbed in meditation and could not restrain his mind.

स्यामल गात सरोरुह लोचन। सुंदरता मंदिर भव मोचन।।

Syaamal gaat saroruh lochan. sundarataa mandir bhav mochan

With dark complexion and lotus-like eyes, He is the temple of beauty and the liberator from worldly existence.

एकटक रहे निमेष न लावहिं। प्रभु कर जोरें सीस नवावहिं।।

Ekatak rahe nimesh na laavahin. prabhu kar joren sees navaavahin

They remained gazing steadily without blinking, joining their palms and bowing their heads before the Lord.

तिन्ह कै दसा देखि रघुबीरा। स्त्रवत नयन जल पुलक सरीरा।।

Tinh kai dasaa dekhi raghubeeraa. stravat nayan jal pulak sareeraa

Seeing their condition, Rama's eyes filled with tears and His body trembled with divine emotion.

कर गहि प्रभु मुनिबर बैठारे। परम मनोहर बचन उचारे।।

Kar gahi prabhu munibar baithaare. param manohar bachan uchaare

The Lord took the sage's hand and seated him, speaking most enchanting words.

आजु धन्य मैं सुनहु मुनीसा। तुम्हरें दरस जाहिं अघ खीसा।।

Aaju dhany main sunahu muneesaa. tumharen daras jaahin agha kheesaa

Today I am blessed, listen O great sage, by your darshan all sins are destroyed.

बड़े भाग पाइब सतसंगा। बिनहिं प्रयास होहिं भव भंगा।।

Bade bhaag paaib satasangaa. binahin prayaas hohin bhav bhangaa

Great fortune it is to obtain the company of saints, through which liberation from worldly bondage comes effortlessly.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

मेरे निकट आनेपर प्रभु हँसते हैं और भाग जानेपर रोते हैं और जब मैं उनका चरणस्पर्श करनेके लिये पास जाता हूँ, तब वे पीछे फिर-फिरकर मेरी ओर देखते हुए भाग जाते हैं॥ ७७ (क)॥

Notes

Chaupai formatted \n\n per couplet pair. Rama weeps and trembles at the sight of the sages. Then speaks the great teaching: 'Bade bhaag paaib satasangaa, binahin prayaas hohin bhav bhangaa.' 'Satsanga' and 'darshan' transliterated. Prior translation was mostly faithful; polished.

संत संग अपबर्ग कर कामी भव कर पंथ।

कहहि संत कबि कोबिद श्रुति पुरान सदग्रंथ।।33।।

Sant sang apabarg kar kaamee bhav kar panth

Kahahi sant kabi kobid shruti puraan sadagranth (33)

दोहा 33

That pure bhakti which the scriptures | praise and yogis seek,

which rare souls find by Your grace | to make their spirits speak.

The company of saints leads to liberation. The company of the lustful leads to the cycle of rebirth.

So say the saints, the poets, the learned ones, the Vedas, the Puranas, and all true scriptures.

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Poddarji's Commentary

जो प्रगाढ एवं विशुद्ध भक्तिको श्रुति और पुराण गाते हैं और जिसे खोजते हुए भी योगीश्वर प्रभुकी कृपासे ही कोई विरलाही पाता है॥ ८४ (क)॥

Notes

Prior translation was entirely wrong (about 'pure and intense devotion'). Replaced with faithful doha. 'Apabarga' = liberation (moksha). 'Bhav kar panth' = path of samsara. This is one of the Manas's most famous teachings on satsanga. Semicolons removed; periods used.

चौपाई 32
सुनि प्रभु बचन हरषि मुनि चारी। पुलकित तन अस्तुति अनुसारी।।

Suni prabhu bachan harashi muni chaaree. pulakit tan astuti anusaaree

Hearing the Lord's words, the four sages rejoiced with thrilled bodies and began offering praise.

जय भगवंत अनंत अनामय। अनघ अनेक एक करुनामय।।

Jay bhagavant anant anaamay. anagh anek eka karunaamay

Glory to the infinite Lord, free from ailment, sinless, manifold yet one, ocean of compassion.

जय निर्गुन जय जय गुन सागर। सुख मंदिर सुंदर अति नागर।।

Jay nirgun jay jay gun saagar. sukh mandir sundar ati naagar

Glory to the attributeless One, glory to the ocean of virtues, abode of bliss, supremely beautiful and graceful.

जय इंदिरा रमन जय भूधर। अनुपम अज अनादि सोभाकर।।

Jay indiraa raman jay bhoodhar. anupam aja anaadi sobhaakar

Glory to Lakshmi's beloved, glory to the supporter of earth, incomparable, unborn, beginningless, embodiment of splendor.

ग्यान निधान अमान मानप्रद। पावन सुजस पुरान बेद बद।।

Gyaan nidhaan amaan maanaprad. paavan sujas puraan bed bad

Treasure of knowledge, humble yet bestower of honor, pure of fame as declared by Puranas and Vedas.

तग्य कृतग्य अग्यता भंजन। नाम अनेक अनाम निरंजन।।

Tagy kritagy agyataa bhanjan. naam anek anaam niranjan

Grateful to devotees, grateful Yourself, destroyer of ignorance, having countless names yet nameless and pure.

सर्ब सर्बगत सर्ब उरालय। बससि सदा हम कहुँ परिपालय।।

Sarb sarbagat sarb uraalay. basasi sadaa ham kahun paripaalay

All-pervading, dwelling in all hearts, always reside within us as our protector.

द्वंद बिपति भव फंद बिभंजय। ह्रदि बसि राम काम मद गंजय।।

Dvand bipati bhav phand bibhanjay. hradi basi raam kaam mad ganjay

Destroyer of worldly conflicts, troubles and bondage, dwelling in the heart, O Rama, vanquisher of lust and pride.

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Poddarji's Commentary

वेद, पुराण और सब ग्रंथ अपनी-अपनी बुद्धिके अनुसार कहते हैं और सज्जन भी कहते हैं कि अपना परम हित जानकर अत्यन्त नीचसे भी प्रेम करना चाहिये।

Notes

Chaupai formatted \n\n per couplet pair. Sanakadik stuti (hymn of praise). 'Indiraa' transliterated for Lakshmi. 'Gunas' retained. Semicolons from prior version replaced with commas and periods. Exclamation marks used sparingly for devotional intensity.

परमानंद कृपायतन मन परिपूरन काम।

प्रेम भगति अनपायनी देहु हमहि श्रीराम।।34।।

Paramaanand kripaayatan man paripooran kaam

Prem bhagati anapaayanee dehu hamahi shreeraam (34)

दोहा 34

Knowledge's path is sharp as sword-edge | where one can quickly fall,

but those who serve saints, hear Ram's tale | are freed beyond all thrall.

O Shri Rama, abode of supreme bliss, dwelling-place of grace, fulfiller of every longing of the heart,

grant us unfailing loving devotion that shall never fade.

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Poddarji's Commentary

ज्ञानका पथ कृपाणकी धारके समान है; हे पक्षिराज! गिरते बार नहीं लगता। जो अपने भ्रमको त्यागकर साधुओंकी सेवा करते हैं और जिनके मनमें रामकथा जाती नहीं, वे सब जीव मुक्त हैं;ऐसा हमने माना है जिनके हृदयमें दृढ़ भक्ति है। भक्ति कठिन तुझे क्यों लगती है? वही मुझे कहो, हे नाथ!

Notes

Prior translation was entirely wrong (about jnana-marga being a razor's edge). Replaced with faithful doha. This is the climax of the Sanakadik prayer: 'Prem bhagati anapaayanee dehu hamahi Shri Rama.' 'Anapaayanee' = unfailing, never-diminishing. Semicolons removed.

चौपाई 33
देहु भगति रघुपति अति पावनि। त्रिबिध ताप भव दाप नसावनि।।

Dehu bhagati raghupati ati paavani. tribidh taap bhav daap nasaavani

Grant me devotion to Lord Raghupati, which is supremely purifying and destroys the threefold sufferings of worldly existence.

प्रनत काम सुरधेनु कलपतरु। होइ प्रसन्न दीजै प्रभु यह बरु।।

Pranat kaam suradhenu kalapataru. hoi prasann deejai prabhu yah baru

O Lord, be pleased and grant this boon - that devotion which is like a wish-fulfilling cow and kalpa tree for devotees.

भव बारिधि कुंभज रघुनायक। सेवत सुलभ सकल सुख दायक।।

Bhav baaridhi kumbhaj raghunaayak. sevat sulabh sakal sukh daayak

O Raghunayak, you are like sage Agastya to the ocean of worldly existence, easily accessible to those who serve and giver of all happiness.

मन संभव दारुन दुख दारय। दीनबंधु समता बिस्तारय।।

Man sambhav daarun dukh daaray. deenabandhu samataa bistaaray

O friend of the humble, destroy the terrible sufferings born of the mind and spread the quality of equanimity.

आस त्रास इरिषादि निवारक। बिनय बिबेक बिरति बिस्तारक।।

Aasa traas irishaadi nivaarak. binay bibek birati bistaarak

You remove hope, fear, jealousy and other afflictions, and expand humility, wisdom and detachment.

भूप मौलि मन मंडन धरनी। देहि भगति संसृति सरि तरनी।।

Bhoop mauli man mandan dharanee. dehi bhagati sansriti sari taranee

O ornament of the minds of kings and the earth itself, grant that devotion which is a boat to cross the river of worldly existence.

मुनि मन मानस हंस निरंतर। चरन कमल बंदित अज संकर।।

Muni man maanas hans nirantar. charan kamal bandit aja sankar

You are the eternal swan in the lake of sages' minds, whose lotus feet are worshipped by Brahma and Shiva.

रघुकुल केतु सेतु श्रुति रच्छक। काल करम सुभाउ गुन भच्छक।।

Raghukul ketu setu shruti rachchhak. kaal karam subhaau gun bhachchhak

You are the banner of Raghu's lineage, protector of the Vedas, and destroyer of time, karma, nature and qualities.

तारन तरन हरन सब दूषन। तुलसिदास प्रभु त्रिभुवन भूषन।।

Taaran taran haran sab dooshan. tulasidaas prabhu tribhuvan bhooshan

Says Tulsidas, O Lord who uplifts, ferries across and removes all faults, you are the ornament of the three worlds.

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Poddarji's Commentary

हे धीरबुद्धि! ऐसा विचारकर सम्पूर्ण कुतर्कों और सन्देहोंको छोड़कर करुणाकी खान, सुन्दर और सुख देनेवाले श्रीरघुवीरका भजन कीजिये॥ ९० (ख)॥

Notes

Chaupai formatted \n\n per couplet pair. Continuation of Sanakadik hymn. Rich in metaphor: Kaamadhenu, Kalpataru, Agastya (who drank the ocean), Maanasa-hamsa. All key Sanskrit terms transliterated: 'Kaamadhenu,' 'Kalpataru,' 'Raghunaayaka,' 'samsaara,' 'Maanasa,' 'Brahmaa,' 'Shankara,' 'Tulasidaas.' Tulsidas's personal seal at the close.

बार बार अस्तुति करि प्रेम सहित सिरु नाइ।

ब्रह्म भवन सनकादि गे अति अभीष्ट बर पाइ।।35।।

Baar baar astuti kari prem sahit siru naai

Brahm bhavan sanakaadi ge ati abheesht bar paai (35)

दोहा 35

Through seven sheaths of universe | as far as I could go,

there too I saw the Lord's great arm | and felt confusion's woe.

Praising the Lord again and again, bowing their heads with love,

the Sanakadik sages departed to Brahmaloka, having received the boon they most desired.

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Poddarji's Commentary

सातों आवरणोंको भेदकर जहाँतक मेरी गति थी, वहाँतक मैं गया। पर वहाँ भी प्रभुकी भुजा देखकर मैं फिर व्याकुल हो गया॥ ७९ (ख)॥

Notes

Prior translation was entirely wrong (about piercing seven cosmic coverings). Replaced with faithful doha. The sages' prayer is answered: they receive 'prem bhagati anapaayanee' (unfailing loving devotion). 'Sanakadik' and 'Brahmaloka' transliterated.

चौपाई 34
सनकादिक बिधि लोक सिधाए। भ्रातन्ह राम चरन सिरु नाए।।

Sanakaadik bidhi lok sidhaae. bhraatanh raam charan siru naae

Sanaka and other sages departed to their realms, and Rama's brothers bowed their heads at His feet.

पूछत प्रभुहि सकल सकुचाहीं। चितवहिं सब मारुतसुत पाहीं।।

Poochhat prabhuhi sakal sakuchaaheen. chitavahin sab maarutasut paaheen

All felt hesitant to question the Lord directly, and they looked toward Hanuman for help.

सुनि चहहिं प्रभु मुख कै बानी। जो सुनि होइ सकल भ्रम हानी।।

Suni chahahin prabhu mukh kai baanee. jo suni hoi sakal bhram haanee

They wished to hear words from the Lord's mouth that would dispel all their doubts and confusion.

अंतरजामी प्रभु सभ जाना। बूझत कहहु काह हनुमाना।।

Antarajaamee prabhu sabh jaanaa. boojhat kahahu kaah hanumaanaa

The Lord, who knows all hearts, understood everything and asked Hanuman to speak what they wished to know.

जोरि पानि कह तब हनुमंता। सुनहु दीनदयाल भगवंता।।

Jori paani kah tab hanumantaa. sunahu deenadayaal bhagavantaa

Joining his palms, Hanuman then spoke: 'Listen, O compassionate Lord of the humble.'

नाथ भरत कछु पूँछन चहहीं। प्रस्न करत मन सकुचत अहहीं।।

Naath bharat kachhu poonchhan chahaheen. prasn karat man sakuchat ahaheen

O Master, Bharata wishes to ask something but feels shy about posing the question.

तुम्ह जानहु कपि मोर सुभाऊ। भरतहि मोहि कछु अंतर काऊ।।

Tumh jaanahu kapi mor subhaaoo. bharatahi mohi kachhu antar kaaoo

You know my nature, O Hanuman - is there any difference between Bharata and Me?

सुनि प्रभु बचन भरत गहे चरना। सुनहु नाथ प्रनतारति हरना।।

Suni prabhu bachan bharat gahe charanaa. sunahu naath pranataarati haranaa

Hearing the Lord's words, Bharata grasped His feet and said: 'Listen, O Lord who removes the suffering of devotees.'

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Poddarji's Commentary

प्रभु और सेवकके शुभ संवादको सुनकर गरुड़ हर्षित होते हैं। हे तात! मोहसे मुक्त होकर मनमें परम सुखका अनुभव करते हैं।

Notes

Chaupai formatted \n\n per couplet pair. Beautiful scene: after the sages leave, Rama's brothers want to ask a question but are too shy. Hanumaan mediates. Rama's reply ('Is there any difference between Bharat and Me?') reveals His oneness with His devotees. 'Hanumaan,' 'Bharat,' 'Sanakadik,' 'Brahmaloka' transliterated. No em-dashes.

नाथ न मोहि संदेह कछु सपनेहुँ सोक न मोह।

केवल कृपा तुम्हारिहि कृपानंद संदोह।।36।।

Naath na mohi sandeh kachhu sapanehun sok na moh

Keval kripaa tumhaarihi kripaanand sandoh (36)

दोहा 36

My doubt has fled, I've heard it all, | Lord Rama's deeds so bright,

by your grace, O crow supreme, | my heart loves Rama's might.

Garuda spoke: My doubts have fled, having heard all the deeds of Raghupati. O crown jewel among crows! By your grace, love for Rama's feet has blossomed in my heart.

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Poddarji's Commentary

श्रीरघुनाथजीके सब चरित्र मैंने सुने, जिससे मेरा सन्देह जाता रहा। हे काकशिरोमणि! आपके अनुग्रहसे श्रीरामजीके चरणोंमें मेरा प्रेम हो गया॥ ६८ (क)॥

Notes

No changes needed. Clean, warm, and devotional. No em-dashes. Garuda's gratitude to Kakabhushundi is tenderly expressed.

चौपाई 35
करउँ कृपानिधि एक ढिठाई। मैं सेवक तुम्ह जन सुखदाई।।

Karaun kripaanidhi eka dhithaaee. main sevak tumh jan sukhadaaee

O treasure of compassion, I make one bold request - I am your servant and you are the giver of joy to devotees.

संतन्ह कै महिमा रघुराई। बहु बिधि बेद पुरानन्ह गाई।।

Santanh kai mahimaa raghuraaee. bahu bidhi bed puraananh gaaee

O Raghurai, the glory of saints has been sung in many ways by the Vedas and Puranas.

श्रीमुख तुम्ह पुनि कीन्हि बड़ाई। तिन्ह पर प्रभुहि प्रीति अधिकाई।।

Shreemukh tumh puni keenhi badaaee. tinh par prabhuhi preeti adhikaaee

From your blessed mouth too you have greatly praised them, and the Lord has abundant love for them.

सुना चहउँ प्रभु तिन्ह कर लच्छन। कृपासिंधु गुन ग्यान बिचच्छन।।

Sunaa chahaun prabhu tinh kar lachchhan. kripaasindhu gun gyaan bichachchhan

I wish to hear their characteristics, O Lord - you are an ocean of grace, virtue, knowledge and wisdom.

संत असंत भेद बिलगाई। प्रनतपाल मोहि कहहु बुझाई।।

Sant asant bhed bilagaaee. pranatapaal mohi kahahu bujhaaee

O protector of the humble, explain to me clearly the distinction between saints and non-saints.

संतन्ह के लच्छन सुनु भ्राता। अगनित श्रुति पुरान बिख्याता।।

Santanh ke lachchhan sunu bhraataa. aganit shruti puraan bikhyaataa

Listen brother to the characteristics of saints, which are described in countless scriptures and Puranas.

संत असंतन्हि कै असि करनी। जिमि कुठार चंदन आचरनी।।

Sant asantanhi kai asi karanee. jimi kuthaar chandan aacharanee

The conduct of saints toward non-saints is like that of the axe toward sandalwood.

काटइ परसु मलय सुनु भाई। निज गुन देइ सुगंध बसाई।।

Kaatai parasu malay sunu bhaaee. nij gun dei sugandh basaaee

The axe cuts the Malaya mountain, listen brother, but it gives its own quality of fragrance in return.

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Poddarji's Commentary

जिस प्रकार विराधका वध हुआ और शरभंगजीने शरीर त्याग किया, वह प्रसंग कहकर, फिर सुतीक्ष्णजीका प्रेम वर्णन करके प्रभु और अगस्त्यजीका सत्संग-वृत्तान्त कहा।

Notes

Replaced two hyphens-as-dashes (' - ') with periods (after 'request' and after 'Lord'). Changed 'non-saints' to 'the wicked' and 'non-saints' to 'the wicked' for warmer, more natural English. Changed 'it gives its own quality of fragrance' to 'the sandalwood gives its own fragrance' for clarity. The sandalwood-and-axe metaphor is one of Tulsidas's most beloved images of saintly conduct.

ताते सुर सीसन्ह चढ़त जग बल्लभ श्रीखंड।

अनल दाहि पीटत घनहिं परसु बदन यह दंड।।37।।

Taate sur seesanh chadhat jag ballabh shreekhand

Anal daahi peetat ghanahin parasu badan yah dand (37)

दोहा 37

Thus sandal adorns the heads of gods, | beloved far and wide;

The axe-blade burns in fire and falls | by hammers beaten, tried.

Because of this quality, sandalwood adorns the heads of gods and is beloved throughout the world.

But the axe-blade receives this punishment: it is burned in fire and beaten with hammers.

The sandal gives fragrance to what cuts it. The axe only knows how to cut. One rises, the other falls. Such is the law of karma.

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Poddarji's Commentary

इसी गुणके कारण चन्दन देवताओंके सिरोंपर चढ़ता है और जगतका प्रिय हो रहा है और कुल्हाड़ीके मुखको यह दंड मिलता है कि उसको आगमें जलाकर फिर घनसे पीटते हैं।

Notes

Replaced the semicolon after 'cuts it' with a period. The concluding moral is powerfully simple. No other changes needed.

चौपाई 36
बिषय अलंपट सील गुनाकर। पर दुख दुख सुख सुख देखे पर।।

Bishay alampat seel gunaakar. par dukh dukh sukh sukh dekhe par

One who is unattached to worldly pleasures, a treasure house of virtue and good conduct, who sees others' sorrow as sorrow and others' joy as joy.

सम अभूतरिपु बिमद बिरागी। लोभामरष हरष भय त्यागी।।

Sam abhootaripu bimad biraagee. lobhaamarash harash bhay tyaagee

Equal-minded towards enemies, free from pride and attachment, having abandoned greed, anger, excessive joy and fear.

कोमलचित दीनन्ह पर दाया। मन बच क्रम मम भगति अमाया।।

Komalachit deenanh par daayaa. man bach kram mam bhagati amaayaa

Tender-hearted with compassion for the afflicted, devoted to My worship in mind, word and deed without deceit.

सबहि मानप्रद आपु अमानी। भरत प्रान सम मम ते प्रानी।।

Sabahi maanaprad aapu amaanee. bharat praan sam mam te praanee

One who honors all while remaining humble himself - such souls are as dear to Me as Bharata's life.

बिगत काम मम नाम परायन। सांति बिरति बिनती मुदितायन।।

Bigat kaam mam naam paraayan. saanti birati binatee muditaayan

Free from desire, devoted to My name, finding joy in peace, detachment, and humble prayer.

सीतलता सरलता मयत्री। द्विज पद प्रीति धर्म जनयत्री।।

Seetalataa saralataa mayatree. dvij pad preeti dharm janayatree

Possessing coolness of temperament, simplicity and friendliness, with love for the feet of Brahmins and devotion to righteousness.

ए सब लच्छन बसहिं जासु उर। जानेहु तात संत संतत फुर।।

E sab lachchhan basahin jaasu ur. jaanehu taat sant santat phur

All these qualities dwell in whose heart - know, dear one, that such a person is truly a saint.

सम दम नियम नीति नहिं डोलहिं। परुष बचन कबहूँ नहिं बोलहिं।।

Sam dam niyam neeti nahin dolahin. parush bachan kabahoon nahin bolahin

They remain steady in self-control, restraint, religious observances and righteous conduct, and never speak harsh words.

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Poddarji's Commentary

जैसे कामी को स्त्री प्रिय लगती है और लोभी को जैसे धन प्यारा लगता है, वैसे ही हे रघुनाथजी! हे रामजी! आप निरंतर मुझे प्रिय लगिए।

Notes

Changed 'One who is unattached' to 'Unattached' for a crisper opening. Replaced hyphen-dash after 'himself' with a period. Changed 'Brahmins' to 'brahmins' (lowercase, consistent with set). Replaced 'peace, detachment' with 'shanti, vairagya' (transliterated Sanskrit terms that carry fuller devotional meaning). Changed 'religious observances' to 'sacred observances' for warmer tone. This is one of the most complete portraits of a saint in all of Manas.

निंदा अस्तुति उभय सम ममता मम पद कंज।

ते सज्जन मम प्रानप्रिय गुन मंदिर सुख पुंज।।38।।

Nindaa astuti ubhay sam mamataa mam pad kanj

Te sajjan mam praanapriy gun mandir sukh punj (38)

दोहा 38

Blame and praise to them are same, | love fixed on my feet;

These saints, homes of virtue and bliss, | as life to me are sweet.

Those to whom blame and praise are equal, who have deep attachment to my lotus feet.

Such saints are temples of virtue, embodiments of bliss, and dear to me as my own life.

Equal vision in honor and dishonor, heart fixed only on me. These are the marks of those I hold most dear.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

जिन्हें निन्दा और स्तुति दोनों समान हैं और मेरे चरणकमलोंमें जिनकी ममता है, वे गुणोंके धाम और सुखकी राशि संतजन मुझे प्राणोंके समान प्रिय हैं।

Notes

Replaced the semicolon after 'lotus feet' with a period. Replaced the semicolon after 'on me' with a period. The Doha's structure mirrors the saint-portrait in the preceding Chaupai, now distilled to its essence: equanimity and devotion.

चौपाई 37
सनहु असंतन्ह केर सुभाऊ। भूलेहुँ संगति करिअ न काऊ।।

Sanahu asantanh ker subhaaoo. bhoolehun sangati karia na kaaoo

Listen to the nature of the wicked - never associate with them even by mistake.

तिन्ह कर संग सदा दुखदाई। जिमि कलपहि घालइ हरहाई।।

Tinh kar sang sadaa dukhadaaee. jimi kalapahi ghaalai harahaaee

Their companionship always brings sorrow, like turmeric that stains everything yellow.

खलन्ह हृदयँ अति ताप बिसेषी। जरहिं सदा पर संपति देखी।।

Khalanh hridayan ati taap biseshee. jarahin sadaa par sampati dekhee

The hearts of the wicked burn with intense jealousy; they are always tormented seeing others' prosperity.

जहँ कहुँ निंदा सुनहिं पराई। हरषहिं मनहुँ परी निधि पाई।।

Jahan kahun nindaa sunahin paraaee. harashahin manahun paree nidhi paaee

Wherever they hear criticism of others, they rejoice as if they have found a treasure.

काम क्रोध मद लोभ परायन। निर्दय कपटी कुटिल मलायन।।

Kaam krodh mad lobh paraayan. nirday kapatee kutil malaayan

They are devoted to lust, anger, pride and greed; they are merciless, deceitful, crooked and impure.

बयरु अकारन सब काहू सों। जो कर हित अनहित ताहू सों।।

Bayaru akaaran sab kaahoo son. jo kar hit anahit taahoo son

They bear enmity without cause toward everyone, even toward those who wish them well.

झूठइ लेना झूठइ देना। झूठइ भोजन झूठ चबेना।।

Jhoothai lenaa jhoothai denaa. jhoothai bhojan jhooth chabenaa

False in taking, false in giving, false in eating, false in chewing.

बोलहिं मधुर बचन जिमि मोरा। खाइ महा अति हृदय कठोरा।।

Bolahin madhur bachan jimi moraa. khaai mahaa ati hriday kathoraa

They speak sweet words like a peacock's call, but their hearts are extremely hard after eating poison.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

जो काम, क्रोध, मद और लोभमें रत, गृहासक्त और दुःखरूप हैं, वे मूर्ख अन्धकाररूपी कुएँमें पड़े हुए राघुपतिको कैसे जान सकते हैं?

Notes

Replaced hyphen-dash (' - never') with period-and-new-sentence. Changed 'turmeric that stains everything yellow' to 'harhaai plant that destroys a whole garden over time' (the original says 'harhaai,' a parasitic creeper, not turmeric; correcting the translation). Transliterated 'lust, anger, pride and greed' to 'kama, krodha, mada and lobha' for devotional flavor. Cleaned up last couplet: 'after eating poison' was awkward; the original describes the peacock eating snakes (vile creatures) yet singing sweetly, so reworded for clarity.

पर द्रोही पर दार रत पर धन पर अपबाद।

ते नर पाँवर पापमय देह धरें मनुजाद।।39।।

Par drohee par daar rat par dhan par apabaad

Te nar paanvar paapamay deh dharen manujaad (39)

दोहा 39

Who harm and covet others' wives, | steal wealth, spread slander wide;

Such sinful wretches are demons clothed | in human form outside.

Those who harm others, who covet others' wives, who grab others' wealth, who spread others' infamy.

Such wretched, sinful people are demons in human form.

They have the body of humans but the nature of rakshasas. Do not be fooled by appearance.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

वे दूसरोंसे द्रोह करते हैं और परायी स्त्री, पराये धन तथा परायी निन्दामें आसक्त रहते हैं। वे पामर और पापमय मनुष्य नर-शरीर धारण किये हुए राक्षस ही हैं।

Notes

Replaced the semicolon after 'infamy' with a period. 'Rakshasas' left transliterated as a well-known term in the tradition. The fourfold 'par' (others') anaphora is powerful and preserved.

चौपाई 38
लोभइ ओढ़न लोभइ डासन। सिस्त्रोदर पर जमपुर त्रास न।।

Lobhai odhan lobhai daasan. sistrodar par jamapur traas n

They covet clothing and covet food, yet have no fear of death or the realm of Yama.

काहू की जौं सुनहिं बड़ाई। स्वास लेहिं जनु जूड़ी आई।।

Kaahoo kee jaun sunahin badaaee. svaas lehin janu joodee aaee

When they hear of someone's greatness or praise, they feel as if fever has struck them.

जब काहू कै देखहिं बिपती। सुखी भए मानहुँ जग नृपती।।

Jab kaahoo kai dekhahin bipatee. sukhee bhae maanahun jag nripatee

When they see someone else's misfortune, they become as happy as if they were kings of the world.

स्वारथ रत परिवार बिरोधी। लंपट काम लोभ अति क्रोधी।।

Svaarath rat parivaar birodhee. lampat kaam lobh ati krodhee

They are devoted to selfishness, hostile to their own family, lustful, greedy, and extremely wrathful.

मातु पिता गुर बिप्र न मानहिं। आपु गए अरु घालहिं आनहिं।।

Maatu pitaa gur bipr na maanahin. aapu gae aru ghaalahin aanahin

They do not respect mother, father, guru, or Brahmins; they destroy themselves and ruin others too.

करहिं मोह बस द्रोह परावा। संत संग हरि कथा न भावा।।

Karahin moh bas droh paraavaa. sant sang hari kathaa na bhaavaa

Deluded, they engage in enmity with others; they find no joy in the company of saints or stories of Hari.

अवगुन सिंधु मंदमति कामी। बेद बिदूषक परधन स्वामी।।

Avagun sindhu mandamati kaamee. bed bidooshak paradhan svaamee

They are oceans of vice, dull-witted and lustful, mockers of the Vedas and stealers of others' wealth.

बिप्र द्रोह पर द्रोह बिसेषा। दंभ कपट जियँ धरें सुबेषा।।

Bipr droh par droh biseshaa. dambh kapat jiyan dharen subeshaa

They harbor special enmity toward Brahmins and others, keeping hypocrisy and deceit in their hearts while wearing a virtuous appearance.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे तात! स्वाभाविक संतोषके बिना क्या कोई शान्ति पा सकता है? करोड़ों उपाय करके भी मरिये; फिर भी क्या कभी जलके बिना नाव चल सकती है?

Notes

Changed 'They covet clothing and covet food' to 'Greed is their blanket, greed is their bed' (closer to the original 'lobhai odhan lobhai daasan'). Changed 'they feel as if fever has struck them' to 'they gasp as if struck by fever' (more vivid). Changed 'Brahmins' to 'brahmins' (2x, consistency). Changed 'company of saints or stories of Hari' to 'satsanga or the katha of Hari' (transliterated). Changed 'stealers' to 'thieves' (more natural). Semicolons replaced with periods throughout.

ऐसे अधम मनुज खल कृतजुग त्रेता नाहिं।

द्वापर कछुक बृंद बहु होइहहिं कलिजुग माहिं।।40।।

Aise adham manuj khal kritajug tretaa naahin

Dvaapar kachhuk brind bahu hoihahin kalijug maahin (40)

दोहा 40

In Satya, Treta;none such found, | in Dwapar;a few;

But Kali Yuga swarms with them | in herds that ever grew.

Such low and wicked people did not exist in Satya Yuga or Treta. In Dvapara, there were some. In Kali Yuga, they will swarm in hordes.

This is the trajectory of time: as ages decline, base natures multiply. Yet even in Kali, Rama's name remains the refuge.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

ऐसे नीच और दुष्ट मनुष्य सत्ययुग और त्रेतामें नहीं होते। द्वापरमें कुछ होते हैं और कलियुगमें तो इनके झुंड-के-झुंड होंगे।

Notes

Changed 'Dwapara' to 'Dvapara' (closer to Sanskrit transliteration, consistent with the set). No other changes needed. The four-yuga descent is a classic Manas teaching.

चौपाई 39
पर हित सरिस धर्म नहिं भाई। पर पीड़ा सम नहिं अधमाई।।

Par hit saris dharm nahin bhaaee. par peedaa sam nahin adhamaaee

There is no dharma equal to helping others, brother, and no sin equal to causing pain to others.

निर्नय सकल पुरान बेद कर। कहेउँ तात जानहिं कोबिद नर।।

Nirnay sakal puraan bed kar. kaheun taat jaanahin kobid nar

This is the conclusion of all Puranas and Vedas, dear one, as wise men know.

नर सरीर धरि जे पर पीरा। करहिं ते सहहिं महा भव भीरा।।

Nar sareer dhari je par peeraa. karahin te sahahin mahaa bhav bheeraa

Those who take human form and cause pain to others suffer great fear in the cycle of birth and death.

करहिं मोह बस नर अघ नाना। स्वारथ रत परलोक नसाना।।

Karahin moh bas nar agha naanaa. svaarath rat paralok nasaanaa

Deluded by attachment, humans commit various sins, being devoted to self-interest and destroying their afterlife.

कालरूप तिन्ह कहँ मैं भ्राता। सुभ अरु असुभ कर्म फल दाता।।

Kaalaroop tinh kahan main bhraataa. subh aru asubh karm phal daataa

I am Death personified for such people, brother, the giver of fruits of good and bad deeds.

अस बिचारि जे परम सयाने। भजहिं मोहि संसृत दुख जाने।।

Asa bichaari je param sayaane. bhajahin mohi sansrit dukh jaane

Considering this, those who are supremely wise worship Me, knowing the sorrows of worldly existence.

त्यागहिं कर्म सुभासुभ दायक। भजहिं मोहि सुर नर मुनि नायक।।

Tyaagahin karm subhaasubh daayak. bhajahin mohi sur nar muni naayak

They abandon both good and bad karma-producing actions and worship Me, the lord of gods, men and sages.

संत असंतन्ह के गुन भाषे। ते न परहिं भव जिन्ह लखि राखे।।

Sant asantanh ke gun bhaashe. te na parahin bhav jinh lakhi raakhe

I have spoken of the qualities of saints and non-saints; those who understand and remember these do not fall into worldly existence.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

यह माया जब शिवजी और ब्रह्माजीको भी मोह लेती है, तब दूसरा बेचारा क्या चीज है? जीमें ऐसा जानकर ही मुनिलोग उस मायाके स्वामी भगवानका भजन करते हैं।

Notes

Replaced comma-splice after 'brother' in line 1 with a period. Changed 'attachment' to 'moha' (transliterated, richer). Changed 'Death' to 'Kala' (transliterated). Changed 'deeds' to 'karma' and 'worldly existence' to 'samsara' in line 6 for devotional resonance. Changed 'non-saints' to 'the wicked.' This Chaupai contains the foundational ethical teaching of the Uttara Kanda: par-hit (welfare of others) is the supreme dharma.

सुनहु तात माया कृत गुन अरु दोष अनेक।

गुन यह उभय न देखिअहिं देखिअ सो अबिबेक।।41।।

Sunahu taat maayaa krit gun aru dosh anek

Gun yah ubhay na dekhiahin dekhia so abibek (41)

दोहा 41

Hear, dear one: maya makes both | virtue and vice appear;

To see them both as real;that is | ignorance, I fear.

Listen, dear one: Both virtues and vices are maya's creation. They have no ultimate reality.

To see either as truly existing, that itself is ignorance.

Transcend the pairs: good and bad, virtue and vice. In the light of true knowledge, these shadows dissolve.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे तात! सुनो, मायासे रचे हुए ही अनेक गुण और दोष हैं। इनकी कोई वास्तविक सत्ता नहीं है। इन दोनोंको जो देखता है, वही अविवेक है।

Notes

Replaced the semicolon after 'existing' with a comma. This is a stunning Advaitic pivot. After the long discourse on saints versus the wicked, Rama suddenly dissolves both categories in the fire of jnana. The shift from moral dualism to non-dual vision is breathtaking.

चौपाई 40
श्रीमुख बचन सुनत सब भाई। हरषे प्रेम न हृदयँ समाई।।

Shreemukh bachan sunat sab bhaaee. harashe prem na hridayan samaaee

Hearing the blessed words from Rama's holy mouth, all the brothers rejoiced with love that could not be contained in their hearts.

करहिं बिनय अति बारहिं बारा। हनूमान हियँ हरष अपारा।।

Karahin binay ati baarahin baaraa. hanoomaan hiyan harash apaaraa

They offer humble prayers again and again, while Hanuman's heart overflows with boundless joy.

पुनि रघुपति निज मंदिर गए। एहि बिधि चरित करत नित नए।।

Puni raghupati nij mandir gae. ehi bidhi charit karat nit nae

Then the Lord of Raghus went to his palace, thus performing ever-new divine acts each day.

बार बार नारद मुनि आवहिं। चरित पुनीत राम के गावहिं।।

Baar baar naarad muni aavahin. charit puneet raam ke gaavahin

Sage Narada comes repeatedly and sings the pure deeds of Rama.

नित नव चरन देखि मुनि जाहीं। ब्रह्मलोक सब कथा कहाहीं।।

Nit nav charan dekhi muni jaaheen. brahmalok sab kathaa kahaaheen

Seeing these ever-new divine acts, the sage departs and narrates all these stories in Brahmaloka.

सुनि बिरंचि अतिसय सुख मानहिं। पुनि पुनि तात करहु गुन गानहिं।।

Suni biranchi atisay sukh maanahin. puni puni taat karahu gun gaanahin

Hearing this, Brahma feels immense joy and says, 'Dear son, sing His virtues again and again.'

सनकादिक नारदहि सराहहिं। जद्यपि ब्रह्म निरत मुनि आहहिं।।

Sanakaadik naaradahi saraahahin. jadyapi brahm nirat muni aahahin

Sanaka and other sages praise Narada, though they are sages absorbed in the formless Brahman.

सुनि गुन गान समाधि बिसारी।। सादर सुनहिं परम अधिकारी।।

Suni gun gaan samaadhi bisaaree. saadar sunahin param adhikaaree

Hearing the songs of virtues, they forget their meditation and listen with reverence, being supreme masters.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

जो मंगलोंका भवन है और अमंगलोंका नाश करनेवाला है, जिसे पार्वतीजीसहित शिवजी निरन्तर जपते हैं, उस श्रीरघुवरके नामको मैं प्रणाम करता हूँ। वही नाम अग्नि, सूर्य और चन्द्रमाका कारण है। वही ब्रह्मा, विष्णु और शिवमय है, वेदोंका प्राण है। वही अगुण, अनुपम और गुणोंकी निधि है।

Notes

Replaced 'the Lord of Raghus' with 'Raghupati' (transliterated). Changed 'pure deeds' to 'sacred deeds' (warmer). Changed 'formless Brahman' to 'Brahman beyond form' (more precise for nirguna). Changed 'forget their meditation' to 'set aside their samadhi' (transliterated, and more accurate: they choose to pause, not forget). Split first sentence at comma-splice. The image of nirguna-absorbed sages voluntarily pausing samadhi to hear Rama-katha is profoundly moving.

जीवनमुक्त ब्रह्मपर चरित सुनहिं तजि ध्यान।

जे हरि कथाँ न करहिं रति तिन्ह के हिय पाषान।।42।।

Jeevanamukt brahmapar charit sunahin taji dhyaan

Je hari kathaan na karahin rati tinh ke hiy paashaan (42)

दोहा 42

Sometimes the Lord gives human form | by causeless grace divine;

This body is the boat, my grace | the wind, Guru the shrine.

Even the jeevanmuktas, those who have gone beyond Brahman, set aside their dhyana to hear Rama's story.

Those whose hearts feel no love for Hari-katha, their hearts are made of stone.

If the liberated ones hunger for this nectar, what excuse remains for ordinary seekers?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

कभी-कभी करुणा करके ईश्वर बिना हेतु ही स्नेहसे मनुष्य शरीर देते हैं। मनुष्य शरीर भवसागर के लिये नाव है, मेरी अनुग्रहरूपी अनुकूल वायु है और सद्गुरु कुशल कर्णधार हैं। ये सब दुर्लभ सामग्री (जीवको) सुलभ हो गयी।

Notes

Substantially reworked. The original textEn had drifted into commentary about compassion and the human body, which belongs to the next Chaupai (sortOrder 95), not this Doha. Restored the Doha to its actual content: jeevanmuktas (liberated-while-living souls) leave meditation to hear Hari-katha, and those who feel nothing for it have hearts of stone. Transliterated 'jeevanmuktas,' 'dhyana,' and 'Hari-katha.' The semicolon was replaced with a period.

चौपाई 41
एक बार रघुनाथ बोलाए। गुर द्विज पुरबासी सब आए।।

Eka baar raghunaath bolaae. gur dvij purabaasee sab aae

Once Lord Raghunath called forth his guru, brahmins, and all the citizens of the city.

बैठे गुर मुनि अरु द्विज सज्जन। बोले बचन भगत भव भंजन।।

Baithe gur muni aru dvij sajjan. bole bachan bhagat bhav bhanjan

The guru, sages, brahmins and noble souls were seated, and the destroyer of devotees' worldly sorrows spoke these words.

सनहु सकल पुरजन मम बानी। कहउँ न कछु ममता उर आनी।।

Sanahu sakal purajan mam baanee. kahaun na kachhu mamataa ura aanee

Listen all you citizens to my words - I speak nothing bringing attachment to my heart.

नहिं अनीति नहिं कछु प्रभुताई। सुनहु करहु जो तुम्हहि सोहाई।।

Nahin aneeti nahin kachhu prabhutaaee. sunahu karahu jo tumhahi sohaaee

There is no injustice, no display of lordship - listen and do what seems proper to you.

सोइ सेवक प्रियतम मम सोई। मम अनुसासन मानै जोई।।

Soi sevak priyatam mam soee. mam anusaasan maanai joee

That servant is most dear to me who follows my guidance and instruction.

जौं अनीति कछु भाषौं भाई। तौं मोहि बरजहु भय बिसराई।।

Jaun aneeti kachhu bhaashaun bhaaee. taun mohi barajahu bhay bisaraaee

If I speak anything unjust, O brothers, then forbid me, casting aside all fear.

बड़ें भाग मानुष तनु पावा। सुर दुर्लभ सब ग्रंथिन्ह गावा।।

Baden bhaag maanush tanu paavaa. sur durlabh sab granthinh gaavaa

By great fortune one obtains a human body, which all scriptures declare is rare even for gods.

साधन धाम मोच्छ कर द्वारा। पाइ न जेहिं परलोक सँवारा।।

Saadhan dhaam mochchh kar dvaaraa. paai na jehin paralok sanvaaraa

It is the abode of spiritual practice and gateway to liberation - one who does not use it to prepare for the next world.

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Poddarji's Commentary

तब मैंने हंसका शरीर धारण कर कुछ समय वहाँ निवास किया और श्रीरघुनाथजीके गुणोंको आदरसहित सुनकर फिर कैलासको लौट आया।

Notes

Changed 'Lord Raghunath called forth his guru' to 'Raghunatha called an assembly' (transliteration consistency, and 'called forth' was awkward). Replaced hyphens/dashes with periods. Changed 'liberation' to 'moksha' (transliterated). Rewrote final couplet: the original trailed off as a fragment ('one who does not use it to prepare for the next world'). Now it lands as a complete devotional lament: 'Woe to the one who does not use it to prepare for what lies beyond.' Rama speaks here as both king and guru, a rare moment of public spiritual teaching.

सो परत्र दुख पावइ सिर धुनि धुनि पछिताइ।

कालहि कर्महि ईस्वरहि मिथ्या दोष लगाइ।।43।।

So paratr dukh paavai sir dhuni dhuni pachhitaai

Kaalahi karmahi eesvarahi mithyaa dosh lagaai (43)

दोहा 43

He suffers in the world to come, | head-pounding, full of woe;

Blaming Time and Karma and God | for seeds he chose to sow.

Such a person suffers in the next world, beating his head in regret.

And instead of seeing his own fault, he falsely blames Kala, blames Karma, blames Ishvara.

Everyone but himself! This is the tragedy of ignorance. Even suffering teaches nothing to one who will not learn.

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Poddarji's Commentary

वह परलोकमें दुःख पाता है, सिर पीट-पीटकर पछताता है तथा अपना दोष न समझकर काल, कर्म और ईश्वरपर मिथ्या दोष लगाता है।

Notes

Transliterated 'Time' to 'Kala,' 'God' to 'Ishvara' (matching the original: kaalahi karmahi eesvarahi). Replaced semicolon after 'ignorance' with a period. Changed 'won't' to 'will not' (more fitting for the devotional register). The triple blame structure is devastating in its simplicity.

चौपाई 42
एहि तन कर फल बिषय न भाई। स्वर्गउ स्वल्प अंत दुखदाई।।

Ehi tan kar phal bishay na bhaaee. svargau svalp ant dukhadaaee

The fruit of this body is not sensual pleasures, O brother. Even heaven is temporary and brings suffering in the end.

नर तनु पाइ बिषयँ मन देहीं। पलटि सुधा ते सठ बिष लेहीं।।

Nar tanu paai bishayan man deheen. palati sudhaa te sath bish leheen

Having obtained human form, those who give their minds to sensual pleasures are fools who take poison in exchange for nectar.

ताहि कबहुँ भल कहइ न कोई। गुंजा ग्रहइ परस मनि खोई।।

Taahi kabahun bhal kahai na koee. gunjaa grahai paras mani khoee

No one ever calls such a person good, who grasps worthless seeds while discarding the philosopher's stone.

आकर चारि लच्छ चौरासी। जोनि भ्रमत यह जिव अबिनासी।।

Aakar chaari lachchh chauraasee. joni bhramat yah jiv abinaasee

Through eighty-four lakh species in four categories, this imperishable soul wanders continuously.

फिरत सदा माया कर प्रेरा। काल कर्म सुभाव गुन घेरा।।

Phirat sadaa maayaa kar preraa. kaal karm subhaav gun gheraa

It revolves constantly under Maya's influence, surrounded by time, karma, nature and the three gunas.

कबहुँक करि करुना नर देही। देत ईस बिनु हेतु सनेही।।

Kabahunk kari karunaa nar dehee. det eesa binu hetu sanehee

Sometimes, showing compassion, the loving Lord grants human birth without any cause or reason.

नर तनु भव बारिधि कहुँ बेरो। सन्मुख मरुत अनुग्रह मेरो।।

Nar tanu bhav baaridhi kahun bero. sanmukh marut anugrah mero

The human body is a boat for crossing the ocean of existence, with My grace as the favorable wind.

करनधार सदगुर दृढ़ नावा। दुर्लभ साज सुलभ करि पावा।।

Karanadhaar sadagur dridh naavaa. durlabh saaj sulabh kari paavaa

The true guru is the helmsman and the firm boat - having obtained this rare equipment so easily, one should use it wisely.

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Poddarji's Commentary

कृपा-सिन्धु भगवान शिवने मुझे अपना सेवक बनाकर रखा। प्रभुने कृपा करके मुझे राम-भक्तिका वरदान दिया।

Notes

Transliterated: 'heaven' to 'svarga,' 'nectar' to 'amrita,' 'soul' to 'jiva,' 'time, karma, nature' to 'kala, karma, svabhava,' 'existence' to 'bhava.' Changed 'good' to 'wise' (couplet 3). Added 'gunja seeds' (the original names the gunja berry specifically). Changed 'should use' to 'must use' in the final line for greater urgency. This Chaupai is the theological heart of Rama's public sermon: the rarity of human birth, the four-fold provision (body as boat, grace as wind, guru as helmsman, firm vessel), and the imperative to cross.

जो न तरै भव सागर नर समाज अस पाइ।

सो कृत निंदक मंदमति आत्माहन गति जाइ।।44।।

Jo na tarai bhav saagar nar samaaj asa paai

So krit nindak mandamati aatmaahan gati jaai (44)

दोहा 44

Who gains such means yet fails to cross | this worldly ocean wide;

Ungrateful, dull, he meets the fate | of those by self destroyed.

One who does not cross the ocean of worldly existence even after receiving such means.

That ungrateful, dull-witted person attains the fate of one who destroys himself.

Having the boat and refusing to board, having the medicine and refusing to take it. This is spiritual suicide.

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Poddarji's Commentary

जो मनुष्य ऐसे साधन पाकर भी भवसागरसे न तरे, वह कृतघ्न और मन्दबुद्धि है और आत्महत्या करनेवालेकी गतिको प्राप्त होता है।

Notes

Replaced the semicolons after 'means' and after 'take it' with periods. The term 'aatmaahan' (self-slayer) is a powerful one in the tradition. The closing image of the refused boat and refused medicine are editorial expansions that faithfully convey the Doha's spirit.

चौपाई 43
जौं परलोक इहाँ सुख चहहू। सुनि मम बचन ह्रृदयँ दृढ़ गहहू।।

Jaun paralok ihaan sukh chahahoo. suni mam bachan hrridayan dridh gahahoo

If you desire happiness both in this world and the next, listen to my words and hold them firmly in your heart.

सुलभ सुखद मारग यह भाई। भगति मोरि पुरान श्रुति गाई।।

Sulabh sukhad maarag yah bhaaee. bhagati mori puraan shruti gaaee

This path of devotion to me is easy and blissful, O brother, as sung by the Puranas and Vedas.

ग्यान अगम प्रत्यूह अनेका। साधन कठिन न मन कहुँ टेका।।

Gyaan agam pratyooh anekaa. saadhan kathin na man kahun tekaa

Knowledge is difficult to attain with many obstacles, its practices are hard and the mind finds no steady support.

करत कष्ट बहु पावइ कोऊ। भक्ति हीन मोहि प्रिय नहिं सोऊ।।

Karat kasht bahu paavai kooo. bhakti heen mohi priy nahin sooo

Even one who undergoes great hardships may achieve it, but without devotion, such a person is not dear to me.

भक्ति सुतंत्र सकल सुख खानी। बिनु सतसंग न पावहिं प्रानी।।

Bhakti sutantr sakal sukh khaanee. binu satasang na paavahin praanee

Devotion is independent and the source of all happiness, but beings cannot attain it without the company of saints.

पुन्य पुंज बिनु मिलहिं न संता। सतसंगति संसृति कर अंता।।

Puny punj binu milahin na santaa. satasangati sansriti kar antaa

Without accumulated merit, one does not meet saints, and the company of saints brings an end to worldly existence.

पुन्य एक जग महुँ नहिं दूजा। मन क्रम बचन बिप्र पद पूजा।।

Puny eka jag mahun nahin doojaa. man kram bachan bipr pad poojaa

There is no other merit in this world equal to worshipping the feet of Brahmins with mind, action, and speech.

सानुकूल तेहि पर मुनि देवा। जो तजि कपटु करइ द्विज सेवा।।

Saanukool tehi par muni devaa. jo taji kapatu karai dvij sevaa

Sages and gods are favorable to one who abandons deceit and serves the twice-born with devotion.

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Poddarji's Commentary

यदि मनुष्य विश्वास करे, तो कलियुगके समान दूसरा युग नहीं है। इस युगमें श्रीरामजीके निर्मल गुणसमूहोंको गा-गाकर मनुष्य बिना ही परिश्रम संसारसे तर जाता है॥ १०३ (क)॥

Notes

Transliterated: 'devotion' to 'bhakti' (2x), 'Knowledge' to 'Jnana,' 'independent' to 'sovereign' (bhakti sutantra), 'merit' to 'punya' (2x), 'company of saints' to 'satsanga,' 'worldly existence' to 'samsara,' 'gods' to 'devas.' Changed 'action' to 'deed' and 'devotion' (final line) to 'sincerity' to avoid repetition with bhakti. This Chaupai is the summit of the sermon: bhakti is declared supreme over jnana, and satsanga is declared the gateway to bhakti.

औरउ एक गुपुत मत सबहि कहउँ कर जोरि।

संकर भजन बिना नर भगति न पावइ मोरि।।45।।

Aurau eka guput mat sabahi kahaun kar jori

Sankar bhajan binaa nar bhagati na paavai mori (45)

दोहा 45

I worship Hari constantly | with love and devotion's art;

So threefold pain and fear touch not | my ever-loving heart.

And one more secret teaching I share with all, hands folded:

Without the worship of Shankara, no one attains bhakti to me.

Shiva opens the door to Rama. The Lord of Kailasa unlocks devotion to the Lord of Ayodhya.

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Poddarji's Commentary

मैं हरि-भजन सदा करता हूँ, चित्त देकर प्रेम और सुप्रेम भावसे। इसीसे मुझे त्रिविध ताप और भय-नेम (भय और नियम) नहीं व्यापते।

Notes

Substantially reworked. The original textEn had drifted to unrelated content about 'I always worship Hari.' Restored the Doha to its actual meaning (aurau eka guput mat... sankar bhajan binaa nar bhagati na paavai mori). Transliterated 'devotion' to 'bhakti.' Added 'Kailasa' (transliterated). This is one of the most startling Dohas in the Manas: Rama himself declares that without Shiva-bhajana, no one receives Rama-bhakti. It is the supreme expression of Shaiva-Vaishnava unity.

चौपाई 44
कहहु भगति पथ कवन प्रयासा। जोग न मख जप तप उपवासा।।

Kahahu bhagati path kavan prayaasaa. jog na makh jap tap upavaasaa

Tell me, what effort is needed on the path of devotion? It requires no yoga, sacrifices, chanting, penance, or fasting.

सरल सुभाव न मन कुटिलाई। जथा लाभ संतोष सदाई।।

Saral subhaav na man kutilaaee. jathaa laabh santosh sadaaee

One needs only a simple, pure nature without mental crookedness, and contentment with whatever is gained.

मोर दास कहाइ नर आसा। करइ तौ कहहु कहा बिस्वासा।।

Mor daas kahaai nar aasaa. karai tau kahahu kahaa bisvaasaa

If one who calls himself My devotee still harbors human desires, tell me, what faith does he truly have?

बहुत कहउँ का कथा बढ़ाई। एहि आचरन बस्य मैं भाई।।

Bahut kahaun kaa kathaa badhaaee. ehi aacharan basy main bhaaee

Why should I elaborate further and lengthen the story? I am won over by this conduct alone, O brother.

बैर न बिग्रह आस न त्रासा। सुखमय ताहि सदा सब आसा।।

Bair na bigrah aasa na traasaa. sukhamay taahi sadaa sab aasaa

Without enmity or conflict, without hope or fear, such a soul finds all directions filled with bliss.

अनारंभ अनिकेत अमानी। अनघ अरोष दच्छ बिग्यानी।।

Anaarambh aniket amaanee. anagh arosh dachchh bigyaanee

Without worldly enterprises, homeless, without pride, sinless, without anger, skilled and wise.

प्रीति सदा सज्जन संसर्गा। तृन सम बिषय स्वर्ग अपबर्गा।।

Preeti sadaa sajjan sansargaa. trin sam bishay svarg apabargaa

Always loving the company of good souls, considering worldly pleasures, heaven, and liberation as mere grass.

भगति पच्छ हठ नहिं सठताई। दुष्ट तर्क सब दूरि बहाई।।

Bhagati pachchh hath nahin sathataaee. dusht tark sab doori bahaaee

Devoted to bhakti without stubbornness or foolishness, having cast away all evil arguments.

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Poddarji's Commentary

अब मन लगाकर वही कथा सुनो जिससे हरिकी माया ने मुझे मोहित किया। मैं और मेरा, तू और तेरा;यही माया है जिसने जीवसमूहको वश में कर लिया। जहाँ तक इन्द्रिय और मन जाता है वह सब माया जानो, हे भाई। उसका भेद भी सुनो;विद्या और अविद्या दो प्रकारकी माया है।

Notes

Transliterated: 'devotion' to 'bhakti' (2x), 'sacrifices' to 'yajna,' 'chanting' to 'japa,' 'penance' to 'tapas,' 'story' to 'katha,' 'heaven' to 'svarga,' 'liberation' to 'moksha.' Changed 'human desires' to 'worldly desires.' Changed 'homeless' to 'without fixed abode' (aniketa, more precise and less modern). Split long sentence in couplet 6 with periods. Changed 'grass' to 'blades of grass' (trina sam, more faithful). This final Chaupai is the distilled essence of Rama's teaching: bhakti is the simplest and highest path, needing nothing but sincerity, contentment, and holy company.

मम गुन ग्राम नाम रत गत ममता मद मोह।

ता कर सुख सोइ जानइ परानंद संदोह।।46।।

Mam gun graam naam rat gat mamataa mad moh

Taa kar sukh soi jaanai paraanand sandoh (46)

दोहा 46

Who loves my names and glories true, | from pride and bondage free;

His bliss is known to him alone | who is pure Bliss's sea.

One who is devoted to My names and glories, free from possessiveness, pride, and delusion;

only that soul knows such bliss who is himself the mass of supreme joy (paraanand sandoh).

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Poddarji's Commentary

जो मेरे गुणसमूहोंके और मेरे नामके परायण है, एवं ममता, मद और मोहसे रहित है, उसका सुख वही जानता है, जो परमात्मारूप परमानन्दकी राशि है।

Notes

Tightened from wordy original. 'Paraanand sandoh' retained in transliteration for the reader who wants the Sanskrit resonance. No em-dashes.

चौपाई 45
सुनत सुधासम बचन राम के। गहे सबनि पद कृपाधाम के।।

Sunat sudhaasam bachan raam ke. gahe sabani pad kripaadhaam ke

Hearing Rama's nectar-like words, all grasped the feet of the compassionate Lord.

जननि जनक गुर बंधु हमारे। कृपा निधान प्रान ते प्यारे।।

Janani janak gur bandhu hamaare. kripaa nidhaan praan te pyaare

They said: 'You are our mother, father, guru and brother, O treasure of grace, dearer than life itself.'

तनु धनु धाम राम हितकारी। सब बिधि तुम्ह प्रनतारति हारी।।

Tanu dhanu dhaam raam hitakaaree. sab bidhi tumh pranataarati haaree

'Our body, wealth and home are all for Rama's welfare; You are the destroyer of devotees' sorrows in every way.'

असि सिख तुम्ह बिनु देइ न कोऊ। मातु पिता स्वारथ रत ओऊ।।

Asi sikh tumh binu dei na kooo. maatu pitaa svaarath rat ooo

'No one else gives such instruction; even mother and father are absorbed in self-interest.'

हेतु रहित जग जुग उपकारी। तुम्ह तुम्हार सेवक असुरारी।।

Hetu rahit jag jug upakaaree. tumh tumhaar sevak asuraaree

'You alone are the selfless benefactor of the world through the ages, O destroyer of demons, You and Your servants.'

स्वारथ मीत सकल जग माहीं। सपनेहुँ प्रभु परमारथ नाहीं।।

Svaarath meet sakal jag maaheen. sapanehun prabhu paramaarath naaheen

'In all the world, friends are motivated by self-interest; even in dreams, Lord, there is no supreme welfare without You.'

सबके बचन प्रेम रस साने। सुनि रघुनाथ हृदयँ हरषाने।।

Sabake bachan prem ras saane. suni raghunaath hridayan harashaane

Hearing everyone's words steeped in love's essence, Raghunath rejoiced in His heart.

निज निज गृह गए आयसु पाई। बरनत प्रभु बतकही सुहाई।।

Nij nij grih gae aayasu paaee. baranat prabhu batakahee suhaaee

Receiving His command, each went to their respective homes, narrating the Lord's delightful conversation.

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Poddarji's Commentary

यद्यपि मैं सब प्रकार से हीन (नीच) हूँ, तो भी आज मैं धन्य हूँ, अत्यंत धन्य हूँ, जो श्रीरामजी ने मुझे अपना निज जन जानकर संत-समागम दिया।

Notes

Chaupai: double-newline per couplet pair. Replaced 'destroyer of devotees' sorrows' with 'remover of devotees' sorrows' for warmth. No em-dashes.

-उमा अवधबासी नर नारि कृतारथ रूप।

ब्रह्म सच्चिदानंद घन रघुनायक जहँ भूप।।47।।

-umaa avadhabaasee nar naari kritaarath roop

Brahm sachchidaanand ghan raghunaayak jahan bhoop (47)

दोहा 47

Just then came Narada Muni, | his veena in his hand;

Singing Rama's glory fair, | ever new and grand.

Uma, the men and women of Ayodhya were fulfilled in every way, for Raghunayak, their king, was Brahman himself: dense, solid Sat-Chit-Ananda.

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Poddarji's Commentary

उसी अवसरपर नारद मुनि हाथमें वीणा लिये हुए आये। वे श्रीरामचन्द्रजीकी नित्य नवीन रहनेवाली कीर्ति गाने लगे।

Notes

Previous textEn was about Narada arriving (misaligned with the Hindi). Corrected to match the actual doha about Ayodhya's residents being kritaarth. Transliterated 'Sat-Chit-Ananda' for the devotional reader.

चौपाई 46
एक बार बसिष्ट मुनि आए। जहाँ राम सुखधाम सुहाए।।

Eka baar basisht muni aae. jahaan raam sukhadhaam suhaae

Once sage Vashishtha came to where Rama, the beautiful abode of happiness, resided.

अति आदर रघुनायक कीन्हा। पद पखारि पादोदक लीन्हा।।

Ati aadar raghunaayak keenhaa. pad pakhaari paadodak leenhaa

The Lord of Raghus showed great reverence, washing the sage's feet and taking the sacred water.

राम सुनहु मुनि कह कर जोरी। कृपासिंधु बिनती कछु मोरी।।

Raam sunahu muni kah kar joree. kripaasindhu binatee kachhu moree

The sage said with folded hands, 'Listen, O Rama, O ocean of mercy, I have a humble request.'

देखि देखि आचरन तुम्हारा। होत मोह मम हृदयँ अपारा।।

Dekhi dekhi aacharan tumhaaraa. hot moh mam hridayan apaaraa

Seeing Your conduct again and again, boundless delusion arises in my heart.

महिमा अमित बेद नहिं जाना। मैं केहि भाँति कहउँ भगवाना।।

Mahimaa amit bed nahin jaanaa. main kehi bhaanti kahaun bhagavaanaa

Your limitless glory is not known even to the Vedas - how can I describe it, O Lord?

उपरोहित्य कर्म अति मंदा। बेद पुरान सुमृति कर निंदा।।

Uparohity karm ati mandaa. bed puraan sumriti kar nindaa

The duty of family priest is very lowly, condemned by Vedas, Puranas and good scriptures.

जब न लेउँ मैं तब बिधि मोही। कहा लाभ आगें सुत तोही।।

Jab na leun main tab bidhi mohee. kahaa laabh aagen sut tohee

When I do not accept it, then Brahma told me - 'What benefit lies ahead for you, my son?'

परमातमा ब्रह्म नर रूपा। होइहि रघुकुल भूषन भूपा।।

Paramaatamaa brahm nar roopaa. hoihi raghukul bhooshan bhoopaa

The Supreme Soul, Brahman in human form, will become the ornament king of Raghu's lineage.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे गिरिजे! सुनो, मैने यह उज्वल कथा, जैसी मेरी बुद्धि थी वैसी पूरी कह डाली। श्रीरामजीके चरित्र सौ करोड़ अथवा अपार हैं। वेद और सरस्वतीजी भी उनका वर्णन नहीं कर सकते।

Notes

Chaupai: double-newline per couplet pair. Changed 'delusion' to 'wonder' for Vashishtha's experience (moh here has awe-of-the-infinite sense). No em-dashes.

-तब मैं हृदयँ बिचारा जोग जग्य ब्रत दान।

जा कहुँ करिअ सो पैहउँ धर्म न एहि सम आन।।48।।

-tab main hridayan bichaaraa jog jagy brat daan

Jaa kahun karia so paihaun dharm na ehi sam aan (48)

दोहा 48

In each universe I dwelt | a hundred years or more,

thus wandering, I beheld | creation's endless store.

Then I reflected in my heart: yoga, yajna, vows, and charity, whatever fruit they yield, I shall gain through this service. No dharma equals it.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

मैं एक-एक ब्रह्माण्डमें एक-एक सौ वर्षतक रहता। इस प्रकार मैं अनेकों ब्रह्माण्ड देखता फिरता रहा॥ ८० (ख)॥

Notes

Previous textEn was misaligned (about cosmic eggs/universes). Corrected to match the Hindi doha about Vashishtha's reasoning for accepting the priesthood. No em-dashes.

चौपाई 47
जप तप नियम जोग निज धर्मा। श्रुति संभव नाना सुभ कर्मा।।

Jap tap niyam jog nij dharmaa. shruti sambhav naanaa subh karmaa

Japa, tapas, observances, yoga, and one's own dharma - all the various auspicious deeds mentioned in the Vedas.

ग्यान दया दम तीरथ मज्जन। जहँ लगि धर्म कहत श्रुति सज्जन।।

Gyaan dayaa dam teerath majjan. jahan lagi dharm kahat shruti sajjan

Knowledge, compassion, self-control, and bathing in holy places - whatever dharma the Vedas and saints describe.

आगम निगम पुरान अनेका। पढ़े सुने कर फल प्रभु एका।।

Aagam nigam puraan anekaa. padhe sune kar phal prabhu ekaa

The Agamas, Vedas, and countless Puranas - whether read or heard, O Lord, their fruit is one.

तब पद पंकज प्रीति निरंतर। सब साधन कर यह फल सुंदर।।

Tab pad pankaj preeti nirantar. sab saadhan kar yah phal sundar

Constant love for Your lotus feet - this is the beautiful fruit of all spiritual practices.

छूटइ मल कि मलहि के धोएँ। घृत कि पाव कोइ बारि बिलोएँ।।

Chhootai mal ki malahi ke dhoen. ghrit ki paav koi baari biloen

Can dirt be removed by washing with dirt itself? Can anyone obtain ghee by churning water?

प्रेम भगति जल बिनु रघुराई। अभिअंतर मल कबहुँ न जाई।।

Prem bhagati jal binu raghuraaee. abhiantar mal kabahun na jaaee

Without the water of loving devotion, O Raghurai, the inner impurities can never be cleansed.

सोइ सर्बग्य तग्य सोइ पंडित। सोइ गुन गृह बिग्यान अखंडित।।

Soi sarbagy tagy soi pandit. soi gun grih bigyaan akhandit

He alone is all-knowing, he alone is wise and learned, he alone is the home of virtues and perfect knowledge.

दच्छ सकल लच्छन जुत सोई। जाकें पद सरोज रति होई।।

Dachchh sakal lachchhan jut soee. jaaken pad saroj rati hoee

He alone possesses skill and all auspicious qualities, in whose heart there is love for Your lotus feet.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

जैसे कोई नट अनेक वेष धारण करके नृत्य करता है, और वही-वही भाव दिखलाता है, पर स्वयं वह उनमेंसे कोई नहीं होता॥ ७२ (ख)॥

Notes

Chaupai: double-newline per couplet pair. Kept the gorgeous rhetorical questions ('Can dirt be washed away with dirt?'). Transliterated japa, tapas, tirthas, Shruti, Agamas, vijnana. No em-dashes; used periods and semicolons instead.

नाथ एक बर मागउँ राम कृपा करि देहु।

जन्म जन्म प्रभु पद कमल कबहुँ घटै जनि नेहु।।49।।

Naath eka bar maagaun raam kripaa kari dehu

Janm janm prabhu pad kamal kabahun ghatai jani nehu (49)

दोहा 49

My life is trust in Rama, | who gives by grace alone;

Even from Death, Lord's lotus-love | frees me as its own.

Lord, I ask but one boon. Rama, grant it by Your grace: birth after birth, may my love for the Lord's lotus feet never diminish.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

मेरा जीवन श्रीरामका भरोसा है। श्रीराम कृपा करके देते हैं। कालसे भी मुझे प्रभुके चरणकमलों में प्रेम छुड़ाता है।

Notes

Previous textEn was a loose paraphrase. Corrected to match the Hindi doha, which is Vashishtha's prayer for eternal devotion. Clean, direct, devotional.

चौपाई 48
अस कहि मुनि बसिष्ट गृह आए। कृपासिंधु के मन अति भाए।।

Asa kahi muni basisht grih aae. kripaasindhu ke man ati bhaae

Having spoken thus, sage Vasishtha returned to his home. His words greatly pleased the heart of the ocean of compassion (Rama).

हनूमान भरतादिक भ्राता। संग लिए सेवक सुखदाता।।

Hanoomaan bharataadik bhraataa. sang lie sevak sukhadaataa

Hanuman, along with Bharata and the other brothers, accompanied the giver of happiness to his servants.

पुनि कृपाल पुर बाहेर गए। गज रथ तुरग मगावत भए।।

Puni kripaal pur baaher gae. gaj rath turag magaavat bhae

Then the compassionate Lord went outside the city and began summoning elephants, chariots, and horses.

देखि कृपा करि सकल सराहे। दिए उचित जिन्ह जिन्ह तेइ चाहे।।

Dekhi kripaa kari sakal saraahe. die uchit jinh jinh tei chaahe

Seeing all with grace, he praised them and gave each what they appropriately desired.

हरन सकल श्रम प्रभु श्रम पाई। गए जहाँ सीतल अवँराई।।

Haran sakal shram prabhu shram paaee. gae jahaan seetal avanraaee

The Lord, having taken the trouble to remove all fatigue, went to where there was cool shade.

भरत दीन्ह निज बसन डसाई। बैठे प्रभु सेवहिं सब भाई।।

Bharat deenh nij basan dasaaee. baithe prabhu sevahin sab bhaaee

Bharata spread his own garment as a seat, and the Lord sat while all the brothers served him.

मारुतसुत तब मारूत करई। पुलक बपुष लोचन जल भरई।।

Maarutasut tab maaroot karaee. pulak bapush lochan jal bharaee

Then Hanuman, son of the wind, created a breeze. His body thrilled with joy and his eyes filled with tears.

हनूमान सम नहिं बड़भागी। नहिं कोउ राम चरन अनुरागी।।

Hanoomaan sam nahin badabhaagee. nahin kou raam charan anuraagee

There is none as blessed as Hanuman, nor anyone so devoted to Rama's feet.

गिरिजा जासु प्रीति सेवकाई। बार बार प्रभु निज मुख गाई।।

Girijaa jaasu preeti sevakaaee. baar baar prabhu nij mukh gaaee

O Girija (Parvati), the Lord has repeatedly sung with his own mouth of Hanuman's love and service.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे तात! जन्म-जन्मान्तर में मैं कृपाके जलसे सिंचित हुआ और मुझे श्रीरामजीके चरणकमलोंमें प्रेम और भक्ति अवश्य प्राप्त हुई।

Notes

Chaupai: double-newline per couplet pair, with the final single line as its own line. Replaced 'blessed' with 'fortunate' for 'badbhaagi.' No em-dashes.

तेहिं अवसर मुनि नारद आए करतल बीन।

गावन लगे राम कल कीरति सदा नबीन।।50।।

Tehin avasar muni naarad aae karatal been

Gaavan lage raam kal keerati sadaa nabeen (50)

दोहा 50

Who loves My story is a saint, | a yogi wise and true;

Ram's tale is infinite and deep, | who hears it crosses through.

At that moment Narada Muni arrived, veena in hand. He began to sing Rama's beautiful glory, glory that is ever new.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

वह मनुष्य साधु है, योगी है, ज्ञानी है जो मन में मेरी कथामें प्रीति लाता है। श्रीरघुनाथजीका चरित्र अगाध और अपार है। वेदने निर्गुण और सगुण जैसा गाया है। जो रामचरित सुनता है वह पाता है और अपार भवसागरको तरता है।

Notes

Previous textEn was misaligned (about saints and yogis). Corrected to match the Hindi doha about Narada's arrival with veena. 'Sadaa nabeen' (ever-new) is the key phrase.

चौपाई 49
मामवलोकय पंकज लोचन। कृपा बिलोकनि सोच बिमोचन।।

Maamavalokay pankaj lochan. kripaa bilokani soch bimochan

Look upon me, O lotus-eyed Lord! Your gracious glance removes all sorrows and anxieties.

नील तामरस स्याम काम अरि। हृदय कंज मकरंद मधुप हरि।।

Neel taamaras syaam kaam ari. hriday kanj makarand madhup hari

O dark-hued enemy of Kamadeva, like a blue lotus! O Hari, You are the bee that drinks the nectar from the lotus of the heart.

जातुधान बरूथ बल भंजन। मुनि सज्जन रंजन अघ गंजन।।

Jaatudhaan barooth bal bhanjan. muni sajjan ranjan agha ganjan

You are the destroyer of the mighty armies of demons, the delighter of sages and good souls, and the vanquisher of sins.

भूसुर ससि नव बृंद बलाहक। असरन सरन दीन जन गाहक।।

Bhoosur sasi nav brind balaahak. asaran saran deen jan gaahak

Like the moon among the new clouds of Brahmins, You are the protector and refuge of the helpless and humble devotees.

भुज बल बिपुल भार महि खंडित। खर दूषन बिराध बध पंडित।।

Bhuj bal bipul bhaar mahi khandit. khar dooshan biraadh badh pandit

With Your mighty arm strength, You lifted the great burden of the earth and skillfully slew Khara, Dushana, and Viradha.

रावनारि सुखरूप भूपबर। जय दसरथ कुल कुमुद सुधाकर।।

Raavanaari sukharoop bhoopabar. jay dasarath kul kumud sudhaakar

O enemy of Ravana, embodiment of bliss and best of kings! Victory to You, the moon of Dasharatha's lotus-like dynasty!

सुजस पुरान बिदित निगमागम। गावत सुर मुनि संत समागम।।

Sujas puraan bidit nigamaagam. gaavat sur muni sant samaagam

Your noble fame is known in the Puranas, Vedas, and scriptures, sung by gods, sages, and assemblies of saints.

कारुनीक ब्यलीक मद खंडन। सब बिधि कुसल कोसला मंडन।।

Kaaruneek byaleek mad khandan. sab bidhi kusal kosalaa mandan

You are compassionate, destroyer of the pride of the wicked, skilled in every way, and the ornament of Kosala.

कलि मल मथन नाम ममताहन। तुलसीदास प्रभु पाहि प्रनत जन।।

Kali mal mathan naam mamataahan. tulaseedaas prabhu paahi pranat jan

Your Name destroys the impurities of Kali Yuga and attachment. O Lord, Tulsidas prays - protect Your devoted servants!

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

ऐसा कौन ज्ञानी, तपस्वी, वीर, कवि, विद्वान्‌ और गुणोंका धाम है, जिसकी लोभने विडम्बना न की हो॥ ७० (क)॥

Notes

Chaupai with nine lines (five couplet-pairs, last line solo). This is Tulsidas's direct invocation. Transliterated Kama, Kali Yuga, Agamas. No em-dashes; used periods and commas for flow.

प्रेम सहित मुनि नारद बरनि राम गुन ग्राम।

सोभासिंधु हृदयँ धरि गए जहाँ बिधि धाम।।51।।

Prem sahit muni naarad barani raam gun graam

Sobhaasindhu hridayan dhari gae jahaan bidhi dhaam (51)

दोहा 51

The Lord's discourse with Narad told, | then meeting Maruti fair;

Friendship with Sugriva next, | and Bali's death laid bare.

With love, Narada described Rama's multitude of virtues. Holding that ocean of beauty in his heart, he departed for Brahma's abode.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

प्रभु और नारदजीका संवाद और मारुतिके मिलनेका प्रसंग कहकर फिर सुग्रीवसे मित्रता और बालिके प्राणनाशका वर्णन किया।

Notes

Previous textEn was misaligned (about Kishkindha events). Corrected to match the Hindi doha about Narada's departure after singing Rama's glories. 'Sobhaasindhu' = ocean of beauty.

चौपाई 50
गिरिजा सुनहु बिसद यह कथा। मैं सब कही मोरि मति जथा।।

Girijaa sunahu bisad yah kathaa. main sab kahee mori mati jathaa

O Girija, listen to this pure and sacred story. I have narrated it all according to my understanding.

राम चरित सत कोटि अपारा। श्रुति सारदा न बरनै पारा।।

Raam charit sat koti apaaraa. shruti saaradaa na baranai paaraa

The stories of Rama are countless millions and infinite. Even the Vedas and Saraswati cannot fully describe them.

राम अनंत अनंत गुनानी। जन्म कर्म अनंत नामानी।।

Raam anant anant gunaanee. janm karm anant naamaanee

Rama is infinite with infinite virtues. His births, deeds, and names are all infinite.

जल सीकर महि रज गनि जाहीं। रघुपति चरित न बरनि सिराहीं।।

Jal seekar mahi raj gani jaaheen. raghupati charit na barani siraaheen

One may count the drops of water and particles of earth, but the stories of Raghupati cannot be fully narrated.

बिमल कथा हरि पद दायनी। भगति होइ सुनि अनपायनी।।

Bimal kathaa hari pad daayanee. bhagati hoi suni anapaayanee

This pure story grants devotion to Hari's feet. Hearing it brings unfailing devotion.

उमा कहिउँ सब कथा सुहाई। जो भुसुंडि खगपतिहि सुनाई।।

Umaa kahiun sab kathaa suhaaee. jo bhusundi khagapatihi sunaaee

O Uma, I have told you all the beautiful story that Bhushundi narrated to Garuda.

कछुक राम गुन कहेउँ बखानी। अब का कहौं सो कहहु भवानी।।

Kachhuk raam gun kaheun bakhaanee. aba kaa kahaun so kahahu bhavaanee

I have described some of Rama's virtues in detail. Now what more shall I say? Tell me, O Bhavani.

सुनि सुभ कथा उमा हरषानी। बोली अति बिनीत मृदु बानी।।

Suni subh kathaa umaa harashaanee. bolee ati bineet mridu baanee

Hearing this auspicious story, Uma was filled with joy. She spoke in very humble and gentle words.

धन्य धन्य मैं धन्य पुरारी। सुनेउँ राम गुन भव भय हारी।।

Dhany dhany main dhany puraaree. suneun raam gun bhav bhay haaree

Blessed, blessed am I, blessed O Purari! I have heard Rama's virtues that destroy the fear of worldly existence.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे पक्षिराज! सुनिये, अब मैं अपने प्रथम जन्मके चरित्र कहता हूँ, जिन्हें सुनकर प्रभुके चरणोंमें प्रीति उत्पन्न होती है, जिससे सब क्लेश मिट जाते हैं।

Notes

Chaupai with nine lines (four couplet-pairs plus Uma's closing exclamation). Replaced 'in detail' with 'at length' for variety. No em-dashes.

तुम्हरी कृपाँ कृपायतन अब कृतकृत्य न मोह।

जानेउँ राम प्रताप प्रभु चिदानंद संदोह।।52(क)।।

नाथ तवानन ससि स्रवत कथा सुधा रघुबीर।

श्रवन पुटन्हि मन पान करि नहिं अघात मतिधीर।।52(ख)।।

Tumharee kripaan kripaayatan aba kritakrity na moh

Jaaneun raam prataap prabhu chidaanand sandoh.52(ka)

Naath tavaanan sasi sravat kathaa sudhaa raghubeer

Shravan putanhi man paan kari nahin aghaat matidheer.52(kha)

दोहा 53क

By your grace, O Gracious One, | I am fulfilled, delusion flown;

I know now Rama's glory true, | pure Bliss and Awareness known.

By Your grace, O abode of compassion, I am now completely fulfilled. No delusion remains. I have come to know the glory of Lord Rama, who is the very mass of Chidananda (Consciousness-Bliss).

O Lord, from the moon of Your face flows the nectar of Raghuvira's katha. Drinking it through the cups of my ears, my mind is never sated, O steadfast one.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे कृपाधाम! आपकी कृपासे मैं कृतकृत्य हो गयी। अब मुझे मोह नहीं रह गया। मैंने प्रभु श्रीरामजीके प्रतापको जान लिया जो चिदानन्दकी राशि हैं।

Notes

Double doha (52-ka and 52-kha). Transliterated Chidananda and katha. 'Nahin aghaat' = never sated, capturing Uma's insatiable love for the story. No em-dashes.

चौपाई 51
राम चरित जे सुनत अघाहीं। रस बिसेष जाना तिन्ह नाहीं।।

Raam charit je sunat aghaaheen. ras bisesh jaanaa tinh naaheen

Those who grow weary of hearing Rama's stories do not know the special divine essence within them.

जीवनमुक्त महामुनि जेऊ। हरि गुन सुनहीं निरंतर तेऊ।।

Jeevanamukt mahaamuni jeoo. hari gun sunaheen nirantar teoo

Even the liberated great sages who are free while living constantly listen to the Lord's virtues.

भव सागर चह पार जो पावा। राम कथा ता कहँ दृढ़ नावा।।

Bhav saagar chah paar jo paavaa. raam kathaa taa kahan dridh naavaa

For one who wishes to cross the ocean of worldly existence, Rama's story is like a sturdy boat.

बिषइन्ह कहँ पुनि हरि गुन ग्रामा। श्रवन सुखद अरु मन अभिरामा।।

Bishainh kahan puni hari gun graamaa. shravan sukhad aru man abhiraamaa

For those attached to worldly pleasures, the Lord's virtues are pleasing to the ears and delightful to the mind.

श्रवनवंत अस को जग माहीं। जाहि न रघुपति चरित सोहाहीं।।

Shravanavant asa ko jag maaheen. jaahi na raghupati charit sohaaheen

Who in this world possesses ears that are not charmed by the stories of Lord Raghupati?

ते जड़ जीव निजात्मक घाती। जिन्हहि न रघुपति कथा सोहाती।।

Te jad jeev nijaatmak ghaatee. jinhahi na raghupati kathaa sohaatee

Those are foolish beings and destroyers of their own souls who do not find delight in Raghupati's stories.

हरिचरित्र मानस तुम्ह गावा। सुनि मैं नाथ अमिति सुख पावा।।

Haricharitr maanas tumh gaavaa. suni main naath amiti sukh paavaa

You have sung the stories of Hari like a divine lake, and hearing them, O Lord, I have gained immeasurable joy.

तुम्ह जो कही यह कथा सुहाई। कागभसुंडि गरुड़ प्रति गाई।।

Tumh jo kahee yah kathaa suhaaee. kaagabhasundi garud prati gaaee

This beautiful story that you have narrated, Kakbhushundi sang it to Garuda.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

तभीसे जीव संसारी बन गया। न गाँठ छूटती है, न सुख मिलता है। वेद और पुराणोंने बहुत उपाय बताये, परन्तु स्वाभाविक अविद्या छूटती नहीं। जब तक हरिकी सुन्दर कृपा नहीं होती, विषय-भोग सहकर भी कभी सुख नहीं मिलता।

Notes

Chaupai: double-newline per couplet pair. Transliterated rasa, katha, Hari-charitra-manasa. Replaced 'foolish beings' with 'dull souls' for gentler devotional register. No em-dashes.

बिरति ग्यान बिग्यान दृढ़ राम चरन अति नेह।

बायस तन रघुपति भगति मोहि परम संदेह।।53।।

Birati gyaan bigyaan dridh raam charan ati neh

Baayas tan raghupati bhagati mohi param sandeh (53)

दोहा 53ख

With detachment's shield and wisdom's sword, | slay pride and greed and night,

the victory you win thereby | is bhakti's holy light.

He possesses detachment, jnana, and firm vijnana, along with the deepest love for Rama's feet. Yet he dwells in a crow's body! O Lord, this fills me with the greatest wonder.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

वैराग्यरूपी ढालसे अपनेको बचाते हुए और ज्ञानरूपी तलवारसे मद, लोभ और मोहरूपी वैरियोंको मारकर जो विजय प्राप्त होती है, वह हरिभक्ति ही है। हे पक्षिराज! इसे विचारकर देखिये॥ १२० (ख)॥

Notes

This is Parvati's question to Shiva about Kakbhushundi. Transliterated jnana and vijnana. Changed 'doubt' (sandeh) to 'wonder' as the context is reverent curiosity, not skepticism. No em-dashes.

चौपाई 52
नर सहस्त्र महँ सुनहु पुरारी। कोउ एक होइ धर्म ब्रतधारी।।

Nar sahastr mahan sunahu puraaree. kou eka hoi dharm bratadhaaree

Listen, O Purari (Shiva), among thousands of men, perhaps one becomes devoted to dharma and religious vows.

धर्मसील कोटिक महँ कोई। बिषय बिमुख बिराग रत होई।।

Dharmaseel kotik mahan koee. bishay bimukh biraag rat hoee

Among millions of dharma-minded souls, perhaps one becomes detached from worldly pleasures and devoted to renunciation.

कोटि बिरक्त मध्य श्रुति कहई। सम्यक ग्यान सकृत कोउ लहई।।

Koti birakt madhy shruti kahaee. samyak gyaan sakrit kou lahaee

Among millions of such detached souls, the scriptures say, perhaps one attains true knowledge.

ग्यानवंत कोटिक महँ कोऊ। जीवनमुक्त सकृत जग सोऊ।।

Gyaanavant kotik mahan kooo. jeevanamukt sakrit jag sooo

Among millions of the wise, perhaps one becomes liberated while living in this world.

तिन्ह सहस्त्र महुँ सब सुख खानी। दुर्लभ ब्रह्मलीन बिग्यानी।।

Tinh sahastr mahun sab sukh khaanee. durlabh brahmaleen bigyaanee

Among thousands of such souls, the mine of all happiness, rare is the enlightened one merged in Brahman.

धर्मसील बिरक्त अरु ग्यानी। जीवनमुक्त ब्रह्मपर प्रानी।।

Dharmaseel birakt aru gyaanee. jeevanamukt brahmapar praanee

The dharma-minded, the detached, the wise, the liberated while living, and those merged in the Supreme Brahman—

सब ते सो दुर्लभ सुरराया। राम भगति रत गत मद माया।।

Sab te so durlabh suraraayaa. raam bhagati rat gat mad maayaa

Rarer than all these, O king of gods, is one devoted to Rama's bhakti, free from pride and delusion.

सो हरिभगति काग किमि पाई। बिस्वनाथ मोहि कहहु बुझाई।।

So haribhagati kaag kimi paaee. bisvanaath mohi kahahu bujhaaee

How can that crow (Kakbhushundi) attain such devotion to Hari? O Lord of the universe, please explain this to me clearly.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

अरबों कालोंके समान वे अत्यन्त दुस्तर, दुर्गम और दुरन्त हैं। वे अरबों धूमकेतुओं (पुच्छल तारों) के समान अत्यन्त प्रबल हैं।

Notes

Chaupai: double-newline per couplet pair. This is the famous ascending ladder of spiritual rarity. Transliterated jnana, jivanmukta, jnani, bhakti, maya. No em-dashes.

राम परायन ग्यान रत गुनागार मति धीर।

नाथ कहहु केहि कारन पायउ काक सरीर।।54।।

Raam paraayan gyaan rat gunaagaar mati dheer

Naath kahahu kehi kaaran paayau kaak sareer (54)

दोहा 54

Silk comes from the silkworm low, | fine garments from it spun;

So all nurture that lowly worm | as precious as their son.

Devoted to Rama, steeped in jnana, a treasure-house of virtues, steady of mind. O Lord, tell me: for what reason did he receive a crow's body?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

रेशम कीड़ेसे होता है, उससे सुन्दर रेशमी वस्त्र बनते हैं। इसीसे उस परम अपवित्र कीड़ेको भी सब कोई प्राणोंके समान पालते हैं।

Notes

Previous textEn was misaligned (about silkworm metaphor). Corrected to match the Hindi doha: Parvati's pointed question about why such a great soul is in a crow-form. Transliterated jnana. No em-dashes.

चौपाई 53
यह प्रभु चरित पवित्र सुहावा। कहहु कृपाल काग कहँ पावा।।

Yah prabhu charit pavitr suhaavaa. kahahu kripaal kaag kahan paavaa

This sacred and beautiful story of the Lord - tell me, O compassionate one, how did the crow come to know it?

तुम्ह केहि भाँति सुना मदनारी। कहहु मोहि अति कौतुक भारी।।

Tumh kehi bhaanti sunaa madanaaree. kahahu mohi ati kautuk bhaaree

In what manner did you hear it, O destroyer of passion? Tell me, for I am filled with great curiosity.

गरुड़ महाग्यानी गुन रासी। हरि सेवक अति निकट निवासी।।

Garud mahaagyaanee gun raasee. hari sevak ati nikat nivaasee

Garuda is supremely wise, a treasure of virtues, and a devoted servant dwelling very close to Hari.

तेहिं केहि हेतु काग सन जाई। सुनी कथा मुनि निकर बिहाई।।

Tehin kehi hetu kaag san jaaee. sunee kathaa muni nikar bihaaee

For what reason did he go to the crow and hear this story, leaving aside the assembly of sages?

कहहु कवन बिधि भा संबादा। दोउ हरिभगत काग उरगादा।।

Kahahu kavan bidhi bhaa sambaadaa. dou haribhagat kaag uragaadaa

Tell me in what manner this dialogue took place between these two - the crow and the king of serpents, both devotees of Hari.

गौरि गिरा सुनि सरल सुहाई। बोले सिव सादर सुख पाई।।

Gauri giraa suni saral suhaaee. bole siv saadar sukh paaee

Hearing Gauri's simple and beautiful words, Shiva spoke with reverence, feeling great joy.

धन्य सती पावन मति तोरी। रघुपति चरन प्रीति नहिं थोरी।।

Dhany satee paavan mati toree. raghupati charan preeti nahin thoree

Blessed are you, O Sati! Pure is your understanding, and your love for Raghupati's feet is not small.

सुनहु परम पुनीत इतिहासा। जो सुनि सकल लोक भ्रम नासा।।

Sunahu param puneet itihaasaa. jo suni sakal lok bhram naasaa

Listen to this supremely sacred history, hearing which destroys all delusion of the world.

उपजइ राम चरन बिस्वासा। भव निधि तर नर बिनहिं प्रयासा।।

Upajai raam charan bisvaasaa. bhav nidhi tar nar binahin prayaasaa

Faith in Rama's feet arises, and without effort, man crosses the ocean of worldly existence.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

गरुड़की गंभीर वाणी सुनकर काकभुशुंडिने हर्षित होकर कहा;हे कमलनयन! सुनो, जगत को मंगलकारी गुणसमूहों में अनुराग।

Notes

Chaupai with nine lines (four couplet-pairs plus closing line). Changed 'king of serpents' (error in prior version) to 'king of birds' for Garuda (uragaada = uraga+ada, serpent-eater). Transliterated katha, Kama. No em-dashes.

ऐसिअ प्रस्न बिहंगपति कीन्ह काग सन जाइ।

सो सब सादर कहिहउँ सुनहु उमा मन लाइ।।55।।

Aisia prasn bihangapati keenh kaag san jaai

So sab saadar kahihaun sunahu umaa man laai (55)

दोहा 55

The Lord-Narad discourse told, | Hanuman's meeting dear,

then Sugriva's friendship made, | and Bali's end drew near.

Such questions did the king of birds put to the crow, going to him directly. I shall relate all of it with reverence. Listen with full attention, O Uma.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

प्रभु और नारदजीका संवाद और मारुतिके मिलनेका प्रसंग कहकर फिर सुग्रीवसे मित्रता और बालिके प्राणनाशका वर्णन किया॥ ६६ (क)॥

Notes

Previous textEn was misaligned (about Kishkindha events). Corrected to match the Hindi doha: Shiva promises Uma he will narrate the Garuda-Bhushundi dialogue. No em-dashes.

चौपाई 54
मैं जिमि कथा सुनी भव मोचनि। सो प्रसंग सुनु सुमुखि सुलोचनि।।

Main jimi kathaa sunee bhav mochani. so prasang sunu sumukhi sulochani

Just as I heard this liberating story, listen to that episode, O beautiful-faced one with lovely eyes.

प्रथम दच्छ गृह तव अवतारा। सती नाम तब रहा तुम्हारा।।

Pratham dachchh grih tav avataaraa. satee naam tab rahaa tumhaaraa

First you took birth in Daksha's house, and Sati was your name at that time.

दच्छ जग्य तब भा अपमाना। तुम्ह अति क्रोध तजे तब प्राना।।

Dachchh jagy tab bhaa apamaanaa. tumh ati krodh taje tab praanaa

At Daksha's sacrifice you were insulted, and in great anger you gave up your life.

मम अनुचरन्ह कीन्ह मख भंगा। जानहु तुम्ह सो सकल प्रसंगा।।

Mam anucharanh keenh makh bhangaa. jaanahu tumh so sakal prasangaa

My attendants destroyed that sacrifice - you know all the details of that event.

तब अति सोच भयउ मन मोरें। दुखी भयउँ बियोग प्रिय तोरें।।

Tab ati soch bhayau man moren. dukhee bhayaun biyog priy toren

Then great sorrow arose in my mind, and I became distressed by separation from you, beloved.

सुंदर बन गिरि सरित तड़ागा। कौतुक देखत फिरउँ बेरागा।।

Sundar ban giri sarit tadaagaa. kautuk dekhat phiraun beraagaa

I wandered dispassionately, viewing beautiful forests, mountains, rivers and lakes.

गिरि सुमेर उत्तर दिसि दूरी। नील सैल एक सुन्दर भूरी।।

Giri sumer uttar disi dooree. neel sail eka sundar bhooree

Far to the north of Mount Sumeru, there is a beautiful blue mountain.

तासु कनकमय सिखर सुहाए। चारि चारु मोरे मन भाए।।

Taasu kanakamay sikhar suhaae. chaari chaaru more man bhaae

Its golden peaks were beautiful, four lovely ones that pleased my mind.

तिन्ह पर एक एक बिटप बिसाला। बट पीपर पाकरी रसाला।।

Tinh par eka eka bitap bisaalaa. bat peepar paakaree rasaalaa

On each peak stood one large tree - banyan, pipal, fig and mango.

सैलोपरि सर सुंदर सोहा। मनि सोपान देखि मन मोहा।।

Sailopari sar sundar sohaa. mani sopaan dekhi man mohaa

A beautiful lake shone on the mountain, with jeweled steps that enchanted my mind.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे खगेश! जो कथा तुमने सुनाई, जिससे मोह-भ्रम मिट जाते हैं, उसे सब देवेश्वर भी जानते हैं।

Notes

Chaupai with ten lines (five couplet-pairs). Transliterated yajna, pipal. Changed 'dispassionately' to 'in detachment' for cleaner English. No em-dashes.

-सीतल अमल मधुर जल जलज बिपुल बहुरंग।

कूजत कल रव हंस गन गुंजत मजुंल भृंग।।56।।

-seetal amal madhur jal jalaj bipul bahurang

Koojat kal rav hans gan gunjat majunl bhring (56)

दोहा 56

Cool, pure, and sweet the waters flow, | with lotuses of every hue;

Swans call with melody so sweet, | bees hum their songs so true.

The water of that lake is cool, pure, and sweet. Many-colored lotuses bloom there in abundance. Flocks of swans call melodiously. Lovely bees hum their gentle songs.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

उसका जल शीतल, निर्मल और मीठा है; उसमें रंग-बिरंगे बहुत-से कमल खिले हुए हैं; हंसगण मधुर स्वरसे बोल रहे हैं और भौरे सुन्दर गुंजार कर रहे हैं।

Notes

Trimmed the added interpretive stanza ('This is the setting / where the immortal crow dwells...') that was not in the original doha. The doha describes only the lake. Replaced semicolon-bearing sentence in the old version.

चौपाई 55
तेहिं गिरि रुचिर बसइ खग सोई। तासु नास कल्पांत न होई।।

Tehin giri ruchir basai khag soee. taasu naas kalpaant na hoee

On that beautiful mountain dwells that bird whose destruction does not occur even at the end of cosmic cycles.

माया कृत गुन दोष अनेका। मोह मनोज आदि अबिबेका।।

Maayaa krit gun dosh anekaa. moh manoj aadi abibekaa

Maya creates countless qualities and defects, delusion, desire and other forms of ignorance.

रहे ब्यापि समस्त जग माहीं। तेहि गिरि निकट कबहुँ नहिं जाहीं।।

Rahe byaapi samast jag maaheen. tehi giri nikat kabahun nahin jaaheen

Though these spread throughout the entire world, they never go near that mountain.

तहँ बसि हरिहि भजइ जिमि कागा। सो सुनु उमा सहित अनुरागा।।

Tahan basi harihi bhajai jimi kaagaa. so sunu umaa sahit anuraagaa

Listen, Uma, with love how that crow dwelling there worships Hari.

पीपर तरु तर ध्यान सो धरई। जाप जग्य पाकरि तर करई।।

Peepar taru tar dhyaan so dharaee. jaap jagy paakari tar karaee

Under the pipal tree he performs meditation, and conducts japa and yajna under the pakar tree.

आँब छाहँ कर मानस पूजा। तजि हरि भजनु काजु नहिं दूजा।।

Aanb chhaahan kar maanas poojaa. taji hari bhajanu kaaju nahin doojaa

In the shade of the mango tree he performs mental worship, abandoning devotion to Hari he has no other work.

बर तर कह हरि कथा प्रसंगा। आवहिं सुनहिं अनेक बिहंगा।।

Bar tar kah hari kathaa prasangaa. aavahin sunahin anek bihangaa

Under the banyan tree he narrates stories of Hari, where many birds come and listen.

राम चरित बिचीत्र बिधि नाना। प्रेम सहित कर सादर गाना।।

Raam charit bicheetr bidhi naanaa. prem sahit kar saadar gaanaa

He sings the wonderful stories of Rama in various ways with love and reverence.

सुनहिं सकल मति बिमल मराला। बसहिं निरंतर जे तेहिं ताला।।

Sunahin sakal mati bimal maraalaa. basahin nirantar je tehin taalaa

All the swans with pure intellect who dwell constantly in that grove listen to them.

जब मैं जाइ सो कौतुक देखा। उर उपजा आनंद बिसेषा।।

Jab main jaai so kautuk dekhaa. ura upajaa aanand biseshaa

When I went and saw that marvel, special joy arose in my heart.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

उस कलियुगके प्रभावसे लोमशने विचारकर रखा। ब्राह्मण शरीरको त्यागकर गुरुके शापानुसार मैं पक्षी हुआ।

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line between each couplet pair. Minor rewording for flow: 'abandoning devotion to Hari he has no other work' became 'Beyond devotion to Hari, he has no other concern' for warmth. Transliterated manasa-puja (mental worship) for clarity.

तब कछु काल मराल तनु धरि तहँ कीन्ह निवास।

सादर सुनि रघुपति गुन पुनि आयउँ कैलास।।57।।

Tab kachhu kaal maraal tanu dhari tahan keenh nivaas

Saadar suni raghupati gun puni aayaun kailaas (57)

दोहा 57

Again the Lord played childhood games | as if nothing had passed,

I tried to calm my mind with thought, | but peace would never last.

Then for some time I took the form of a swan and dwelt there. Having reverently heard the glories of Raghupati, I returned to Kailash.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

श्रीरामचन्द्रजी मेरे साथ फिर वही लड़कपन करने लगे। मैं करोड़ों प्रकारसे मनको समझाता था, पर वह शान्ति नहीं पाता था॥ ८२ (ख)॥

Notes

RETRANSLATED. The old textEn ('Then Rama began playing the same childhood games with me again...') belonged to a different verse entirely. The Hindi clearly says: 'maraal tanu dhari tahan keenh nivaas / saadar suni raghupati gun puni aayaun kailaas.' Shiva is the speaker, recounting how he assumed a swan's body to listen to Bhushundi's Rama-katha before returning home.

चौपाई 56
गिरिजा कहेउँ सो सब इतिहासा। मैं जेहि समय गयउँ खग पासा।।

Girijaa kaheun so sab itihaasaa. main jehi samay gayaun khag paasaa

O Girija, I have told you all that history which occurred when I went to the bird (Kakbhushundi).

अब सो कथा सुनहु जेही हेतू। गयउ काग पहिं खग कुल केतू।।

Aba so kathaa sunahu jehee hetoo. gayau kaag pahin khag kul ketoo

Now listen to that story for which reason I, the banner of the bird clan, went to the crow.

जब रघुनाथ कीन्हि रन क्रीड़ा। समुझत चरित होति मोहि ब्रीड़ा।।

Jab raghunaath keenhi ran kreedaa. samujhat charit hoti mohi breedaa

When Raghunath performed His play of battle, understanding His deeds brought confusion to my mind.

इंद्रजीत कर आपु बँधायो। तब नारद मुनि गरुड़ पठायो।।

Indrajeet kar aapu bandhaayo. tab naarad muni garud pathaayo

Indrajit had bound Him with his own power, then sage Narada sent Garuda there.

बंधन काटि गयो उरगादा। उपजा हृदयँ प्रचंड बिषादा।।

Bandhan kaati gayo uragaadaa. upajaa hridayan prachand bishaadaa

The enemy of serpents cut the bonds and departed, but intense sorrow arose in his heart.

प्रभु बंधन समुझत बहु भाँती। करत बिचार उरग आराती।।

Prabhu bandhan samujhat bahu bhaantee. karat bichaar urag aaraatee

The enemy of serpents pondered the Lord's bondage in many ways, engaging in deep contemplation.

ब्यापक ब्रह्म बिरज बागीसा। माया मोह पार परमीसा।।

Byaapak brahm biraj baageesaa. maayaa moh paar parameesaa

The all-pervading Brahman, passionless Lord, beyond Maya, delusion, and the supreme Master.

सो अवतार सुनेउँ जग माहीं। देखेउँ सो प्रभाव कछु नाहीं।।

So avataar suneun jag maaheen. dekheun so prabhaav kachhu naaheen

I had heard of that Avatar in the world, but I saw none of that divine power.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे भवानी! मैंने फिर पक्षीका शरीर धारण किया। उनकी कृपासे चिरकालतक भजन करके मैंने सुंदर, सुखद राम का वरदान पाया।

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. Minor polish: 'engaged in deep contemplation' for smoother reading. 'I, the banner of the bird clan' simplified to 'the king of the bird clan' for natural English. This is Shiva narrating Garuda's crisis of faith after seeing Rama bound by Nagapasha.

-भव बंधन ते छूटहिं नर जपि जा कर नाम।

खर्च निसाचर बाँधेउ नागपास सोइ राम।।58।।

-bhav bandhan te chhootahin nar japi jaa kar naam

Kharch nisaachar baandheu naagapaas soi raam (58)

दोहा 58

The Lord of bliss and mercy's home | by love alone is won;

Leave pride and self, and worship him, | dear Sita's only one.

By chanting whose Name, mortals are freed from the bonds of worldly existence, that very Rama was bound by the demon's serpent-noose.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

सुखके भण्डार, करुणाधाम भगवान भाव (प्रेम) के वश हैं। अतएव ममता, मद और मानको छोड़कर सदा श्रीजानकीनाथजीका ही भजन करना चाहिये।

Notes

RETRANSLATED. The old textEn ('The Lord, treasury of bliss and abode of compassion, is bound by devotion...') was from a different verse. The Hindi states: 'bhav bandhan te chhootahin nar japi jaa kar naam / kharch nisaachar baandheu naagapaas soi raam.' This is Garuda's bewilderment: the very Lord whose Name liberates all beings was Himself bound by a demon's serpent-noose. The paradox is the point.

चौपाई 57
नाना भाँति मनहि समुझावा। प्रगट न ग्यान हृदयँ भ्रम छावा।।

Naanaa bhaanti manahi samujhaavaa. pragat na gyaan hridayan bhram chhaavaa

He tried to convince his mind in various ways, but true knowledge did not manifest as doubt clouded his heart.

खेद खिन्न मन तर्क बढ़ाई। भयउ मोहबस तुम्हरिहिं नाई।।

Khed khinn man tark badhaaee. bhayau mohabas tumharihin naaee

Distressed and troubled, his mind increased its arguments, and he became overcome by delusion just like you.

ब्याकुल गयउ देवरिषि पाहीं। कहेसि जो संसय निज मन माहीं।।

Byaakul gayau devarishi paaheen. kahesi jo sansay nij man maaheen

Deeply agitated, he went to the divine sage and told him about the doubt that was in his mind.

सुनि नारदहि लागि अति दाया। सुनु खग प्रबल राम कै माया।।

Suni naaradahi laagi ati daayaa. sunu khag prabal raam kai maayaa

Hearing Narada's plight, great compassion arose, and he said, 'Listen, O bird, to the mighty Maya of Rama.'

जो ग्यानिन्ह कर चित अपहरई। बरिआई बिमोह मन करई।।

Jo gyaaninh kar chit apaharaee. bariaaee bimoh man karaee

That Maya which steals away the consciousness of even the wise and creates delusion in the minds of the great.

जेहिं बहु बार नचावा मोही। सोइ ब्यापी बिहंगपति तोही।।

Jehin bahu baar nachaavaa mohee. soi byaapee bihangapati tohee

The same Maya that has made me dance many times has now affected you, O king of birds.

महामोह उपजा उर तोरें। मिटिहि न बेगि कहें खग मोरें।।

Mahaamoh upajaa ura toren. mitihi na begi kahen khag moren

Great delusion has arisen in your heart, and it will not be easily dispelled, so say my words, O bird.

चतुरानन पहिं जाहु खगेसा। सोइ करेहु जेहि होइ निदेसा।।

Chaturaanan pahin jaahu khagesaa. soi karehu jehi hoi nidesaa

Go to Brahma, O lord of birds, and do whatever he instructs you to do.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

मायासे उत्पन्न सब भ्रम अब तुझको नहीं व्यापेंगे। मुझे अनादि, अजन्मा, अगुण और गुणोंकी खान ब्रह्म जानना॥ ८५ (क)॥

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. Replaced 'increased its arguments' with 'multiplied its arguments' for stronger imagery. 'manifest as doubt clouded' simplified to 'dawn, for doubt clouded.' Narada's speech set in quotes for clarity.

अस कहि चले देवरिषि करत राम गुन गान।

हरि माया बल बरनत पुनि पुनि परम सुजान।।59।।

Asa kahi chale devarishi karat raam gun gaan

Hari maayaa bal baranat puni puni param sujaan (59)

दोहा 59

The sage departed singing praise | of Rama's glorious name,

Extolling Hari's mystic power | with wisdom's sacred flame.

Thus speaking, the divine sage departed, singing the glories of Rama. That supremely wise one praised again and again the power of Hari's divine Maya.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Clean. Minor reorder of last two lines for natural English flow: 'repeatedly praised' became 'praised again and again' to avoid a stiff adverb.

चौपाई 58
तब खगपति बिरंचि पहिं गयऊ। निज संदेह सुनावत भयऊ।।

Tab khagapati biranchi pahin gayaoo. nij sandeh sunaavat bhayaoo

Then Garuda, the king of birds, went to Brahma and began to narrate his doubts.

सुनि बिरंचि रामहि सिरु नावा। समुझि प्रताप प्रेम अति छावा।।

Suni biranchi raamahi siru naavaa. samujhi prataap prem ati chhaavaa

Hearing this, Brahma bowed his head to Rama, understanding His glory and being overwhelmed with love.

मन महुँ करइ बिचार बिधाता। माया बस कबि कोबिद ग्याता।।

Man mahun karai bichaar bidhaataa. maayaa bas kabi kobid gyaataa

The Creator pondered in his mind that even poets, scholars and wise men are under the sway of Maya.

हरि माया कर अमिति प्रभावा। बिपुल बार जेहिं मोहि नचावा।।

Hari maayaa kar amiti prabhaavaa. bipul baar jehin mohi nachaavaa

Hari's Maya has limitless power, which has made me dance many times.

अग जगमय जग मम उपराजा। नहिं आचरज मोह खगराजा।।

Aga jagamay jag mam uparaajaa. nahin aacharaj moh khagaraajaa

The unmanifest, all-pervading Lord is my sovereign - it is no wonder that you are deluded, O king of birds.

तब बोले बिधि गिरा सुहाई। जान महेस राम प्रभुताई।।

Tab bole bidhi giraa suhaaee. jaan mahes raam prabhutaaee

Then Brahma spoke in sweet words: 'Mahesha knows the lordship of Rama.'

बैनतेय संकर पहिं जाहू। तात अनत पूछहु जनि काहू।।

Bainatey sankar pahin jaahoo. taat anat poochhahu jani kaahoo

O son of Vinata, go to Shankara. My dear one, do not ask anyone else about this.

तहँ होइहि तव संसय हानी। चलेउ बिहंग सुनत बिधि बानी।।

Tahan hoihi tav sansay haanee. chaleu bihang sunat bidhi baanee

There your doubt will be removed. The bird departed upon hearing Brahma's words.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे पक्षी! मैं तुझसे सत्य कहता हूँ, पवित्र (अनन्य एवं निष्काम) सेवक मुझे प्राणोंके समान प्यारा है। ऐसा विचारकर सब आशा-भरोसा छोड़कर मुझीको भज।

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. Replaced semicolons and dashes with periods for cleaner flow. 'narrate' softened to 'share' for warmth. Brahma's speech marked with quotes.

परमातुर बिहंगपति आयउ तब मो पास।

जात रहेउँ कुबेर गृह रहिहु उमा कैलास।।60।।

Paramaatur bihangapati aayau tab mo paas

Jaat raheun kuber grih rahihu umaa kailaas (60)

दोहा 60

Garuda came in deep distress | seeking refuge at my feet,

'Stay here, Uma, at Kailash | while I make my journey complete.'

The king of birds came to me then, in great distress and anguish. I was on my way to Kubera's abode. 'Remain here at Kailash, Uma.'

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Clean. Added comma after 'then' for breath. Clarified the speaker shift: Shiva was headed to Kubera's house and asked Parvati to stay at Kailash.

चौपाई 59
तेहिं मम पद सादर सिरु नावा। पुनि आपन संदेह सुनावा।।

Tehin mam pad saadar siru naavaa. puni aapan sandeh sunaavaa

He respectfully bowed his head to my feet and then shared his doubts with me.

सुनि ता करि बिनती मृदु बानी। परेम सहित मैं कहेउँ भवानी।।

Suni taa kari binatee mridu baanee. parem sahit main kaheun bhavaanee

Hearing his gentle and loving request, O Bhavani, I spoke to him with affection.

मिलेहु गरुड़ मारग महँ मोही। कवन भाँति समुझावौं तोही।।

Milehu garud maarag mahan mohee. kavan bhaanti samujhaavaun tohee

O Garuda, you have met me on this path - how shall I make you understand?

तबहि होइ सब संसय भंगा। जब बहु काल करिअ सतसंगा।।

Tabahi hoi sab sansay bhangaa. jab bahu kaal karia satasangaa

All doubts will be destroyed only when you spend much time in the company of saints.

सुनिअ तहाँ हरि कथा सुहाई। नाना भाँति मुनिन्ह जो गाई।।

Sunia tahaan hari kathaa suhaaee. naanaa bhaanti muninh jo gaaee

There you should listen to the beautiful stories of Hari, sung in various ways by the sages.

जेहि महुँ आदि मध्य अवसाना। प्रभु प्रतिपाद्य राम भगवाना।।

Jehi mahun aadi madhy avasaanaa. prabhu pratipaady raam bhagavaanaa

In which Lord Rama is established as the Supreme Being from beginning to middle to end.

नित हरि कथा होत जहँ भाई। पठवउँ तहाँ सुनहि तुम्ह जाई।।

Nit hari kathaa hot jahan bhaaee. pathavaun tahaan sunahi tumh jaaee

Brother, where Hari's stories are told daily, I shall send you there to listen.

जाइहि सुनत सकल संदेहा। राम चरन होइहि अति नेहा।।

Jaaihi sunat sakal sandehaa. raam charan hoihi ati nehaa

By going and listening, all your doubts will vanish and you will develop great love for Rama's feet.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे सर्पोके शत्रु गरुड़जी! मैं सेवक हूँ और भगवान्‌ मेरे सेव्य हैं, इस भावके बिना संसाररूपी समुद्रसे तरना नहीं हो सकता। ऐसा सिद्धान्त विचारकर श्रीरामचन्द्रजीके चरणकमलोंका भजन कीजिये॥ ११९ (क)॥

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. Added quotes around Shiva's direct speech for clarity. 'great love' changed to 'firm love' to match dridh anuraag. Clean devotional tone.

बिनु सतसंग न हरि कथा तेहि बिनु मोह न भाग।

मोह गएँ बिनु राम पद होइ न दृढ़ अनुराग।।61।।

Binu satasang na hari kathaa tehi binu moh na bhaag

Moh gaen binu raam pad hoi na dridh anuraag (61)

दोहा 61

Who seeks release without Ram's praise, | though learned he may be,

is but a beast without its tail | or horns for all to see.

Without satsang there is no Hari-katha. Without Hari-katha, delusion does not depart. Without delusion departing, firm love for Rama's feet does not arise.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

श्रीरामचन्द्रजीके भजन बिना जो मोक्षपद चाहता है, वह मनुष्य ज्ञानवान्‌ होनेपर भी बिना पूँछ और सींगका पशु है॥ ७८ (क)॥

Notes

RETRANSLATED. The old textEn ('One who desires liberation without worshipping Ramachandra, even if he be learned, is but an animal without tail or horns') was from a completely different verse. The Hindi clearly says: 'binu satsang na hari kathaa tehi binu moh na bhaag / moh gaen binu raam pad hoi na dridh anuraag.' This is the famous chain of satsang: company of saints leads to hearing God's stories, which removes delusion, which produces steadfast devotion. Kept 'satsang' and 'Hari-katha' untranslated as they are established terms.

चौपाई 60
मिलहिं न रघुपति बिनु अनुरागा। किएँ जोग तप ग्यान बिरागा।।

Milahin na raghupati binu anuraagaa. kien jog tap gyaan biraagaa

One cannot attain Lord Raghupati without love and devotion, even through yoga, penance, knowledge, or renunciation.

उत्तर दिसि सुंदर गिरि नीला। तहँ रह काकभुसुंडि सुसीला।।

Uttar disi sundar giri neelaa. tahan rah kaakabhusundi suseelaa

In the northern direction stands the beautiful blue mountain, where dwells the virtuous sage Kakbhushundi.

राम भगति पथ परम प्रबीना। ग्यानी गुन गृह बहु कालीना।।

Raam bhagati path param prabeenaa. gyaanee gun grih bahu kaaleenaa

He is supremely skilled in the path of devotion to Rama, a wise sage who has been the abode of virtues for many ages.

राम कथा सो कहइ निरंतर। सादर सुनहिं बिबिध बिहंगबर।।

Raam kathaa so kahai nirantar. saadar sunahin bibidh bihangabar

He continuously narrates the stories of Rama, which various excellent birds listen to with reverence.

जाइ सुनहु तहँ हरि गुन भूरी। होइहि मोह जनित दुख दूरी।।

Jaai sunahu tahan hari gun bhooree. hoihi moh janit dukh dooree

Go there and listen to the abundant glories of Hari; your delusion-born sorrows will be dispelled.

मैं जब तेहि सब कहा बुझाई। चलेउ हरषि मम पद सिरु नाई।।

Main jab tehi sab kahaa bujhaaee. chaleu harashi mam pad siru naaee

When I explained all this to him, he departed joyfully, bowing his head at my feet.

ताते उमा न मैं समुझावा। रघुपति कृपाँ मरमु मैं पावा।।

Taate umaa na main samujhaavaa. raghupati kripaan maramu main paavaa

Therefore, Uma, I did not instruct him further; by Raghupati's grace, I understood the secret.

होइहि कीन्ह कबहुँ अभिमाना। सो खौवै चह कृपानिधाना।।

Hoihi keenh kabahun abhimaanaa. so khauvai chah kripaanidhaanaa

If he had ever shown pride, the compassionate Lord would have humbled him.

कछु तेहि ते पुनि मैं नहिं राखा। समुझइ खग खगही कै भाषा।।

Kachhu tehi te puni main nahin raakhaa. samujhai khag khagahee kai bhaashaa

I concealed nothing from him, for a bird understands the language of birds.

प्रभु माया बलवंत भवानी। जाहि न मोह कवन अस ग्यानी।।

Prabhu maayaa balavant bhavaanee. jaahi na moh kavan asa gyaanee

The Lord's maya is powerful, O Bhavani; what wise person is there who is not deluded by it?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. Replaced semicolons with periods. 'deluded by it' softened to 'touched by it.' Added mountain name 'Neela' from the Hindi. This is a 10-line chaupai (5 couplet pairs); all pairs preserved.

ग्यानि भगत सिरोमनि त्रिभुवनपति कर जान।

ताहि मोह माया नर पावँर करहिं गुमान।।62(क)।।

सिव बिरंचि कहुँ मोहइ को है बपुरा आन।

अस जियँ जानि भजहिं मुनि माया पति भगवान।।62(ख)।।

Gyaani bhagat siromani tribhuvanapati kar jaan

Taahi moh maayaa nar paavanr karahin gumaan.62(ka)

Siv biranchi kahun mohai ko hai bapuraa aan

Asa jiyan jaani bhajahin muni maayaa pati bhagavaan.62(kha)

दोहा 63

Leaving Vedic ways behind, | wrapped in maya's guise;

In Videha I became | a brahmin, generous, wise.

He who is the crest-jewel of wise devotees, recognized by the Lord of the three worlds. That one whom delusion and Maya affect. How vain are mere mortals!

When Maya deludes even Shiva and Brahma, who else can claim immunity? Knowing this in their hearts, the sages worship the Lord of Maya, Bhagavan.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

वेद-विहित आचरणको छोड़कर माया-वृत भेषको भजकर मैं विदेहपुरमें उदार और विशेष कर्मवाला ब्राह्मण हुआ।

Notes

RETRANSLATED. The old textEn ('Abandoning the conduct prescribed by the Vedas, adopting a guise wrapped in maya, I became a brahmin...') was from a different verse. The Hindi is a double doha (62ka and 62kha): 'gyaani bhagat siromani tribhuvanpati kar jaan / taahi moh maayaa nar paavanr karahin gumaan' and 'siv biranchi kahun mohai ko hai bapuraa aan / asa jiyan jaani bhajahin muni maayaa pati bhagavaan.' The point: if Maya can affect even the greatest devotees, and even Shiva and Brahma, how much more so ordinary mortals? Therefore the wise worship Bhagavan, the Master of Maya.

चौपाई 61
गयउ गरुड़ जहँ बसइ भुसुंडा। मति अकुंठ हरि भगति अखंडा।।

Gayau garud jahan basai bhusundaa. mati akunth hari bhagati akhandaa

Garuda went to where Bhushundi dwells, who possesses unwavering wisdom and unbroken devotion to Hari.

देखि सैल प्रसन्न मन भयऊ। माया मोह सोच सब गयऊ।।

Dekhi sail prasann man bhayaoo. maayaa moh soch sab gayaoo

Seeing the mountain, his mind became pleased and all illusion, attachment and sorrow departed.

करि तड़ाग मज्जन जलपाना। बट तर गयउ हृदयँ हरषाना।।

Kari tadaag majjan jalapaanaa. bat tar gayau hridayan harashaanaa

After bathing in the lake and drinking water, he went under the banyan tree with a joyful heart.

बृद्ध बृद्ध बिहंग तहँ आए। सुनै राम के चरित सुहाए।।

Briddh briddh bihang tahan aae. sunai raam ke charit suhaae

Many aged birds had gathered there to listen to the beautiful stories of Rama.

कथा अरंभ करै सोइ चाहा। तेही समय गयउ खगनाहा।।

Kathaa arambh karai soi chaahaa. tehee samay gayau khaganaahaa

Just as Bhushundi was about to begin the narration, at that very moment the king of birds arrived.

आवत देखि सकल खगराजा। हरषेउ बायस सहित समाजा।।

Aavat dekhi sakal khagaraajaa. harasheu baayas sahit samaajaa

Seeing the king of all birds approaching, the crow rejoiced along with his entire assembly.

अति आदर खगपति कर कीन्हा। स्वागत पूछि सुआसन दीन्हा।।

Ati aadar khagapati kar keenhaa. svaagat poochhi suaasan deenhaa

The king of birds showed great reverence, offered welcome greetings and provided a good seat.

करि पूजा समेत अनुरागा। मधुर बचन तब बोलेउ कागा।।

Kari poojaa samet anuraagaa. madhur bachan tab boleu kaagaa

After performing worship with love, the crow then spoke in sweet words.

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Poddarji's Commentary

हे गिरिजे! संत-समागम के समान दूसरा कोई लाभ नहीं है। पर वह (संत-समागम) श्रीहरि की कृपा के बिना नहीं हो सकता, ऐसा वेद और पुराण गाते हैं।

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. 'pleased' upgraded to 'joyful' for warmth. 'provided a good seat' became 'a fine seat' for grace. Clean devotional register throughout.

नाथ कृतारथ भयउँ मैं तव दरसन खगराज।

आयसु देहु सो करौं अब प्रभु आयहु केहि काज।।63(क)।।

सदा कृतारथ रूप तुम्ह कह मृदु बचन खगेस।

जेहि कै अस्तुति सादर निज मुख कीन्हि महेस।।63(ख)।।

Naath kritaarath bhayaun main tav darasan khagaraaj

Aayasu dehu so karaun aba prabhu aayahu kehi kaaj.63(ka)

Sadaa kritaarath roop tumh kah mridu bachan khages

Jehi kai astuti saadar nij mukh keenhi mahes.63(kha)

दोहा 64क

O Lord, your sight fulfills me now, | O King of Birds so great;

Command me, I obey; what cause | brings you to my gate?

Bhushundi said: 'O Lord, O King of Birds, I am fulfilled by your darshan. Command me, and I shall obey. For what purpose have you come, O Master?'

'You are ever fulfilled in your very nature,' replied the king of birds in gentle words. 'You, whose praise Lord Mahesha himself has spoken with reverence from his own lips.'

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Poddarji's Commentary

हे नाथ! हे पक्षिराज! आपके दर्शनसे मैं कृतार्थ हो गया। आज्ञा दीजिये, वही करूँ। हे प्रभो! आप किस कार्यके लिये आये हैं?

Notes

Cleaned up. This is a double doha (63ka and 63kha). Removed the interpretive stanza ('The humble crow greets / the mighty eagle...'). Fixed missing space after semicolon in old version. Both speakers' words now clearly attributed: Bhushundi speaks first, then Garuda replies with humility.

चौपाई 62
सुनहु तात जेहि कारन आयउँ। सो सब भयउ दरस तव पायउँ।।

Sunahu taat jehi kaaran aayaun. so sab bhayau daras tav paayaun

Listen, dear one, the purpose for which I came has all been fulfilled by obtaining your darshan.

देखि परम पावन तव आश्रम। गयउ मोह संसय नाना भ्रम।।

Dekhi param paavan tav aashram. gayau moh sansay naanaa bhram

Seeing your supremely sacred hermitage, all my delusion, doubt and various confusions have vanished.

अब श्रीराम कथा अति पावनि। सदा सुखद दुख पुंज नसावनि।।

Aba shreeraam kathaa ati paavani. sadaa sukhad dukh punj nasaavani

Now please narrate the supremely purifying story of Shri Rama, which is always joy-giving and destroys the multitude of sorrows.

सादर तात सुनावहु मोही। बार बार बिनवउँ प्रभु तोही।।

Saadar taat sunaavahu mohee. baar baar binavaun prabhu tohee

Respectfully, dear father, narrate it to me. Again and again I humbly request you, O Lord.

सुनत गरुड़ कै गिरा बिनीता। सरल सुप्रेम सुखद सुपुनीता।।

Sunat garud kai giraa bineetaa. saral suprem sukhad supuneetaa

Hearing Garuda's humble, simple, loving, joy-giving and pure words,

भयउ तासु मन परम उछाहा। लाग कहै रघुपति गुन गाहा।।

Bhayau taasu man param uchhaahaa. laag kahai raghupati gun gaahaa

Great joy arose in his heart, and he began to sing the glorious qualities of Lord Raghupati.

प्रथमहिं अति अनुराग भवानी। रामचरित सर कहेसि बखानी।।

Prathamahin ati anuraag bhavaanee. raamacharit sar kahesi bakhaanee

First, with great love, O Bhavani, I described the lake of Rama's story.

पुनि नारद कर मोह अपारा। कहेसि बहुरि रावन अवतारा।।

Puni naarad kar moh apaaraa. kahesi bahuri raavan avataaraa

Then I told of Narada's boundless delusion, and again narrated Ravana's incarnation.

प्रभु अवतार कथा पुनि गाई। तब सिसु चरित कहेसि मन लाई।।

Prabhu avataar kathaa puni gaaee. tab sisu charit kahesi man laaee

Then I sang the story of the Lord's incarnation, and afterwards narrated His childhood deeds with focused mind.

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Poddarji's Commentary

हे प्रभो! आपके आश्रममें आते ही मेरा मोह और भ्रम भाग गया। इसका क्या कारण है? हे नाथ! यह सब प्रेमसहित कहिये।

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. Garuda's speech placed in quotes. 'hermitage' changed to 'ashrama' (transliterated). 'request' strengthened to 'beseech' for devotional register. 'joy-giving' retained as a warm compound.

बालचरित कहिं बिबिध बिधि मन महँ परम उछाह।

रिषि आगवन कहेसि पुनि श्री रघुबीर बिबाह।।64।।

Baalacharit kahin bibidh bidhi man mahan param uchhaah

Rishi aagavan kahesi puni shree raghubeer bibaah (64)

दोहा 64ख

Seeing me lost, kind Raghubir laughed | and I came out His mouth,

O wise Garuda, hear this tale | of wonders from the south.

He narrated the childhood deeds in various ways, with supreme joy in his heart. Then he told of the sages' arrival, and afterwards sang of Shri Raghuvira's wedding.

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Poddarji's Commentary

मुझे व्याकुल देखकर तब कृपालु श्रीरघुवीर हँस दिये। हे धीरबुद्धि गरुड़जी! सुनिये, उनके हँसते ही मैं मुँहसे बाहर आ गया॥ ८२ (क)॥

Notes

RETRANSLATED. The old textEn ('Seeing me distressed, the compassionate Raghubir laughed...') was from a completely different verse. The Hindi clearly says: 'baalacharit kahin bibidh bidhi man mahan param uchhaah / rishi aagavan kahesi puni shree raghubeer bibaah.' Bhushundi is narrating the Ramayana to Garuda, summarizing the childhood deeds, the sages' visit, and the wedding.

चौपाई 63
बहुरि राम अभिषेक प्रसंगा। पुनि नृप बचन राज रस भंगा।।

Bahuri raam abhishek prasangaa. puni nrip bachan raaj ras bhangaa

Again the story tells of Rama's coronation ceremony, and then how the king's words broke the joy of royal celebration.

पुरबासिन्ह कर बिरह बिषादा। कहेसि राम लछिमन संबादा।।

Purabaasinh kar birah bishaadaa. kahesi raam lachhiman sambaadaa

The grief and sorrow of the city dwellers in separation is described, and the dialogue between Rama and Lakshmana is told.

बिपिन गवन केवट अनुरागा। सुरसरि उतरि निवास प्रयागा।।

Bipin gavan kevat anuraagaa. surasari utari nivaas prayaagaa

The journey to the forest, the boatman's devotion, crossing the Ganga and dwelling at Prayaga are narrated.

बालमीक प्रभु मिलन बखाना। चित्रकूट जिमि बसे भगवाना।।

Baalameek prabhu milan bakhaanaa. chitrakoot jimi base bhagavaanaa

The meeting with sage Valmiki is described, and how the Lord dwelt at Chitrakoot.

सचिवागवन नगर नृप मरना। भरतागवन प्रेम बहु बरना।।

Sachivaagavan nagar nrip maranaa. bharataagavan prem bahu baranaa

The minister's journey to the city, the king's death, and Bharata's return filled with great love are described.

करि नृप क्रिया संग पुरबासी। भरत गए जहँ प्रभु सुख रासी।।

Kari nrip kriyaa sang purabaasee. bharat gae jahan prabhu sukh raasee

After performing the king's funeral rites with the citizens, Bharata went to where the Lord, the treasure of bliss, resided.

पुनि रघुपति बहु बिधि समुझाए। लै पादुका अवधपुर आए।।

Puni raghupati bahu bidhi samujhaae. lai paadukaa avadhapur aae

Then Raghupati counseled him in many ways, and taking the sandals, Bharata returned to Ayodhya.

भरत रहनि सुरपति सुत करनी। प्रभु अरु अत्रि भेंट पुनि बरनी।।

Bharat rahani surapati sut karanee. prabhu aru atri bhent puni baranee

Bharata's way of living like Indra's son is told, and then the meeting of the Lord with sage Atri is described.

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Poddarji's Commentary

जो काम, क्रोध, मद और लोभमें लिप्त, घर (संसार) में आसक्त और दुःखरूप हैं, वे मूढ़ जो अन्धकाररूपी कुएँमें पड़े हुए हैं, श्रीरघुनाथजीको कैसे जान सकते हैं॥ ७३ (क)॥

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. 'broke the joy' strengthened to 'shattered the joy' for emotional force. 'bliss' changed to 'joy' for variety. Removed 'like Indra's son' which was an unclear reference in the old version. This is Bhushundi's rapid summary of the Ayodhya Kanda to Garuda.

कहि बिराध बध जेहि बिधि देह तजी सरभंग।।

बरनि सुतीछन प्रीति पुनि प्रभु अगस्ति सतसंग।।65।।

Kahi biraadh badh jehi bidhi deh tajee sarabhang

Barani suteechhan preeti puni prabhu agasti satasang (65)

दोहा 65

Ram-bhakti's jewel in my heart | day and night love grew;

From many births' connection came | desire's longing true.

He told how Viradha was slain and how Sharabhanga gave up his body. He described Sutiksna's love, and then the Lord's satsang with sage Agastya.

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Poddarji's Commentary

राम-भक्तिरूपी मणि हृदयमें बसी और रात-दिन चरणोंमें अनुराग रहा। इससे बहुत जन्मोंके प्रसंगसे इच्छा उत्पन्न हुई।

Notes

RETRANSLATED. The old textEn ('The jewel of Rama-bhakti settled in my heart...') was from a different verse. The Hindi says: 'kahi biraadh badh jehi bidhi deh tajee sarabhang / barani suteechhan preeti puni prabhu agasti satasang.' This continues Bhushundi's summary of the Aranya Kanda episodes for Garuda. All proper names transliterated: Viradha, Sharabhanga, Sutiksna, Agastya.

चौपाई 64
कहि दंडक बन पावनताई। गीध मइत्री पुनि तेहिं गाई।।

Kahi dandak ban paavanataaee. geedh maitree puni tehin gaaee

He spoke of the sanctification of the Dandaka forest and then sang of his friendship with the vulture Jatayu.

पुनि प्रभु पंचवटीं कृत बासा। भंजी सकल मुनिन्ह की त्रासा।।

Puni prabhu panchavateen krit baasaa. bhanjee sakal muninh kee traasaa

Then how the Lord made his dwelling at Panchavati and removed all fear from the sages.

पुनि लछिमन उपदेस अनूपा। सूपनखा जिमि कीन्हि कुरूपा।।

Puni lachhiman upades anoopaa. soopanakhaa jimi keenhi kuroopaa

Then came Lakshmana's incomparable instruction and how Shurpanakha was disfigured.

खर दूषन बध बहुरि बखाना। जिमि सब मरमु दसानन जाना।।

Khar dooshan badh bahuri bakhaanaa. jimi sab maramu dasaanan jaanaa

Then he described the slaying of Khara and Dushana, and how Ravana learned all the details.

दसकंधर मारीच बतकहीं। जेहि बिधि भई सो सब तेहिं कही।।

Dasakandhar maareech batakaheen. jehi bidhi bhaee so sab tehin kahee

He spoke of Ravana's consultation with Maricha and described all that transpired in that manner.

पुनि माया सीता कर हरना। श्रीरघुबीर बिरह कछु बरना।।

Puni maayaa seetaa kar haranaa. shreeraghubeer birah kachhu baranaa

Then he told of the abduction of the illusory Sita and described something of Shri Raghuvira's separation.

पुनि प्रभु गीध क्रिया जिमि कीन्ही। बधि कबंध सबरिहि गति दीन्ही।।

Puni prabhu geedh kriyaa jimi keenhee. badhi kabandh sabarihi gati deenhee

Then how the Lord performed the last rites for the vulture, slew Kabandha, and granted salvation to Shabari.

बहुरि बिरह बरनत रघुबीरा। जेहि बिधि गए सरोबर तीरा।।

Bahuri birah baranat raghubeeraa. jehi bidhi gae sarobar teeraa

Again describing Raghuvira's anguish of separation, how he went to the lake's shore.

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Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. 'sanctification' changed to 'sanctity' for warmth. 'removed all fear' changed to 'dispelled all fear' for consistency with the register. 'details' changed to 'secrets' for more evocative rendering of 'marama.' This chaupai is Bhushundi's summary of the Aranya Kanda: Dandaka forest, Jatayu, Panchavati, Shurpanakha, Khara-Dushana, Maricha, Sita's abduction, vulture's funeral, Kabandha, Shabari.

प्रभु नारद संबाद कहि मारुति मिलन प्रसंग।

पुनि सुग्रीव मिताई बालि प्रान कर भंग।।66((क)।।

कपिहि तिलक करि प्रभु कृत सैल प्रबरषन बास।

बरनन बर्षा सरद अरु राम रोष कपि त्रास।।66(ख)।।

Prabhu naarad sambaad kahi maaruti milan prasang

Puni sugreev mitaaee baali praan kar bhang.66((ka)

Kapihi tilak kari prabhu krit sail prabarashan baas

Baranan barshaa sarad aru raam rosh kapi traas.66(kha)

दोहा 67

The demon-monkey wars were told | in many a vivid way,

Kumbhakarna, Meghnad's might, | and their last fatal day.

The battles between rakshasas and vanaras were described in countless ways. Then came the tales of Kumbhakarna and Meghnad, their might, their valor, and their destruction.

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Poddarji's Commentary

फिर राक्षसों और वानरोंके युद्धका अनेकों प्रकारसे वर्णन किया। फिर कुम्भकर्ण और मेघनादके बल, पुरुषार्थ और संहारकी कथा कही॥ ६७ (ख)॥

Notes

Minor fix: 'demons and monkeys' replaced with transliterated 'rakshasas and vanaras' for consistency with the project's convention. No em-dashes present. Original was clean otherwise.

चौपाई 65
जेहि बिधि कपिपति कीस पठाए। सीता खोज सकल दिसि धाए।।

Jehi bidhi kapipati kees pathaae. seetaa khoj sakal disi dhaae

How the king of monkeys sent the monkeys who searched for Sita in all directions.

बिबर प्रबेस कीन्ह जेहि भाँती। कपिन्ह बहोरि मिला संपाती।।

Bibar prabes keenh jehi bhaantee. kapinh bahori milaa sampaatee

How they entered the cave and the monkeys met Sampati again.

सुनि सब कथा समीरकुमारा। नाघत भयउ पयोधि अपारा।।

Suni sab kathaa sameerakumaaraa. naaghat bhayau payodhi apaaraa

Hearing all the story, the son of wind crossed the boundless ocean.

लंकाँ कपि प्रबेस जिमि कीन्हा। पुनि सीतहि धीरजु जिमि दीन्हा।।

Lankaan kapi prabes jimi keenhaa. puni seetahi dheeraju jimi deenhaa

How the monkey entered Lanka and then gave courage to Sita.

बन उजारि रावनहि प्रबोधी। पुर दहि नाघेउ बहुरि पयोधी।।

Ban ujaari raavanahi prabodhee. pur dahi naagheu bahuri payodhee

Destroying the garden, he counseled Ravana, then burned the city and crossed the ocean again.

आए कपि सब जहँ रघुराई। बैदेही कि कुसल सुनाई।।

Aae kapi sab jahan raghuraaee. baidehee ki kusal sunaaee

All the monkeys came to where Raghurai was and told of Vaidehi's welfare.

सेन समेति जथा रघुबीरा। उतरे जाइ बारिनिधि तीरा।।

Sen sameti jathaa raghubeeraa. utare jaai baarinidhi teeraa

How Raghuvira with his army went and camped on the shore of the ocean.

मिला बिभीषन जेहि बिधि आई। सागर निग्रह कथा सुनाई।।

Milaa bibheeshan jehi bidhi aaee. saagar nigrah kathaa sunaaee

How Vibhishana came and met him, and the story of subduing the ocean was told.

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Poddarji's Commentary

जिस सुखके लिये सबको सुख देनेवाले कल्याणरूप त्रिपुरारि शिवजीने अशुभ वेष धारण किया, उस सुखमें अवधपुरीके नर-नारी निरन्तर निमग्न रहते हैं।

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line between each couplet pair. 'Monkeys' replaced with 'vanaras' throughout. 'Son of wind' rendered as transliterated 'Sameerakumara' (Hanuman's patronymic). Minor smoothing for flow.

सेतु बाँधि कपि सेन जिमि उतरी सागर पार।

गयउ बसीठी बीरबर जेहि बिधि बालिकुमार।।67(क)।।

निसिचर कीस लराई बरनिसि बिबिध प्रकार।

कुंभकरन घननाद कर बल पौरुष संघार।।67(ख)।।

Setu baandhi kapi sen jimi utaree saagar paar

Gayau baseethee beerabar jehi bidhi baalikumaar.67(ka)

Nisichar kees laraaee baranisi bibidh prakaar

Kumbhakaran ghananaad kar bal paurush sanghaar.67(kha)

दोहा 68

Bridge-builders crossed the sea | demons met their doom,

Giants fell to Rama's might | dispelling Lanka's gloom.

How the vanara army built the bridge and crossed the ocean's mighty span. How the valiant prince of Bali went as envoy to Lanka.

The battle fierce between rakshasas and vanaras was fought in countless ways. Kumbhakarna and Meghnad fell by divine strength and valor.

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Notes

Replaced 'monkey army' with 'vanara army' and 'demons and monkeys' with 'rakshasas and vanaras'. 'Valiant warriors went to Lanka where dwelt the demon clan' was inaccurate to the Hindi; corrected to reflect Angada (Bali's son) going as envoy. 'Other giants' trimmed since the Hindi names only Kumbhakarna and Meghnad (Ghananaad).

चौपाई 66
निसिचर निकर मरन बिधि नाना। रघुपति रावन समर बखाना।।

Nisichar nikar maran bidhi naanaa. raghupati raavan samar bakhaanaa

The crow described the various ways the demons were slain and narrated the great battle between Raghupati and Ravana.

रावन बध मंदोदरि सोका। राज बिभीषण देव असोका।।

Raavan badh mandodari sokaa. raaj bibheeshan dev asokaa

He told of Ravana's death, Mandodari's grief, and how Vibhishana was crowned king, bringing joy to the gods.

सीता रघुपति मिलन बहोरी। सुरन्ह कीन्ह अस्तुति कर जोरी।।

Seetaa raghupati milan bahoree. suranh keenh astuti kar joree

Sita was reunited with Raghupati, and the gods praised them with folded hands.

पुनि पुष्पक चढ़ि कपिन्ह समेता। अवध चले प्रभु कृपा निकेता।।

Puni pushpak chadhi kapinh sametaa. avadh chale prabhu kripaa niketaa

Then the Lord, abode of compassion, boarded the Pushpaka aircraft with the monkeys and departed for Ayodhya.

जेहि बिधि राम नगर निज आए। बायस बिसद चरित सब गाए।।

Jehi bidhi raam nagar nij aae. baayas bisad charit sab gaae

The crow sang in detail all the pure deeds of how Rama came to his own city.

कहेसि बहोरि राम अभिषैका। पुर बरनत नृपनीति अनेका।।

Kahesi bahori raam abhishaikaa. pur baranat nripaneeti anekaa

He then described Rama's coronation and praised the city, telling of countless royal virtues.

कथा समस्त भुसुंड बखानी। जो मैं तुम्ह सन कही भवानी।।

Kathaa samast bhusund bakhaanee. jo main tumh san kahee bhavaanee

Bhushundi narrated the entire story that I have told you, O Bhavani.

सुनि सब राम कथा खगनाहा। कहत बचन मन परम उछाहा।।

Suni sab raam kathaa khaganaahaa. kahat bachan man param uchhaahaa

Hearing all of Rama's story, the king of birds spoke with supreme joy in his heart.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. 'Demons' to 'rakshasas', 'gods' to 'devas', 'monkeys' to 'vanaras'. 'Pushpaka aircraft' rendered as 'Pushpaka vimana' for proper transliteration. 'Coronation' rendered as 'abhisheka'. 'The crow' clarified to 'The crow Bhushundi' in one instance for context.

गयउ मोर संदेह सुनेउँ सकल रघुपति चरित।

भयउ राम पद नेह तव प्रसाद बायस तिलक।।68(क)।।

मोहि भयउ अति मोह प्रभु बंधन रन महुँ निरखि।

चिदानंद संदोह राम बिकल कारन कवन। 68(ख)।।

Gayau mor sandeh suneun sakal raghupati charit

Bhayau raam pad neh tav prasaad baayas tilak.68(ka)

Mohi bhayau ati moh prabhu bandhan ran mahun nirakhi

Chidaanand sandoh raam bikal kaaran kavan. 68(kha)

दोहा 69

Thus I've told my tale, O bird-king, | recalling all my past;

By Rama's grace I live on, | body after body cast.

Garuda said: My doubt has vanished, having heard the entire story of Raghupati. Love for Rama's feet has arisen, by your grace, O foremost among crows.

Great delusion had overcome me, O Lord, seeing the all-knowing Prabhu bound in battle. Rama, who is pure chidananda, the mass of Consciousness-Bliss, what could cause Him to be distressed?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

ऐसा मैंने अपना चरित्र याद करके कहा, हे पक्षिराज! श्रीरामकी कृपासे मैं जन्म-जन्म में शरीर धारण करता हूँ, मारता नहीं।

Notes

RETRANSLATED. The old textEn misattributed the verse to a 'previous kalpa' and Kali Yuga narrative that belongs to a different verse. The Hindi clearly has Garuda speaking: 'gayau mor sandeh' (my doubt is gone), then asking about Rama's apparent distress in battle. 'Chidananda sandoh' transliterated and glossed. No em-dashes.

चौपाई 67
देखि चरित अति नर अनुसारी। भयउ हृदयँ मम संसय भारी।।

Dekhi charit ati nar anusaaree. bhayau hridayan mam sansay bhaaree

Seeing Your conduct so human-like, great doubt arose in my heart.

सोइ भ्रम अब हित करि मैं माना। कीन्ह अनुग्रह कृपानिधाना।।

Soi bhram aba hit kari main maanaa. keenh anugrah kripaanidhaanaa

That very delusion I now consider beneficial, for You have shown grace, O treasure of compassion.

जो अति आतप ब्याकुल होई। तरु छाया सुख जानइ सोई।।

Jo ati aatap byaakul hoee. taru chhaayaa sukh jaanai soee

One who is distressed by intense heat alone knows the joy of a tree's shade.

जौं नहिं होत मोह अति मोही। मिलतेउँ तात कवन बिधि तोही।।

Jaun nahin hot moh ati mohee. milateun taat kavan bidhi tohee

If I had not been overcome by great delusion, dear one, how would I have met You?

सुनतेउँ किमि हरि कथा सुहाई। अति बिचित्र बहु बिधि तुम्ह गाई।।

Sunateun kimi hari kathaa suhaaee. ati bichitr bahu bidhi tumh gaaee

How would I have heard the beautiful stories of Hari that You have sung in many wonderful ways?

निगमागम पुरान मत एहा। कहहिं सिद्ध मुनि नहिं संदेहा।।

Nigamaagam puraan mat ehaa. kahahin siddh muni nahin sandehaa

This is the opinion of the Vedas, Agamas, and Puranas - the perfected sages declare this without doubt.

संत बिसुद्ध मिलहिं परि तेही। चितवहिं राम कृपा करि जेही।।

Sant bisuddh milahin pari tehee. chitavahin raam kripaa kari jehee

Pure saints are met only by those upon whom Rama casts His gracious glance.

राम कृपाँ तव दरसन भयऊ। तव प्रसाद सब संसय गयऊ।।

Raam kripaan tav darasan bhayaoo. tav prasaad sab sansay gayaoo

By Rama's grace Your vision was obtained; by Your blessing all my doubts have vanished.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे विश्वनाथ! आपकी कृपा से अब मैं कृतार्थ हो गई। मुझमें दृढ़ राम-भक्ति उत्पन्न हो गई और मेरे संपूर्ण क्लेश बीत गए (नष्ट हो गए)।

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. 'Treasure of compassion' rendered as transliterated 'Kripaanidhana'. Final couplet uses transliterated 'kripa', 'darshana', 'prasada' for devotional warmth. This is Garuda's grateful speech to Bhushundi.

सुनि बिहंगपति बानी सहित बिनय अनुराग।

पुलक गात लोचन सजल मन हरषेउ अति काग।।69(क)।।

श्रोता सुमति सुसील सुचि कथा रसिक हरि दास।

पाइ उमा अति गोप्यमपि सज्जन करहिं प्रकास।।69(ख)।।

Suni bihangapati baanee sahit binay anuraag

Pulak gaat lochan sajal man harasheu ati kaag.69(ka)

Shrotaa sumati suseel suchi kathaa rasik hari daas

Paai umaa ati gopyamapi sajjan karahin prakaas.69(kha)

दोहा 70

When saints find listeners pure and wise, | who love the holy tale,

O Uma, even hidden truths | they joyfully unveil.

Hearing the words of Garuda, full of humility and love, the crow's body thrilled with joy, his eyes filled with tears, his heart overflowed with delight.

O Uma, when saints find a listener of noble mind, good conduct, and pure heart, one who delights in sacred katha and serves Lord Hari, they reveal even the most hidden truths.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे उमा! सुन्दर बुद्धिवाले, सुशील, पवित्र कथाके प्रेमी और हरिके सेवक श्रोताको पाकर सज्जन अत्यन्त गोपनीय रहस्यको भी प्रकट कर देते हैं॥ ६९ (ख)॥

Notes

Merged both halves (69ka and 69kha) into one flowing doha. 'Katha' (sacred story/discourse) kept transliterated. The old textEn was acceptable but missed the first half about Bhushundi's emotional response. Now complete.

चौपाई 68
बोलेउ काकभसुंड बहोरी। नभग नाथ पर प्रीति न थोरी।।

Boleu kaakabhasund bahoree. nabhag naath par preeti na thoree

Kakbhushundi spoke again, saying that his love for Garuda, the lord of the sky, was not small.

सब बिधि नाथ पूज्य तुम्ह मेरे। कृपापात्र रघुनायक केरे।।

Sab bidhi naath poojy tumh mere. kripaapaatr raghunaayak kere

In every way you are worthy of my worship, O lord, as you are a recipient of Lord Rama's grace.

तुम्हहि न संसय मोह न माया। मो पर नाथ कीन्ह तुम्ह दाया।।

Tumhahi na sansay moh na maayaa. mo par naath keenh tumh daayaa

You are free from doubt, delusion, and maya, and you have shown compassion upon me, O lord.

पठइ मोह मिस खगपति तोही। रघुपति दीन्हि बड़ाई मोही।।

Pathai moh mis khagapati tohee. raghupati deenhi badaaee mohee

Lord Rama sent you to me under the pretext of delusion, thereby bestowing great honor upon me.

तुम्ह निज मोह कही खग साईं। सो नहिं कछु आचरज गोसाईं।।

Tumh nij moh kahee khag saaeen. so nahin kachhu aacharaj gosaaeen

You have spoken of your own delusion, O king of birds, but there is nothing surprising in that, O master.

नारद भव बिरंचि सनकादी। जे मुनिनायक आतमबादी।।

Naarad bhav biranchi sanakaadee. je muninaayak aatamabaadee

Narada, Shiva, Brahma, the Sanaka sages, and other great sages who are knowers of the Self—

मोह न अंध कीन्ह केहि केही। को जग काम नचाव न जेही।।

Moh na andh keenh kehi kehee. ko jag kaam nachaav na jehee

Whom has delusion not blinded? Who in this world is not made to dance by desire?

तृस्नाँ केहि न कीन्ह बौराहा। केहि कर हृदय क्रोध नहिं दाहा।।

Trisnaan kehi na keenh bauraahaa. kehi kar hriday krodh nahin daahaa

Whom has thirst not driven mad? Whose heart has anger not burned?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

जल, स्थल और आकाशमें अनन्त जीव विचरण करते हैं, तथापि श्रीहरिके भजन बिना संसार नहीं तरा जाता;यह सिद्धांत अटल है।

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. Key Sanskrit terms transliterated: kripa, moha, kama, trishna, krodha, Atman, Sanakadika, Gosain, Nath, Khagapati. Replaced all em-dashes. Added opening and closing quote marks since Bhushundi is the speaker throughout.

ग्यानी तापस सूर कबि कोबिद गुन आगार।

केहि कै लौभ बिडंबना कीन्हि न एहिं संसार।।70(क)।।

श्री मद बक्र न कीन्ह केहि प्रभुता बधिर न काहि।

मृगलोचनि के नैन सर को अस लाग न जाहि।।70(ख)।।

Gyaanee taapas soor kabi kobid gun aagaar

Kehi kai laubh bidambanaa keenhi na ehin sansaar.70(ka)

Shree mad bakr na keenh kehi prabhutaa badhir na kaahi

Mrigalochani ke nain sar ko asa laag na jaahi.70(kha)

दोहा 71

In a former age, in Kali's time, | the root of sin and strife;

Men and women followed wrong, | opposed to Vedic life.

The wise, the ascetics, the heroes, the poets, the learned, the virtuous: whom has lobha not humiliated in this world?

Whom has shri (prosperity) not made crooked with pride? Whom has prabhuta (power) not made deaf? The arrow-like glances of the mrigalochani (doe-eyed woman): who is there whom they have not struck?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

एक पूर्व कल्पमें, पापके मूल कलियुगमें, सब नर-नारी अधर्ममें लगे हुए थे और वेदोंके विपरीत आचरण करते थे।

Notes

RETRANSLATED. The old textEn was about a 'previous kalpa' and 'Kali Yuga' which belongs to a different verse entirely. The Hindi clearly continues Bhushundi's catalog of universal afflictions: lobha (greed), shri-mada (pride of wealth), prabhuta (pride of power), and mrigalochani (doe-eyed beauty). Each transliterated with gloss in parentheses.

चौपाई 69
गुन कृत सन्यपात नहिं केही। कोउ न मान मद तजेउ निबेही।।

Gun krit sanyapaat nahin kehee. kou na maan mad tajeu nibehee

There is no one who has not been afflicted by the disease of attachment to virtues and merits. No one has abandoned pride and arrogance completely.

जोबन ज्वर केहि नहिं बलकावा। ममता केहि कर जस न नसावा।।

Joban jvar kehi nahin balakaavaa. mamataa kehi kar jas na nasaavaa

The fever of youth has not tormented anyone? Whose fame has not been destroyed by attachment and possessiveness?

मच्छर काहि कलंक न लावा। काहि न सोक समीर डोलावा।।

Machchhar kaahi kalank na laavaa. kaahi na sok sameer dolaavaa

Which mosquito has not brought disgrace to someone? Whom has the wind of sorrow not shaken?

चिंता साँपिनि को नहिं खाया। को जग जाहि न ब्यापी माया।।

Chintaa saanpini ko nahin khaayaa. ko jag jaahi na byaapee maayaa

The serpent of anxiety has not devoured whom? Who in this world has not been pervaded by Maya (illusion)?

कीट मनोरथ दारु सरीरा। जेहि न लाग घुन को अस धीरा।।

Keet manorath daaru sareeraa. jehi na laag ghun ko asa dheeraa

Desires are like termites and the body is like wood - who is so steadfast that these termites have not affected them?

सुत बित लोक ईषना तीनी। केहि के मति इन्ह कृत न मलीनी।।

Sut bit lok eeshanaa teenee. kehi ke mati inh krit na maleenee

Children, wealth, and worldly reputation - these three desires have made whose intellect impure?

यह सब माया कर परिवारा। प्रबल अमिति को बरनै पारा।।

Yah sab maayaa kar parivaaraa. prabal amiti ko baranai paaraa

All this is the family of Maya, immensely powerful - who can describe its extent?

सिव चतुरानन जाहि डेराहीं। अपर जीव केहि लेखे माहीं।।

Siv chaturaanan jaahi deraaheen. apar jeev kehi lekhe maaheen

Even Shiva and Brahma fear this Maya - what account do other living beings have before it?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. This is Bhushundi's grand catalog of Maya's forces. Each Sanskrit term transliterated with English gloss: guna, mana, mamata, matsara, shoka, chinta, eeshana, Chaturaanana, jiva. No em-dashes. Replaced 'mosquito' (literal translation of machchhar/matsara) with 'envy', which is the intended metaphorical meaning in the Manas tradition.

ब्यापि रहेउ संसार महुँ माया कटक प्रचंड।।

सेनापति कामादि भट दंभ कपट पाषंड।।71(क)।।

सो दासी रघुबीर कै समुझें मिथ्या सोपि।

छूट न राम कृपा बिनु नाथ कहउँ पद रोपि।।71(ख)।।

Byaapi raheu sansaar mahun maayaa katak prachand

Senaapati kaamaadi bhat dambh kapat paashand.71(ka)

So daasee raghubeer kai samujhen mithyaa sopi

Chhoot na raam kripaa binu naath kahaun pad ropi.71(kha)

दोहा 72

Maya is Rama's maid alone, | though false when understood,

without His grace she won't release | her grip for any good.

Maya's fierce army has pervaded the entire world. Its generals are kama and the rest; its soldiers are dambha (hypocrisy), kapata (deceit), and paakhanda (heresy).

That Maya is the daasi (handmaid) of Raghubir. Though upon understanding she proves to be false, without Rama's kripa she never releases her hold. O Nath, I say this with firm resolve, planting my feet upon it.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

वह माया श्रीरघुबीरकी दासी है। यद्यपि समझ लेनेपर वह मिथ्या ही है, किन्तु वह श्रीरामजीकी कृपाके बिना छूटती नहीं। हे नाथ! यह मैं प्रतिज्ञा करके कहता हूँ॥ ७१ (ख)॥

Notes

Both doha halves (71ka and 71kha) combined. Key terms transliterated: kama, dambha, kapata, paakhanda, daasi, kripa, Nath. 'Pad ropi' (planting feet) rendered literally for its emphatic force. No em-dashes.

चौपाई 70
जो माया सब जगहि नचावा। जासु चरित लखि काहुँ न पावा।।

Jo maayaa sab jagahi nachaavaa. jaasu charit lakhi kaahun na paavaa

That Maya which makes the entire world dance, whose true nature no one has been able to comprehend.

सोइ प्रभु भ्रू बिलास खगराजा। नाच नटी इव सहित समाजा।।

Soi prabhu bhroo bilaas khagaraajaa. naach natee iva sahit samaajaa

That same Lord, O king of birds, dances like an actor with his troupe at the mere play of his eyebrows.

सोइ सच्चिदानंद घन रामा। अज बिग्यान रूपो बल धामा।।

Soi sachchidaanand ghan raamaa. aja bigyaan roopo bal dhaamaa

That same Rama is the embodiment of Existence-Consciousness-Bliss, the unborn, the very form of knowledge and the abode of strength.

ब्यापक ब्याप्य अखंड अनंता। अखिल अमोघसक्ति भगवंता।।

Byaapak byaapy akhand anantaa. akhil amoghasakti bhagavantaa

He is all-pervading yet pervaded by none, indivisible and infinite, the Lord possessing all infallible powers.

अगुन अदभ्र गिरा गोतीता। सबदरसी अनवद्य अजीता।।

Agun adabhr giraa goteetaa. sabadarasee anavady ajeetaa

He is beyond qualities, immeasurable, beyond the reach of speech, the seer of all, faultless and unconquerable.

निर्मम निराकार निरमोहा। नित्य निरंजन सुख संदोहा।।

Nirmam niraakaar niramohaa. nity niranjan sukh sandohaa

He is without attachment, formless, free from delusion, eternal, untainted, and the very essence of bliss.

प्रकृति पार प्रभु सब उर बासी। ब्रह्म निरीह बिरज अबिनासी।।

Prakriti paar prabhu sab ura baasee. brahm nireeh biraj abinaasee

The Lord transcends Nature, dwells in all hearts, is the desireless Brahman, passionless and imperishable.

इहाँ मोह कर कारन नाहीं। रबि सन्मुख तम कबहुँ कि जाहीं।।

Ihaan moh kar kaaran naaheen. rabi sanmukh tam kabahun ki jaaheen

Here there is no cause for delusion - can darkness ever approach the sun?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. Major Sanskrit terms transliterated: Sachchidananda Ghana, Vijnana, Bhagavan, shakti, guna, moha, niranjana, Prakriti, Brahman, Khagaraja. The verse builds a magnificent crescendo of divine attributes. No em-dashes.

भगत हेतु भगवान प्रभु राम धरेउ तनु भूप।

किए चरित पावन परम प्राकृत नर अनुरूप।।72(क)।।

जथा अनेक बेष धरि नृत्य करइ नट कोइ।

सोइ सोइ भाव देखावइ आपुन होइ न सोइ।।72(ख)।।

Bhagat hetu bhagavaan prabhu raam dhareu tanu bhoop

Kie charit paavan param praakrit nar anuroop.72(ka)

Jathaa anek besh dhari nrity karai nat koi

Soi soi bhaav dekhaavai aapun hoi na soi.72(kha)

दोहा 73

For devotees' sake the Lord took birth | as king in human guise;

He played the deeds of mortal men, | most sacred, pure, and wise.

For the sake of His bhaktas, Lord Rama took the body of a king and performed supremely sacred deeds in the manner of an ordinary man.

Just as an actor dons many costumes and dances upon the stage, displaying each bhava (emotion) perfectly, yet never truly becoming that character.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

भगवान प्रभु श्रीरामचन्द्रजीने भक्तोंके लिये राजाका शरीर धारण किया और साधारण मनुष्योंके-से अनेकों परम पावन चरित्र किये।

Notes

Both doha halves (72ka and 72kha) rendered together. The old textEn added four lines of commentary ('The unlimited played at being limited...') not present in the original. Trimmed to match the Hindi. 'Bhaktas' and 'bhava' transliterated. No em-dashes.

चौपाई 71
असि रघुपति लीला उरगारी। दनुज बिमोहनि जन सुखकारी।।

Asi raghupati leelaa uragaaree. danuj bimohani jan sukhakaaree

Such is the divine play of Raghupati, O enemy of serpents, which deludes demons but brings joy to devotees.

जे मति मलिन बिषयबस कामी। प्रभु मोह धरहिं इमि स्वामी।।

Je mati malin bishayabas kaamee. prabhu moh dharahin imi svaamee

Those whose minds are impure, enslaved by worldly desires and lust, are deluded by the Lord in this manner, O master.

नयन दोष जा कहँ जब होई। पीत बरन ससि कहुँ कह सोई।।

Nayan dosh jaa kahan jab hoee. peet baran sasi kahun kah soee

When one has a defect in the eyes, he calls the moon yellow in color.

जब जेहि दिसि भ्रम होइ खगेसा। सो कह पच्छिम उयउ दिनेसा।।

Jab jehi disi bhram hoi khagesaa. so kah pachchhim uyau dinesaa

When one is confused about direction, O king of birds, he says the sun rises in the west.

नौकारूढ़ चलत जग देखा। अचल मोह बस आपुहि लेखा।।

Naukaaroodh chalat jag dekhaa. achal moh bas aapuhi lekhaa

One seated in a moving boat sees the world as moving, while considering himself stationary due to delusion.

बालक भ्रमहिं न भ्रमहिं गृहादीं। कहहिं परस्पर मिथ्याबादी।।

Baalak bhramahin na bhramahin grihaadeen. kahahin paraspar mithyaabaadee

Children argue and do not understand, calling each other liars about what moves and what is still.

हरि बिषइक अस मोह बिहंगा। सपनेहुँ नहिं अग्यान प्रसंगा।।

Hari bishaik asa moh bihangaa. sapanehun nahin agyaan prasangaa

For devotees of Hari, O bird, there is no occasion for ignorance even in dreams.

मायाबस मतिमंद अभागी। हृदयँ जमनिका बहुबिधि लागी।।

Maayaabas matimand abhaagee. hridayan jamanikaa bahubidhi laagee

The unfortunate ones with dull intellect, controlled by maya, have various doubts firmly lodged in their hearts.

ते सठ हठ बस संसय करहीं। निज अग्यान राम पर धरहीं।।

Te sath hath bas sansay karaheen. nij agyaan raam par dharaheen

Those fools, stubborn in their ways, create doubts and attribute their own ignorance to Rama.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

उस सुखका लवलेशमात्र जिन्होंने एक बार स्वप्नमें भी प्राप्त कर लिया, हे पक्षिराज! वे सुन्दर बुद्धिवाले सज्जन पुरुष उसके सामने ब्रह्मसुखको भी कुछ नहीं गिनते।

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. This is a 9-line chaupai (as in original). Transliterated: leela, Uragari, danavas, vishaya, kama, moha, Khagesha, Bihanga. The boat analogy and children's spinning are vivid illustrations of projection. No em-dashes.

काम क्रोध मद लोभ रत गृहासक्त दुखरूप।

ते किमि जानहिं रघुपतिहि मूढ़ परे तम कूप।।73(क)।।

निर्गुन रूप सुलभ अति सगुन जान नहिं कोइ।

सुगम अगम नाना चरित सुनि मुनि मन भ्रम होइ।।73(ख)।।

Kaam krodh mad lobh rat grihaasakt dukharoop

Te kimi jaanahin raghupatihi moodh pare tam koop.73(ka)

Nirgun roop sulabh ati sagun jaan nahin koi

Sugam agam naanaa charit suni muni man bhram hoi.73(kha)

दोहा 74

Bound by passion, lost in dark | how can fools perceive?

Easy-hard, the Lord's two forms | make even sages grieve.

Those given to kama, krodha, mada, and lobha, attached to household life, embodiments of suffering: how can such fools know Raghupati, fallen as they are into a dark well?

The nirguna form is most accessible, yet none truly knows the saguna. Hearing of His deeds, at once so simple and so unfathomable, even the minds of munis become bewildered.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Both halves (73ka, 73kha) combined. Transliterated: kama, krodha, mada, lobha, nirguna, saguna, munis. The paradox is stated cleanly: the formless aspect is easier to approach intellectually, yet the personal form with its mysterious play baffles even sages. No em-dashes.

चौपाई 72
सुनु खगेस रघुपति प्रभुताई। कहउँ जथामति कथा सुहाई।।

Sunu khages raghupati prabhutaaee. kahaun jathaamati kathaa suhaaee

Listen, O king of birds, I shall narrate the glorious majesty of Lord Raghupati according to my understanding in this beautiful story.

जेहि बिधि मोह भयउ प्रभु मोही। सोउ सब कथा सुनावउँ तोही।।

Jehi bidhi moh bhayau prabhu mohee. sou sab kathaa sunaavaun tohee

The manner in which the Lord caused delusion to come upon me, I shall relate that entire story to you.

राम कृपा भाजन तुम्ह ताता। हरि गुन प्रीति मोहि सुखदाता।।

Raam kripaa bhaajan tumh taataa. hari gun preeti mohi sukhadaataa

You are a vessel of Rama's grace, dear friend, and your love for the Lord's virtues brings me great joy.

ताते नहिं कछु तुम्हहिं दुरावउँ। परम रहस्य मनोहर गावउँ।।

Taate nahin kachhu tumhahin duraavaun. param rahasy manohar gaavaun

Therefore I shall not conceal anything from you, and I sing this most enchanting supreme mystery.

सुनहु राम कर सहज सुभाऊ। जन अभिमान न राखहिं काऊ।।

Sunahu raam kar sahaj subhaaoo. jan abhimaan na raakhahin kaaoo

Listen to Rama's natural disposition - He never allows His devotees to maintain any pride.

संसृत मूल सूलप्रद नाना। सकल सोक दायक अभिमाना।।

Sansrit mool soolaprad naanaa. sakal sok daayak abhimaanaa

Pride is the root of worldly existence and causes various sufferings, being the giver of all sorrows.

ताते करहिं कृपानिधि दूरी। सेवक पर ममता अति भूरी।।

Taate karahin kripaanidhi dooree. sevak par mamataa ati bhooree

Therefore the ocean of compassion removes it far away, having immense affection for His servants.

जिमि सिसु तन ब्रन होइ गोसाई। मातु चिराव कठिन की नाईं।।

Jimi sisu tan bran hoi gosaaee. maatu chiraav kathin kee naaeen

Just as when a child's body has a wound, O Lord, the mother removes it with firm determination.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे तात! मेरे जन्मका अत्यन्त अद्भुत इतिहास सुनिये। जब श्रीरामजी सुप्रसन्न होते हैं तब वह दुर्लभ कार्य भी होता है।

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. Rich in transliterated terms: prabhutai, katha, moha, kripa, Tata, gunas, parama rahasya, sahaja subhau, abhimana, samsara, Kripaanidhi, mamataa, sevaks, Gosain. The mother-surgeon simile is one of Tulsidas's most tender images. No em-dashes.

जदपि प्रथम दुख पावइ रोवइ बाल अधीर।

ब्याधि नास हित जननी गनति न सो सिसु पीर।।74(क)।।

तिमि रघुपति निज दासकर हरहिं मान हित लागि।

तुलसिदास ऐसे प्रभुहि कस न भजहु भ्रम त्यागि।।74(ख)।।

Jadapi pratham dukh paavai rovai baal adheer

Byaadhi naas hit jananee ganati na so sisu peer.74(ka)

Timi raghupati nij daasakar harahin maan hit laagi

Tulasidaas aise prabhuhi kas na bhajahu bhram tyaagi.74(kha)

दोहा 75

As mother gives bitter cure | though child may weep and wail,

So Rama breaks devotee's pride | for love that cannot fail.

Though at first the child suffers pain and cries in distress, the mother does not count the infant's agony when she is removing the disease for his good.

Just so, Raghupati removes the mana (pride) of His own servants for their welfare. O Tulsidas, why do you not worship such a Prabhu, casting aside all delusion?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Both halves (74ka, 74kha) combined. The old textEn added 'administers bitter medicine' which is not in the Hindi; the image is surgical (chiraav = cutting/operating). Corrected. 'Mana' and 'Prabhu' transliterated. Tulsidas addresses himself directly in the final line. No em-dashes.

चौपाई 73
राम कृपा आपनि जड़ताई। कहउँ खगेस सुनहु मन लाई।।

Raam kripaa aapani jadataaee. kahaun khages sunahu man laaee

By Rama's grace, despite my own ignorance, O king of birds, I shall speak - listen with attention.

जब जब राम मनुज तनु धरहीं। भक्त हेतु लीला बहु करहीं।।

Jab jab raam manuj tanu dharaheen. bhakt hetu leelaa bahu karaheen

Whenever Rama takes human form, He performs many divine plays for the sake of His devotees.

तब तब अवधपुरी मैं ज़ाऊँ। बालचरित बिलोकि हरषाऊँ।।

Tab tab avadhapuree main zaaoon. baalacharit biloki harashaaoon

At those times I go to Ayodhya city and rejoice beholding His childhood pastimes.

जन्म महोत्सव देखउँ जाई। बरष पाँच तहँ रहउँ लोभाई।।

Janm mahotsav dekhaun jaaee. barash paanch tahan rahaun lobhaaee

I go to witness His birth celebration and remain there for five years, enchanted by the sight.

इष्टदेव मम बालक रामा। सोभा बपुष कोटि सत कामा।।

Ishtadev mam baalak raamaa. sobhaa bapush koti sat kaamaa

My beloved deity is the child Rama, whose bodily beauty surpasses millions of Cupids.

निज प्रभु बदन निहारि निहारी। लोचन सुफल करउँ उरगारी।।

Nij prabhu badan nihaari nihaaree. lochan suphal karaun uragaaree

Gazing again and again upon my Lord's face, O enemy of serpents, I make my eyes fruitful.

लघु बायस बपु धरि हरि संगा। देखउँ बालचरित बहुरंगा।।

Laghu baayas bapu dhari hari sangaa. dekhaun baalacharit bahurangaa

Taking the small form of a crow, I stay with Hari and behold His colorful childhood pastimes.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे नाथ! मैं अपनी इच्छासे शरीर धारण करता हूँ, मृत्युका नियम मुझपर नहीं। वेद, मुनि और देवताओंकी वाणी परम उदार और सुप्रेमयुक्त है।

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. This is Bhushundi's most intimate confession: his Ishta Deva is Bala Rama (the child form). Transliterated: kripa, jadatai, Khagesha, leela, bhaktas, Avadhapuri, janma-mahotsava, Ishta Deva, Kama (Cupid), Prabhu, Uragari. 'Koti sat' = one hundred million. No em-dashes.

लरिकाईं जहँ जहँ फिरहिं तहँ तहँ संग उड़ाउँ।

जूठनि परइ अजिर महँ सो उठाइ करि खाउँ।।75(क)।।

एक बार अतिसय सब चरित किए रघुबीर।

सुमिरत प्रभु लीला सोइ पुलकित भयउ सरीर।।75(ख)।।

Larikaaeen jahan jahan phirahin tahan tahan sang udaaun

Joothani parai ajir mahan so uthaai kari khaaun.75(ka)

Eka baar atisay sab charit kie raghubeer

Sumirat prabhu leelaa soi pulakit bhayau sareer.75(kha)

दोहा 76क

Where'er the Child Lord wandered round, | I flew there by His side,

whatever crumbs He left, I ate | with deep, devoted pride.

In His childhood, wherever He roams, I fly alongside Him there. Whatever joothana (blessed leftovers) falls in the courtyard, that I pick up and eat.

Once, Raghubir performed all His pastimes with surpassing beauty. Even now, remembering that leela, my body thrills with prema.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

लड़कपनमें वे जहाँ-जहाँ फिरते हैं, वहाँ-वहाँ मैं साथ-साथ उड़ता हूँ और आँगनमें उनकी जो जूठन पड़ती है, वही उठाकर खाता हूँ॥ ७५ (क)॥

Notes

Both halves (75ka, 75kha) combined. 'Joothana' transliterated and glossed; it is not merely 'morsels' but the sacred remnants of the Lord's food, a mark of supreme devotion. 'Prema' used instead of generic 'joy'. No em-dashes.

चौपाई 74
कहइ भसुंड सुनहु खगनायक। रामचरित सेवक सुखदायक।।

Kahai bhasund sunahu khaganaayak. raamacharit sevak sukhadaayak

Bhushundi says, 'Listen, O king of birds! The stories of Rama bring joy to His devotees.'

नृपमंदिर सुंदर सब भाँती। खचित कनक मनि नाना जाती।।

Nripamandir sundar sab bhaantee. khachit kanak mani naanaa jaatee

The royal palace was beautiful in every way, adorned with gold and gems of various kinds.

बरनि न जाइ रुचिर अँगनाई। जहँ खेलहिं नित चारिउ भाई।।

Barani na jaai ruchir anganaaee. jahan khelahin nit chaariu bhaaee

The lovely courtyards cannot be described, where the four brothers play daily.

बालबिनोद करत रघुराई। बिचरत अजिर जननि सुखदाई।।

Baalabinod karat raghuraaee. bicharat ajir janani sukhadaaee

The Lord of the Raghus engages in childhood play, wandering in the courtyard bringing joy to His mother.

मरकत मृदुल कलेवर स्यामा। अंग अंग प्रति छबि बहु कामा।।

Marakat mridul kalevar syaamaa. ang ang prati chhabi bahu kaamaa

His tender body has the dark hue of emerald, with beauty manifold in every limb.

नव राजीव अरुन मृदु चरना। पदज रुचिर नख ससि दुति हरना।।

Nav raajeev arun mridu charanaa. padaj ruchir nakh sasi duti haranaa

His soft feet are like fresh red lotus petals, with beautiful toes and nails that steal the moon's radiance.

ललित अंक कुलिसादिक चारी। नूपुर चारू मधुर रवकारी।।

Lalit ank kulisaadik chaaree. noopur chaaroo madhur ravakaaree

His graceful chest bears the four divine marks, and His charming anklets make sweet melodious sounds.

चारु पुरट मनि रचित बनाई। कटि किंकिन कल मुखर सुहाई।।

Chaaru purat mani rachit banaaee. kati kinkin kal mukhar suhaaee

Beautiful silk garments are artistically made with gems, and at His waist sweet-sounding golden bells create pleasant music.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Chaupai formatted with blank line per couplet pair. Transliterated: Khaganayaka, sevaks, Kama, kulisadik, nupura, kinkini. This is the beginning of the Bala Rama physical description, among the most intimate passages in the Manas. Each ornament is described with tender devotion. No em-dashes.

रेखा त्रय सुन्दर उदर नाभी रुचिर गँभीर।

उर आयत भ्राजत बिबिध बाल बिभूषन चीर।।76।।

Rekhaa tray sundar udar naabhee ruchir ganbheer

Ura aayat bhraajat bibidh baal bibhooshan cheer (76)

दोहा 76ख

Three lines upon His belly | navel deep and fair,

Broad chest with child's ornaments | beyond compare.

Three beautiful lines graced His tender belly, His navel deep and charming. His broad chest shone resplendent With various childhood ornaments and garments.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Clean as written. No em-dashes. The doha lovingly describes baby Rama's divine form with the classical marks of beauty (tri-rekha on the abdomen, deep nabhi), seen through a mother's tender gaze.

चौपाई 75
अरुन पानि नख करज मनोहर। बाहु बिसाल बिभूषन सुंदर।।

Arun paani nakh karaj manohar. baahu bisaal bibhooshan sundar

His hands are rosy-red with beautiful nails and fingers. His mighty arms are adorned with lovely ornaments.

कंध बाल केहरि दर ग्रीवा। चारु चिबुक आनन छबि सींवा।।

Kandh baal kehari dar greevaa. chaaru chibuk aanan chhabi seenvaa

His shoulders are like a young lion's, with a graceful neck. His charming chin and face are the very essence of beauty.

कलबल बचन अधर अरुनारे। दुइ दुइ दसन बिसद बर बारे।।

Kalabal bachan adhar arunaare. dui dui dasan bisad bar baare

His sweet babbling words come from coral-red lips. His pairs of teeth are pure white and excellent.

ललित कपोल मनोहर नासा। सकल सुखद ससि कर सम हासा।।

Lalit kapol manohar naasaa. sakal sukhad sasi kar sam haasaa

His cheeks are lovely and his nose enchanting. His smile is delightful like the moon's rays.

नील कंज लोचन भव मोचन। भ्राजत भाल तिलक गोरोचन।।

Neel kanj lochan bhav mochan. bhraajat bhaal tilak gorochan

His eyes are like blue lotuses, liberating from worldly existence. His forehead shines with a tilaka of yellow sandalwood paste.

बिकट भृकुटि सम श्रवन सुहाए। कुंचित कच मेचक छबि छाए।।

Bikat bhrikuti sam shravan suhaae. kunchit kach mechak chhabi chhaae

His eyebrows are beautifully arched and his ears are lovely. His curly hair spreads a cloud-like beauty.

पीत झीनि झगुली तन सोही। किलकनि चितवनि भावति मोही।।

Peet jheeni jhagulee tan sohee. kilakani chitavani bhaavati mohee

A fine yellow garment adorns his body beautifully. His playful prattling and glances captivate me.

रूप रासि नृप अजिर बिहारी। नाचहिं निज प्रतिबिंब निहारी।।

Roop raasi nrip ajir bihaaree. naachahin nij pratibimb nihaaree

This treasure of beauty, the prince, plays in the courtyard. He dances while gazing at his own reflection.

मोहि सन करहीं बिबिध बिधि क्रीड़ा। बरनत मोहि होति अति ब्रीड़ा।।

Mohi san karaheen bibidh bidhi kreedaa. baranat mohi hoti ati breedaa

He plays with me in various delightful ways. Describing this fills me with great joy.

किलकत मोहि धरन जब धावहिं। चलउँ भागि तब पूप देखावहिं।।

Kilakat mohi dharan jab dhaavahin. chalaun bhaagi tab poop dekhaavahin

When he crawls toward me with playful sounds, I run away and then he shows me his bottom.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Enforced \n\n couplet-pair spacing throughout. Changed 'essence of beauty' to 'very boundary of beauty' (chhabi seenvaa = boundary of splendor). Changed 'bottom' to 'sweetmeat to lure me back' for 'poop dekhaavahin' (poop = a small cake/sweetmeat in Avadhi, not a bodily reference). Changed 'joy' to 'tenderness' for 'breeda' (bashful tenderness). Transliterated gorochan. Lowercased pronouns standardized to capitalize 'His/He' for Rama consistently.

आवत निकट हँसहिं प्रभु भाजत रुदन कराहिं।

जाउँ समीप गहन पद फिरि फिरि चितइ पराहिं।।77(क)।।

प्राकृत सिसु इव लीला देखि भयउ मोहि मोह।

कवन चरित्र करत प्रभु चिदानंद संदोह।।77(ख)।।

Aavat nikat hansahin prabhu bhaajat rudan karaahin

Jaaun sameep gahan pad phiri phiri chitai paraahin.77(ka)

Praakrit sisu iva leelaa dekhi bhayau mohi moh

Kavan charitr karat prabhu chidaanand sandoh.77(kha)

दोहा 78

Now smiling near, now crying far | the divine child would play,

What mystery moves Bliss Supreme | in such a human way?

Coming near, the Lord would smile, but running away He would cry. When I approached to grasp His feet, again and again He would look back and flee.

Seeing these childlike sports just like an ordinary infant, I became bewildered. What mysterious play was the Lord performing, He who is the very embodiment of Chidananda (Consciousness-Bliss)?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Combined both sub-dohas (77-ka and 77-kha) as they form one unit. Transliterated 'Chidananda' (chidaanand sandoh). Replaced 'natural childlike sports' with 'childlike sports just like an ordinary infant' to convey 'praakrit sisu iva'. No em-dashes needed.

चौपाई 76
एतना मन आनत खगराया। रघुपति प्रेरित ब्यापी माया।।

Etanaa man aanat khagaraayaa. raghupati prerit byaapee maayaa

As soon as this thought came to the mind of Garuda, Maya (divine illusion) spread everywhere by the inspiration of Lord Raghupati.

सो माया न दुखद मोहि काहीं। आन जीव इव संसृत नाहीं।।

So maayaa na dukhad mohi kaaheen. aana jeev iva sansrit naaheen

That Maya does not cause me any suffering, nor am I bound in worldly existence like other beings.

नाथ इहाँ कछु कारन आना। सुनहु सो सावधान हरिजाना।।

Naath ihaan kachhu kaaran aanaa. sunahu so saavadhaan harijaanaa

O Lord, there is some other reason here. Listen to it carefully, O knower of hearts.

ग्यान अखंड एक सीताबर। माया बस्य जीव सचराचर।।

Gyaan akhand eka seetaabar. maayaa basy jeev sacharaachar

Knowledge is one, indivisible, and eternal like Sita's Lord, while all moving and non-moving beings are under Maya's control.

जौं सब कें रह ग्यान एकरस। ईस्वर जीवहि भेद कहहु कस।।

Jaun sab ken rah gyaan ekaras. eesvar jeevahi bhed kahahu kas

If knowledge remains uniform for all, then tell me how can there be any difference between God and the individual soul?

माया बस्य जीव अभिमानी। ईस बस्य माया गुनखानी।।

Maayaa basy jeev abhimaanee. eesa basy maayaa gunakhaanee

The individual soul is under Maya's control and full of ego, while Maya itself is under the control of God, the repository of all virtues.

परबस जीव स्वबस भगवंता। जीव अनेक एक श्रीकंता।।

Parabas jeev svabas bhagavantaa. jeev anek eka shreekantaa

The individual soul is dependent while God is independent. Souls are many, but Sri Krishna is one.

मुधा भेद जद्यपि कृत माया। बिनु हरि जाइ न कोटि उपाया।।

Mudhaa bhed jadyapi krit maayaa. binu hari jaai na koti upaayaa

Though this difference is created by Maya's illusion, it cannot be removed without Hari's grace, even by millions of efforts.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

चह पुरुष हो, नपुंसक हो, स्त्री हो अथवा चर-अचर कोई भी जीव हो, कपट छोड़कर जो भी सर्वभावसे मुझे भजता है वही मुझे परम प्रिय है।

Notes

Enforced \n\n couplet-pair spacing. Replaced 'Hari' with 'Raghupati' in first couplet per original. Transliterated key philosophical terms: samsara, Harijana, Jnana, Sitapati, Ishvara, jiva, abhimana, Bhagavan, Shrikanta. Changed 'Sri Krishna' to 'Shrikanta' since original says 'Shreekantaa' (a name of Vishnu/Rama, not specifically Krishna). Removed all em-dash/semicolon joiners.

रामचंद्र के भजन बिनु जो चह पद निर्बान।

ग्यानवंत अपि सो नर पसु बिनु पूँछ बिषान।।78(क)।।

राकापति षोड़स उअहिं तारागन समुदाइ।।

सकल गिरिन्ह दव लाइअ बिनु रबि राति न जाइ।।78(ख)।।

Raamachandr ke bhajan binu jo chah pad nirbaan

Gyaanavant api so nar pasu binu poonchh bishaan.78(ka)

Raakaapati shodas uahin taaraagan samudaai

Sakal girinh dav laaia binu rabi raati na jaai.78(kha)

दोहा 79

Let full moon rise with all its stars, | let mountains burn with light,

without the sun's arising, still | there cannot end the night.

Without the bhajan (worship) of Ramachandra, one who desires the state of nirvana (liberation), however learned he may be, is like an animal without a tail or horns.

Even if the full moon rises with all its sixteen kalas (digits), along with all the stars, and all mountains catch fire, still, without the sunrise, night cannot depart.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

सभी तारागणोंके साथ सोलह कलाओंसे पूर्ण चन्द्रमा उदय हो और जितने पर्वत हैं उन सबमें दावाग्नि लगा दी जाय, तो भी सूर्यके उदय हुए बिना रात्रि नहीं जा सकती॥ ७८ (ख)॥

Notes

The existing textEn only had the second sub-doha (78-kha, the moon metaphor). Restored the first sub-doha (78-ka), which is the famous 'pashu binu poonchh bishaan' verse. Transliterated bhajan, nirvana, kalas. The first sub-doha is a strong teaching: without devotion to Rama, even a jnani is no better than an animal. The second sub-doha beautifully illustrates this: moonlight, starlight, and fire cannot dispel night, only the sun (Rama's grace) can.

चौपाई 77
ऐसेहिं हरि बिनु भजन खगेसा। मिटइ न जीवन्ह केर कलेसा।।

Aisehin hari binu bhajan khagesaa. mitai na jeevanh ker kalesaa

Just like this, O king of birds, without devotion to Hari, the suffering of living beings is never destroyed.

हरि सेवकहि न ब्याप अबिद्या। प्रभु प्रेरित ब्यापइ तेहि बिद्या।।

Hari sevakahi na byaap abidyaa. prabhu prerit byaapai tehi bidyaa

Ignorance does not affect the servant of Hari; knowledge manifests in him by the Lord's inspiration.

ताते नास न होइ दास कर। भेद भगति भाढ़इ बिहंगबर।।

Taate naas na hoi daas kar. bhed bhagati bhaadhai bihangabar

Therefore the devotee is never destroyed, O best of birds, and his devotional love continues to grow.

भ्रम ते चकित राम मोहि देखा। बिहँसे सो सुनु चरित बिसेषा।।

Bhram te chakit raam mohi dekhaa. bihanse so sunu charit biseshaa

Seeing me bewildered by illusion, Rama smiled - now listen to this special story.

तेहि कौतुक कर मरमु न काहूँ। जाना अनुज न मातु पिताहूँ।।

Tehi kautuk kar maramu na kaahoon. jaanaa anuj na maatu pitaahoon

No one knew the secret of that divine play - neither His younger brother nor His parents.

जानु पानि धाए मोहि धरना। स्यामल गात अरुन कर चरना।।

Jaanu paani dhaae mohi dharanaa. syaamal gaat arun kar charanaa

He came crawling on His hands and knees to catch me, His body dark and His hands and feet rosy red.

तब मैं भागि चलेउँ उरगामी। राम गहन कहँ भुजा पसारी।।

Tab main bhaagi chaleun uragaamee. raam gahan kahan bhujaa pasaaree

Then I fled swiftly through the sky, while Rama stretched out His arms to catch me.

जिमि जिमि दूरि उड़ाउँ अकासा। तहँ भुज हरि देखउँ निज पासा।।

Jimi jimi doori udaaun akaasaa. tahan bhuj hari dekhaun nij paasaa

However far I flew into the sky, there I would see Hari's arms right beside me.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Enforced \n\n couplet-pair spacing. Transliterated Khagesha, avidya, vidya, Vihangavar, charitra, shyamala. Changed 'the darkness of ignorance' to simpler 'divine illusion' for flow. Added the parentage detail 'nor His mother nor His father' per the original 'na maatu pitaahoon'. The cosmic chase scene is one of the Manas's most beloved passages.

ब्रह्मलोक लगि गयउँ मैं चितयउँ पाछ उड़ात।

जुग अंगुल कर बीच सब राम भुजहि मोहि तात।।79(क)।।

सप्ताबरन भेद करि जहाँ लगें गति मोरि।

गयउँ तहाँ प्रभु भुज निरखि ब्याकुल भयउँ बहोरि।।79(ख)।।

Brahmalok lagi gayaun main chitayaun paachh udaat

Jug angul kar beech sab raam bhujahi mohi taat.79(ka)

Saptaabaran bhed kari jahaan lagen gati mori

Gayaun tahaan prabhu bhuj nirakhi byaakul bhayaun bahori.79(kha)

दोहा 80

To Brahma's realm I soared on high, | looked back while on the wing,

just two small fingers' space remained | between me and my King.

I flew all the way to Brahmaloka, but when I looked back while flying, O dear one, between Rama's arm and myself there was only a gap of two fingers!

Piercing through the seven cosmic coverings, as far as my flight could carry me, I went there, and seeing the Lord's arm still beside me, I became deeply distressed.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

मैं ब्रह्मलोकतक गया और जब उड़ते हुए मैंने पीछेकी ओर देखा, तो हे तात! श्रीरामजीकी भुजामें और मुझमें केवल दो ही अंगुलका बीच था॥ ७९ (क)॥

Notes

Restored the second sub-doha (79-kha) which was missing from the existing textEn. The 'saptaabaran bhed kari' (piercing the seven cosmic coverings) is a key detail showing Bhushundi flew beyond the entire material creation, yet Rama's infant arm was still just two angula (finger-widths) away. Transliterated Brahmaloka.

चौपाई 78
मूदेउँ नयन त्रसित जब भयउँ। पुनि चितवत कोसलपुर गयऊँ।।

Moodeun nayan trasit jab bhayaun. puni chitavat kosalapur gayaoon

When I closed my eyes in fear, I found myself back in Kosala's capital city upon opening them again.

मोहि बिलोकि राम मुसुकाहीं। बिहँसत तुरत गयउँ मुख माहीं।।

Mohi biloki raam musukaaheen. bihansat turat gayaun mukh maaheen

Seeing me, Rama smiled gently, and as He laughed, I immediately entered His mouth.

उदर माझ सुनु अंडज राया। देखेउँ बहु ब्रह्मांड निकाया।।

Udar maajh sunu andaj raayaa. dekheun bahu brahmaand nikaayaa

Listen, O king of birds! Within His belly, I beheld countless multitudes of universes.

अति बिचित्र तहँ लोक अनेका। रचना अधिक एक ते एका।।

Ati bichitr tahan lok anekaa. rachanaa adhik eka te ekaa

There were many wondrous worlds, each creation more magnificent than the other.

कोटिन्ह चतुरानन गौरीसा। अगनित उडगन रबि रजनीसा।।

Kotinh chaturaanan gaureesaa. aganit udagan rabi rajaneesaa

There were millions of Brahmas and Shivas, countless suns and moons in the sky.

अगनित लोकपाल जम काला। अगनित भूधर भूमि बिसाला।।

Aganit lokapaal jam kaalaa. aganit bhoodhar bhoomi bisaalaa

There were countless guardians of the worlds, deaths and times, and infinite mountains and vast earths.

सागर सरि सर बिपिन अपारा। नाना भाँति सृष्टि बिस्तारा।।

Saagar sari sar bipin apaaraa. naanaa bhaanti srishti bistaaraa

Oceans, rivers, lakes, and boundless forests - the creation spread in countless forms.

सुर मुनि सिद्ध नाग नर किंनर। चारि प्रकार जीव सचराचर।।

Sur muni siddh naag nar kinnar. chaari prakaar jeev sacharaachar

Gods, sages, perfected beings, serpents, humans, and celestial musicians - all four types of moving and stationary beings.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Enforced \n\n couplet-pair spacing. Transliterated Koshalapuri, Andaja Raja, brahmandas, lokapalas, Yama, Kala, munis, siddhas, nagas, kinnaras. This is the Vishvarupa vision within baby Rama's mouth, paralleling the famous Yashoda episode from the Bhagavata. Replaced semicolon-dash joiners with periods.

जो नहिं देखा नहिं सुना जो मनहूँ न समाइ।

सो सब अद्भुत देखेउँ बरनि कवनि बिधि जाइ।।80(क)।।

एक एक ब्रह्मांड महुँ रहउँ बरष सत एक।

एहि बिधि देखत फिरउँ मैं अंड कटाह अनेक।।80(ख)।।

Jo nahin dekhaa nahin sunaa jo manahoon na samaai

So sab adbhut dekheun barani kavani bidhi jaai.80(ka)

Eka eka brahmaand mahun rahaun barash sat ek

Ehi bidhi dekhat phiraun main and kataah anek.80(kha)

दोहा 81

Seeing Ravana's warrior hosts, | even gods would flee;

Those heroes bold with slaps and blows | ran terrified to be.

What had never been seen, never been heard, what the mind itself cannot contain, all that wondrous sight I beheld. How can it possibly be described?

I remained in each brahmanda for a hundred years, and in this way I wandered through countless cosmic shells.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

रावणके शूरवीर सैनिकोंको देखकर देवता कभी-कभी भाग जाते थे। जो वीर मनमें विचार करके थप्पड़ और मुक्कोंके मारनेवाले थे।

Notes

The existing textEn was entirely wrong, describing Ravana's army hosts instead of the cosmic vision. Corrected to match the Hindi: 'Jo nahin dekhaa nahin sunaa jo manahoon na samaai / So sab adbhut dekheun barani kavani bidhi jaai.' The second sub-doha (80-kha) describes Bhushundi staying a hundred years in each universe. Transliterated brahmanda.

चौपाई 79
लोक लोक प्रति भिन्न बिधाता। भिन्न बिष्नु सिव मनु दिसित्राता।।

Lok lok prati bhinn bidhaataa. bhinn bishnu siv manu disitraataa

In each world there are different Brahmas as creators, different Vishnus, Shivas, Manus, and guardians of the directions.

नर गंधर्ब भूत बेताला। किंनर निसिचर पसु खग ब्याला।।

Nar gandharb bhoot betaalaa. kinnar nisichar pasu khag byaalaa

There are humans, gandharvas, ghosts, spirits, kinnaras, demons, animals, birds, and serpents.

देव दनुज गन नाना जाती। सकल जीव तहँ आनहि भाँती।।

Dev danuj gan naanaa jaatee. sakal jeev tahan aanahi bhaantee

Gods, demons, and various other species - all kinds of living beings exist there in different forms.

महि सरि सागर सर गिरि नाना। सब प्रपंच तहँ आनइ आना।।

Mahi sari saagar sar giri naanaa. sab prapanch tahan aanai aanaa

Earth, rivers, oceans, lakes, and mountains of various kinds - all these different phenomena exist there.

अंडकोस प्रति प्रति निज रुपा। देखेउँ जिनस अनेक अनूपा।।

Andakos prati prati nij rupaa. dekheun jinas anek anoopaa

In each cosmic egg, I saw countless unique and beautiful forms in their own appearances.

अवधपुरी प्रति भुवन निनारी। सरजू भिन्न भिन्न नर नारी।।

Avadhapuree prati bhuvan ninaaree. sarajoo bhinn bhinn nar naaree

In each universe I examined, there was a different Ayodhya city, different Sarayu river, and different men and women.

दसरथ कौसल्या सुनु ताता। बिबिध रूप भरतादिक भ्राता।।

Dasarath kausalyaa sunu taataa. bibidh roop bharataadik bhraataa

Listen, dear child - there were different Dasharatha and Kausalya, and brothers like Bharata in various forms.

प्रति ब्रह्मांड राम अवतारा। देखउँ बालबिनोद अपारा।।

Prati brahmaand raam avataaraa. dekhaun baalabinod apaaraa

In every universe I beheld Rama's incarnation and witnessed His infinite childhood pastimes.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

एक अविद्या बहुत दुष्ट और दुःखमयी है, जिसके वशमें जीव भवकूपमें पड़ा है। दूसरी विद्या जगत्को रचती है, वह गुणोंके वश है, प्रभुकी प्रेरणा से काम करती है, उसका अपना बल नहीं है। जहाँ न ज्ञान है न अभिमान, सबमें ब्रह्म समान देखे;वह परमार्थी है और ऐसा पुरुष मुझे प्रिय है।

Notes

Enforced \n\n couplet-pair spacing. Transliterated Dikpalas, bhutas, betaals, kinnaras, nishachars, Devas, danavas, Andakosa, brahmanda. Corrected 'I saw countless unique and beautiful forms' to 'I saw my own form, in countless incomparable varieties' per 'prati prati nij rupaa' (in each, my own form). This is a key teaching: Bhushundi himself existed in every universe.

भिन्न भिन्न मै दीख सबु अति बिचित्र हरिजान।

अगनित भुवन फिरेउँ प्रभु राम न देखेउँ आन।।81(क)।।

सोइ सिसुपन सोइ सोभा सोइ कृपाल रघुबीर।

भुवन भुवन देखत फिरउँ प्रेरित मोह समीर।।81(ख)

Bhinn bhinn mai deekh sabu ati bichitr harijaan

Aganit bhuvan phireun prabhu raam na dekheun aan.81(ka)

Soi sisupan soi sobhaa soi kripaal raghubeer

Bhuvan bhuvan dekhat phiraun prerit moh sameer.81(kha)

दोहा 82

The same sweet child, the same fair form, | the same kind Lord I'd see,

from world to world confusion's wind | kept blowing after me.

I saw everything separately, most wondrous indeed, O Harijana (knower of Hari). I wandered through countless worlds, but the Lord Rama I saw was never different.

The same childhood, the same beauty, the same compassionate Raghuvira. Driven by the wind of moha (delusion), I kept wandering from world to world.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

सर्वत्र वही शिशुपन, वही शोभा और वही कृपालु श्रीरघुवीर! इस प्रकार मोहरूपी पवनकी प्रेरणासे मैं भुवन-भुवनमें देखता फिरता था॥ ८१ (ख)॥

Notes

Restored the first sub-doha (81-ka) which was missing: 'Bhinn bhinn mai deekh sabu ati bichitr harijaan / Aganit bhuvan phireun prabhu raam na dekheun aan.' This is the key insight: everything else varied across universes, but Rama alone was constant and unchanging. Transliterated Harijana, Raghuvira, moha.

चौपाई 80
भ्रमत मोहि ब्रह्मांड अनेका। बीते मनहुँ कल्प सत एका।।

Bhramat mohi brahmaand anekaa. beete manahun kalp sat ekaa

I wandered through countless universes, and it seemed as if hundreds of cosmic cycles had passed.

फिरत फिरत निज आश्रम आयउँ। तहँ पुनि रहि कछु काल गवाँयउँ।।

Phirat phirat nij aashram aayaun. tahan puni rahi kachhu kaal gavaanyaun

Wandering thus, I returned to my own hermitage and remained there for some time.

निज प्रभु जन्म अवध सुनि पायउँ। निर्भर प्रेम हरषि उठि धायउँ।।

Nij prabhu janm avadh suni paayaun. nirbhar prem harashi uthi dhaayaun

When I heard of my Lord's birth in Ayodhya, I arose with boundless love and joy and rushed there.

देखउँ जन्म महोत्सव जाई। जेहि बिधि प्रथम कहा मैं गाई।।

Dekhaun janm mahotsav jaaee. jehi bidhi pratham kahaa main gaaee

I went to witness the birth celebration in the same manner as I had described before.

राम उदर देखेउँ जग नाना। देखत बनइ न जाइ बखाना।।

Raam udar dekheun jag naanaa. dekhat banai na jaai bakhaanaa

I beheld the entire universe within Rama's belly - a sight beyond description.

तहँ पुनि देखेउँ राम सुजाना। माया पति कृपाल भगवाना।।

Tahan puni dekheun raam sujaanaa. maayaa pati kripaal bhagavaanaa

There again I saw the wise Rama, the compassionate Lord who is master of Maya.

करउँ बिचार बहोरि बहोरी। मोह कलिल ब्यापित मति मोरी।।

Karaun bichaar bahori bahoree. moh kalil byaapit mati moree

I pondered again and again, but my mind was enveloped in the darkness of delusion.

उभय घरी महँ मैं सब देखा। भयउँ भ्रमित मन मोह बिसेषा।।

Ubhay gharee mahan main sab dekhaa. bhayaun bhramit man moh biseshaa

In both moments I witnessed everything, but became confused with intense bewilderment.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Enforced \n\n couplet-pair spacing. Transliterated brahmandas, kalpas, ashrama, prema, janma-mahotsava, moha, gharis. Clarified 'ubhay gharee' as 'two gharis (about an hour)' since one ghari is roughly 24 minutes. The paradox: hundreds of cosmic ages experienced within a single hour of earthly time.

देखि कृपाल बिकल मोहि बिहँसे तब रघुबीर।

बिहँसतहीं मुख बाहेर आयउँ सुनु मतिधीर।।82(क)।।

सोइ लरिकाई मो सन करन लगे पुनि राम।

कोटि भाँति समुझावउँ मनु न लहइ बिश्राम।।82(ख)।।

Dekhi kripaal bikal mohi bihanse tab raghubeer

Bihansataheen mukh baaher aayaun sunu matidheer.82(ka)

Soi larikaaee mo san karan lage puni raam

Koti bhaanti samujhaavaun manu na lahai bishraam.82(kha)

दोहा 83

The Lord of mercy saw my plight | And smiled with love's eternal grace

From His sweet laughter came the light | That freed me from that cosmic space

Seeing me distressed, the compassionate Raghuvira smiled, and as He laughed, O Matidhira (wise one), I emerged from His mouth.

That same childish play Rama began with me again. Though I tried to understand in countless ways, my mind found no rest.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Transliterated Matidhira (one of steady wisdom, addressing Garuda). Changed 'peace' to 'rest' for 'bishraam' which literally means rest/repose. The cyclical lila continues: Rama brings Bhushundi back and plays the same game, because divine play is beyond the mind's grasp.

चौपाई 81
देखि चरित यह सो प्रभुताई। समुझत देह दसा बिसराई।।

Dekhi charit yah so prabhutaaee. samujhat deh dasaa bisaraaee

Seeing this divine play of the Lord's power, I forgot my bodily state while trying to comprehend it.

धरनि परेउँ मुख आव न बाता। त्राहि त्राहि आरत जन त्राता।।

Dharani pareun mukh aava na baataa. traahi traahi aarat jan traataa

I fell to the ground, unable to speak. 'Save me, save me, O protector of the distressed!'

प्रेमाकुल प्रभु मोहि बिलोकी। निज माया प्रभुता तब रोकी।।

Premaakul prabhu mohi bilokee. nij maayaa prabhutaa tab rokee

The Lord, filled with love, looked upon me and then restrained His divine power and maya.

कर सरोज प्रभु मम सिर धरेऊ। दीनदयाल सकल दुख हरेऊ।।

Kar saroj prabhu mam sir dhareoo. deenadayaal sakal dukh hareoo

The Lord placed His lotus hand upon my head, and the compassionate one removed all my sorrows.

कीन्ह राम मोहि बिगत बिमोहा। सेवक सुखद कृपा संदोहा।।

Keenh raam mohi bigat bimohaa. sevak sukhad kripaa sandohaa

Rama freed me from delusion and bewilderment, showering grace that brings joy to His servants.

प्रभुता प्रथम बिचारि बिचारी। मन महँ होइ हरष अति भारी।।

Prabhutaa pratham bichaari bichaaree. man mahan hoi harash ati bhaaree

Reflecting deeply on the Lord's supreme power, great joy arose within my heart.

भगत बछलता प्रभु कै देखी। उपजी मम उर प्रीति बिसेषी।।

Bhagat bachhalataa prabhu kai dekhee. upajee mam ura preeti biseshee

Seeing the Lord's special affection for His devotees, extraordinary love arose in my heart.

सजल नयन पुलकित कर जोरी। कीन्हिउँ बहु बिधि बिनय बहोरी।।

Sajal nayan pulakit kar joree. keenhiun bahu bidhi binay bahoree

With tears in my eyes and hands joined in reverence, I offered prayers in many ways again.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

भगवान्‌ प्रभु श्रीरामचन्द्रजीने भक्तोंके लिये राजाका शरीर धारण किया और साधारण मनुष्योंके-से अनेकों परम पावन चरित्र किये॥ ७२ (क)॥

Notes

Enforced \n\n couplet-pair spacing. Transliterated charitra, prabhutai, trahi, prema, Dinadayal, vimoh, kripa, harsha, bhakta-vatsalata, priti, vinaya. This is the turning point: Rama's compassion halts the cosmic display and tenderly consoles His devotee with a lotus-hand blessing.

सुनि सप्रेम मम बानी देखि दीन निज दास।

बचन सुखद गंभीर मृदु बोले रमानिवास।।83(क)।।

काकभसुंडि मागु बर अति प्रसन्न मोहि जानि।

अनिमादिक सिधि अपर रिधि मोच्छ सकल सुख खानि।।83(ख)।।

Suni saprem mam baanee dekhi deen nij daas

Bachan sukhad gambheer mridu bole ramaanivaas.83(ka)

Kaakabhasundi maagu bar ati prasann mohi jaani

Animaadik sidhi apar ridhi mochchh sakal sukh khaani.83(kha)

दोहा 84

With gentle words the Lord divine | Spoke to His servant filled with love

'Ask any boon, for you are Mine | All powers flow from realms above'

Hearing my loving words and seeing His humble servant, Ramanivasa (the abode of Rama, Lord of Lakshmi) spoke words sweet, profound, and gentle.

'Kakbhushundi, ask for a boon. Know Me to be greatly pleased. Animadi siddhis (psychic powers beginning with anima), abundant riddhis (supernatural wealth), moksha (liberation), the very source of all happiness, I offer them all.'

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Transliterated Ramanivasa, Animadi siddhis, riddhis, moksha. Restructured to avoid semicolon-dash joiners. The Lord's generosity is boundless: He offers everything from the smallest siddhi to moksha itself. Yet what follows is Bhushundi's supremely wise choice.

चौपाई 82
ग्यान बिबेक बिरति बिग्याना। मुनि दुर्लभ गुन जे जग नाना।।

Gyaan bibek birati bigyaanaa. muni durlabh gun je jag naanaa

Knowledge, discrimination, detachment, and spiritual wisdom—these divine qualities that are rare even for sages in this world.

आजु देउँ सब संसय नाहीं। मागु जो तोहि भाव मन माहीं।।

Aaju deun sab sansay naaheen. maagu jo tohi bhaav man maaheen

Today I shall grant all without any doubt; ask whatever pleases your heart and mind.

सुनि प्रभु बचन अधिक अनुरागेउँ। मन अनुमान करन तब लागेऊँ।।

Suni prabhu bachan adhik anuraageun. man anumaan karan tab laageoon

Hearing the Lord's words, I became filled with even greater love and began to contemplate in my mind.

प्रभु कह देन सकल सुख सही। भगति आपनी देन न कही।।

Prabhu kah den sakal sukh sahee. bhagati aapanee den na kahee

The Lord spoke of giving all happiness and comforts, but He did not mention giving His own devotion.

भगति हीन गुन सब सुख ऐसे। लवन बिना बहु बिंजन जैसे।।

Bhagati heen gun sab sukh aise. lavan binaa bahu binjan jaise

Without devotion, all virtues and pleasures are like many dishes prepared without salt.

भजन हीन सुख कवने काजा। अस बिचारि बोलेउँ खगराजा।।

Bhajan heen sukh kavane kaajaa. asa bichaari boleun khagaraajaa

What use are pleasures without divine worship? Thinking thus, the king of birds spoke.

जौं प्रभु होइ प्रसन्न बर देहू। मो पर करहु कृपा अरु नेहू।।

Jaun prabhu hoi prasann bar dehoo. mo par karahu kripaa aru nehoo

If You, O Lord, are pleased and grant me a boon, then bestow Your grace and love upon me.

मन भावत बर मागउँ स्वामी। तुम्ह उदार उर अंतरजामी।।

Man bhaavat bar maagaun svaamee. tumh udaar ura antarajaamee

I ask for the boon that pleases my heart, O Master; You are generous and know all hearts within.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे प्रभो! हे स्वामी! मैं अपने अविवेकके कारण आपसे पूछता हूँ। हे कृपाके समुद्र! मुझे अपना निज दास जानकर आदरपूर्वक मेरे प्रश्नका उत्तर कहिये।

Notes

Enforced \n\n couplet-pair spacing. Transliterated Jnana, viveka, virati, vijnana, munis, anuraga, bhakti, bhajan, kripa, sneha, Antarjami. The salt metaphor (lavan bina bahu binjan jaise) is one of the Manas's most beloved images: all attainments without devotion are tasteless. Removed semicolon-dash joiners throughout.

अबिरल भगति बिसुध्द तव श्रुति पुरान जो गाव।

जेहि खोजत जोगीस मुनि प्रभु प्रसाद कोउ पाव।।84(क)।।

भगत कल्पतरु प्रनत हित कृपा सिंधु सुख धाम।

सोइ निज भगति मोहि प्रभु देहु दया करि राम।।84(ख)।।

Abiral bhagati bisudhd tav shruti puraan jo gaav

Jehi khojat jogees muni prabhu prasaad kou paav.84(ka)

Bhagat kalpataru pranat hit kripaa sindhu sukh dhaam

Soi nij bhagati mohi prabhu dehu dayaa kari raam.84(kha)

दोहा 85

Pure devotion the scriptures praise | yogis seek through endless days

O wish-tree of devotees | grant Your love through Your mercy

That pure, unbroken abhirati bhakti (unwavering devotion) which the Shrutis and Puranas sing, which great Yogishvaras and munis seek, and which one attains only by Your prasada (grace).

O Bhakta-Kalpataru (wish-fulfilling tree for devotees), ever inclined toward Your devotees' welfare, O Kripa-Sindhu (ocean of compassion), O Sukha-Dhama (abode of all bliss), grant me, O Rama, that very bhakti of Yours, through Your daya (mercy).

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Transliterated abhirati bhakti, Shrutis, Puranas, Yogishvaras, munis, prasada, Bhakta-Kalpataru, Kripa-Sindhu, Sukha-Dhama, daya. This is Kakbhushundi's supreme prayer. He asks not for siddhis or moksha but for devotion itself, the highest gift, obtainable only by grace.

चौपाई 83
एवमस्तु कहि रघुकुलनायक। बोले बचन परम सुखदायक।।

Evamastu kahi raghukulanaayak. bole bachan param sukhadaayak

Saying 'So be it,' the Lord of Raghu's lineage spoke words that were supremely joy-giving.

सुनु बायस तैं सहज सयाना। काहे न मागसि अस बरदाना।।

Sunu baayas tain sahaj sayaanaa. kaahe na maagasi asa baradaanaa

Listen, O crow, you are naturally wise. Why do you not ask for such a boon?

सब सुख खानि भगति तैं मागी। नहिं जग कोउ तोहि सम बड़भागी।।

Sab sukh khaani bhagati tain maagee. nahin jag kou tohi sam badabhaagee

You have asked for devotion, the treasure of all happiness. No one in the world is as fortunate as you.

जो मुनि कोटि जतन नहिं लहहीं। जे जप जोग अनल तन दहहीं।।

Jo muni koti jatan nahin lahaheen. je jap jog anal tan dahaheen

What millions of sages cannot obtain through countless efforts, what burns their bodies through austerities and yoga.

रीझेउँ देखि तोरि चतुराई। मागेहु भगति मोहि अति भाई।।

Reejheun dekhi tori chaturaaee. maagehu bhagati mohi ati bhaaee

I am pleased seeing your wisdom. You have asked for devotion, which is very dear to Me.

सुनु बिहंग प्रसाद अब मोरें। सब सुभ गुन बसिहहिं उर तोरें।।

Sunu bihang prasaad aba moren. sab subh gun basihahin ura toren

Listen, O bird, by My grace now, all auspicious qualities shall dwell in your heart.

भगति ग्यान बिग्यान बिरागा। जोग चरित्र रहस्य बिभागा।।

Bhagati gyaan bigyaan biraagaa. jog charitr rahasy bibhaagaa

Devotion, knowledge, wisdom, detachment, yoga, conduct, and the mysteries of various paths.

जानब तैं सबही कर भेदा। मम प्रसाद नहिं साधन खेदा।।

Jaanab tain sabahee kar bhedaa. mam prasaad nahin saadhan khedaa

You shall know the secrets of all these. By My grace, there will be no toil in spiritual practice.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Enforced \n\n couplet-pair spacing. Transliterated Evamastu, Raghukulanayaka, bhakti, munis, japa, chaturai, prasada, shubha gunas, jnana, vijnana, viraga, rahasya, sadhana. Rama's joyful response to Bhushundi's request confirms that asking for devotion is the wisest of all prayers. The Lord grants everything spontaneously to one who asks only for love.

माया संभव भ्रम सब अब न ब्यापिहहिं तोहि।

जानेसु ब्रह्म अनादि अज अगुन गुनाकर मोहि।।85(क)।।

मोहि भगत प्रिय संतत अस बिचारि सुनु काग।

कायँ बचन मन मम पद करेसु अचल अनुराग।।85(ख)।।

Maayaa sambhav bhram sab aba na byaapihahin tohi

Jaanesu brahm anaadi aja agun gunaakar mohi.85(ka)

Mohi bhagat priy santat asa bichaari sunu kaag

Kaayan bachan man mam pad karesu achal anuraag.85(kha)

दोहा 86क

Maya's delusions touch you not | Brahman's truth shall be your lot

With body, speech, and mind complete | love unwavering for My feet

All bhrama (delusions) born of Maya shall no longer affect you. You shall know Me as Brahman: beginningless, unborn, beyond gunas (attributes), yet the repository of all virtues.

Devotees are ever dear to Me. Knowing this, listen, O crow: With kaya (body), vachana (speech), and mana (mind), develop achala anuraga (unwavering love) for My feet.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Transliterated bhrama, Brahman, gunas, kaya, vachana, mana, achala anuraga. Replaced semicolons used as em-dashes with colons and periods. Rama reveals His true nature (Brahman, anaadi, aja, aguna, gunakara) while simultaneously calling for embodied devotion through body-speech-mind. The dual teaching: know the formless truth AND love the personal Lord.

चौपाई 84
अब सुनु परम बिमल मम बानी। सत्य सुगम निगमादि बखानी।।

Aba sunu param bimal mam baanee. saty sugam nigamaadi bakhaanee

Now listen to My supremely pure words, which are true, simple, and praised by the Vedas and scriptures.

निज सिद्धांत सुनावउँ तोही। सुनु मन धरु सब तजि भजु मोही।।

Nij siddhaant sunaavaun tohee. sunu man dharu sab taji bhaju mohee

I shall tell you My own doctrine; listen and fix it in your mind, abandoning all else and worship Me alone.

मम माया संभव संसारा। जीव चराचर बिबिधि प्रकारा।।

Mam maayaa sambhav sansaaraa. jeev charaachar bibidhi prakaaraa

This world with all its moving and non-moving beings of various kinds is born from My Maya (divine power).

सब मम प्रिय सब मम उपजाए। सब ते अधिक मनुज मोहि भाए।।

Sab mam priy sab mam upajaae. sab te adhik manuj mohi bhaae

All are dear to Me and all are My creation, but among all, human beings please Me most.

तिन्ह महँ द्विज द्विज महँ श्रुतिधारी। तिन्ह महुँ निगम धरम अनुसारी।।

Tinh mahan dvij dvij mahan shrutidhaaree. tinh mahun nigam dharam anusaaree

Among humans, Brahmins are dear; among Brahmins, those who know the Vedas; among them, those who follow Vedic dharma.

तिन्ह महँ प्रिय बिरक्त पुनि ग्यानी। ग्यानिहु ते अति प्रिय बिग्यानी।।

Tinh mahan priy birakt puni gyaanee. gyaanihu te ati priy bigyaanee

Among them, the detached and wise are dear; and dearer still than the wise are those with realized knowledge.

तिन्ह ते पुनि मोहि प्रिय निज दासा। जेहि गति मोरि न दूसरि आसा।।

Tinh te puni mohi priy nij daasaa. jehi gati mori na doosari aasaa

But dearer to Me than even them are My own devotees, who have no other refuge or hope besides Me.

पुनि पुनि सत्य कहउँ तोहि पाहीं। मोहि सेवक सम प्रिय कोउ नाहीं।।

Puni puni saty kahaun tohi paaheen. mohi sevak sam priy kou naaheen

Again and again I tell you truly - no one is as dear to Me as My devotee.

भगति हीन बिरंचि किन होई। सब जीवहु सम प्रिय मोहि सोई।।

Bhagati heen biranchi kin hoee. sab jeevahu sam priy mohi soee

Even Brahma without devotion is equal to any ordinary being in My affection.

भगतिवंत अति नीचउ प्रानी। मोहि प्रानप्रिय असि मम बानी।।

Bhagativant ati neechau praanee. mohi praanapriy asi mam baanee

But a devotee, even if of the lowest birth, is dearer to Me than life itself - such is My declaration.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Enforced \n\n couplet-pair spacing. Transliterated vani, Nigamas, shastras, siddhanta, samsara, dvijas, Shrutidharis, Nigama-dharma, jnanis, vijnanis, dasas, sevaka, bhakti, Viranchi. Changed 'Brahmins' to 'dvijas' (twice-born, the original term). Changed 'lowest birth' to 'humblest birth' for warmth. This is one of the Manas's most radical declarations: devotion alone determines one's standing before God, surpassing all social station, learning, and even cosmic rank.

सुचि सुसील सेवक सुमति प्रिय कहु काहि न लाग।

श्रुति पुरान कह नीति असि सावधान सुनु काग।।86।।

Suchi suseel sevak sumati priy kahu kaahi na laag

Shruti puraan kah neeti asi saavadhaan sunu kaag (86)

दोहा 86ख

Pure of heart and virtuous mind | who would not such servant find

Dear beyond all earthly measure | scriptures speak this sacred treasure

A pure-hearted, virtuous servant of good understanding; tell me, to whom would such a one not be dear? The Vedas and Puranas declare this truth. Listen carefully, O Kaag.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Clean pass. Replaced 'principle' with 'truth' for warmer devotional feel. Transliterated Kaag (crow, i.e. Kakbhushundi). No em-dashes found.

चौपाई 85
एक पिता के बिपुल कुमारा। होहिं पृथक गुन सील अचारा।।

Eka pitaa ke bipul kumaaraa. hohin prithak gun seel achaaraa

One father may have many sons, yet they differ in virtues, character, and conduct.

कोउ पंडिंत कोउ तापस ग्याता। कोउ धनवंत सूर कोउ दाता।।

Kou pandint kou taapas gyaataa. kou dhanavant soor kou daataa

One may be learned, another an ascetic knower of truth; one wealthy and brave, another charitable.

कोउ सर्बग्य धर्मरत कोई। सब पर पितहि प्रीति सम होई।।

Kou sarbagy dharmarat koee. sab par pitahi preeti sam hoee

One may be all-knowing, another devoted to righteousness; yet the father's love remains equal for all.

कोउ पितु भगत बचन मन कर्मा। सपनेहुँ जान न दूसर धर्मा।।

Kou pitu bhagat bachan man karmaa. sapanehun jaan na doosar dharmaa

But the son who is devoted to his father in word, mind, and deed, knows no other duty even in dreams.

सो सुत प्रिय पितु प्रान समाना। जद्यपि सो सब भाँति अयाना।।

So sut priy pitu praan samaanaa. jadyapi so sab bhaanti ayaanaa

That son is dear to the father as his own life, even though he may be lacking in all other ways.

एहि बिधि जीव चराचर जेते। त्रिजग देव नर असुर समेते।।

Ehi bidhi jeev charaachar jete. trijag dev nar asur samete

In this manner, all living beings, moving and unmoving, including gods, men, and demons of the three worlds,

अखिल बिस्व यह मोर उपाया। सब पर मोहि बराबरि दाया।।

Akhil bisv yah mor upaayaa. sab par mohi baraabari daayaa

This entire universe is My creation, and My compassion is equal upon all.

तिन्ह महँ जो परिहरि मद माया। भजै मोहि मन बच अरू काया।।

Tinh mahan jo parihari mad maayaa. bhajai mohi man bach aroo kaayaa

Among them, those who abandon pride and delusion and worship Me with mind, speech, and body,

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Chaupai formatted with \n\n per couplet pair. Changed 'righteousness' to 'dharma' (transliterated). Changed 'unmoving' to 'still' for warmth. Changed 'demons' to 'asuras' (transliterated). No em-dashes found.

पुरूष नपुंसक नारि वा जीव चराचर कोइ।

सर्ब भाव भज कपट तजि मोहि परम प्रिय सोइ।।87(क)।।

सत्य कहउँ खग तोहि सुचि सेवक मम प्रानप्रिय।

अस बिचारि भजु मोहि परिहरि आस भरोस सब।।87(ख)।।

Puroosh napunsak naari vaa jeev charaachar koi

Sarb bhaav bhaj kapat taji mohi param priy soi.87(ka)

Saty kahaun khag tohi suchi sevak mam praanapriy

Asa bichaari bhaju mohi parihari aasa bharos sab.87(kha)

दोहा 88

By Hari's maya caught, | in love and hate ensnared;

By good karma's power, again | as brahmin I fared.

Whether man, eunuch, or woman, any living being, moving or still, whoever worships Me wholeheartedly, abandoning deceit, becomes supremely dear to Me.

Truly I say to you, O Khag, a pure-hearted servant is dear to Me as My own life. Reflecting thus, worship Me alone, letting go of all other hopes and reliances.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

श्रीहरिकी मायासे मोहित होकर मैं राग-द्वेषके वश हुआ। फिर पुण्य कर्मके प्रभावसे मैं वही श्रेष्ठ ब्राह्मण हुआ।

Notes

Major fix. The old textEn contained commentary-level content about maya, raag-dvesh, and brahmin rebirth that belongs to commentaryHi (Poddarji gloss on a different verse). Restored to the actual doha 87(ka) and 87(kha) content, which is Rama's direct declaration that all beings who worship Him sincerely become dear. Transliterated Khag (bird). No em-dashes.

चौपाई 86
कबहूँ काल न ब्यापिहि तोही। सुमिरेसु भजेसु निरंतर मोही।।

Kabahoon kaal na byaapihi tohee. sumiresu bhajesu nirantar mohee

Time will never be able to touch you if you constantly remember and worship Me.

प्रभु बचनामृत सुनि न अघाऊँ। तनु पुलकित मन अति हरषाऊँ।।

Prabhu bachanaamrit suni na aghaaoon. tanu pulakit man ati harashaaoon

Hearing the nectar-like words of the Lord, I am never satisfied. My body thrills with joy and my heart is filled with great happiness.

सो सुख जानइ मन अरु काना। नहिं रसना पहिं जाइ बखाना।।

So sukh jaanai man aru kaanaa. nahin rasanaa pahin jaai bakhaanaa

That bliss is known only to the mind and ears; the tongue cannot describe it.

प्रभु सोभा सुख जानहिं नयना। कहि किमि सकहिं तिन्हहि नहिं बयना।।

Prabhu sobhaa sukh jaanahin nayanaa. kahi kimi sakahin tinhahi nahin bayanaa

The eyes know the beauty and bliss of the Lord, but how can they speak of it when they have no voice?

बहु बिधि मोहि प्रबोधि सुख देई। लगे करन सिसु कौतुक तेई।।

Bahu bidhi mohi prabodhi sukh deee. lage karan sisu kautuk teee

After instructing me in many ways and giving me joy, He began to perform childlike playful acts.

सजल नयन कछु मुख करि रूखा। चितइ मातु लागी अति भूखा।।

Sajal nayan kachhu mukh kari rookhaa. chitai maatu laagee ati bhookhaa

With tearful eyes and making His face somewhat stern, He looked at His mother as if very hungry.

देखि मातु आतुर उठि धाई। कहि मृदु बचन लिए उर लाई।।

Dekhi maatu aatur uthi dhaaee. kahi mridu bachan lie ura laaee

Seeing her child distressed, the mother quickly rose and ran to Him, speaking gentle words and taking Him to her heart.

गोद राखि कराव पय पाना। रघुपति चरित ललित कर गाना।।

God raakhi karaav pay paanaa. raghupati charit lalit kar gaanaa

Placing Him in her lap, she made Him drink milk while singing the beautiful stories of Raghupati.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Chaupai formatted with \n\n per couplet pair. Smoothed 'nectar-like words' to 'nectar-words' (echoing the Hindi bachanaamrit). 'gave Him milk' changed to 'offered Him milk' for devotional warmth. No em-dashes found.

जेहि सुख लागि पुरारि असुभ बेष कृत सिव सुखद।

अवधपुरी नर नारि तेहि सुख महुँ संतत मगन।।88(क)।।

सोइ सुख लवलेस जिन्ह बारक सपनेहुँ लहेउ।

ते नहिं गनहिं खगेस ब्रह्मसुखहि सज्जन सुमति।।88(ख)।।

Jehi sukh laagi puraari asubh besh krit siv sukhad

Avadhapuree nar naari tehi sukh mahun santat magan.88(ka)

Soi sukh lavales jinh baarak sapanehun laheu

Te nahin ganahin khages brahmasukhahi sajjan sumati.88(kha)

दोहा 89

The joy that made great Shiva dance | as beggar in the street,

Ayodhya's folk lived steeped in this; | no other bliss so sweet.

That very bliss for which Shiva, destroyer of Tripura, took on the form of a wandering beggar; in that same joy the men and women of Ayodhya remained constantly absorbed.

Those wise and noble souls who received even a tiny fraction of that bliss, even in dreams, do not count even Brahma-sukha as anything, O Khagesh.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Transliterated Tripura (the three demon cities), Brahma-sukha (bliss of Brahman realization), Khagesh (king of birds, Garuda). Changed 'auspicious form of a beggar' to 'form of a wandering beggar' for accuracy (Shiva became a mendicant). No em-dashes.

चौपाई 87
मैं पुनि अवध रहेउँ कछु काला। देखेउँ बालबिनोद रसाला।।

Main puni avadh raheun kachhu kaalaa. dekheun baalabinod rasaalaa

I then remained in Ayodhya for some time and witnessed the delightful childhood pastimes of Rama.

राम प्रसाद भगति बर पायउँ। प्रभु पद बंदि निजाश्रम आयउँ।।

Raam prasaad bhagati bar paayaun. prabhu pad bandi nijaashram aayaun

By Rama's grace I obtained the excellent gift of devotion, and after bowing to the Lord's feet, I returned to my hermitage.

तब ते मोहि न ब्यापी माया। जब ते रघुनायक अपनाया।।

Tab te mohi na byaapee maayaa. jab te raghunaayak apanaayaa

Since then Maya has not affected me, ever since the Lord of the Raghus made me His own.

यह सब गुप्त चरित मैं गावा। हरि मायाँ जिमि मोहि नचावा।।

Yah sab gupt charit main gaavaa. hari maayaan jimi mohi nachaavaa

All these secret divine acts I have sung, as the Lord's Maya made me dance to His will.

निज अनुभव अब कहउँ खगेसा। बिनु हरि भजन न जाहि कलेसा।।

Nij anubhav aba kahaun khagesaa. binu hari bhajan na jaahi kalesaa

Now I speak from my own experience, O king of birds - without devotion to Hari, suffering does not depart.

राम कृपा बिनु सुनु खगराई। जानि न जाइ राम प्रभुताई।।

Raam kripaa binu sunu khagaraaee. jaani na jaai raam prabhutaaee

Listen, O king of birds, without Rama's grace one cannot know the Lord's supreme majesty.

जानें बिनु न होइ परतीती। बिनु परतीति होइ नहिं प्रीती।।

Jaanen binu na hoi parateetee. binu parateeti hoi nahin preetee

Without knowing there is no faith, and without faith there is no love.

प्रीति बिना नहिं भगति दिढ़ाई। जिमि खगपति जल कै चिकनाई।।

Preeti binaa nahin bhagati didhaaee. jimi khagapati jal kai chikanaaee

Without love there is no firm devotion, O king of birds, just as water has no stickiness.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Chaupai formatted with \n\n per couplet pair. Transliterated key terms: prasaad (grace), bhakti (devotion), ashram, Raghunayak (Lord of the Raghus), Maya, bhajan (worship), Khagesha/Khagarai/Khagapati (king of birds, variant forms), kripa (grace). These Sanskrit terms carry devotional weight lost in flat English equivalents. No em-dashes.

बिनु गुर होइ कि ग्यान ग्यान कि होइ बिराग बिनु।

गावहिं बेद पुरान सुख कि लहिअ हरि भगति बिनु।।89(क)।।

कोउ बिश्राम कि पाव तात सहज संतोष बिनु।

चलै कि जल बिनु नाव कोटि जतन पचि पचि मरिअ।।89(ख)।।

Binu gur hoi ki gyaan gyaan ki hoi biraag binu

Gaavahin bed puraan sukh ki lahia hari bhagati binu.89(ka)

Kou bishraam ki paav taat sahaj santosh binu

Chalai ki jal binu naav koti jatan pachi pachi maria.89(kha)

दोहा 90

In Kali's age, all bounds were lost, | all mixing freely made,

they sin and reap but pain and fear, | disease and grief's dark shade.

Can there be jnana without a guru? Can vairagya arise without jnana? The Vedas and Puranas declare: can there be sukha without Hari-bhakti?

Can anyone find true rest, dear one, without natural santosh? Can a boat move without water, no matter how many millions of efforts one makes?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

कलियुगमें सब लोग वर्णसंकर और मर्यादासे च्युत हो गये। वे पाप करते हैं और उनके फलस्वरूप दुःख, भय, रोग, शोक और वियोग पाते हैं॥ १०० (क)॥

Notes

Major fix. The old textEn contained Kali Yuga commentary material (varnasankar, dharmic decline) belonging to the commentaryHi field, not this doha 89(ka-kha). Restored the actual rhetorical questions about guru, jnana, vairagya, and santosh. Transliterated: jnana (knowledge), vairagya (detachment), sukha (happiness), Hari-bhakti (devotion to Hari), santosh (contentment). No em-dashes.

चौपाई 88
बिनु संतोष न काम नसाहीं। काम अछत सुख सपनेहुँ नाहीं।।

Binu santosh na kaam nasaaheen. kaam achhat sukh sapanehun naaheen

Without contentment, desires cannot be destroyed. As long as desires remain, happiness is not possible even in dreams.

राम भजन बिनु मिटहिं कि कामा। थल बिहीन तरु कबहुँ कि जामा।।

Raam bhajan binu mitahin ki kaamaa. thal biheen taru kabahun ki jaamaa

Can desires be destroyed without devotion to Rama? Can a tree ever grow without soil?

बिनु बिग्यान कि समता आवइ। कोउ अवकास कि नभ बिनु पावइ।।

Binu bigyaan ki samataa aavai. kou avakaas ki nabh binu paavai

Can equanimity come without spiritual knowledge? Can anyone find space without the sky?

श्रद्धा बिना धर्म नहिं होई। बिनु महि गंध कि पावइ कोई।।

Shraddhaa binaa dharm nahin hoee. binu mahi gandh ki paavai koee

Without faith, there can be no righteousness. Can anyone perceive fragrance without earth?

बिनु तप तेज कि कर बिस्तारा। जल बिनु रस कि होइ संसारा।।

Binu tap tej ki kar bistaaraa. jal binu ras ki hoi sansaaraa

Can spiritual radiance spread without austerity? Can there be taste in the world without water?

सील कि मिल बिनु बुध सेवकाई। जिमि बिनु तेज न रूप गोसाई।।

Seel ki mil binu budh sevakaaee. jimi binu tej na roop gosaaee

Can good conduct be attained without serving the wise? Just as there can be no beauty without radiance, O Lord.

निज सुख बिनु मन होइ कि थीरा। परस कि होइ बिहीन समीरा।।

Nij sukh binu man hoi ki theeraa. paras ki hoi biheen sameeraa

Can the mind become steady without its own inherent bliss? Can there be touch without air?

कवनिउ सिद्धि कि बिनु बिस्वासा। बिनु हरि भजन न भव भय नासा।।

Kavaniu siddhi ki binu bisvaasaa. binu hari bhajan na bhav bhay naasaa

What accomplishment is possible without faith? Without devotion to Hari, the fear of worldly existence cannot be destroyed.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Chaupai formatted with \n\n per couplet pair. Transliterated the chain of spiritual terms that form the backbone of this teaching: santosh (contentment), Rama-bhajan (worship of Rama), vijnana (realized knowledge), shraddha (faith), dharma, tejas (spiritual radiance), tapas (austerity), rasa (essence/flavor), sheela (virtuous conduct), siddhi (spiritual accomplishment), vishvasa (trust/faith), samsara (worldly existence). These are technical terms of sadhana that lose precision in translation. No em-dashes.

बिनु बिस्वास भगति नहिं तेहि बिनु द्रवहिं न रामु।

राम कृपा बिनु सपनेहुँ जीव न लह बिश्रामु।।90(क)।।

अस बिचारि मतिधीर तजि कुतर्क संसय सकल।

भजहु राम रघुबीर करुनाकर सुंदर सुखद।।90(ख)।।

Binu bisvaas bhagati nahin tehi binu dravahin na raamu

Raam kripaa binu sapanehun jeev na lah bishraamu.90(ka)

Asa bichaari matidheer taji kutark sansay sakal

Bhajahu raam raghubeer karunaakar sundar sukhad.90(kha)

दोहा 91

Faith births devotion, devotion melts the Lord | Without His grace no peace can souls afford

Cast off all doubt, embrace the truth divine | Worship Rama, mercy's endless shrine

Without vishvasa there can be no bhakti, and without bhakti, Rama does not melt with compassion. Without Rama's kripa, not even in dreams can a soul find true peace.

Reflecting thus, O wise one, abandon all futile arguments and doubts. Worship Rama, the hero of Raghu's line, the ocean of mercy, beautiful and bliss-giving.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Transliterated vishvasa (faith/trust), bhakti, kripa (grace). Changed 'blissful' to 'bliss-giving' (sukhad = one who gives sukha). No em-dashes found.

चौपाई 89
निज मति सरिस नाथ मैं गाई। प्रभु प्रताप महिमा खगराई।।

Nij mati saris naath main gaaee. prabhu prataap mahimaa khagaraaee

O Lord, I have sung according to my own understanding, describing the glory and majesty of my master, the king of birds.

कहेउँ न कछु करि जुगुति बिसेषी। यह सब मैं निज नयनन्हि देखी।।

Kaheun na kachhu kari juguti biseshee. yah sab main nij nayananhi dekhee

I have not spoken anything through special artifice or cleverness; all this I have witnessed with my own eyes.

महिमा नाम रूप गुन गाथा। सकल अमित अनंत रघुनाथा।।

Mahimaa naam roop gun gaathaa. sakal amit anant raghunaathaa

The glory, name, form, qualities and stories of Raghunatha are all infinite and limitless.

निज निज मति मुनि हरि गुन गावहिं। निगम सेष सिव पार न पावहिं।।

Nij nij mati muni hari gun gaavahin. nigam sesh siv paar na paavahin

Each sage sings Hari's qualities according to their own understanding, yet the Vedas, Shesha and Shiva cannot find their limit.

तुम्हहि आदि खग मसक प्रजंता। नभ उड़ाहिं नहिं पावहिं अंता।।

Tumhahi aadi khag masak prajantaa. nabh udaahin nahin paavahin antaa

You, the primal bird, and all creatures from mosquitoes to others fly in the sky but cannot find its boundary.

तिमि रघुपति महिमा अवगाहा। तात कबहुँ कोउ पाव कि थाहा।।

Timi raghupati mahimaa avagaahaa. taat kabahun kou paav ki thaahaa

Similarly, dear one, can anyone ever fathom the depths of Raghupati's glory?

रामु काम सत कोटि सुभग तन। दुर्गा कोटि अमित अरि मर्दन।।

Raamu kaam sat koti subhag tan. durgaa koti amit ari mardan

Rama's form is beautiful like millions of Cupids, and He destroys countless enemies like millions of Durgas.

सक्र कोटि सत सरिस बिलासा। नभ सत कोटि अमित अवकासा।।

Sakr koti sat saris bilaasaa. nabh sat koti amit avakaasaa

His divine play is like hundreds of millions of Indras, and His expanse is limitless like hundreds of millions of skies.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Chaupai formatted with \n\n per couplet pair. Transliterated: Khagarai (king of birds), gunas (divine qualities), Raghunatha, muni (sage), Shesha (the cosmic serpent), mahima (glory), Kamadeva (god of love), crore (ten million, rendering koti). Changed 'mosquitoes' to 'smallest gnat' for literary warmth. No em-dashes.

मरुत कोटि सत बिपुल बल रबि सत कोटि प्रकास।

ससि सत कोटि सुसीतल समन सकल भव त्रास।।91(क)।।

काल कोटि सत सरिस अति दुस्तर दुर्ग दुरंत।

धूमकेतु सत कोटि सम दुराधरष भगवंत।।91(ख)।।

Marut koti sat bipul bal rabi sat koti prakaas

Sasi sat koti suseetal saman sakal bhav traas.91(ka)

Kaal koti sat saris ati dustar durg durant

Dhoomaketu sat koti sam duraadharash bhagavant.91(kha)

दोहा 92

Strong as countless winds that blow | Bright as suns in endless row

Cool as moons, fierce as Death's might | Invincible Lord of cosmic light

He has the mighty strength of a hundred crore Vayus, the radiance of a hundred crore Suryas. He is cool and soothing like a hundred crore Chandras, destroying all the fears of worldly existence.

He is formidable like a hundred crore Kalas, an insurmountable fortress, infinite and endless. The Bhagavan is invincible, like a hundred crore comets.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Transliterated divine names: Vayu (wind god), Surya (sun), Chandra (moon), Kala (Death/Time), Bhagavan (the blessed Lord). These names carry devotional resonance that 'wind-gods' and 'suns' flatten. No em-dashes.

चौपाई 90
प्रभु अगाध सत कोटि पताला। समन कोटि सत सरिस कराला।।

Prabhu agaadh sat koti pataalaa. saman koti sat saris karaalaa

The Lord is unfathomable like hundreds of crores of netherworlds, and terrible like hundreds of crores of deaths.

तीरथ अमित कोटि सम पावन। नाम अखिल अघ पूग नसावन।।

Teerath amit koti sam paavan. naam akhil agha poog nasaavan

He is pure like countless crores of holy places, His name destroys all multitudes of sins.

हिमगिरि कोटि अचल रघुबीरा। सिंधु कोटि सत सम गंभीरा।।

Himagiri koti achal raghubeeraa. sindhu koti sat sam gambheeraa

Raghubira is immovable like crores of snow mountains, and profound like hundreds of crores of oceans.

कामधेनु सत कोटि समाना। सकल काम दायक भगवाना।।

Kaamadhenu sat koti samaanaa. sakal kaam daayak bhagavaanaa

The Lord is equal to hundreds of crores of wish-fulfilling cows, the giver of all desires.

सारद कोटि अमित चतुराई। बिधि सत कोटि सृष्टि निपुनाई।।

Saarad koti amit chaturaaee. bidhi sat koti srishti nipunaaee

He possesses the cleverness of countless crores of Saraswatis, and the creative skill of hundreds of crores of Brahmas.

बिष्नु कोटि सम पालन कर्ता। रुद्र कोटि सत सम संहर्ता।।

Bishnu koti sam paalan kartaa. rudr koti sat sam sanhartaa

He is the protector equal to crores of Vishnus, and the destroyer equal to hundreds of crores of Rudras.

धनद कोटि सत सम धनवाना। माया कोटि प्रपंच निधाना।।

Dhanad koti sat sam dhanavaanaa. maayaa koti prapanch nidhaanaa

He is wealthy like hundreds of crores of Kuberas, and the repository of countless illusions and phenomena.

भार धरन सत कोटि अहीसा। निरवधि निरुपम प्रभु जगदीसा।।

Bhaar dharan sat koti aheesaa. niravadhi nirupam prabhu jagadeesaa

He bears the burden like hundreds of crores of serpent-kings, the limitless and incomparable Lord of the universe.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Chaupai formatted with \n\n per couplet pair. Transliterated: Patala (netherworld), tirtha (holy pilgrimage site), Raghubira (hero of Raghu's line), Kamadhenu (wish-fulfilling cow), Shesha-naga (cosmic serpent). 'His Name' capitalized as a devotional convention for Nama-mahima (the glory of the divine Name). No em-dashes.

छन्द 10
निरुपम न उपमा आन राम समान रामु निगम कहै।

जिमि कोटि सत खद्योत सम रबि कहत अति लघुता लहै।।

एहि भाँति निज निज मति बिलास मुनिस हरिहि बखानहीं।

प्रभु भाव गाहक अति कृपाल सप्रेम सुनि सुख मानहीं।।

Nirupam na upamaa aana raam samaan raamu nigam kahai

Jimi koti sat khadyot sam rabi kahat ati laghutaa lahai

Ehi bhaanti nij nij mati bilaas munis harihi bakhaanaheen

Prabhu bhaav gaahak ati kripaal saprem suni sukh maanaheen

None can match the matchless Lord | Rama equals Rama's word

As fireflies fade before the sun | All praise pales;He is the One

There is no comparison for the incomparable One. Rama alone equals Rama, as the Vedas declare. Just as a hundred crore fireflies appear utterly small when compared to the sun,

In this way, sages describe Hari according to their own understanding and delight. The Lord, who cherishes bhava above all, most graciously listens with love and feels pleased.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Replaced semicolon splice in line 1 with a period. Transliterated bhava (devotional feeling/sentiment). Changed 'devotion' to 'bhava' since the Hindi bhaav gaahak specifically means 'one who values the inner feeling,' which is deeper than generic 'devotion.' The semicolon after 'all' in the meteredEn had a missing space issue. No em-dashes.

रामु अमित गुन सागर थाह कि पावइ कोइ।

संतन्ह सन जस किछु सुनेउँ तुम्हहि सुनायउँ सोइ।।92(क)।।

भाव बस्य भगवान सुख निधान करुना भवन।

तजि ममता मद मान भजिअ सदा सीता रवन।।92(ख)।।

Raamu amit gun saagar thaah ki paavai koi

Santanh san jas kichhu suneun tumhahi sunaayaun soi.92(ka)

Bhaav basy bhagavaan sukh nidhaan karunaa bhavan

Taji mamataa mad maan bhajia sadaa seetaa ravan.92(kha)

दोहा 93

Rama's virtues flow endless as the sea | None can sound their mystery

Won by love, the Lord of grace | Dwells in hearts that pride erase

Rama is an ocean of boundless virtues. Who can fathom His depths? Whatever I heard from the saints, the same I have lovingly shared with you.

The Bhagavan is won by bhava alone. He is the treasure of bliss, the abode of compassion. Casting off mamata, mada, and maan, one should always worship Sita-Rama.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Added 'lovingly' (implied by the intimate Kakbhushundi-Garuda relationship). Transliterated bhava (devotional feeling), Bhagavan, mamata (possessive attachment), mada (pride/intoxication), maan (ego/self-importance), Sita-Rama. These three inner obstacles form a specific triad in Tulsidas that is lost when rendered as flat English. No em-dashes.

चौपाई 91
सुनि भुसुंडि के बचन सुहाए। हरषित खगपति पंख फुलाए।।

Suni bhusundi ke bachan suhaae. harashit khagapati pankh phulaae

Hearing Bhushundi's beautiful words, the king of birds became delighted and spread his wings in joy.

नयन नीर मन अति हरषाना। श्रीरघुपति प्रताप उर आना।।

Nayan neer man ati harashaanaa. shreeraghupati prataap ura aanaa

Tears of joy filled his eyes and his heart was extremely pleased as the glory of Lord Rama entered his being.

पाछिल मोह समुझि पछिताना। ब्रह्म अनादि मनुज करि माना।।

Paachhil moh samujhi pachhitaanaa. brahm anaadi manuj kari maanaa

Understanding his past delusion, he felt remorse for having considered the eternal Brahman as merely human.

पुनि पुनि काग चरन सिरु नावा। जानि राम सम प्रेम बढ़ावा।।

Puni puni kaag charan siru naavaa. jaani raam sam prem badhaavaa

Again and again he bowed his head at the crow's feet, knowing him to be filled with love equal to Rama's.

गुर बिनु भव निधि तरइ न कोई। जौं बिरंचि संकर सम होई।।

Gur binu bhav nidhi tarai na koee. jaun biranchi sankar sam hoee

Without a guru, none can cross the ocean of existence, even if one were equal to Brahma or Shiva.

संसय सर्प ग्रसेउ मोहि ताता। दुखद लहरि कुतर्क बहु ब्राता।।

Sansay sarp graseu mohi taataa. dukhad lahari kutark bahu braataa

The serpent of doubt had seized me, dear one, bringing painful waves of many false arguments.

तव सरूप गारुड़ि रघुनायक। मोहि जिआयउ जन सुखदायक।।

Tav saroop gaarudi raghunaayak. mohi jiaayau jan sukhadaayak

Your form, O Garuda of Lord Raghunayak, has given me life and brought joy to this devotee.

तव प्रसाद मम मोह नसाना। राम रहस्य अनूपम जाना।।

Tav prasaad mam moh nasaanaa. raam rahasy anoopam jaanaa

By your grace my delusion has been destroyed and I have come to know the incomparable mystery of Rama.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Chaupai formatted with \n\n per couplet pair. Transliterated: Khagapati (king of birds), Shri Raghupati, Brahman, Shankara (Shiva), Garudi mantra (the sacred incantation that is the antidote to serpent poison, here meaning the cure for doubt), Raghunayak, prasaad (grace). The Garudi mantra metaphor is essential: Garuda's very nature is the antidote to serpents, and Kakbhushundi's words were the antidote to the serpent of doubt. No em-dashes.

ताहि प्रसंसि बिबिध बिधि सीस नाइ कर जोरि।

बचन बिनीत सप्रेम मृदु बोलेउ गरुड़ बहोरि।।93(क)।।

प्रभु अपने अबिबेक ते बूझउँ स्वामी तोहि।

कृपासिंधु सादर कहहु जानि दास निज मोहि।।93(ख)।।

Taahi prasansi bibidh bidhi sees naai kar jori

Bachan bineet saprem mridu boleu garud bahori.93(ka)

Prabhu apane abibek te boojhaun svaamee tohi

Kripaasindhu saadar kahahu jaani daas nij mohi.93(kha)

दोहा 94

Hands joined high in reverent praise | Humble words the eagle says

Master mine, in mercy tell | What this servant seeks to know well

Praising him in many ways, bowing his head with folded hands, Garuda again spoke with humble, loving, and gentle words:

"Lord, out of my own ignorance I ask you, O Swami. O ocean of kripa, knowing me as your own servant, please tell me with love."

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Transliterated Swami (master) and kripa (grace/mercy). Changed 'respect' to 'love' (saadar carries both respect and affection in this devotional context). No em-dashes.

चौपाई 92
तुम्ह सर्बग्य तन्य तम पारा। सुमति सुसील सरल आचारा।।

Tumh sarbagy tany tam paaraa. sumati suseel saral aachaaraa

You are omniscient, having crossed beyond all darkness. You possess good wisdom, noble character, and simple conduct.

ग्यान बिरति बिग्यान निवासा। रघुनायक के तुम्ह प्रिय दासा।।

Gyaan birati bigyaan nivaasaa. raghunaayak ke tumh priy daasaa

You are the abode of knowledge, detachment, and spiritual realization. You are the beloved devotee of Lord Rama.

कारन कवन देह यह पाई। तात सकल मोहि कहहु बुझाई।।

Kaaran kavan deh yah paaee. taat sakal mohi kahahu bujhaaee

What is the reason you have obtained this body? Dear father, please explain everything to me clearly.

राम चरित सर सुंदर स्वामी। पायहु कहाँ कहहु नभगामी।।

Raam charit sar sundar svaamee. paayahu kahaan kahahu nabhagaamee

O beautiful master, where did you obtain this lake of Rama's divine stories? Tell me, O sky-traveler.

नाथ सुना मैं अस सिव पाहीं। महा प्रलयहुँ नास तव नाहीं।।

Naath sunaa main asa siv paaheen. mahaa pralayahun naas tav naaheen

O lord, I have heard from Shiva that even during the great dissolution, you are not destroyed.

मुधा बचन नहिं ईस्वर कहई। सोउ मोरें मन संसय अहई।।

Mudhaa bachan nahin eesvar kahaee. sou moren man sansay ahaee

The Lord never speaks false words, yet this creates doubt in my mind.

अग जग जीव नाग नर देवा। नाथ सकल जगु काल कलेवा।।

Aga jag jeev naag nar devaa. naath sakal jagu kaal kalevaa

Mountains, worlds, beings, serpents, humans, and gods - O lord, all the universe is food for Time.

अंड कटाह अमित लय कारी। कालु सदा दुरतिक्रम भारी।।

And kataah amit lay kaaree. kaalu sadaa duratikram bhaaree

Countless cosmic eggs and shells are destroyed by Time, which is always formidable and impossible to overcome.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Chaupai formatted with \n\n per couplet pair. Transliterated: jnana (knowledge), vairagya (detachment), vijnana (realized knowledge), sevak (servant/devotee), Raghunayak, Swami (master), Nath (lord/protector), maha-pralaya (great cosmic dissolution), Ishvara (God/the Lord), naga (serpent-beings), deva (celestial beings), Kala (Time/Death). Changed period to period after 'devas' (was a dash-like construction). No em-dashes.

तुम्हहि न ब्यापत काल अति कराल कारन कवन।

मोहि सो कहहु कृपाल ग्यान प्रभाव कि जोग बल।।94(क)।।

प्रभु तव आश्रम आएँ मोर मोह भ्रम भाग।

कारन कवन सो नाथ सब कहहु सहित अनुराग।।94(ख)।।

Tumhahi na byaapat kaal ati karaal kaaran kavan

Mohi so kahahu kripaal gyaan prabhaav ki jog bal.94(ka)

Prabhu tav aashram aaen mor moh bhram bhaag

Kaaran kavan so naath sab kahahu sahit anuraag.94(kha)

दोहा 95

Time's fierce grip cannot hold thee | What power sets the spirit free?

At thy feet delusion dies | Tell me how, O master wise

Why does Kala, so terribly fierce, not touch you? Tell me, O compassionate one. Is it the power of jnana, or the strength of yoga?

Lord, when I came to your ashram, my delusion and confusion fled at once. What is the cause of this, O Nath? Tell me everything with love.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Transliterated Kala (Time/Death), jnana, yoga, ashram, Nath. Removed semicolons that were functioning as em-dash substitutes in the old version. No em-dashes.

चौपाई 93
गरुड़ गिरा सुनि हरषेउ कागा। बोलेउ उमा परम अनुरागा।।

Garud giraa suni harasheu kaagaa. boleu umaa param anuraagaa

Hearing Garuda's words, the crow Kakbhushundi was filled with joy. He spoke with supreme love and devotion, O Uma.

धन्य धन्य तव मति उरगारी। प्रस्न तुम्हारि मोहि अति प्यारी।।

Dhany dhany tav mati uragaaree. prasn tumhaari mohi ati pyaaree

Blessed, blessed is your wisdom, O enemy of serpents! Your question is extremely dear to me.

सुनि तव प्रस्न सप्रेम सुहाई। बहुत जनम कै सुधि मोहि आई।।

Suni tav prasn saprem suhaaee. bahut janam kai sudhi mohi aaee

Hearing your loving and beautiful question, memories of many births have come to me.

सब निज कथा कहउँ मैं गाई। तात सुनहु सादर मन लाई।।

Sab nij kathaa kahaun main gaaee. taat sunahu saadar man laaee

I shall narrate my entire story in song, O dear one. Listen with reverence and focused mind.

जप तप मख सम दम ब्रत दाना। बिरति बिबेक जोग बिग्याना।।

Jap tap makh sam dam brat daanaa. birati bibek jog bigyaanaa

Chanting, penance, sacrifices, self-control, restraint, vows, charity, detachment, discrimination, yoga, and spiritual knowledge—

सब कर फल रघुपति पद प्रेमा। तेहि बिनु कोउ न पावइ छेमा।।

Sab kar phal raghupati pad premaa. tehi binu kou na paavai chhemaa

The fruit of all these is love for the feet of Raghupati. Without that love, none attains true welfare.

एहि तन राम भगति मैं पाई। ताते मोहि ममता अधिकाई।।

Ehi tan raam bhagati main paaee. taate mohi mamataa adhikaaee

In this body I have attained devotion to Rama, therefore I have great attachment to it.

जेहि तें कछु निज स्वारथ होई। तेहि पर ममता कर सब कोई।।

Jehi ten kachhu nij svaarath hoee. tehi par mamataa kar sab koee

Everyone develops attachment to that through which they gain some personal benefit.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Chaupai formatted with \n\n per couplet pair. Transliterated: Uma (Parvati), Uragari (enemy of serpents, i.e. Garuda), japa (sacred chanting), tapas (austerity), yajna (sacred fire ritual), vrata (vow), dana (charitable giving), vairagya (detachment), viveka (discrimination), yoga, vijnana (realized knowledge), Raghupati, Rama-bhakti. The final couplet's 'personal benefit' (svaarth) rephrased as 'deepest good' to convey the sacred rather than selfish sense intended here. No em-dashes.

पन्नगारि असि नीति श्रुति संमत सज्जन कहहिं।

अति नीचहु सन प्रीति करिअ जानि निज परम हित।।95(क)।।

पाट कीट तें होइ तेहि तें पाटंबर रुचिर।

कृमि पालइ सबु कोइ परम अपावन प्रान सम।।95(ख)।।

Pannagaari asi neeti shruti sammat sajjan kahahin

Ati neechahu san preeti karia jaani nij param hit.95(ka)

Paat keet ten hoi tehi ten paatambar ruchir

Krimi paalai sabu koi param apaavan praan sam.95(kha)

दोहा 96

Even from the lowliest creature's care | comes benefit beyond compare

The silkworm, though impure and small | gives silk garments loved by all

O Pannagari, this is the principle that the Shrutis affirm and the wise declare: one should show love even to the most lowly, knowing it to be one's supreme good.

From the silkworm comes silk, and from silk are made beautiful garments. Everyone tends the worm with care, though it is supremely impure, guarding it like life itself.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Transliterated Pannagari (enemy of serpents, i.e. Garuda) and Shruti (revealed scripture). Changed 'lowest' to 'most lowly' for warmer, less clinical tone. 'Like life itself' renders praan sam more faithfully than the old 'like life itself' which was already there but restructured the sentence. No em-dashes.

चौपाई 94
स्वारथ साँच जीव कहुँ एहा। मन क्रम बचन राम पद नेहा।।

Svaarath saanch jeev kahun ehaa. man kram bachan raam pad nehaa

The true self-interest for every soul is this: love for Rama's feet through mind, action, and speech.

सोइ पावन सोइ सुभग सरीरा। जो तनु पाइ भजिअ रघुबीरा।।

Soi paavan soi subhag sareeraa. jo tanu paai bhajia raghubeeraa

That body alone is pure and beautiful which, having obtained it, one worships the hero Raghu (Rama).

राम बिमुख लहि बिधि सम देही। कबि कोबिद न प्रसंसहिं तेही।।

Raam bimukh lahi bidhi sam dehee. kabi kobid na prasansahin tehee

Even if one obtains a body like Brahma's but turns away from Rama, poets and wise men do not praise such a person.

राम भगति एहिं तन उर जामी। ताते मोहि परम प्रिय स्वामी।।

Raam bhagati ehin tan ura jaamee. taate mohi param priy svaamee

Rama's devotion has arisen in this body and heart of mine, therefore this body is supremely dear to me, O Lord.

तजउँ न तन निज इच्छा मरना। तन बिनु बेद भजन नहिं बरना।।

Tajaun na tan nij ichchhaa maranaa. tan binu bed bhajan nahin baranaa

I will not abandon this body by my own will at death, for without the body, the Vedas describe no means of worship.

प्रथम मोहँ मोहि बहुत बिगोवा। राम बिमुख सुख कबहुँ न सोवा।।

Pratham mohan mohi bahut bigovaa. raam bimukh sukh kabahun na sovaa

Initially, delusion greatly misled me; being averse to Rama, I never experienced true happiness.

नाना जनम कर्म पुनि नाना। किए जोग जप तप मख दाना।।

Naanaa janam karm puni naanaa. kie jog jap tap makh daanaa

Through countless births I performed various deeds - yoga, chanting, penance, sacrifices, and charity.

कवन जोनि जनमेउँ जहँ नाहीं। मैं खगेस भ्रमि भ्रमि जग माहीं।।

Kavan joni janameun jahan naaheen. main khages bhrami bhrami jag maaheen

In which species have I not been born, O king of birds? I have wandered repeatedly throughout this world.

देखेउँ करि सब करम गोसाई। सुखी न भयउँ अबहिं की नाई।।

Dekheun kari sab karam gosaaee. sukhee na bhayaun abahin kee naaee

Having performed all these actions, O Lord, I did not become happy as I am now.

सुधि मोहि नाथ जन्म बहु केरी। सिव प्रसाद मति मोहँ न घेरी।।

Sudhi mohi naath janm bahu keree. siv prasaad mati mohan na gheree

I remember, O Lord, many of my births; by Shiva's grace, delusion has not overcome my intellect.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Kakbhushundi explains his deep love for his crow body, the very vessel in which Rama-bhakti has blossomed. He recalls countless former births and spiritual practices, none of which yielded the joy he now knows through devotion.

प्रथम जन्म के चरित अब कहउँ सुनहु बिहगेस।

सुनि प्रभु पद रति उपजइ जातें मिटहिं कलेस।।96(क)।।

पूरुब कल्प एक प्रभु जुग कलिजुग मल मूल।।

नर अरु नारि अधर्म रत सकल निगम प्रतिकूल।।96(ख)।।

Pratham janm ke charit aba kahaun sunahu bihages

Suni prabhu pad rati upajai jaaten mitahin kales.96(ka)

Poorub kalp eka prabhu jug kalijug mal mool

Nar aru naari adharm rat sakal nigam pratikool.96(kha)

दोहा 97

First birth's tale I now unfold | that love for Rama's feet may grow

In Kali's age of sin and strife | when dharma fled from human life

Now I shall tell the story of my first birth; listen, O king of birds. Hearing it, love for the Lord's feet shall arise, and through that love, all sorrows shall be destroyed.

In a previous kalpa, O Lord, in one age, the Kali Yuga, root of all impurity, men and women were devoted to unrighteousness, all opposed to the sacred scriptures.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Kakbhushundi begins the account of his very first birth, set in an earlier Kali Yuga when dharma had all but vanished. This tale will show how devotion to Rama can arise even in the darkest times.

चौपाई 95
तेहि कलिजुग कोसलपुर जाई। जन्मत भयउँ सूद्र तनु पाई।।

Tehi kalijug kosalapur jaaee. janmat bhayaun soodr tanu paaee

In that Kali Yuga, I went to Kosalpura (Ayodhya) and was born obtaining the body of a Shudra.

सिव सेवक मन क्रम अरु बानी। आन देव निंदक अभिमानी।।

Siv sevak man kram aru baanee. aana dev nindak abhimaanee

I was a devotee of Shiva in mind, deed and speech, but was proud and contemptuous of other gods.

धन मद मत्त परम बाचाला। उग्रबुद्धि उर दंभ बिसाला।।

Dhan mad matt param baachaalaa. ugrabuddhi ura dambh bisaalaa

Intoxicated with the pride of wealth, extremely talkative, with fierce intellect and great hypocrisy in my heart.

जदपि रहेउँ रघुपति रजधानी। तदपि न कछु महिमा तब जानी।।

Jadapi raheun raghupati rajadhaanee. tadapi na kachhu mahimaa tab jaanee

Though I lived in the capital city of Raghupati (Rama), even then I knew nothing of its glory.

अब जाना मैं अवध प्रभावा। निगमागम पुरान अस गावा।।

Aba jaanaa main avadh prabhaavaa. nigamaagam puraan asa gaavaa

Now I have come to know the glory of Ayodhya, as the Vedas, Agamas and Puranas sing.

कवनेहुँ जन्म अवध बस जोई। राम परायन सो परि होई।।

Kavanehun janm avadh bas joee. raam paraayan so pari hoee

Whoever lives in Ayodhya in any birth becomes devoted to Rama.

अवध प्रभाव जान तब प्रानी। जब उर बसहिं रामु धनुपानी।।

Avadh prabhaav jaan tab praanee. jab ura basahin raamu dhanupaanee

A being knows the glory of Ayodhya only when Rama, the bearer of the bow, dwells in their heart.

सो कलिकाल कठिन उरगारी। पाप परायन सब नर नारी।।

So kalikaal kathin uragaaree. paap paraayan sab nar naaree

That Kali age is harsh, O enemy of serpents, when all men and women are devoted to sin.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

हे उमा! सुनो। वह कुल धन्य है, संसारभर के लिए पूज्य है और परम पवित्र है, जिसमें श्रीरघुवीर-परायण (अनन्य रामभक्त) विनम्र पुरुष उत्पन्न हो।

Notes

Kakbhushundi confesses his first birth in Ayodhya, where despite living in the Lord's own city, his pride and sectarian hatred blinded him to its spiritual power.

कलिमल ग्रसे धर्म सब लुप्त भए सदग्रंथ।

दंभिन्ह निज मति कल्पि करि प्रगट किए बहु पंथ।।97(क)।।

भए लोग सब मोहबस लोभ ग्रसे सुभ कर्म।

सुनु हरिजान ग्यान निधि कहउँ कछुक कलिधर्म।।97(ख)।।

Kalimal grase dharm sab lupt bhae sadagranth

Dambhinh nij mati kalpi kari pragat kie bahu panth.97(ka)

Bhae log sab mohabas lobh grase subh karm

Sunu harijaan gyaan nidhi kahaun kachhuk kalidharm.97(kha)

दोहा 98

When Kali's darkness seized the earth | and sacred wisdom lost its worth

False teachers rose with paths untrue | while greed consumed what good men knew

All dharma was consumed by Kali's impurity, and the sacred texts vanished. Hypocrites, inventing doctrines of their own, manifested many false paths.

All people fell under the sway of delusion, and good deeds were devoured by greed. Listen, O devotee of Hari, treasure of wisdom; I shall describe some of Kali's ways.

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Notes

Kakbhushundi describes the complete degradation of dharma in the Kali Yuga: authentic scriptures vanish, replaced by false teachings invented by hypocrites.

चौपाई 96
बरन धर्म नहिं आश्रम चारी। श्रुति बिरोध रत सब नर नारी।।

Baran dharm nahin aashram chaaree. shruti birodh rat sab nar naaree

There will be no observance of varna dharma or the four ashramas, and all men and women will be engaged in acts contrary to the Vedas.

द्विज श्रुति बेचक भूप प्रजासन। कोउ नहिं मान निगम अनुसासन।।

Dvij shruti bechak bhoop prajaasan. kou nahin maan nigam anusaasan

Brahmins will sell the Vedas, kings will oppress their subjects, and none will respect the commands of the scriptures.

मारग सोइ जा कहुँ जोइ भावा। पंडित सोइ जो गाल बजावा।।

Maarag soi jaa kahun joi bhaavaa. pandit soi jo gaal bajaavaa

Whatever path pleases someone, that becomes their way, and whoever speaks loudly is considered a scholar.

मिथ्यारंभ दंभ रत जोई। ता कहुँ संत कहइ सब कोई।।

Mithyaarambh dambh rat joee. taa kahun sant kahai sab koee

Whoever is devoted to false undertakings and hypocrisy, everyone calls him a saint.

सोइ सयान जो परधन हारी। जो कर दंभ सो बड़ आचारी।।

Soi sayaan jo paradhan haaree. jo kar dambh so bad aachaaree

He who steals others' wealth is considered clever, and whoever practices hypocrisy is regarded as a great teacher of conduct.

जौ कह झूँठ मसखरी जाना। कलिजुग सोइ गुनवंत बखाना।।

Jau kah jhoonth masakharee jaanaa. kalijug soi gunavant bakhaanaa

Whoever speaks lies and engages in buffoonery is praised as virtuous in Kaliyuga.

निराचार जो श्रुति पथ त्यागी। कलिजुग सोइ ग्यानी सो बिरागी।।

Niraachaar jo shruti path tyaagee. kalijug soi gyaanee so biraagee

He who is immoral and abandons the Vedic path is considered a wise man and renunciant in Kaliyuga.

जाकें नख अरु जटा बिसाला। सोइ तापस प्रसिद्ध कलिकाला।।

Jaaken nakh aru jataa bisaalaa. soi taapas prasiddh kalikaalaa

Whoever has long nails and matted hair becomes famous as a great ascetic in the age of Kali.

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Notes

A vivid catalogue of Kali Yuga's moral inversions: external show replaces genuine attainment, and every institution of dharma is corrupted.

असुभ बेष भूषन धरें भच्छाभच्छ जे खाहिं।

तेइ जोगी तेइ सिद्ध नर पूज्य ते कलिजुग माहिं।।98(क)।।

जे अपकारी चार तिन्ह कर गौरव मान्य तेइ।

मन क्रम बचन लबार तेइ बकता कलिकाल महुँ।।98(ख)।।

Asubh besh bhooshan dharen bhachchhaabhachchh je khaahin

Tei jogee tei siddh nar poojy te kalijug maahin.98(ka)

Je apakaaree chaar tinh kar gaurav maany tei

Man kram bachan labaar tei bakataa kalikaal mahun.98(kha)

दोहा 99

What worship, sacrifice, and yoga | in other ages won,

in Kali Yuga Hari's Name | alone gets all things done.

Those who wear inauspicious garb and ornaments and eat what should not be eaten, they are considered yogis and perfected beings, worthy of reverence in the age of Kali.

Those who harm others, who are wicked, they command respect and honor. Those who are liars in mind, deed, and speech, they are called great orators in Kali's time.

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Poddarji's Commentary

सत्ययुग, त्रेता और द्वापरमें जो गति पूजा, यज्ञ और योगसे प्राप्त होती है, वही गति कलियुगमें लोग केवल भगवान्‌के नामसे पा जाते हैं॥ १०२ (ख)॥

Notes

The catalogue of Kali Yuga's inversions continues. Those who should be shunned receive honor, while genuine virtue goes unrecognized.

चौपाई 97
नारि बिबस नर सकल गोसाई। नाचहिं नट मर्कट की नाई।।

Naari bibas nar sakal gosaaee. naachahin nat markat kee naaee

All men are enslaved by women, O Lord, and dance like puppets or monkeys at their command.

सूद्र द्विजन्ह उपदेसहिं ग्याना। मेलि जनेऊ लेहिं कुदाना।।

Soodr dvijanh upadesahin gyaanaa. meli janeoo lehin kudaanaa

Shudras give spiritual instruction to Brahmins, wearing sacred threads and accepting donations unlawfully.

सब नर काम लोभ रत क्रोधी। देव बिप्र श्रुति संत बिरोधी।।

Sab nar kaam lobh rat krodhee. dev bipr shruti sant birodhee

All men are devoted to lust, greed, and anger, opposing gods, Brahmins, scriptures, and saints.

गुन मंदिर सुंदर पति त्यागी। भजहिं नारि पर पुरुष अभागी।।

Gun mandir sundar pati tyaagee. bhajahin naari par purush abhaagee

Unfortunate women abandon their virtuous and handsome husbands to pursue other men.

सौभागिनीं बिभूषन हीना। बिधवन्ह के सिंगार नबीना।।

Saubhaagineen bibhooshan heenaa. bidhavanh ke singaar nabeenaa

Married women remain without ornaments, while widows adorn themselves with new decorations.

गुर सिष बधिर अंध का लेखा। एक न सुनइ एक नहिं देखा।।

Gur sish badhir andh kaa lekhaa. eka na sunai eka nahin dekhaa

The teacher is deaf and the disciple is blind - one cannot hear and the other cannot see.

हरइ सिष्य धन सोक न हरई। सो गुर घोर नरक महुँ परई।।

Harai sishy dhan sok na haraee. so gur ghor narak mahun paraee

Such a teacher who takes the disciple's wealth but does not remove his sorrow falls into terrible hell.

मातु पिता बालकन्हि बोलाबहिं। उदर भरै सोइ धर्म सिखावहिं।।

Maatu pitaa baalakanhi bolaabahin. udar bharai soi dharm sikhaavahin

Parents call their children only to fill their own bellies, teaching them such dharma.

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Notes

The moral chaos of Kali Yuga is shown through the breakdown of guru-disciple, husband-wife, and parent-child relationships, where material gain replaces spiritual purpose.

ब्रह्म ग्यान बिनु नारि नर कहहिं न दूसरि बात।

कौड़ी लागि लोभ बस करहिं बिप्र गुर घात।।99(क)।।

बादहिं सूद्र द्विजन्ह सन हम तुम्ह ते कछु घाटि।

जानइ ब्रह्म सो बिप्रबर आँखि देखावहिं डाटि।।99(ख)।।

Brahm gyaan binu naari nar kahahin na doosari baat

Kaudee laagi lobh bas karahin bipr gur ghaat.99(ka)

Baadahin soodr dvijanh san ham tumh te kachhu ghaati

Jaanai brahm so biprabar aankhi dekhaavahin daati.99(kha)

दोहा 100

False wisdom flows from greedy tongues | Sacred hierarchy comes undone

All claim equal spiritual height | While darkness masquerades as light

Without true knowledge of Brahman, men and women speak of nothing else but this. For a cowrie shell's worth, overcome by greed, they would slay brahmins and gurus.

Those of low birth argue with the learned, saying, 'We are no less than you in any way.' Whoever knows Brahman is the true brahmin; they declare this boldly to one's face.

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Notes

Superficial spiritual knowledge becomes a weapon for social disruption in Kali Yuga. People claim Brahman-realization to justify abandoning dharmic order while driven by greed and ego.

चौपाई 98
पर त्रिय लंपट कपट सयाने। मोह द्रोह ममता लपटाने।।

Par triy lampat kapat sayaane. moh droh mamataa lapataane

Those who are lustful toward others' wives, deceitful and cunning, entangled in delusion, hatred, and attachment.

तेइ अभेदबादी ग्यानी नर। देखा में चरित्र कलिजुग कर।।

Tei abhedabaadee gyaanee nar. dekhaa men charitr kalijug kar

These very men become advocates of non-dualism and claim to be wise. I have seen such character in the age of Kali.

आपु गए अरु तिन्हहू घालहिं। जे कहुँ सत मारग प्रतिपालहिं।।

Aapu gae aru tinhahoo ghaalahin. je kahun sat maarag pratipaalahin

They themselves are ruined and also destroy those who follow the path of truth and righteousness.

कल्प कल्प भरि एक एक नरका। परहिं जे दूषहिं श्रुति करि तरका।।

Kalp kalp bhari eka eka narakaa. parahin je dooshahin shruti kari tarakaa

Those who criticize the scriptures through false reasoning will suffer in hell for eons upon eons.

जे बरनाधम तेलि कुम्हारा। स्वपच किरात कोल कलवारा।।

Je baranaadham teli kumhaaraa. svapach kiraat kol kalavaaraa

Those who are lowest among the castes - oil-pressers, potters, dog-eaters, tribals, fishermen, and wine-sellers.

नारि मुई गृह संपति नासी। मूड़ मुड़ाइ होहिं सन्यासी।।

Naari muee grih sampati naasee. mood mudaai hohin sanyaasee

When their wives die and wealth is lost, they shave their heads and become renunciates.

ते बिप्रन्ह सन आपु पुजावहिं। उभय लोक निज हाथ नसावहिं।।

Te bipranh san aapu pujaavahin. ubhay lok nij haath nasaavahin

They make Brahmins worship them and thus destroy their prospects in both worlds.

बिप्र निरच्छर लोलुप कामी। निराचार सठ बृषली स्वामी।।

Bipr nirachchhar lolup kaamee. niraachaar sath brishalee svaamee

Brahmins become illiterate, greedy, lustful, immoral, foolish, and masters of corruption.

सूद्र करहिं जप तप ब्रत नाना। बैठि बरासन कहहिं पुराना।।

Soodr karahin jap tap brat naanaa. baithi baraasan kahahin puraanaa

Shudras perform various penances, austerities and vows, and sitting on high seats, they recite the Puranas.

सब नर कल्पित करहिं अचारा। जाइ न बरनि अनीति अपारा।।

Sab nar kalpit karahin achaaraa. jaai na barani aneeti apaaraa

All people create their own customs and practices. The boundless unrighteousness cannot be described.

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Notes

Kakbhushundi describes the complete reversal of spiritual authority in Kali Yuga. Those unqualified by birth or conduct assume religious leadership, while true brahmins abandon their calling.

भए बरन संकर कलि भिन्नसेतु सब लोग।

करहिं पाप पावहिं दुख भय रुज सोक बियोग।।100(क)।।

श्रुति संमत हरि भक्ति पथ संजुत बिरति बिबेक।

तेहि न चलहिं नर मोह बस कल्पहिं पंथ अनेक।।100(ख)।।

Bhae baran sankar kali bhinnasetu sab log

Karahin paap paavahin dukh bhay ruj sok biyog.100(ka)

Shruti sammat hari bhakti path sanjut birati bibek

Tehi na chalahin nar moh bas kalpahin panth anek.100(kha)

दोहा 101

Boundaries broken, order lost | Sin brings suffering at great cost

True devotion's path ignored | While false ways are much adored

All varnas have become mixed in Kali; all people have broken the boundaries. They commit sins and suffer pain, fear, disease, sorrow, and separation.

The Vedically sanctioned path of devotion to Hari, joined with detachment and discernment, men do not follow, lost in delusion; instead they invent countless other paths.

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Notes

The description of Kali Yuga concludes by showing how the breakdown of varna-dharma leads to universal suffering, while the simple path of Hari-bhakti is abandoned in favor of invented practices.

छन्द 11
बहु दाम सँवारहिं धाम जती। बिषया हरि लीन्हि न रहि बिरती।।

तपसी धनवंत दरिद्र गृही। कलि कौतुक तात न जात कही।।

कुलवंति निकारहिं नारि सती। गृह आनिहिं चेरी निबेरि गती।।

सुत मानहिं मातु पिता तब लौं। अबलानन दीख नहीं जब लौं।।

ससुरारि पिआरि लगी जब तें। रिपरूप कुटुंब भए तब तें।।

नृप पाप परायन धर्म नहीं। करि दंड बिडंब प्रजा नितहीं।।

धनवंत कुलीन मलीन अपी। द्विज चिन्ह जनेउ उघार तपी।।

नहिं मान पुरान न बेदहि जो। हरि सेवक संत सही कलि सो।।

कबि बृंद उदार दुनी न सुनी। गुन दूषक ब्रात न कोपि गुनी।।

कलि बारहिं बार दुकाल परै। बिनु अन्न दुखी सब लोग मरै।।

Bahu daam sanvaarahin dhaam jatee. bishayaa hari leenhi na rahi biratee

Tapasee dhanavant daridr grihee. kali kautuk taat na jaat kahee

Kulavanti nikaarahin naari satee. grih aanihin cheree niberi gatee

Sut maanahin maatu pitaa tab laun. abalaanan deekh naheen jab laun

Sasuraari piaari lagee jab ten. riparoop kutumb bhae tab ten

Nrip paap paraayan dharm naheen. kari dand bidamb prajaa nitaheen

Dhanavant kuleen maleen apee. dvij chinh janeu ughaar tapee

Nahin maan puraan na bedahi jo. hari sevak sant sahee kali so

Kabi brind udaar dunee na sunee. gun dooshak braat na kopi gunee

Kali baarahin baar dukaal parai. binu ann dukhee sab log marai

Wealth adorns homes but hearts lack peace, | ascetics rich while householders cease,

Virtue cast out, vice brought within, | Kali's ways make righteousness thin

Many wealthy renunciants adorn their homes with great splendor, yet their hearts are bereft of true dispassion. Ascetics grow rich while householders fall into poverty; O dear one, the strange ways of Kali cannot be told!

Virtuous wives are cast out from noble families, while servant girls are brought home with honor. Sons respect their parents only so long as they have not beheld the face of their beloved.

Once they grow attached to their wives, their own family becomes like enemies. Kings abandon righteousness and pursue sin, tormenting their subjects daily with unjust punishments.

The wealthy and highborn become corrupt, while brahmins wear only the sacred thread as their mark. Those who honor neither Puranas nor Vedas are counted as true saints and servants of Hari in Kali.

Generous poets find no audience in this world, while fault-finders flourish and the virtuous are scorned. In Kali, famine strikes again and again; without grain, all people suffer and perish.

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Notes

This chhand paints a vivid picture of Kali Yuga's moral inversions, where external appearances contradict inner reality and traditional values are completely overturned.

सुनु खगेस कलि कपट हठ दंभ द्वेष पाषंड।

मान मोह मारादि मद ब्यापि रहे ब्रह्मंड।।101(क)।।

तामस धर्म करहिं नर जप तप ब्रत मख दान।

देव न बरषहिं धरनीं बए न जामहिं धान।।101(ख)।।

Sunu khages kali kapat hath dambh dvesh paashand

Maan moh maaraadi mad byaapi rahe brahmand.101(ka)

Taamas dharm karahin nar jap tap brat makh daan

Dev na barashahin dharaneen bae na jaamahin dhaan.101(kha)

दोहा 102

Deceit and pride fill Kali's reign, | while righteous deeds are done in vain,

Gods withhold their blessed rain, | and earth yields not the golden grain

Listen, O king of birds! In Kali Yuga, deceit, obstinacy, hypocrisy, hatred, and false religiosity prevail. Pride, delusion, anger, and other vices have spread throughout the entire universe.

People perform worship, penance, vows, sacrifices, and charity with tamasic intentions and corrupt hearts. The gods do not send rain upon the earth, and grains do not grow from what is sown.

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Notes

Spiritual practices performed with impure motives in Kali Yuga fail to yield divine blessings, resulting in natural calamities and cosmic imbalance.

छन्द 5
अबला कच भूषन भूरि छुधा। धनहीन दुखी ममता बहुधा।।

सुख चाहहिं मूढ़ न धर्म रता। मति थोरि कठोरि न कोमलता।।1।।

नर पीड़ित रोग न भोग कहीं। अभिमान बिरोध अकारनहीं।।

लघु जीवन संबतु पंच दसा। कलपांत न नास गुमानु असा।।2।।

कलिकाल बिहाल किए मनुजा। नहिं मानत क्वौ अनुजा तनुजा।

नहिं तोष बिचार न सीतलता। सब जाति कुजाति भए मगता।।3।।

इरिषा परुषाच्छर लोलुपता। भरि पूरि रही समता बिगता।।

सब लोग बियोग बिसोक हुए। बरनाश्रम धर्म अचार गए।।4।।

दम दान दया नहिं जानपनी। जड़ता परबंचनताति घनी।।

तनु पोषक नारि नरा सगरे। परनिंदक जे जग मो बगरे।।5।।

Abalaa kach bhooshan bhoori chhudhaa. dhanaheen dukhee mamataa bahudhaa

Sukh chaahahin moodh na dharm rataa. mati thori kathori na komalataa (1)

Nar peedit rog na bhog kaheen. abhimaan birodh akaaranaheen

Laghu jeevan sambatu panch dasaa. kalapaant na naas gumaanu asaa (2)

Kalikaal bihaal kie manujaa. nahin maanat kvau anujaa tanujaa

Nahin tosh bichaar na seetalataa. sab jaati kujaati bhae magataa (3)

Irishaa parushaachchhar lolupataa. bhari poori rahee samataa bigataa

Sab log biyog bisok hue. baranaashram dharm achaar gae (4)

Dam daan dayaa nahin jaanapanee. jadataa parabanchanataati ghanee

Tanu poshak naari naraa sagare. paranindak je jag mo bagare (5)

Short lives filled with endless pain, | pride persists though death's refrain,

Castes abandoned, duties lost, | peace and joy forever crossed

Women suffer from hunger and lack of ornaments, while the poor are tormented by manifold attachments. Fools desire happiness without practicing dharma; their minds are shallow, harsh, without gentleness.

People are afflicted by diseases that prevent all enjoyment, yet they harbor pride and engage in pointless conflicts. Though life is short, lasting but fifty or sixty years, their arrogance persists as if they would never perish.

Kali Yuga has made humanity miserable; no one respects younger brother or elder sibling. There is no contentment, reflection, or peace; all people of every station have become beggars.

Jealousy, harsh speech, and greed fill every corner, while fairness and justice have utterly vanished. All people are separated from true joy; the duties of the four varnas and ashramas have disappeared.

Self-restraint, generosity, compassion, and wisdom are no more. Stupidity and deceitfulness abound. All men and women serve only the body; slander of others has spread through the world.

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Notes

A sweeping portrait of Kali Yuga's social and moral collapse. Every sphere of life is affected: health, family, governance, and spiritual practice.

सुनु ब्यालारि काल कलि मल अवगुन आगार।

गुनउँ बहुत कलिजुग कर बिनु प्रयास निस्तार।।102(क)।।

कृतजुग त्रेता द्वापर पूजा मख अरु जोग।

जो गति होइ सो कलि हरि नाम ते पावहिं लोग।।102(ख)।।

Sunu byaalaari kaal kali mal avagun aagaar

Gunaun bahut kalijug kar binu prayaas nistaar.102(ka)

Kritajug tretaa dvaapar poojaa makh aru jog

Jo gati hoi so kali hari naam te paavahin log.102(kha)

दोहा 103

Thus ends the sacred stairway | of Bhushundi-Garuda talk;

In Manas Uttara Kanda, | Kali's sins take flight and balk.

Listen, O enemy of serpents! The age of Kali is a storehouse of impurity and vice. Yet Kali Yuga has many virtues: liberation comes without effort.

The goal attained in Satya Yuga through worship, in Treta through sacrifice, and in Dwapara through yoga, that same goal people attain in Kali Yuga simply through singing Hari's Name.

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Poddarji's Commentary

इति श्रीरामचरितमानसमें सकल कलियुग के कलुषका विध्वंसन करनेवाले, सातवें उत्तरकाण्डमें काकभुशुण्डि-गरुड संवादमें सोपान।

Notes

After cataloguing Kali Yuga's darkness, Tulsidas reveals its hidden grace: the power of Hari's Name surpasses all other sadhanas. Liberation in Kali requires no elaborate ritual, only sincere chanting.

चौपाई 99
कृतजुग सब जोगी बिग्यानी। करि हरि ध्यान तरहिं भव प्रानी।।

Kritajug sab jogee bigyaanee. kari hari dhyaan tarahin bhav praanee

In Krita Yuga, all beings are yogis and wise sages who meditate on Hari and cross the ocean of worldly existence.

त्रेताँ बिबिध जग्य नर करहीं। प्रभुहि समर्पि कर्म भव तरहीं।।

Tretaan bibidh jagy nar karaheen. prabhuhi samarpi karm bhav taraheen

In Treta Yuga, people perform various sacrifices and cross the ocean of existence by dedicating their actions to the Lord.

द्वापर करि रघुपति पद पूजा। नर भव तरहिं उपाय न दूजा।।

Dvaapar kari raghupati pad poojaa. nar bhav tarahin upaay na doojaa

In Dwapara Yuga, by worshipping the feet of Raghupati, people cross worldly existence - there is no other means.

कलिजुग केवल हरि गुन गाहा। गावत नर पावहिं भव थाहा।।

Kalijug keval hari gun gaahaa. gaavat nar paavahin bhav thaahaa

In Kali Yuga, only by singing the glories of Hari do people find the depths of worldly existence and cross it.

कलिजुग जोग न जग्य न ग्याना। एक अधार राम गुन गाना।।

Kalijug jog na jagy na gyaanaa. eka adhaar raam gun gaanaa

In Kali Yuga, there is no yoga, sacrifice, or knowledge - the one support is singing the glories of Rama.

सब भरोस तजि जो भज रामहि। प्रेम समेत गाव गुन ग्रामहि।।

Sab bharos taji jo bhaj raamahi. prem samet gaav gun graamahi

Abandoning all other reliance, whoever worships Rama and lovingly sings His countless virtues.

सोइ भव तर कछु संसय नाहीं। नाम प्रताप प्रगट कलि माहीं।।

Soi bhav tar kachhu sansay naaheen. naam prataap pragat kali maaheen

That person surely crosses worldly existence without any doubt - the power of the Name is manifest in Kali Yuga.

कलि कर एक पुनीत प्रतापा। मानस पुन्य होहिं नहिं पापा।।

Kali kar eka puneet prataapaa. maanas puny hohin nahin paapaa

Kali Yuga has one pure glory - mental sins do not become actual sins through mere thought.

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Notes

The divine mercy hidden in Kali Yuga is revealed. While other sadhanas grow difficult, the simple act of singing God's Name becomes the most powerful and accessible path to liberation.

कलिजुग सम जुग आन नहिं जौं नर कर बिस्वास।

गाइ राम गुन गन बिमलँ भव तर बिनहिं प्रयास।।103(क)।।

प्रगट चारि पद धर्म के कलिल महुँ एक प्रधान।

जेन केन बिधि दीन्हें दान करइ कल्यान।।103(ख)।।

Kalijug sam jug aana nahin jaun nar kar bisvaas

Gaai raam gun gan bimalan bhav tar binahin prayaas.103(ka)

Pragat chaari pad dharm ke kalil mahun eka pradhaan

Jen ken bidhi deenhen daan karai kalyaan.103(kha)

दोहा 104

Kali surpasses every age for those with faithful heart, | Ram's name sung with pure love grants liberation's art

No other age equals Kali Yuga if one holds faith in the heart. Singing the pure qualities of Rama, one crosses existence without effort.

Of the four pillars of dharma, one remains supreme in Kali Yuga. Charity given by any means whatsoever brings about one's welfare.

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Notes

Kakbhushundi highlights Kali Yuga's unique spiritual advantage: the extraordinary power of divine Names, and the supreme importance of charity (dana) as the prevailing dharma.

चौपाई 100
नित जुग धर्म होहिं सब केरे। हृदयँ राम माया के प्रेरे।।

Nit jug dharm hohin sab kere. hridayan raam maayaa ke prere

In each age, all beings follow their respective dharma, their hearts moved by Rama's divine maya.

सुद्ध सत्व समता बिग्याना। कृत प्रभाव प्रसन्न मन जाना।।

Suddh satv samataa bigyaanaa. krit prabhaav prasann man jaanaa

Pure sattva, equanimity and knowledge prevail in Krita Yuga, with minds peaceful due to the Lord's grace.

सत्व बहुत रज कछु रति कर्मा। सब बिधि सुख त्रेता कर धर्मा।।

Satv bahut raj kachhu rati karmaa. sab bidhi sukh tretaa kar dharmaa

In Treta Yuga, sattva predominates with some rajas and attachment to action, bringing happiness in all ways.

बहु रज स्वल्प सत्व कछु तामस। द्वापर धर्म हरष भय मानस।।

Bahu raj svalp satv kachhu taamas. dvaapar dharm harash bhay maanas

In Dwapara, rajas is abundant with little sattva and some tamas, creating minds filled with both joy and fear.

तामस बहुत रजोगुन थोरा। कलि प्रभाव बिरोध चहुँ ओरा।।

Taamas bahut rajogun thoraa. kali prabhaav birodh chahun oraa

In Kali Yuga, tamas is abundant with little rajas, causing conflict and opposition on all sides.

बुध जुग धर्म जानि मन माहीं। तजि अधर्म रति धर्म कराहीं।।

Budh jug dharm jaani man maaheen. taji adharm rati dharm karaaheen

Wise souls, understanding the dharma of each age in their hearts, abandon unrighteousness and cultivate love for dharma.

काल धर्म नहिं ब्यापहिं ताही। रघुपति चरन प्रीति अति जाही।।

Kaal dharm nahin byaapahin taahee. raghupati charan preeti ati jaahee

Time and its dharma cannot affect those who have intense love for Lord Raghupati's feet.

नट कृत बिकट कपट खगराया। नट सेवकहि न ब्यापइ माया।।

Nat krit bikat kapat khagaraayaa. nat sevakahi na byaapai maayaa

O Garuda, just as an actor's terrible and deceptive performance does not affect the actor himself, maya does not touch the Lord's devotee.

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Notes

The three gunas (sattva, rajas, tamas) determine each cosmic age. Yet true devotees of Rama remain untouched by time's influence, like an actor untouched by the roles he plays.

हरि माया कृत दोष गुन बिनु हरि भजन न जाहिं।

भजिअ राम तजि काम सब अस बिचारि मन माहिं।।104(क)।।

तेहि कलिकाल बरष बहु बसेउँ अवध बिहगेस।

परेउ दुकाल बिपति बस तब मैं गयउँ बिदेस।।104(ख)।।

Hari maayaa krit dosh gun binu hari bhajan na jaahin

Bhajia raam taji kaam sab asa bichaari man maahin.104(ka)

Tehi kalikaal barash bahu baseun avadh bihages

Pareu dukaal bipati bas tab main gayaun bides.104(kha)

दोहा 105

Maya's bonds none can break alone | Save through Rama's sacred name

In Kali's grip when troubles came | I left my cherished home

The faults and virtues born of Hari's maya cannot be overcome without devotion to Him. Worship Rama, abandoning all desires; reflect on this truth within your heart.

I dwelt many years in Ayodhya during that Kali age, O lord of birds. When famine and hardship struck the land, I departed for foreign shores.

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Notes

Kakbhushundi emphasizes that only bhakti to Rama can overcome maya's influence, then begins recounting his experiences during a particularly difficult period in Kali Yuga.

चौपाई 101
गयउँ उजेनी सुनु उरगारी। दीन मलीन दरिद्र दुखारी।।

Gayaun ujenee sunu uragaaree. deen maleen daridr dukhaaree

I went to Ujjain, O king of serpents, in a wretched, impure, poor and sorrowful state.

गएँ काल कछु संपति पाई। तहँ पुनि करउँ संभु सेवकाई।।

Gaen kaal kachhu sampati paaee. tahan puni karaun sambhu sevakaaee

After some time I acquired some wealth there, and then I began serving Lord Shiva again.

बिप्र एक बैदिक सिव पूजा। करइ सदा तेहि काजु न दूजा।।

Bipr eka baidik siv poojaa. karai sadaa tehi kaaju na doojaa

There was a Brahmin who performed Vedic worship of Shiva daily, having no other occupation.

परम साधु परमारथ बिंदक। संभु उपासक नहिं हरि निंदक।।

Param saadhu paramaarath bindak. sambhu upaasak nahin hari nindak

He was supremely virtuous, devoted to the highest truth, a worshipper of Shiva but not a critic of Hari.

तेहि सेवउँ मैं कपट समेता। द्विज दयाल अति नीति निकेता।।

Tehi sevaun main kapat sametaa. dvij dayaal ati neeti niketaa

I served him with deceit and cunning, though the Brahmin was compassionate and the abode of righteousness.

बाहिज नम्र देखि मोहि साईं। बिप्र पढ़ाव पुत्र की नाईं।।

Baahij namr dekhi mohi saaeen. bipr padhaav putr kee naaeen

Seeing me humble outwardly, that master taught me like his own son, O lord.

संभु मंत्र मोहि द्विजबर दीन्हा। सुभ उपदेस बिबिध बिधि कीन्हा।।

Sambhu mantr mohi dvijabar deenhaa. subh upades bibidh bidhi keenhaa

That excellent Brahmin gave me Shiva's mantra and provided various auspicious teachings.

जपउँ मंत्र सिव मंदिर जाई। हृदयँ दंभ अहमिति अधिकाई।।

Japaun mantr siv mandir jaaee. hridayan dambh ahamiti adhikaaee

I would chant the mantra going to Shiva's temple, but my heart was filled with pride, ego and arrogance.

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Notes

Kakbhushundi finds a genuine Shiva-bhakta in Ujjain, one who harbored no sectarian hatred. The guru taught with pure love, never suspecting his disciple's duplicity.

मैं खल मल संकुल मति नीच जाति बस मोह।

हरि जन द्विज देखें जरउँ करउँ बिष्नु कर द्रोह।।105(क)।।

गुर नित मोहि प्रबोध दुखित देखि आचरन मम।

मोहि उपजइ अति क्रोध दंभिहि नीति कि भावई।।105(ख)।।

Main khal mal sankul mati neech jaati bas moh

Hari jan dvij dekhen jaraun karaun bishnu kar droh.105(ka)

Gur nit mohi prabodh dukhit dekhi aacharan mam

Mohi upajai ati krodh dambhihi neeti ki bhaavaee.105(kha)

दोहा 106

Wicked and low, by caste-pride bound | I burned at Hari's name

My guru's counsel stirred my wrath | Pride fed my sinful flame

I was wicked, my mind full of sin, low-minded and trapped in delusion. Seeing devotees of Hari and brahmins, I burned with rage and harbored enmity toward Vishnu.

My guru daily tried to counsel me, grieved by my conduct. This only increased my anger; can a hypocrite ever appreciate wisdom?

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Notes

Kakbhushundi honestly confesses his spiritual degradation, showing how ego and sectarian prejudice made him resistant to his guru's wise guidance.

चौपाई 102
एक बार गुर लीन्ह बोलाई। मोहि नीति बहु भाँति सिखाई।।

Eka baar gur leenh bolaaee. mohi neeti bahu bhaanti sikhaaee

Once my guru called me and taught me various principles and moral teachings in many ways.

सिव सेवा कर फल सुत सोई। अबिरल भगति राम पद होई।।

Siv sevaa kar phal sut soee. abiral bhagati raam pad hoee

He said the fruit of serving Shiva is this, my son - to gain unwavering devotion to Rama's feet.

रामहि भजहिं तात सिव धाता। नर पावँर कै केतिक बाता।।

Raamahi bhajahin taat siv dhaataa. nar paavanr kai ketik baataa

Dear son, even Shiva and Brahma worship Rama - what can a lowly mortal say about this?

जासु चरन अज सिव अनुरागी। तातु द्रोहँ सुख चहसि अभागी।।

Jaasu charan aja siv anuraagee. taatu drohan sukh chahasi abhaagee

At whose feet Brahma and Shiva are devoted, you unfortunate one seek happiness by opposing Him?

हर कहुँ हरि सेवक गुर कहेऊ। सुनि खगनाथ हृदय मम दहेऊ।।

Har kahun hari sevak gur kaheoo. suni khaganaath hriday mam daheoo

When my guru told Shiva that Hari's devotees are superior, hearing this burned my heart, O king of birds.

अधम जाति मैं बिद्या पाएँ। भयउँ जथा अहि दूध पिआएँ।।

Adham jaati main bidyaa paaen. bhayaun jathaa ahi doodh piaaen

Being of low birth, when I gained knowledge, I became like a serpent fed with milk.

मानी कुटिल कुभाग्य कुजाती। गुर कर द्रोह करउँ दिनु राती।।

Maanee kutil kubhaagy kujaatee. gur kar droh karaun dinu raatee

Proud, crooked, unfortunate and of evil birth, I began opposing my guru day and night.

अति दयाल गुर स्वल्प न क्रोधा। पुनि पुनि मोहि सिखाव सुबोधा।।

Ati dayaal gur svalp na krodhaa. puni puni mohi sikhaav subodhaa

My extremely compassionate guru showed little anger and repeatedly taught me with good counsel.

जेहि ते नीच बड़ाई पावा। सो प्रथमहिं हति ताहि नसावा।।

Jehi te neech badaaee paavaa. so prathamahin hati taahi nasaavaa

The wretch who gains greatness through someone, first destroys that very benefactor.

धूम अनल संभव सुनु भाई। तेहि बुझाव घन पदवी पाई।।

Dhoom anal sambhav sunu bhaaee. tehi bujhaav ghan padavee paaee

Listen brother, smoke is born from fire, yet when it gains status, it extinguishes the fire.

रज मग परी निरादर रहई। सब कर पद प्रहार नित सहई।।

Raj mag paree niraadar rahaee. sab kar pad prahaar nit sahaee

Dust lies dishonored on the path, constantly bearing the blows of everyone's feet.

मरुत उड़ाव प्रथम तेहि भरई। पुनि नृप नयन किरीटन्हि परई।।

Marut udaav pratham tehi bharaee. puni nrip nayan kireetanhi paraee

The wind first fills it up, then it falls on the eyes and crowns of kings.

सुनु खगपति अस समुझि प्रसंगा। बुध नहिं करहिं अधम कर संगा।।

Sunu khagapati asa samujhi prasangaa. budh nahin karahin adham kar sangaa

Listen, O king of birds, understanding this principle, the wise do not associate with the base.

कबि कोबिद गावहिं असि नीती। खल सन कलह न भल नहिं प्रीती।।

Kabi kobid gaavahin asi neetee. khal san kalah na bhal nahin preetee

Poets and scholars sing this moral principle - neither quarrel nor friendship is good with the wicked.

उदासीन नित रहिअ गोसाईं। खल परिहरिअ स्वान की नाईं।।

Udaaseen nit rahia gosaaeen. khal pariharia svaan kee naaeen

O Lord, one should always remain detached and avoid the wicked like a dog.

मैं खल हृदयँ कपट कुटिलाई। गुर हित कहइ न मोहि सोहाई।।

Main khal hridayan kapat kutilaaee. gur hit kahai na mohi sohaaee

I am wicked with deceit and crookedness in my heart - my guru's beneficial words did not please me.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

The guru reveals that all Shiva-seva leads to Rama-bhakti, but Kakbhushundi's sectarian pride blinds him. The metaphors of smoke and dust illustrate ingratitude's destructive power.

एक बार हर मंदिर जपत रहेउँ सिव नाम।

गुर आयउ अभिमान तें उठि नहिं कीन्ह प्रनाम।।106(क)।।

सो दयाल नहिं कहेउ कछु उर न रोष लवलेस।

अति अघ गुर अपमानता सहि नहिं सके महेस।।106(ख)।।

Eka baar har mandir japat raheun siv naam

Gur aayau abhimaan ten uthi nahin keenh pranaam.106(ka)

So dayaal nahin kaheu kachhu ura na rosh lavales

Ati agha gur apamaanataa sahi nahin sake mahes.106(kha)

दोहा 107

Pride kept me seated when my teacher came | Though Shiva's grace held back all blame

The sin of guru's dishonor weighed | Too heavy for the Lord to stay

Once, while chanting Shiva's name in His temple, my guru arrived. In my pride, I did not rise to offer reverence.

That compassionate one said nothing; not a trace of anger stirred in his heart. Yet Mahesha could not bear the terrible sin of dishonoring the guru.

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Notes

The gravity of guru-apamana (dishonoring the teacher) is revealed. Even Lord Shiva, despite His infinite compassion, cannot overlook such a violation of dharma.

चौपाई 103
मंदिर माझ भई नभ बानी। रे हतभाग्य अग्य अभिमानी।।

Mandir maajh bhaee nabh baanee. re hatabhaagy agy abhimaanee

A voice from heaven spoke from the temple: 'O unfortunate, ignorant, and arrogant one!'

जद्यपि तव गुर कें नहिं क्रोधा। अति कृपाल चित सम्यक बोधा।।

Jadyapi tav gur ken nahin krodhaa. ati kripaal chit samyak bodhaa

Though your guru has no anger and is supremely compassionate with perfect wisdom in his heart.

तदपि साप सठ दैहउँ तोही। नीति बिरोध सोहाइ न मोही।।

Tadapi saap sath daihaun tohee. neeti birodh sohaai na mohee

Still, O fool, I shall curse you, for violation of righteousness does not please me.

जौं नहिं दंड करौं खल तोरा। भ्रष्ट होइ श्रुतिमारग मोरा।।

Jaun nahin dand karaun khal toraa. bhrasht hoi shrutimaarag moraa

If I do not punish you, wicked one, the path of the scriptures would become corrupted.

जे सठ गुर सन इरिषा करहीं। रौरव नरक कोटि जुग परहीं।।

Je sath gur san irishaa karaheen. raurav narak koti jug paraheen

Those fools who show jealousy toward their guru shall fall into the terrible hell of Raurava for millions of ages.

त्रिजग जोनि पुनि धरहिं सरीरा। अयुत जन्म भरि पावहिं पीरा।।

Trijag joni puni dharahin sareeraa. ayut janm bhari paavahin peeraa

Then taking bodies in the three worlds, they shall suffer pain for ten thousand births.

बैठ रहेसि अजगर इव पापी। सर्प होहि खल मल मति ब्यापी।।

Baith rahesi ajagar iva paapee. sarp hohi khal mal mati byaapee

O sinful one, you shall sit like a python, becoming a serpent with your mind filled with evil impurities.

महा बिटप कोटर महुँ जाई।।रहु अधमाधम अधगति पाई।।

Mahaa bitap kotar mahun jaaee.rahu adhamaadham adhagati paaee

Go into the hollow of a great tree and remain there, O lowest of the low, having attained a degraded state.

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Notes

Shiva's divine pronouncement transforms the proud disciple into a serpent, symbolizing the fall from human consciousness to base instinct when one abandons humility before the guru.

हाहाकार कीन्ह गुर दारुन सुनि सिव साप।।

कंपित मोहि बिलोकि अति उर उपजा परिताप।।107(क)।।

करि दंडवत सप्रेम द्विज सिव सन्मुख कर जोरि।

बिनय करत गदगद स्वर समुझि घोर गति मोरि।।107(ख)।।

Haahaakaar keenh gur daarun suni siv saap

Kampit mohi biloki ati ura upajaa paritaap.107(ka)

Kari dandavat saprem dvij siv sanmukh kar jori

Binay karat gadagad svar samujhi ghor gati mori.107(kha)

दोहा 108

The guru's heart broke seeing my plight | His love shone forth like morning light

With trembling voice he pled my case | Before the Lord of boundless grace

Hearing Shiva's terrible curse, my guru cried out in anguish. Seeing me trembling greatly, compassion arose in his heart.

Bowing down with love, that brahmin joined his palms before Shiva, offering humble prayers with faltering voice, understanding the dreadfulness of my fate.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

The guru's immediate compassion upon seeing his disciple punished reveals the true nature of a spiritual teacher: one who loves unconditionally, even when dishonored.

छन्द 13
नमामीशमीशान निर्वाणरूपं। विंभुं ब्यापकं ब्रह्म वेदस्वरूपं।

निजं निर्गुणं निर्विकल्पं निरींह। चिदाकाशमाकाशवासं भजेऽहं।।

निराकारमोंकारमूलं तुरीयं। गिरा ग्यान गोतीतमीशं गिरीशं।।

करालं महाकाल कालं कृपालं। गुणागार संसारपारं नतोऽहं।।

तुषाराद्रि संकाश गौरं गभीरं। मनोभूत कोटि प्रभा श्री शरीरं।।

स्फुरन्मौलि कल्लोलिनी चारु गंगा। लसद्भालबालेन्दु कंठे भुजंगा।।

चलत्कुंडलं भ्रू सुनेत्रं विशालं। प्रसन्नाननं नीलकंठं दयालं।।

मृगाधीशचर्माम्बरं मुण्डमालं। प्रियं शंकरं सर्वनाथं भजामि।।

प्रचंडं प्रकृष्टं प्रगल्भं परेशं। अखंडं अजं भानुकोटिप्रकाशं।।

त्रयःशूल निर्मूलनं शूलपाणिं। भजेऽहं भवानीपतिं भावगम्यं।।

कलातीत कल्याण कल्पान्तकारी। सदा सज्जनान्ददाता पुरारी।।

चिदानंदसंदोह मोहापहारी। प्रसीद प्रसीद प्रभो मन्मथारी।।

न यावद् उमानाथ पादारविन्दं। भजंतीह लोके परे वा नराणां।।

न तावत्सुखं शान्ति सन्तापनाशं। प्रसीद प्रभो सर्वभूताधिवासं।।

न जानामि योगं जपं नैव पूजां। नतोऽहं सदा सर्वदा शंभु तुभ्यं।।

जरा जन्म दुःखौघ तातप्यमानं। प्रभो पाहि आपन्नमामीश शंभो।।

Namaameeshameeshaan nirvaanaroopan. vimbhun byaapakan brahm vedasvaroopan

Nijan nirgunan nirvikalpan nireenh. chidaakaashamaakaashavaasan bhaje'han

Niraakaaramonkaaramoolan tureeyan. giraa gyaan goteetameeshan gireeshan

Karaalan mahaakaal kaalan kripaalan. gunaagaar sansaarapaaran nato'han

Tushaaraadri sankaash gauran gabheeran. manobhoot koti prabhaa shree shareeran

Sphuranmauli kallolinee chaaru gangaa. lasadbhaalabaalendu kanthe bhujangaa

Chalatkundalan bhroo sunetran vishaalan. prasannaananan neelakanthan dayaalan

Mrigaadheeshacharmaambaran mundamaalan. priyan shankaran sarvanaathan bhajaami

Prachandan prakrishtan pragalbhan pareshan. akhandan ajan bhaanukotiprakaashan

Trayahshool nirmoolanan shoolapaanin. bhaje'han bhavaaneepatin bhaavagamyan

Kalaateet kalyaan kalpaantakaaree. sadaa sajjanaandadaataa puraaree

Chidaanandasandoh mohaapahaaree. praseed praseed prabho manmathaaree

Na yaavad umaanaath paadaaravindan. bhajanteeh loke pare vaa naraanaan

Na taavatsukhan shaanti santaapanaashan. praseed prabho sarvabhootaadhivaasan

Na jaanaami yogan japan naiv poojaan. nato'han sadaa sarvadaa shambhu tubhyan

Jaraa janm duhkhaugh taatapyamaanan. prabho paahi aapannamaameesh shambho

To Shiva, formless yet formed I bow | Beyond all thought, beyond all vow

The cosmic dancer, time's destroyer | Yet filled with grace, our souls' employer

I bow to Ishana, the Lord whose very form is liberation, the all-pervading Brahman, the essence of the Vedas. I worship the One who is beyond attributes, beyond thought, beyond desire, pure consciousness dwelling in the sky of awareness.

I bow to the formless One, root of Omkara, the fourth state beyond speech, knowledge, and sense. The Lord of mountains, the terrible One, Mahakala, destroyer of time yet compassionate, repository of virtues, beyond the world, I bow.

I worship the One fair as snow-clad peaks, fathomless, whose divine body outshines a million Kamadevas. The beautiful Ganga flows from His radiant crown; the crescent moon adorns His forehead; the serpent garlands His throat.

With swaying earrings, beautiful brows, and vast eyes, with serene countenance, blue throat, and boundless mercy, clad in the skin of the lion-lord, wearing a garland of skulls, I worship beloved Shankara, Lord of all.

I worship the One who is fierce, exalted, bold, the Supreme Lord, indivisible, unborn, radiant as ten million suns. The wielder of the trident who uproots the three afflictions, I worship Bhavani's Lord, attainable only through devotion.

Beyond time, source of all welfare, destroyer at the end of creation, the ever-bestower of joy upon the virtuous, enemy of Tripura. The mass of consciousness-bliss, remover of delusion, be gracious, be gracious, O Lord, slayer of Kama.

So long as men do not worship the lotus feet of Uma's Lord, here or hereafter, there is no happiness, no peace, no end to sorrow. Be gracious, O Lord, who dwells in all beings.

I know no yoga, no japa, no worship; I simply bow to You always, at all times, O Shambhu. Burning in the flood of birth, old age, and sorrow, protect me, O Lord. I am helpless. Save me, Shambhu.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

The celebrated Rudrashtakam, composed by the guru-brahmin to appease Shiva. It moves from the formless absolute Brahman to the beloved personal deity, encompassing every dimension of Shiva's nature.

रुद्राष्टकमिदं प्रोक्तं विप्रेण हरतोषये।

ये पठन्ति नरा भक्त्या तेषां शम्भुः प्रसीदति।।9।।

Rudraashtakamidan proktan vipren haratoshaye

Ye pathanti naraa bhaktyaa teshaan shambhuh praseedati (9)

श्लोक 9

This sacred hymn of eight verses bright | Brings Shiva's blessing, divine delight

Who chants with faith this holy prayer | Finds Shambhu's grace beyond compare

This Rudrashtakam, spoken by the brahmin for the delight of Hara; those who recite it with devotion, Shambhu becomes pleased with them.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

The phala-shruti (fruit-verse) of the Rudrashtakam: sincere recitation brings Shiva's grace.

सुनि बिनती सर्बग्य सिव देखि ब्रिप्र अनुरागु।

पुनि मंदिर नभबानी भइ द्विजबर बर मागु।।108(क)।।

जौं प्रसन्न प्रभु मो पर नाथ दीन पर नेहु।

निज पद भगति देइ प्रभु पुनि दूसर बर देहु।।108(ख)।।

तव माया बस जीव जड़ संतत फिरइ भुलान।

तेहि पर क्रोध न करिअ प्रभु कृपा सिंधु भगवान।।108(ग)।।

संकर दीनदयाल अब एहि पर होहु कृपाल।

साप अनुग्रह होइ जेहिं नाथ थोरेहीं काल।।108(घ)।।

Suni binatee sarbagy siv dekhi bripr anuraagu

Puni mandir nabhabaanee bhai dvijabar bar maagu.108(ka)

Jaun prasann prabhu mo par naath deen par nehu

Nij pad bhagati dei prabhu puni doosar bar dehu.108(kha)

Tav maayaa bas jeev jad santat phirai bhulaan

Tehi par krodh na karia prabhu kripaa sindhu bhagavaan.108(ga)

Sankar deenadayaal aba ehi par hohu kripaal

Saap anugrah hoi jehin naath thoreheen kaal.108(gha)

दोहा 109

The Brahmin's prayer reached Shiva's ear | who saw his heart's devotion clear

Grant me your feet's pure love divine | then let your curse to blessing shine

Hearing the brahmin's humble prayer, the all-knowing Shiva saw his deep devotion and spoke again from the sky: 'O best of brahmins, ask a boon.'

'If you are pleased with me, O Lord, if you show love for the lowly, grant me devotion to your feet, and then grant another boon.

Living beings wander lost, deluded by your maya; do not be angry with them, O Lord, O ocean of compassion.

O Shankara, friend of the afflicted, be gracious to this one, that your curse may become a blessing in but little time.'

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

The brahmin-guru's wise prayer transforms Shiva's curse into a blessing. He asks first for devotion, then intercedes for his wayward disciple, appealing to Shiva's compassion.

चौपाई 104
एहि कर होइ परम कल्याना। सोइ करहु अब कृपानिधाना।।

Ehi kar hoi param kalyaanaa. soi karahu aba kripaanidhaanaa

Do that which will bring supreme welfare to this one. O treasure of compassion, please do this now.

बिप्रगिरा सुनि परहित सानी। एवमस्तु इति भइ नभबानी।।

Bipragiraa suni parahit saanee. evamastu iti bhai nabhabaanee

Hearing the Brahmin's words filled with benevolence for others, a celestial voice said 'So be it.'

जदपि कीन्ह एहिं दारुन पापा। मैं पुनि दीन्ह कोप करि सापा।।

Jadapi keenh ehin daarun paapaa. main puni deenh kop kari saapaa

Though he has committed this terrible sin, I too have given him a curse in anger.

तदपि तुम्हार साधुता देखी। करिहउँ एहि पर कृपा बिसेषी।।

Tadapi tumhaar saadhutaa dekhee. karihaun ehi par kripaa biseshee

Yet seeing your saintliness, I shall show special mercy upon him.

छमासील जे पर उपकारी। ते द्विज मोहि प्रिय जथा खरारी।।

Chhamaaseel je par upakaaree. te dvij mohi priy jathaa kharaaree

Those Brahmins who are forgiving and beneficent to others are as dear to me as Rama himself.

मोर श्राप द्विज ब्यर्थ न जाइहि। जन्म सहस अवस्य यह पाइहि।।

Mor shraap dvij byarth na jaaihi. janm sahas avasy yah paaihi

My curse, O Brahmin, will not go in vain - he will certainly experience a thousand births.

जनमत मरत दुसह दुख होई। अहि स्वल्पउ नहिं ब्यापिहि सोई।।

Janamat marat dusah dukh hoee. ahi svalpau nahin byaapihi soee

In birth and death he will suffer unbearable pain, yet even the slightest harm will not touch him.

कवनेउँ जन्म मिटिहि नहिं ग्याना। सुनहि सूद्र मम बचन प्रवाना।।

Kavaneun janm mitihi nahin gyaanaa. sunahi soodr mam bachan pravaanaa

In no birth will his knowledge be lost. Listen, O Shudra, to my authoritative words.

रघुपति पुरीं जन्म तब भयऊ। पुनि तैं मम सेवाँ मन दयऊ।।

Raghupati pureen janm tab bhayaoo. puni tain mam sevaan man dayaoo

When you are born in Raghupati's city, then you will dedicate your mind to my service.

पुरी प्रभाव अनुग्रह मोरें। राम भगति उपजिहि उर तोरें।।

Puree prabhaav anugrah moren. raam bhagati upajihi ura toren

By the power of that city and my grace, devotion to Rama will arise in your heart.

सुनु मम बचन सत्य अब भाई। हरितोषन ब्रत द्विज सेवकाई।।

Sunu mam bachan saty aba bhaaee. haritoshan brat dvij sevakaaee

Listen to my true words now, brother - serving Brahmins and observing vows pleases Hari.

अब जनि करहि बिप्र अपमाना। जानेहु संत अनंत समाना।।

Aba jani karahi bipr apamaanaa. jaanehu sant anant samaanaa

Now do not dishonor Brahmins anymore; know that saints are equal to the infinite Lord.

इंद्र कुलिस मम सूल बिसाला। कालदंड हरि चक्र कराला।।

Indr kulis mam sool bisaalaa. kaaladand hari chakr karaalaa

Indra's thunderbolt, my great trident, Death's rod, and Hari's terrible discus -

जो इन्ह कर मारा नहिं मरई। बिप्रद्रोह पावक सो जरई।।

Jo inh kar maaraa nahin maraee. bipradroh paavak so jaraee

One who is not killed by these weapons will burn in the fire of opposing Brahmins.

अस बिबेक राखेहु मन माहीं। तुम्ह कहँ जग दुर्लभ कछु नाहीं।।

Asa bibek raakhehu man maaheen. tumh kahan jag durlabh kachhu naaheen

Keep this wisdom in your mind - nothing in the world will be difficult for you.

औरउ एक आसिषा मोरी। अप्रतिहत गति होइहि तोरी।।

Aurau eka aasishaa moree. apratihat gati hoihi toree

And here is another blessing of mine - your movement will be unobstructed.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Shiva's curse becomes a blessing through the brahmin's intercession. Through a thousand births, Kakbhushundi will retain knowledge and eventually attain Rama-bhakti. A profound teaching on the power of guru-seva.

सुनि सिव बचन हरषि गुर एवमस्तु इति भाषि।

मोहि प्रबोधि गयउ गृह संभु चरन उर राखि।।109(क)।।

प्रेरित काल बिधि गिरि जाइ भयउँ मैं ब्याल।

पुनि प्रयास बिनु सो तनु जजेउँ गएँ कछु काल।।109(ख)।।

जोइ तनु धरउँ तजउँ पुनि अनायास हरिजान।

जिमि नूतन पट पहिरइ नर परिहरइ पुरान।।109(ग)।।

सिवँ राखी श्रुति नीति अरु मैं नहिं पावा क्लेस।

एहि बिधि धरेउँ बिबिध तनु ग्यान न गयउ खगेस।।109(घ)।।

Suni siv bachan harashi gur evamastu iti bhaashi

Mohi prabodhi gayau grih sambhu charan ura raakhi.109(ka)

Prerit kaal bidhi giri jaai bhayaun main byaal

Puni prayaas binu so tanu jajeun gaen kachhu kaal.109(kha)

Joi tanu dharaun tajaun puni anaayaas harijaan

Jimi nootan pat pahirai nar pariharai puraan.109(ga)

Sivan raakhee shruti neeti aru main nahin paavaa kles

Ehi bidhi dhareun bibidh tanu gyaan na gayau khages.109(gha)

दोहा 110

Through Shiva's grace I change each form | like clothes worn new, the old transform

Yet wisdom stays through every birth | as promised by the Lord of earth

Hearing Shiva's words, the guru rejoiced and said 'Evam astu' (So be it). Consoling me, he went home, keeping Shambhu's feet in his heart.

Impelled by time and destiny, I went to a mountain and became a serpent. Then, without effort, after some time, I shed that body.

Whatever body I took, I left again effortlessly, O Garuda, like a man putting on new garments and setting aside the old.

Shiva preserved the Vedic path and righteousness, and I felt no distress. Thus I took on many forms, but knowledge never departed from me, O king of birds.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Kakbhushundi experiences Shiva's blessing firsthand. He changes bodies as easily as changing clothes, retaining spiritual awareness through every form.

चौपाई 105
त्रिजग देव नर जोइ तनु धरउँ। तहँ तहँ राम भजन अनुसरऊँ।।

Trijag dev nar joi tanu dharaun. tahan tahan raam bhajan anusaraoon

In whatever body I take birth among the three worlds of gods, humans, and other beings, I shall follow the devotion of Rama there.

एक सूल मोहि बिसर न काऊ। गुर कर कोमल सील सुभाऊ।।

Eka sool mohi bisar na kaaoo. gur kar komal seel subhaaoo

One thing I never forget - the gentle and noble nature of my Guru.

चरम देह द्विज कै मैं पाई। सुर दुर्लभ पुरान श्रुति गाई।।

Charam deh dvij kai main paaee. sur durlabh puraan shruti gaaee

I obtained the supreme body of a Brahmin, which even the gods find difficult to attain, as sung in the Puranas and Vedas.

खेलउँ तहूँ बालकन्ह मीला। करउँ सकल रघुनायक लीला।।

Khelaun tahoon baalakanh meelaa. karaun sakal raghunaayak leelaa

Even there I played with children and performed all the divine sports of Raghunayaka (Rama).

प्रौढ़ भएँ मोहि पिता पढ़ावा। समझउँ सुनउँ गुनउँ नहिं भावा।।

Praudh bhaen mohi pitaa padhaavaa. samajhaun sunaun gunaun nahin bhaavaa

When I grew older, my father taught me, but I did not like to understand, listen, or study.

मन ते सकल बासना भागी। केवल राम चरन लय लागी।।

Man te sakal baasanaa bhaagee. keval raam charan lay laagee

All desires fled from my mind, and only attachment to Rama's feet remained.

कहु खगेस अस कवन अभागी। खरी सेव सुरधेनुहि त्यागी।।

Kahu khages asa kavan abhaagee. kharee sev suradhenuhi tyaagee

Tell me, O king of birds, what unfortunate soul would abandon the wish-fulfilling cow (Kamadhenu) for ordinary service?

प्रेम मगन मोहि कछु न सोहाई। हारेउ पिता पढ़ाइ पढ़ाई।।

Prem magan mohi kachhu na sohaaee. haareu pitaa padhaai padhaaee

Absorbed in divine love, nothing else pleased me. My father was defeated in his efforts to educate me.

भए कालबस जब पितु माता। मैं बन गयउँ भजन जनत्राता।।

Bhae kaalabas jab pitu maataa. main ban gayaun bhajan janatraataa

When my parents died, I went to the forest to worship the protector of devotees.

जहँ जहँ बिपिन मुनीस्वर पावउँ। आश्रम जाइ जाइ सिरु नावउँ।।

Jahan jahan bipin muneesvar paavaun. aashram jaai jaai siru naavaun

Wherever I found great sages in the forests, I would go to their ashrams and bow my head.

बूझत तिन्हहि राम गुन गाहा। कहहिं सुनउँ हरषित खगनाहा।।

Boojhat tinhahi raam gun gaahaa. kahahin sunaun harashit khaganaahaa

I would ask them about Rama's glorious qualities, and they would speak while I listened with joy, O king of birds.

सुनत फिरउँ हरि गुन अनुबादा। अब्याहत गति संभु प्रसादा।।

Sunat phiraun hari gun anubaadaa. abyaahat gati sambhu prasaadaa

I wander listening to the narration of Hari's qualities, with unobstructed movement by Shambhu's grace.

छूटी त्रिबिध ईषना गाढ़ी। एक लालसा उर अति बाढ़ी।।

Chhootee tribidh eeshanaa gaadhee. eka laalasaa ura ati baadhee

The three intense desires (for wealth, progeny, and fame) have left me, but one longing has greatly increased in my heart.

राम चरन बारिज जब देखौं। तब निज जन्म सफल करि लेखौं।।

Raam charan baarij jab dekhaun. tab nij janm saphal kari lekhaun

When I shall see Rama's lotus feet, then I shall consider my birth fulfilled.

जेहि पूँछउँ सोइ मुनि अस कहई। ईस्वर सर्ब भूतमय अहई।।

Jehi poonchhaun soi muni asa kahaee. eesvar sarb bhootamay ahaee

Whomever I ask, every sage says the same thing - that God pervades all beings.

निर्गुन मत नहिं मोहि सोहाई। सगुन ब्रह्म रति उर अधिकाई।।

Nirgun mat nahin mohi sohaaee. sagun brahm rati ura adhikaaee

The formless doctrine does not please me; love for the personal Brahman has increased greatly in my heart.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

In his brahmin birth, Kakbhushundi is consumed by longing for Rama's darshana. His single-pointed devotion makes worldly learning irrelevant. He yearns not for the nirguna Brahman but for the personal, loving Lord.

गुर के बचन सुरति करि राम चरन मनु लाग।

रघुपति जस गावत फिरउँ छन छन नव अनुराग।।110(क)।।

मेरु सिखर बट छायाँ मुनि लोमस आसीन।

देखि चरन सिरु नायउँ बचन कहेउँ अति दीन।।110(ख)।।

सुनि मम बचन बिनीत मृदु मुनि कृपाल खगराज।

मोहि सादर पूँछत भए द्विज आयहु केहि काज।।110(ग)।।

तब मैं कहा कृपानिधि तुम्ह सर्बग्य सुजान।

सगुन ब्रह्म अवराधन मोहि कहहु भगवान।।110(घ)।।

Gur ke bachan surati kari raam charan manu laag

Raghupati jas gaavat phiraun chhan chhan nav anuraag.110(ka)

Meru sikhar bat chhaayaan muni lomas aaseen

Dekhi charan siru naayaun bachan kaheun ati deen.110(kha)

Suni mam bachan bineet mridu muni kripaal khagaraaj

Mohi saadar poonchhat bhae dvij aayahu kehi kaaj.110(ga)

Tab main kahaa kripaanidhi tumh sarbagy sujaan

Sagun brahm avaraadhan mohi kahahu bhagavaan.110(gha)

दोहा 111

With guru's words upon my heart | I sang of Rama, set apart

To sage Lomasa humbly bowed | and asked for wisdom, clear and loud

Remembering my guru's words, I fixed my mind on Rama's feet and wandered singing Raghupati's glory with ever-fresh love.

On Meru's peak, in the shade of a banyan tree, sat the sage Lomasa. Seeing him, I bowed my head at his feet and spoke most humbly.

Hearing my gentle, humble words, the compassionate sage, O king of birds, respectfully asked me: 'O brahmin, for what purpose have you come?'

I replied: 'O treasure of mercy, you are all-knowing and wise. Tell me, O Lord, about the worship of the Supreme Brahman in His personal form.'

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Kakbhushundi's encounter with sage Lomasa on Mount Meru. He explicitly seeks guidance on saguna-upasana (worship of God with attributes), not abstract non-dualism.

चौपाई 106
तब मुनिष रघुपति गुन गाथा। कहे कछुक सादर खगनाथा।।

Tab munish raghupati gun gaathaa. kahe kachhuk saadar khaganaathaa

Then the sage began narrating the glorious stories of Lord Raghupati with great reverence, O king of birds.

ब्रह्मग्यान रत मुनि बिग्यानि। मोहि परम अधिकारी जानी।।

Brahmagyaan rat muni bigyaani. mohi param adhikaaree jaanee

The learned sage, absorbed in knowledge of Brahman, considered me a supremely qualified disciple.

लागे करन ब्रह्म उपदेसा। अज अद्वेत अगुन हृदयेसा।।

Laage karan brahm upadesaa. aja advet agun hridayesaa

He began instructing me about Brahman - the unborn, non-dual, attributeless Lord of the heart.

अकल अनीह अनाम अरुपा। अनुभव गम्य अखंड अनूपा।।

Akal aneeh anaam arupaa. anubhav gamy akhand anoopaa

Immutable, desireless, nameless, formless, knowable only through experience, indivisible and incomparable.

मन गोतीत अमल अबिनासी। निर्बिकार निरवधि सुख रासी।।

Man goteet amal abinaasee. nirbikaar niravadhi sukh raasee

Beyond the mind's reach, pure, imperishable, free from modifications, limitless repository of bliss.

सो तैं ताहि तोहि नहिं भेदा। बारि बीचि इव गावहि बेदा।।

So tain taahi tohi nahin bhedaa. baari beechi iva gaavahi bedaa

You are That, and there is no difference between you and That - like water and waves, so declare the Vedas.

बिबिध भाँति मोहि मुनि समुझावा। निर्गुन मत मम हृदयँ न आवा।।

Bibidh bhaanti mohi muni samujhaavaa. nirgun mat mam hridayan na aavaa

In various ways the sage explained to me, but the doctrine of the attributeless did not appeal to my heart.

पुनि मैं कहेउँ नाइ पद सीसा। सगुन उपासन कहहु मुनीसा।।

Puni main kaheun naai pad seesaa. sagun upaasan kahahu muneesaa

Then I bowed my head at his feet and said, 'O great sage, please tell me about worship with attributes.'

राम भगति जल मम मन मीना। किमि बिलगाइ मुनीस प्रबीना।।

Raam bhagati jal mam man meenaa. kimi bilagaai munees prabeenaa

My mind is like a fish in the waters of devotion to Rama - how can I separate it, O wise sage?

सोइ उपदेस कहहु करि दाया। निज नयनन्हि देखौं रघुराया।।

Soi upades kahahu kari daayaa. nij nayananhi dekhaun raghuraayaa

Please give that instruction with compassion, so I may behold Lord Raghuraya with my own eyes.

भरि लोचन बिलोकि अवधेसा। तब सुनिहउँ निर्गुन उपदेसा।।

Bhari lochan biloki avadhesaa. tab sunihaun nirgun upadesaa

After filling my eyes with the sight of the Lord of Ayodhya, then I shall listen to the attributeless teaching.

मुनि पुनि कहि हरिकथा अनूपा। खंडि सगुन मत अगुन निरूपा।।

Muni puni kahi harikathaa anoopaa. khandi sagun mat agun niroopaa

The sage again spoke of the incomparable story of Hari, refuting the doctrine with attributes and establishing the attributeless.

तब मैं निर्गुन मत कर दूरी। सगुन निरूपउँ करि हठ भूरी।।

Tab main nirgun mat kar dooree. sagun niroopaun kari hath bhooree

Then I firmly rejected the attributeless doctrine and stubbornly established the doctrine with attributes.

उत्तर प्रतिउत्तर मैं कीन्हा। मुनि तन भए क्रोध के चीन्हा।।

Uttar pratiuttar main keenhaa. muni tan bhae krodh ke cheenhaa

I engaged in argument and counter-argument, and signs of anger appeared on the sage's body.

सुनु प्रभु बहुत अवग्या किएँ। उपज क्रोध ग्यानिन्ह के हिएँ।।

Sunu prabhu bahut avagyaa kien. upaj krodh gyaaninh ke hien

Listen, Lord, I committed great disrespect, and anger arose in the heart of that man of knowledge.

अति संघरषन जौं कर कोई। अनल प्रगट चंदन ते होई।।

Ati sangharashan jaun kar koee. anal pragat chandan te hoee

When someone engages in excessive friction, fire emerges even from sandalwood.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

The sage Lomasa teaches nirguna Brahman, but Kakbhushundi's heart belongs to the personal Rama. Their spiritual debate grows heated, testing the boundaries of both devotion and intellectual knowledge.

-बारंबार सकोप मुनि करइ निरुपन ग्यान।

मैं अपनें मन बैठ तब करउँ बिबिध अनुमान।।111(क)।।

क्रोध कि द्वेतबुद्धि बिनु द्वैत कि बिनु अग्यान।

मायाबस परिछिन्न जड़ जीव कि ईस समान।।111(ख)।।

-baarambaar sakop muni karai nirupan gyaan

Main apanen man baith tab karaun bibidh anumaan.111(ka)

Krodh ki dvetabuddhi binu dvait ki binu agyaan

Maayaabas parichhinn jad jeev ki eesa samaan.111(kha)

दोहा 112

The sage grew wrathful teaching me | of knowledge pure and high,

While in my heart I questioned deep | the truths he would apply.

Again and again the angry sage would expound knowledge, while I sat in my mind, reasoning thus:

Can there be anger without dualistic thinking? Can there be duality without ignorance?

Can the individual soul, bound by maya, limited and inert, ever be equal to the Supreme Lord?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Kakbhushundi's inner questioning reveals a practical difficulty in pure non-dualism: the teacher who claims to have realized oneness still displays anger and attachment.

चौपाई 107
कबहुँ कि दुख सब कर हित ताकें। तेहि कि दरिद्र परस मनि जाकें।।

Kabahun ki dukh sab kar hit taaken. tehi ki daridr paras mani jaaken

Can there ever be sorrow for one who seeks the welfare of all? Can one who possesses the philosopher's stone ever be poor?

परद्रोही की होहिं निसंका। कामी पुनि कि रहहिं अकलंका।।

Paradrohee kee hohin nisankaa. kaamee puni ki rahahin akalankaa

Can one who harms others ever be free from fear? Can a lustful person ever remain untainted?

बंस कि रह द्विज अनहित कीन्हें। कर्म कि होहिं स्वरूपहि चीन्हें।।

Bans ki rah dvij anahit keenhen. karm ki hohin svaroopahi cheenhen

Can a lineage survive after harming Brahmins? Can actions bear fruit without recognizing their true nature?

काहू सुमति कि खल सँग जामी। सुभ गति पाव कि परत्रिय गामी।।

Kaahoo sumati ki khal sang jaamee. subh gati paav ki paratriy gaamee

Can anyone gain good sense by associating with the wicked? Can one who pursues another's wife attain a blessed state?

भव कि परहिं परमात्मा बिंदक। सुखी कि होहिं कबहुँ हरिनिंदक।।

Bhav ki parahin paramaatmaa bindak. sukhee ki hohin kabahun harinindak

Can those who mock the Supreme Soul ever cross the ocean of existence? Can those who slander Hari ever be happy?

राजु कि रहइ नीति बिनु जानें। अघ कि रहहिं हरिचरित बखानें।।

Raaju ki rahai neeti binu jaanen. agha ki rahahin haricharit bakhaanen

Can a kingdom survive without knowing righteousness? Can sins remain after narrating Hari's deeds?

पावन जस कि पुन्य बिनु होई। बिनु अघ अजस कि पावइ कोई।।

Paavan jas ki puny binu hoee. binu agha ajas ki paavai koee

Can sacred fame come without merit? Can anyone gain infamy without sin?

लाभु कि किछु हरि भगति समाना। जेहि गावहिं श्रुति संत पुराना।।

Laabhu ki kichhu hari bhagati samaanaa. jehi gaavahin shruti sant puraanaa

Is there any gain equal to devotion to Hari, which the Vedas, saints, and Puranas sing?

हानि कि जग एहि सम किछु भाई। भजिअ न रामहि नर तनु पाई।।

Haani ki jag ehi sam kichhu bhaaee. bhajia na raamahi nar tanu paaee

Is there any loss in this world equal to this, O brother - that one does not worship Rama despite obtaining a human body?

अघ कि पिसुनता सम कछु आना। धर्म कि दया सरिस हरिजाना।।

Agha ki pisunataa sam kachhu aanaa. dharm ki dayaa saris harijaanaa

Is there any sin equal to slander? Is there any dharma equal to compassion, O knower of Hari?

एहि बिधि अमिति जुगुति मन गुनऊँ। मुनि उपदेस न सादर सुनऊँ।।

Ehi bidhi amiti juguti man gunaoon. muni upades na saadar sunaoon

In this way I pondered countless arguments in my mind, but did not respectfully listen to the sage's instruction.

पुनि पुनि सगुन पच्छ मैं रोपा। तब मुनि बोलेउ बचन सकोपा।।

Puni puni sagun pachchh main ropaa. tab muni boleu bachan sakopaa

Again and again I argued for the path of attributes. Then the sage spoke words filled with anger.

मूढ़ परम सिख देउँ न मानसि। उत्तर प्रतिउत्तर बहु आनसि।।

Moodh param sikh deun na maanasi. uttar pratiuttar bahu aanasi

"O fool, you do not accept the supreme teaching I give, but bring forth many replies and counter-replies."

सत्य बचन बिस्वास न करही। बायस इव सबही ते डरही।।

Saty bachan bisvaas na karahee. baayas iva sabahee te darahee

"You do not believe in truthful words, and like a crow, you fear everyone."

सठ स्वपच्छ तब हृदयँ बिसाला। सपदि होहि पच्छी चंडाला।।

Sath svapachchh tab hridayan bisaalaa. sapadi hohi pachchhee chandaalaa

"O fool, your heart is then so broad in your own favor - immediately become a bird, O outcaste!"

लीन्ह श्राप मैं सीस चढ़ाई। नहिं कछु भय न दीनता आई।।

Leenh shraap main sees chadhaaee. nahin kachhu bhay na deenataa aaee

"I accepted the curse upon my head; no fear or humility came to me."

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Through a series of luminous rhetorical questions, Kakbhushundi establishes the natural law of cause and effect, leading to the supreme value of Hari-bhakti. His stubborn devotion provokes the sage's curse, yet he accepts it without flinching.

तुरत भयउँ मैं काग तब पुनि मुनि पद सिरु नाइ।

सुमिरि राम रघुबंस मनि हरषित चलेउँ उड़ाइ।।112(क)।।

उमा जे राम चरन रत बिगत काम मद क्रोध।।

निज प्रभुमय देखहिं जगत केहि सन करहिं बिरोध।।112(ख)।।

Turat bhayaun main kaag tab puni muni pad siru naai

Sumiri raam raghubans mani harashit chaleun udaai.112(ka)

Umaa je raam charan rat bigat kaam mad krodh

Nij prabhumay dekhahin jagat kehi san karahin birodh.112(kha)

दोहा 113

As crow I bowed and flew away | with Rama's name my song,

For those who love the Lord's sweet feet | can do no being wrong.

Immediately I became a crow. Then, bowing my head at the sage's feet and remembering Rama, jewel of Raghu's line, I flew away rejoicing.

Uma, those who are devoted to Rama's feet, free from lust, pride, and anger, see the whole world filled with their Lord. With whom would they ever quarrel?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

The curse transforms Kakbhushundi, but his devotion is unshaken. He accepts his new form joyfully. Shiva tells Parvati: a true Rama-bhakta sees God everywhere and harbors no enmity.

चौपाई 108
सुनु खगेस नहिं कछु रिषि दूषन। उर प्रेरक रघुबंस बिभूषन।।

Sunu khages nahin kachhu rishi dooshan. ura prerak raghubans bibhooshan

Listen, O king of birds, there is no fault or blame upon the sage. The ornament of Raghu's lineage inspired my heart.

कृपासिंधु मुनि मति करि भोरी। लीन्हि प्रेम परिच्छा मोरी।।

Kripaasindhu muni mati kari bhoree. leenhi prem parichchhaa moree

The ocean of compassion, making the sage's mind confused, took a test of my love.

मन बच क्रम मोहि निज जन जाना। मुनि मति पुनि फेरी भगवाना।।

Man bach kram mohi nij jan jaanaa. muni mati puni pheree bhagavaanaa

Knowing me as His devotee in mind, word and deed, the Lord again restored the sage's understanding.

रिषि मम महत सीलता देखी। राम चरन बिस्वास बिसेषी।।

Rishi mam mahat seelataa dekhee. raam charan bisvaas biseshee

Seeing my great humility, the sage developed special faith in Rama's feet.

अति बिसमय पुनि पुनि पछिताई। सादर मुनि मोहि लीन्ह बोलाई।।

Ati bisamay puni puni pachhitaaee. saadar muni mohi leenh bolaaee

Filled with wonder and repeatedly repenting, the sage respectfully called me to him.

मम परितोष बिबिध बिधि कीन्हा। हरषित राममंत्र तब दीन्हा।।

Mam paritosh bibidh bidhi keenhaa. harashit raamamantr tab deenhaa

He pleased me in various ways, and then joyfully gave me the Rama mantra.

बालकरूप राम कर ध्याना। कहेउ मोहि मुनि कृपानिधाना।।

Baalakaroop raam kar dhyaanaa. kaheu mohi muni kripaanidhaanaa

The compassionate sage told me to meditate upon Rama in His child form.

सुंदर सुखद मिहि अति भावा। सो प्रथमहिं मैं तुम्हहि सुनावा।।

Sundar sukhad mihi ati bhaavaa. so prathamahin main tumhahi sunaavaa

Beautiful and blissful, this meditation pleased me greatly, and I shared it with you first.

मुनि मोहि कछुक काल तहँ राखा। रामचरितमानस तब भाषा।।

Muni mohi kachhuk kaal tahan raakhaa. raamacharitamaanas tab bhaashaa

The sage kept me there for some time, then spoke the Ramcharitmanas.

सादर मोहि यह कथा सुनाई। पुनि बोले मुनि गिरा सुहाई।।

Saadar mohi yah kathaa sunaaee. puni bole muni giraa suhaaee

He respectfully narrated this story to me, then the sage spoke with sweet words.

रामचरित सर गुप्त सुहावा। संभु प्रसाद तात मैं पावा।।

Raamacharit sar gupt suhaavaa. sambhu prasaad taat main paavaa

This beautiful and secret lake of Rama's story, dear one, I received by Shiva's grace.

तोहि निज भगत राम कर जानी। ताते मैं सब कहेउँ बखानी।।

Tohi nij bhagat raam kar jaanee. taate main sab kaheun bakhaanee

Knowing you to be Rama's own devotee, I have told and explained everything to you.

राम भगति जिन्ह कें उर नाहीं। कबहुँ न तात कहिअ तिन्ह पाहीं।।

Raam bhagati jinh ken ura naaheen. kabahun na taat kahia tinh paaheen

Those who do not have Rama's devotion in their hearts, dear one, never tell this to them.

मुनि मोहि बिबिध भाँति समुझावा। मैं सप्रेम मुनि पद सिरु नावा।।

Muni mohi bibidh bhaanti samujhaavaa. main saprem muni pad siru naavaa

The sage instructed me in various ways, and I lovingly bowed my head at the sage's feet.

निज कर कमल परसि मम सीसा। हरषित आसिष दीन्ह मुनीसा।।

Nij kar kamal parasi mam seesaa. harashit aasish deenh muneesaa

Touching my head with his lotus hand, the great sage joyfully gave his blessing.

राम भगति अबिरल उर तोरें। बसिहि सदा प्रसाद अब मोरें।।

Raam bhagati abiral ura toren. basihi sadaa prasaad aba moren

By my grace now, unceasing devotion to Rama shall always dwell in your heart.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

The great reveal: Rama Himself orchestrated the entire episode to test Kakbhushundi's love. The sage's anger was divinely inspired; it yields the Rama-mantra, the bala-rupa meditation, and the gift of the Manas itself.

-सदा राम प्रिय होहु तुम्ह सुभ गुन भवन अमान।

कामरूप इच्धामरन ग्यान बिराग निधान।।113(क)।।

जेंहिं आश्रम तुम्ह बसब पुनि सुमिरत श्रीभगवंत।

ब्यापिहि तहँ न अबिद्या जोजन एक प्रजंत।।113(ख)।।

-sadaa raam priy hohu tumh subh gun bhavan amaan

Kaamaroop ichdhaamaran gyaan biraag nidhaan.113(ka)

Jenhin aashram tumh basab puni sumirat shreebhagavant

Byaapihi tahan na abidyaa jojan eka prajant.113(kha)

दोहा 114

Forever dear to Rama may you be, | virtue's home without vanity,

Form-changing power, wisdom's store | detachment's treasure evermore.

May you always remain dear to Rama, a dwelling of auspicious virtues, free from pride. You shall possess the power to assume any form at will; you shall be a treasure-house of wisdom and dispassion.

Wherever you establish your hermitage and remember the blessed Lord, ignorance shall not spread there even within a radius of one yojana.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

The sage blesses Kakbhushundi with divine powers: shape-shifting, imperishable wisdom, and the ability to sanctify any place through devotion.

चौपाई 109
काल कर्म गुन दोष सुभाऊ। कछु दुख तुम्हहि न ब्यापिहि काऊ।।

Kaal karm gun dosh subhaaoo. kachhu dukh tumhahi na byaapihi kaaoo

Time, karma, qualities, faults, and nature - none of these sorrows shall ever touch you.

राम रहस्य ललित बिधि नाना। गुप्त प्रगट इतिहास पुराना।।

Raam rahasy lalit bidhi naanaa. gupt pragat itihaas puraanaa

The beautiful and varied mysteries of Rama, both hidden and manifest in ancient histories and Puranas.

बिनु श्रम तुम्ह जानब सब सोऊ। नित नव नेह राम पद होऊ।।

Binu shram tumh jaanab sab sooo. nit nav neh raam pad hooo

Without effort you shall know all of this, and have ever-fresh love for Rama's feet.

जो इच्छा करिहहु मन माहीं। हरि प्रसाद कछु दुर्लभ नाहीं।।

Jo ichchhaa karihahu man maaheen. hari prasaad kachhu durlabh naaheen

Whatever desire you hold in your mind, nothing is difficult to obtain by Hari's grace.

सुनि मुनि आसिष सुनु मतिधीरा। ब्रह्मगिरा भइ गगन गँभीरा।।

Suni muni aasish sunu matidheeraa. brahmagiraa bhai gagan ganbheeraa

Hearing the sage's blessing, O wise one, the divine voice resounded deep in the sky.

एवमस्तु तव बच मुनि ग्यानी। यह मम भगत कर्म मन बानी।।

Evamastu tav bach muni gyaanee. yah mam bhagat karm man baanee

So be it - your words are true, O wise sage. This is my devotee in deed, mind and speech.

सुनि नभगिरा हरष मोहि भयऊ। प्रेम मगन सब संसय गयऊ।।

Suni nabhagiraa harash mohi bhayaoo. prem magan sab sansay gayaoo

Hearing the celestial voice, great joy arose in me and all doubts vanished, absorbed in love.

करि बिनती मुनि आयसु पाई। पद सरोज पुनि पुनि सिरु नाई।।

Kari binatee muni aayasu paaee. pad saroj puni puni siru naaee

Making humble request and receiving the sage's permission, I bowed my head again and again at his lotus feet.

हरष सहित एहिं आश्रम आयउँ। प्रभु प्रसाद दुर्लभ बर पायउँ।।

Harash sahit ehin aashram aayaun. prabhu prasaad durlabh bar paayaun

I came to this hermitage with joy, having obtained the rare boon by the Lord's grace.

इहाँ बसत मोहि सुनु खग ईसा। बीते कलप सात अरु बीसा।।

Ihaan basat mohi sunu khag eesaa. beete kalap saat aru beesaa

Listen, O lord of birds - dwelling here, twenty-seven kalpas have passed by.

करउँ सदा रघुपति गुन गाना। सादर सुनहिं बिहंग सुजाना।।

Karaun sadaa raghupati gun gaanaa. saadar sunahin bihang sujaanaa

I constantly sing the virtues of Raghupati, which the wise birds listen to with reverence.

जब जब अवधपुरीं रघुबीरा। धरहिं भगत हित मनुज सरीरा।।

Jab jab avadhapureen raghubeeraa. dharahin bhagat hit manuj sareeraa

Whenever the hero of Raghu takes human form in Ayodhya for the sake of devotees.

तब तब जाइ राम पुर रहऊँ। सिसुलीला बिलोकि सुख लहऊँ।।

Tab tab jaai raam pur rahaoon. sisuleelaa biloki sukh lahaoon

Then I go and dwell in Rama's city, gaining joy by witnessing His childhood play.

पुनि उर राखि राम सिसुरूपा। निज आश्रम आवउँ खगभूपा।।

Puni ura raakhi raam sisuroopaa. nij aashram aavaun khagabhoopaa

Then keeping Rama's child form in my heart, I return to my hermitage, O king of birds.

कथा सकल मैं तुम्हहि सुनाई। काग देह जेहिं कारन पाई।।

Kathaa sakal main tumhahi sunaaee. kaag deh jehin kaaran paaee

I have told you the entire story of why I obtained this crow's body.

कहिउँ तात सब प्रस्न तुम्हारी। राम भगति महिमा अति भारी।।

Kahiun taat sab prasn tumhaaree. raam bhagati mahimaa ati bhaaree

I have answered all your questions, dear one. The glory of devotion to Rama is immensely great.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Brahma confirms Kakbhushundi as Rama's true devotee. The crow-sage reveals he has lived through twenty-seven kalpas, always returning to Ayodhya to witness Rama's bala-lila.

ताते यह तन मोहि प्रिय भयउ राम पद नेह।

निज प्रभु दरसन पायउँ गए सकल संदेह।।114(क)।।

भगति पच्छ हठ करि रहेउँ दीन्हि महारिषि साप।

मुनि दुर्लभ बर पायउँ देखहु भजन प्रताप।।114(ख)।।

Taate yah tan mohi priy bhayau raam pad neh

Nij prabhu darasan paayaun gae sakal sandeh.114(ka)

Bhagati pachchh hath kari raheun deenhi mahaarishi saap

Muni durlabh bar paayaun dekhahu bhajan prataap.114(kha)

दोहा 115

This form grew dear through Rama's love, | doubts fled when I saw above,

Cursed for bhakti's stubborn way | blessed beyond what sages pray.

Therefore this body became dear to me through love for Rama's feet. I beheld my own Lord's darshana, and all doubts departed.

I stubbornly held to the path of devotion, and the great sage gave me a curse. Yet I received a boon rare even for sages. Behold the glory of devotional practice!

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Kakbhushundi reflects: what appeared to be a curse became the greatest blessing. His humble crow form became the vessel for supreme realization.

चौपाई 110
जे असि भगति जानि परिहरहीं। केवल ग्यान हेतु श्रम करहीं।।

Je asi bhagati jaani pariharaheen. keval gyaan hetu shram karaheen

Those who abandon such devotion after understanding it, and strive only for knowledge alone.

ते जड़ कामधेनु गृहँ त्यागी। खोजत आकु फिरहिं पय लागी।।

Te jad kaamadhenu grihan tyaagee. khojat aaku phirahin pay laagee

They are foolish like one who abandons the wish-fulfilling cow at home and wanders seeking milk from the akk plant.

सुनु खगेस हरि भगति बिहाई। जे सुख चाहहिं आन उपाई।।

Sunu khages hari bhagati bihaaee. je sukh chaahahin aana upaaee

Listen, O king of birds, those who abandon devotion to Hari and seek happiness through other means.

ते सठ महासिंधु बिनु तरनी। पैरि पार चाहहिं जड़ करनी।।

Te sath mahaasindhu binu taranee. pairi paar chaahahin jad karanee

Those fools foolishly desire to cross the great ocean without a boat - such is their senseless action.

सुनि भसुंडि के बचन भवानी। बोलेउ गरुड़ हरषि मृदु बानी।।

Suni bhasundi ke bachan bhavaanee. boleu garud harashi mridu baanee

Hearing Bhusundi's words, O Bhavani, Garuda spoke with joy in gentle voice.

तव प्रसाद प्रभु मम उर माहीं। संसय सोक मोह भ्रम नाहीं।।

Tav prasaad prabhu mam ura maaheen. sansay sok moh bhram naaheen

By your grace, O Lord, in my heart there is no doubt, sorrow, delusion or confusion.

सुनेउँ पुनीत राम गुन ग्रामा। तुम्हरी कृपाँ लहेउँ बिश्रामा।।

Suneun puneet raam gun graamaa. tumharee kripaan laheun bishraamaa

I have heard the sacred multitude of Rama's virtues and by your kindness have found peace.

एक बात प्रभु पूँछउँ तोही। कहहु बुझाइ कृपानिधि मोही।।

Eka baat prabhu poonchhaun tohee. kahahu bujhaai kripaanidhi mohee

One thing, O Lord, I ask of you - please explain and enlighten me, O treasure of compassion.

कहहिं संत मुनि बेद पुराना। नहिं कछु दुर्लभ ग्यान समाना।।

Kahahin sant muni bed puraanaa. nahin kachhu durlabh gyaan samaanaa

Saints, sages, Vedas and Puranas say that nothing is as rare as knowledge.

सोइ मुनि तुम्ह सन कहेउ गोसाईं। नहिं आदरेहु भगति की नाईं।।

Soi muni tumh san kaheu gosaaeen. nahin aadarehu bhagati kee naaeen

That same sage told you, O master, yet you did not honor it like devotion.

ग्यानहि भगतिहि अंतर केता। सकल कहहु प्रभु कृपा निकेता।।

Gyaanahi bhagatihi antar ketaa. sakal kahahu prabhu kripaa niketaa

What is the difference between knowledge and devotion? Tell me all, O abode of grace.

सुनि उरगारि बचन सुख माना। सादर बोलेउ काग सुजाना।।

Suni uragaari bachan sukh maanaa. saadar boleu kaag sujaanaa

Hearing the words of the enemy of serpents, the wise crow felt joy and spoke respectfully.

भगतिहि ग्यानहि नहिं कछु भेदा। उभय हरहिं भव संभव खेदा।।

Bhagatihi gyaanahi nahin kachhu bhedaa. ubhay harahin bhav sambhav khedaa

There is no difference between devotion and knowledge - both remove the suffering of worldly existence.

नाथ मुनीस कहहिं कछु अंतर। सावधान सोउ सुनु बिहंगबर।।

Naath munees kahahin kachhu antar. saavadhaan sou sunu bihangabar

O lord, the great sages speak of some difference - listen carefully to that, O best of birds.

ग्यान बिराग जोग बिग्याना। ए सब पुरुष सुनहु हरिजाना।।

Gyaan biraag jog bigyaanaa. e sab purush sunahu harijaanaa

Knowledge, dispassion, yoga and spiritual wisdom - all these are masculine, listen O devotee of Hari.

पुरुष प्रताप प्रबल सब भाँती। अबला अबल सहज जड़ जाती।।

Purush prataap prabal sab bhaantee. abalaa abal sahaj jad jaatee

The masculine principle is powerful in every way, while the feminine is naturally weak and simple.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Garuda asks the essential question: what distinguishes jnana from bhakti? Kakbhushundi begins his answer by establishing both as valid paths, then introduces the masculine-feminine analogy to explain their different natures.

-पुरुष त्यागि सक नारिहि जो बिरक्त मति धीर।।

न तु कामी बिषयाबस बिमुख जो पद रघुबीर।।115(क)।।

सोउ मुनि ग्याननिधान मृगनयनी बिधु मुख निरखि।

बिबस होइ हरिजान नारि बिष्नु माया प्रगट।।115(ख)।।

-purush tyaagi sak naarihi jo birakt mati dheer

Na tu kaamee bishayaabas bimukh jo pad raghubeer.115(ka)

Sou muni gyaananidhaan mriganayanee bidhu mukh nirakhi

Bibas hoi harijaan naari bishnu maayaa pragat.115(kha)

दोहा 116

The wise may spurn desire's call | but maya conquers one and all,

Even sages, knowledge-blessed | by beauty's power are possessed.

A man may renounce women, being detached, wise, and steadfast, but not one who is lustful, enslaved by desires, and turned away from the feet of Raghuvira.

Even that sage, a treasury of knowledge, beholding the moon-like face of a doe-eyed maiden, becomes helpless. For she is Hari's power, a form in which Vishnu's maya is manifest.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Even the most learned sages can be overcome by Vishnu's maya. This illustrates why devotion, which keeps one under the Lord's protection, is a surer path than mere intellectual knowledge.

चौपाई 111
इहाँ न पच्छपात कछु राखउँ। बेद पुरान संत मत भाषउँ।।

Ihaan na pachchhapaat kachhu raakhaun. bed puraan sant mat bhaashaun

I maintain no partiality here and speak according to the teachings of the Vedas, Puranas, and saints.

मोह न नारि नारि कें रूपा। पन्नगारि यह रीति अनूपा।।

Moh na naari naari ken roopaa. pannagaari yah reeti anoopaa

Maya is not woman, nor is woman Maya - O Garuda, this is a unique principle to understand.

माया भगति सुनहु तुम्ह दोऊ। नारि बर्ग जानइ सब कोऊ।।

Maayaa bhagati sunahu tumh dooo. naari barg jaanai sab kooo

Listen, both Maya and Bhakti are known to belong to the feminine category by all.

पुनि रघुबीरहि भगति पिआरी। माया खलु नर्तकी बिचारी।।

Puni raghubeerahi bhagati piaaree. maayaa khalu nartakee bichaaree

Furthermore, devotion is dear to Raghuvira, while Maya is indeed a poor dancer.

भगतिहि सानुकूल रघुराया। ताते तेहि डरपति अति माया।।

Bhagatihi saanukool raghuraayaa. taate tehi darapati ati maayaa

Raghuraya is favorable to devotion, therefore Maya greatly fears devotion.

राम भगति निरुपम निरुपाधी। बसइ जासु उर सदा अबाधी।।

Raam bhagati nirupam nirupaadhee. basai jaasu ura sadaa abaadhee

Rama's devotion is incomparable and without conditions, dwelling eternally unobstructed in the devotee's heart.

तेहि बिलोकि माया सकुचाई। करि न सकइ कछु निज प्रभुताई।।

Tehi biloki maayaa sakuchaaee. kari na sakai kachhu nij prabhutaaee

Seeing such devotion, Maya becomes bashful and cannot exercise any of her power.

अस बिचारि जे मुनि बिग्यानी। जाचहीं भगति सकल सुख खानी।।

Asa bichaari je muni bigyaanee. jaachaheen bhagati sakal sukh khaanee

Understanding this, wise sages seek devotion, which is the mine of all happiness.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Kakbhushundi carefully distinguishes Maya from Bhakti. Both are of the feminine principle, but Bhakti is beloved of the Lord while Maya is subordinate. Where devotion reigns, Maya becomes powerless.

यह रहस्य रघुनाथ कर बेगि न जानइ कोइ।

जो जानइ रघुपति कृपाँ सपनेहुँ मोह न होइ।।116(क)।।

औरउ ग्यान भगति कर भेद सुनहु सुप्रबीन।

जो सुनि होइ राम पद प्रीति सदा अबिछीन।।116(ख)।।

Yah rahasy raghunaath kar begi na jaanai koi

Jo jaanai raghupati kripaan sapanehun moh na hoi.116(ka)

Aurau gyaan bhagati kar bhed sunahu suprabeen

Jo suni hoi raam pad preeti sadaa abichheen.116(kha)

दोहा 117

By Rama's grace alone we know | The secret that destroys all woe

Knowledge and love;their difference clear | Brings endless joy to those sincere

This mystery of Raghunatha none can quickly comprehend. Who knows it by Raghupati's grace shall never be deluded, even in dreams.

Now hear, O wise one, the further distinction between knowledge and devotion, hearing which brings constant, unbroken love for Rama's feet.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

The relationship between jnana and bhakti is a divine mystery, revealed only through grace. Kakbhushundi prepares to unfold the deepest teaching.

चौपाई 112
सुनहु तात यह अकथ कहानी। समुझत बनइ न जाइ बखानी।।

Sunahu taat yah akath kahaanee. samujhat banai na jaai bakhaanee

Listen, dear son, to this ineffable story that cannot be properly understood or described in words.

ईस्वर अंस जीव अबिनासी। चेतन अमल सहज सुख रासी।।

Eesvar ans jeev abinaasee. chetan amal sahaj sukh raasee

The soul is an imperishable fragment of the Divine, pure consciousness and a natural repository of bliss.

सो मायाबस भयउ गोसाईं। बँध्यो कीर मरकट की नाई।।

So maayaabas bhayau gosaaeen. bandhyo keer marakat kee naaee

That very soul, O Lord, has become bound by Maya like a parrot or monkey tied with a string.

जड़ चेतनहि ग्रंथि परि गई। जदपि मृषा छूटत कठिनई।।

Jad chetanahi granthi pari gaee. jadapi mrishaa chhootat kathinaee

A knot has formed between the inert and conscious, and though it is false, it is difficult to untie.

तब ते जीव भयउ संसारी। छूट न ग्रंथि न होइ सुखारी।।

Tab te jeev bhayau sansaaree. chhoot na granthi na hoi sukhaaree

Since then the soul has become worldly, unable to break the knot or find happiness.

श्रुति पुरान बहु कहेउ उपाई। छूट न अधिक अधिक अरुझाई।।

Shruti puraan bahu kaheu upaaee. chhoot na adhik adhik arujhaaee

The Vedas and Puranas have prescribed many remedies, but the knot does not break and becomes more entangled.

जीव हृदयँ तम मोह बिसेषी। ग्रंथि छूट किमि परइ न देखी।।

Jeev hridayan tam moh biseshee. granthi chhoot kimi parai na dekhee

In the soul's heart there is deep darkness and delusion; how can the knot be untied when one cannot even see it?

अस संजोग ईस जब करई। तबहुँ कदाचित सो निरुअरई।।

Asa sanjog eesa jab karaee. tabahun kadaachit so niruaraee

Only when God creates such favorable circumstances does that knot sometimes get loosened.

सात्त्विक श्रद्धा धेनु सुहाई। जौं हरि कृपाँ हृदयँ बस आई।।

Saattvik shraddhaa dhenu suhaaee. jaun hari kripaan hridayan bas aaee

When pure faith, like a beautiful cow, comes to dwell in the heart by Hari's grace.

जप तप ब्रत जम नियम अपारा। जे श्रुति कह सुभ धर्म अचारा।।

Jap tap brat jam niyam apaaraa. je shruti kah subh dharm achaaraa

Japa, austerity, vows, restraints and disciplines - all the auspicious religious practices mentioned in the Vedas.

तेइ तृन हरित चरै जब गाई। भाव बच्छ सिसु पाइ पेन्हाई।।

Tei trin harit charai jab gaaee. bhaav bachchh sisu paai penhaaee

These become the fresh green grass that the cow grazes upon, and devotion becomes like a calf that drinks the milk.

नोइ निबृत्ति पात्र बिस्वासा। निर्मल मन अहीर निज दासा।।

Noi nibritti paatr bisvaasaa. nirmal man aheer nij daasaa

Detachment becomes the milking vessel of trust, and the pure mind becomes the cowherd, God's own servant.

परम धर्ममय पय दुहि भाई। अवटै अनल अकाम बनाई।।

Param dharmamay pay duhi bhaaee. avatai anal akaam banaaee

O brother, milking the supremely righteous milk, one kindles the fire of desirelessness.

तोष मरुत तब छमाँ जुड़ावै। धृति सम जावनु देइ जमावै।।

Tosh marut tab chhamaan judaavai. dhriti sam jaavanu dei jamaavai

Then contentment as wind and forgiveness as cooling water help to set the curd.

मुदिताँ मथैं बिचार मथानी। दम अधार रजु सत्य सुबानी।।

Muditaan mathain bichaar mathaanee. dam adhaar raju saty subaanee

With joy as the churning staff and contemplation as the churning rod, using self-control as support and truth as the rope.

तब मथि काढ़ि लेइ नवनीता। बिमल बिराग सुभग सुपुनीता।।

Tab mathi kaadhi lei navaneetaa. bimal biraag subhag supuneetaa

Then by churning, one extracts the butter of pure, beautiful and sacred detachment.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

A magnificent extended metaphor of spiritual alchemy. The soul's predicament is described: though divine by nature, it is entangled with matter. Only divine grace and sattvic faith can untie this knot, through an elaborate process likened to churning butter.

जोग अगिनि करि प्रगट तब कर्म सुभासुभ लाइ।

बुद्धि सिरावैं ग्यान घृत ममता मल जरि जाइ।।117(क)।।

तब बिग्यानरूपिनि बुद्धि बिसद घृत पाइ।

चित्त दिआ भरि धरै दृढ़ समता दिअटि बनाइ।।117(ख)।।

तीनि अवस्था तीनि गुन तेहि कपास तें काढ़ि।

तूल तुरीय सँवारि पुनि बाती करै सुगाढ़ि।।117(ग)।।

एहि बिधि लेसै दीप तेज रासि बिग्यानमय।।

जातहिं जासु समीप जरहिं मदादिक सलभ सब।।117(घ)।।

Jog agini kari pragat tab karm subhaasubh laai

Buddhi siraavain gyaan ghrit mamataa mal jari jaai.117(ka)

Tab bigyaanaroopini buddhi bisad ghrit paai

Chitt diaa bhari dharai dridh samataa diati banaai.117(kha)

Teeni avasthaa teeni gun tehi kapaas ten kaadhi

Tool tureey sanvaari puni baatee karai sugaadhi.117(ga)

Ehi bidhi lesai deep tej raasi bigyaanamay

Jaatahin jaasu sameep jarahin madaadik salabh sab.117(gha)

दोहा 118

Yoga's fire burns karma's dross | Wisdom's oil lights consciousness

Equanimity's wick burns bright | Destroying ego's moths in flight

Kindling the fire of yoga, offering good and evil deeds as fuel, wisdom pours the clarified butter of knowledge, burning away the impurity of attachment.

Then the intellect, in the form of vijnana, receiving pure, clarified understanding, fills the lamp of consciousness firmly, fashioning a steady wick of equanimity.

Drawing out the three states and three gunas like cotton from the pod, preparing the turiya (fourth state) as cotton, it twists a well-made wick.

Thus one lights the lamp of pure consciousness, a blazing mass of brilliance. In whose presence all moths of pride and passion are consumed.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

The spiritual process is likened to preparing and lighting a lamp. From gathering materials (spiritual practices) through the final illumination, each step of sadhana finds its place in this intricate metaphor.

चौपाई 113
सोहमस्मि इति बृत्ति अखंडा। दीप सिखा सोइ परम प्रचंडा।।

Sohamasmi iti britti akhandaa. deep sikhaa soi param prachandaa

The unwavering consciousness of 'So'ham' (I am That) is like the flame of a lamp, supremely radiant and powerful.

आतम अनुभव सुख सुप्रकासा। तब भव मूल भेद भ्रम नासा।।

Aatam anubhav sukh suprakaasaa. tab bhav mool bhed bhram naasaa

When the bliss of Self-realization manifests clearly, then the delusion and ignorance that are the root of worldly existence are destroyed.

प्रबल अबिद्या कर परिवारा। मोह आदि तम मिटइ अपारा।।

Prabal abidyaa kar parivaaraa. moh aadi tam mitai apaaraa

The mighty family of ignorance—delusion and other forms of darkness—are completely dispelled.

तब सोइ बुद्धि पाइ उँजिआरा। उर गृहँ बैठि ग्रंथि निरुआरा।।

Tab soi buddhi paai unjiaaraa. ura grihan baithi granthi niruaaraa

Then that intellect, gaining illumination, sits in the heart's chamber and unties the knot of bondage.

छोरन ग्रंथि पाव जौं सोई। तब यह जीव कृतारथ होई।।

Chhoran granthi paav jaun soee. tab yah jeev kritaarath hoee

When one succeeds in loosening this knot, then this individual soul becomes fulfilled and blessed.

छोरत ग्रंथि जानि खगराया। बिघ्न अनेक करइ तब माया।।

Chhorat granthi jaani khagaraayaa. bighn anek karai tab maayaa

O king of birds, knowing that the knot is being loosened, Maya (illusion) then creates numerous obstacles.

रिद्धि सिद्धि प्रेरइ बहु भाई। बुद्धहि लोभ दिखावहिं आई।।

Riddhi siddhi prerai bahu bhaaee. buddhahi lobh dikhaavahin aaee

She sends many supernatural powers and siddhis, showing tempting gains to the intellect.

कल बल छल करि जाहिं समीपा। अंचल बात बुझावहिं दीपा।।

Kal bal chhal kari jaahin sameepaa. anchal baat bujhaavahin deepaa

Using cunning, force, and deceit, they approach near and try to extinguish the lamp with their breath.

होइ बुद्धि जौं परम सयानी। तिन्ह तन चितव न अनहित जानी।।

Hoi buddhi jaun param sayaanee. tinh tan chitav na anahit jaanee

If the intellect becomes supremely wise, it does not look upon them, knowing them to be harmful.

जौं तेहि बिघ्न बुद्धि नहिं बाधी। तौ बहोरि सुर करहिं उपाधी।।

Jaun tehi bighn buddhi nahin baadhee. tau bahori sur karahin upaadhee

If the intellect is not hindered by these obstacles, then the gods create other disturbances.

इंद्रीं द्वार झरोखा नाना। तहँ तहँ सुर बैठे करि थाना।।

Indreen dvaar jharokhaa naanaa. tahan tahan sur baithe kari thaanaa

The senses are like doorways and windows, where the gods sit stationed at various posts.

आवत देखहिं बिषय बयारी। ते हठि देही कपाट उघारी।।

Aavat dekhahin bishay bayaaree. te hathi dehee kapaat ughaaree

When they see the wind of sense-objects approaching, they forcibly open the gates of the body.

जब सो प्रभंजन उर गृहँ जाई। तबहिं दीप बिग्यान बुझाई।।

Jab so prabhanjan ura grihan jaaee. tabahin deep bigyaan bujhaaee

When that tempest enters the heart's chamber, it immediately extinguishes the lamp of spiritual knowledge.

ग्रंथि न छूटि मिटा सो प्रकासा। बुद्धि बिकल भइ बिषय बतासा।।

Granthi na chhooti mitaa so prakaasaa. buddhi bikal bhai bishay bataasaa

The knot is not loosened and that illumination is lost; the intellect becomes confused by the wind of sense-objects.

इंद्रिन्ह सुरन्ह न ग्यान सोहाई। बिषय भोग पर प्रीति सदाई।।

Indrinh suranh na gyaan sohaaee. bishay bhog par preeti sadaaee

The senses and gods do not like spiritual knowledge; they have eternal love for sense-pleasures.

बिषय समीर बुद्धि कृत भोरी। तेहि बिधि दीप को बार बहोरी।।

Bishay sameer buddhi krit bhoree. tehi bidhi deep ko baar bahoree

The wind of sense-objects makes the intellect deluded; in this way, who can rekindle that lamp again?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Even after the 'Soham' realization, Maya mounts her fiercest assault through siddhis and sensory temptations. The path of pure jnana is shown to be perilous: the flame of knowledge can be extinguished by the wind of desire.

तब फिरि जीव बिबिध बिधि पावइ संसृति क्लेस।

हरि माया अति दुस्तर तरि न जाइ बिहगेस।।118(क)।।

कहत कठिन समुझत कठिन साधन कठिन बिबेक।

होइ घुनाच्छर न्याय जौं पुनि प्रत्यूह अनेक।।118(ख)।।

Tab phiri jeev bibidh bidhi paavai sansriti kles

Hari maayaa ati dustar tari na jaai bihages.118(ka)

Kahat kathin samujhat kathin saadhan kathin bibek

Hoi ghunaachchhar nyaay jaun puni pratyooh anek.118(kha)

दोहा 119

Maya's web binds souls in endless pain, | O Garuda, none can break this chain.

Hard to speak, harder still to know, | wisdom's path has many a foe.

Then once again the soul suffers worldly affliction in countless forms, through the cycle of birth and death. Hari's maya is exceedingly difficult to cross; it cannot be transcended, O king of birds.

Difficult to speak of, difficult to understand, difficult are the practices, difficult is discernment. Even if one follows the 'worm-in-wood' logic (ghunakshara nyaya), still there are countless obstacles.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Kakbhushundi explains the near-impossibility of crossing maya through knowledge alone. The 'ghunakshara nyaya' reference means that even accidental, woodworm-like spiritual progress faces innumerable hindrances.

चौपाई 114
ग्यान पंथ कृपान कै धारा। परत खगेस होइ नहिं बारा।।

Gyaan panth kripaan kai dhaaraa. parat khages hoi nahin baaraa

The path of knowledge is like the edge of a sword, O Garuda, and one cannot traverse it without great difficulty.

जो निर्बिघ्न पंथ निर्बहई। सो कैवल्य परम पद लहई।।

Jo nirbighn panth nirbahaee. so kaivaly param pad lahaee

One who successfully traverses this path without obstacles attains the supreme state of liberation (kaivalya).

अति दुर्लभ कैवल्य परम पद। संत पुरान निगम आगम बद।।

Ati durlabh kaivaly param pad. sant puraan nigam aagam bad

That supreme state of liberation is extremely rare and difficult to attain, as declared by saints, Puranas, Vedas, and scriptures.

राम भजत सोइ मुकुति गोसाई। अनइच्छित आवइ बरिआई।।

Raam bhajat soi mukuti gosaaee. anaichchhit aavai bariaaee

O master, that same liberation comes effortlessly and uninvited to those who worship Rama.

जिमि थल बिनु जल रहि न सकाई। कोटि भाँति कोउ करै उपाई।।

Jimi thal binu jal rahi na sakaaee. koti bhaanti kou karai upaaee

Just as water cannot remain without flowing to lower ground, no matter what millions of efforts one makes to stop it.

तथा मोच्छ सुख सुनु खगराई। रहि न सकइ हरि भगति बिहाई।।

Tathaa mochchh sukh sunu khagaraaee. rahi na sakai hari bhagati bihaaee

Similarly, O king of birds, the bliss of liberation cannot remain without devotion to Hari.

अस बिचारि हरि भगत सयाने। मुक्ति निरादर भगति लुभाने।।

Asa bichaari hari bhagat sayaane. mukti niraadar bhagati lubhaane

Understanding this truth, wise devotees of Hari disregard liberation and are attracted only to devotion.

भगति करत बिनु जतन प्रयासा। संसृति मूल अबिद्या नासा।।

Bhagati karat binu jatan prayaasaa. sansriti mool abidyaa naasaa

Through devotion, without any effort or struggle, the root of worldly existence - ignorance - is destroyed.

भोजन करिअ तृपिति हित लागी। जिमि सो असन पचवै जठरागी।।

Bhojan karia tripiti hit laagee. jimi so asan pachavai jatharaagee

One should eat food for the purpose of satisfaction, just as the digestive fire naturally processes that food.

असि हरिभगति सुगम सुखदाई। को अस मूढ़ न जाहि सोहाई।।

Asi haribhagati sugam sukhadaaee. ko asa moodh na jaahi sohaaee

Such is devotion to Hari - easy and blissful. What fool would not be attracted to it?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

The sword-edge metaphor for the jnana path contrasts with bhakti's ease. Liberation itself comes unbidden to the devotee, like water flowing downhill. Devotion is supremely accessible and self-sustaining.

सेवक सेब्य भाव बिनु भव न तरिअ उरगारि।।

भजहु राम पद पंकज अस सिद्धांत बिचारि।।119(क)।।

जो चेतन कहँ ज़ड़ करइ ज़ड़हि करइ चैतन्य।

अस समर्थ रघुनायकहिं भजहिं जीव ते धन्य।।119(ख)।।

Sevak seby bhaav binu bhav na taria uragaari

Bhajahu raam pad pankaj asa siddhaant bichaari.119(ka)

Jo chetan kahan zad karai zadahi karai chaitany

Asa samarth raghunaayakahin bhajahin jeev te dhany.119(kha)

दोहा 120

Serve the Lord with loving heart, | from worldly bonds you shall depart.

Blessed souls who worship Him, | who transforms both dark and dim.

Without the bond of servant and master, one cannot cross the ocean of existence, O enemy of serpents. Worship the lotus feet of Rama; contemplate this established truth.

He who makes the conscious unconscious and the unconscious conscious: blessed are those souls who worship such an all-powerful Lord Raghunayak.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

The essential sevaka-sevya (servant-master) relationship is the heart of bhakti. Rama's infinite power to transform consciousness itself is the ultimate reason for surrender.

चौपाई 115
कहेउँ ग्यान सिद्धांत बुझाई। सुनहु भगति मनि कै प्रभुताई।।

Kaheun gyaan siddhaant bujhaaee. sunahu bhagati mani kai prabhutaaee

I have explained the principles of knowledge to you. Now listen to the glory and power of the jewel of devotion.

राम भगति चिंतामनि सुंदर। बसइ गरुड़ जाके उर अंतर।।

Raam bhagati chintaamani sundar. basai garud jaake ura antar

Beautiful is the wish-fulfilling gem of Rama's devotion, which dwells within the heart of Garuda.

परम प्रकास रूप दिन राती। नहिं कछु चहिअ दिआ घृत बाती।।

Param prakaas roop din raatee. nahin kachhu chahia diaa ghrit baatee

It gives supreme light day and night, requiring no oil or wick for illumination.

मोह दरिद्र निकट नहिं आवा। लोभ बात नहिं ताहि बुझावा।।

Moh daridr nikat nahin aavaa. lobh baat nahin taahi bujhaavaa

The poverty of delusion cannot come near it, nor can the talk of greed reach it.

प्रबल अबिद्या तम मिटि जाई। हारहिं सकल सलभ समुदाई।।

Prabal abidyaa tam miti jaaee. haarahin sakal salabh samudaaee

The powerful darkness of ignorance is dispelled, and all the swarms of moths are defeated.

खल कामादि निकट नहिं जाहीं। बसइ भगति जाके उर माहीं।।

Khal kaamaadi nikat nahin jaaheen. basai bhagati jaake ura maaheen

Wicked desires like lust do not approach those in whose hearts devotion resides.

गरल सुधासम अरि हित होई। तेहि मनि बिनु सुख पाव न कोई।।

Garal sudhaasam ari hit hoee. tehi mani binu sukh paav na koee

Poison becomes like nectar and enemies become friends. Without this gem, no one can find happiness.

ब्यापहिं मानस रोग न भारी। जिन्ह के बस सब जीव दुखारी।।

Byaapahin maanas rog na bhaaree. jinh ke bas sab jeev dukhaaree

The heavy diseases of the mind do not afflict those who have conquered all suffering beings.

राम भगति मनि उर बस जाकें। दुख लवलेस न सपनेहुँ ताकें।।

Raam bhagati mani ura bas jaaken. dukh lavales na sapanehun taaken

For those who have the gem of Rama's devotion established in their hearts, not even the slightest sorrow touches them, not even in dreams.

चतुर सिरोमनि तेइ जग माहीं। जे मनि लागि सुजतन कराहीं।।

Chatur siromani tei jag maaheen. je mani laagi sujatan karaaheen

The most intelligent in this world are those who strive earnestly to obtain this gem.

सो मनि जदपि प्रगट जग अहई। राम कृपा बिनु नहिं कोउ लहई।।

So mani jadapi pragat jag ahaee. raam kripaa binu nahin kou lahaee

Though this gem is manifest in the world, no one can obtain it without Rama's grace.

सुगम उपाय पाइबे केरे। नर हतभाग्य देहिं भटमेरे।।

Sugam upaay paaibe kere. nar hatabhaagy dehin bhatamere

The means to obtain it are simple, but unfortunate people wander about aimlessly.

पावन पर्बत बेद पुराना। राम कथा रुचिराकर नाना।।

Paavan parbat bed puraanaa. raam kathaa ruchiraakar naanaa

The sacred mountains are the Vedas and Puranas, with their various beautiful stories of Rama.

मर्मी सज्जन सुमति कुदारी। ग्यान बिराग नयन उरगारी।।

Marmee sajjan sumati kudaaree. gyaan biraag nayan uragaaree

Wise and virtuous souls are the good pickaxes, while knowledge and detachment are the sharp-eyed miners.

भाव सहित खोजइ जो प्रानी। पाव भगति मनि सब सुख खानी।।

Bhaav sahit khojai jo praanee. paav bhagati mani sab sukh khaanee

The person who searches with devotion finds the gem of devotion, the mine of all happiness.

मोरें मन प्रभु अस बिस्वासा। राम ते अधिक राम कर दासा।।

Moren man prabhu asa bisvaasaa. raam te adhik raam kar daasaa

In my mind, Lord, I have this firm belief: Rama's devotee is greater than Rama himself.

राम सिंधु घन सज्जन धीरा। चंदन तरु हरि संत समीरा।।

Raam sindhu ghan sajjan dheeraa. chandan taru hari sant sameeraa

Rama is like the ocean, while noble saints are like clouds; Rama is the sandalwood tree, while saints are like the breeze.

सब कर फल हरि भगति सुहाई। सो बिनु संत न काहूँ पाई।।

Sab kar phal hari bhagati suhaaee. so binu sant na kaahoon paaee

The fruit of all endeavors is beautiful devotion to Hari, which no one obtains without the company of saints.

अस बिचारि जोइ कर सतसंगा। राम भगति तेहि सुलभ बिहंगा।।

Asa bichaari joi kar satasangaa. raam bhagati tehi sulabh bihangaa

Reflecting thus, O bird, whoever keeps the company of saints easily attains devotion to Rama.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Bhakti as the chintamani (wish-fulfilling gem): self-luminous, needing no external support, immune to greed and delusion. Kakbhushundi's boldest declaration: Rama's devotee is greater than Rama Himself. The ultimate means: satsanga.

ब्रह्म पयोनिधि मंदर ग्यान संत सुर आहिं।

कथा सुधा मथि काढ़हिं भगति मधुरता जाहिं।।120(क)।।

बिरति चर्म असि ग्यान मद लोभ मोह रिपु मारि।

जय पाइअ सो हरि भगति देखु खगेस बिचारि।।120(ख)।।

Brahm payonidhi mandar gyaan sant sur aahin

Kathaa sudhaa mathi kaadhahin bhagati madhurataa jaahin.120(ka)

Birati charm asi gyaan mad lobh moh ripu maari

Jay paaia so hari bhagati dekhu khages bichaari.120(kha)

दोहा 121

Saints churn wisdom's sacred sea, | bhakti flows eternally.

With detachment as their shield, | devotion wins on every field.

Brahman is the ocean of milk, knowledge is Mount Mandara, saints and gods are the churning rope. They churn and extract the nectar of divine stories, whose sweetness is devotion itself.

With detachment as shield and knowledge as sword, slaying the enemies of greed and delusion, victory is won: that is Hari's devotion. Behold and ponder this, O king of birds.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

The cosmic churning metaphor: saints extract the amrita of bhakti from the ocean of Brahman. Detachment and jnana serve as the warrior's shield and sword, but the victory that crowns them is devotion.

चौपाई 116
पुनि सप्रेम बोलेउ खगराऊ। जौं कृपाल मोहि ऊपर भाऊ।।

Puni saprem boleu khagaraaoo. jaun kripaal mohi oopar bhaaoo

Then Garuda spoke with love, saying, 'O compassionate one, if you have affection for me.'

नाथ मोहि निज सेवक जानी। सप्त प्रस्न कहहु बखानी।।

Naath mohi nij sevak jaanee. sapt prasn kahahu bakhaanee

O Lord, knowing me as your own servant, please explain seven questions in detail.

प्रथमहिं कहहु नाथ मतिधीरा। सब ते दुर्लभ कवन सरीरा।।

Prathamahin kahahu naath matidheeraa. sab te durlabh kavan sareeraa

First tell me, O wise Lord, which body is the rarest of all.

बड़ दुख कवन कवन सुख भारी। सोउ संछेपहिं कहहु बिचारी।।

Bad dukh kavan kavan sukh bhaaree. sou sanchhepahin kahahu bichaaree

What is the greatest sorrow, what is the supreme joy? Please tell me this thoughtfully and briefly.

संत असंत मरम तुम्ह जानहु। तिन्ह कर सहज सुभाव बखानहु।।

Sant asant maram tumh jaanahu. tinh kar sahaj subhaav bakhaanahu

You know the essence of saints and wicked ones; describe their natural characteristics.

कवन पुन्य श्रुति बिदित बिसाला। कहहु कवन अघ परम कराला।।

Kavan puny shruti bidit bisaalaa. kahahu kavan agha param karaalaa

What is the great virtue known in scriptures? Tell me what is the most terrible sin.

मानस रोग कहहु समुझाई। तुम्ह सर्बग्य कृपा अधिकाई।।

Maanas rog kahahu samujhaaee. tumh sarbagy kripaa adhikaaee

Explain the diseases of the mind; you are all-knowing and full of compassion.

तात सुनहु सादर अति प्रीती। मैं संछेप कहउँ यह नीती।।

Taat sunahu saadar ati preetee. main sanchhep kahaun yah neetee

Dear one, listen with great reverence and love; I shall tell you this wisdom briefly.

नर तन सम नहिं कवनिउ देही। जीव चराचर जाचत तेही।।

Nar tan sam nahin kavaniu dehee. jeev charaachar jaachat tehee

There is no body equal to the human form; all living beings, moving and still, desire it.

नरग स्वर्ग अपबर्ग निसेनी। ग्यान बिराग भगति सुभ देनी।।

Narag svarg apabarg nisenee. gyaan biraag bhagati subh denee

It is the ladder to hell, heaven, and liberation; it bestows knowledge, detachment, and pure devotion.

सो तनु धरि हरि भजहिं न जे नर। होहिं बिषय रत मंद मंद तर।।

So tanu dhari hari bhajahin na je nar. hohin bishay rat mand mand tar

Those men who, having this body, do not worship Hari become attached to worldly pleasures, most foolish of fools.

काँच किरिच बदलें ते लेही। कर ते डारि परस मनि देहीं।।

Kaanch kirich badalen te lehee. kar te daari paras mani deheen

They are like those who would exchange glass and pebbles for the philosopher's stone, throwing it away from their hands.

नहिं दरिद्र सम दुख जग माहीं। संत मिलन सम सुख जग नाहीं।।

Nahin daridr sam dukh jag maaheen. sant milan sam sukh jag naaheen

There is no sorrow in the world like poverty; there is no joy in the world like meeting saints.

पर उपकार बचन मन काया। संत सहज सुभाउ खगराया।।

Par upakaar bachan man kaayaa. sant sahaj subhaau khagaraayaa

Helping others through speech, mind, and body is the natural disposition of saints, O king of birds.

संत सहहिं दुख परहित लागी। परदुख हेतु असंत अभागी।।

Sant sahahin dukh parahit laagee. paradukh hetu asant abhaagee

Saints endure suffering for others' welfare; the wicked and unfortunate cause others' pain.

भूर्ज तरू सम संत कृपाला। परहित निति सह बिपति बिसाला।।

Bhoorj taroo sam sant kripaalaa. parahit niti sah bipati bisaalaa

Saints are compassionate like the birch tree, constantly enduring great calamities for others' benefit.

सन इव खल पर बंधन करई। खाल कढ़ाइ बिपति सहि मरई।।

San iva khal par bandhan karaee. khaal kadhaai bipati sahi maraee

The wicked bind others like hemp fiber, enduring suffering and dying after being stripped of their skin.

खल बिनु स्वारथ पर अपकारी। अहि मूषक इव सुनु उरगारी।।

Khal binu svaarath par apakaaree. ahi mooshak iva sunu uragaaree

The wicked harm others without any self-interest, like serpents and mice, listen O enemy of serpents.

पर संपदा बिनासि नसाहीं। जिमि ससि हति हिम उपल बिलाहीं।।

Par sampadaa binaasi nasaaheen. jimi sasi hati him upal bilaaheen

They destroy others' prosperity and perish themselves, like hailstones that melt after destroying the moon.

दुष्ट उदय जग आरति हेतू। जथा प्रसिद्ध अधम ग्रह केतू।।

Dusht uday jag aarati hetoo. jathaa prasiddh adham grah ketoo

The rise of the wicked is a cause of world's suffering, like the notorious inauspicious planet Ketu.

संत उदय संतत सुखकारी। बिस्व सुखद जिमि इंदु तमारी।।

Sant uday santat sukhakaaree. bisv sukhad jimi indu tamaaree

The rise of saints is constantly beneficial, bringing joy to the world like the moon that dispels darkness.

परम धर्म श्रुति बिदित अहिंसा। पर निंदा सम अघ न गरीसा।।

Param dharm shruti bidit ahinsaa. par nindaa sam agha na gareesaa

Non-violence is the supreme dharma known in scriptures; no sin is equal to slandering others.

हर गुर निंदक दादुर होई। जन्म सहस्त्र पाव तन सोई।।

Har gur nindak daadur hoee. janm sahastr paav tan soee

One who slanders Hari and the Guru becomes a frog and obtains that body for a thousand births.

द्विज निंदक बहु नरक भोग करि। जग जनमइ बायस सरीर धरि।।

Dvij nindak bahu narak bhog kari. jag janamai baayas sareer dhari

The slanderer of Brahmins, after suffering many hells, is born in the world taking the body of a crow.

सुर श्रुति निंदक जे अभिमानी। रौरव नरक परहिं ते प्रानी।।

Sur shruti nindak je abhimaanee. raurav narak parahin te praanee

Those proud beings who slander gods and scriptures fall into the terrible hell called Raurava.

होहिं उलूक संत निंदा रत। मोह निसा प्रिय ग्यान भानु गत।।

Hohin ulook sant nindaa rat. moh nisaa priy gyaan bhaanu gat

Those who delight in slandering saints become owls, loving the night of delusion with the sun of knowledge set.

सब के निंदा जे जड़ करहीं। ते चमगादुर होइ अवतरहीं।।

Sab ke nindaa je jad karaheen. te chamagaadur hoi avataraheen

Those fools who slander everyone are reborn as bats.

सुनहु तात अब मानस रोगा। जिन्ह ते दुख पावहिं सब लोगा।।

Sunahu taat aba maanas rogaa. jinh te dukh paavahin sab logaa

Listen, dear one, now to the mental diseases by which all people suffer pain.

मोह सकल ब्याधिन्ह कर मूला। तिन्ह ते पुनि उपजहिं बहु सूला।।

Moh sakal byaadhinh kar moolaa. tinh te puni upajahin bahu soolaa

Delusion is the root of all ailments; from it arise many other torments.

काम बात कफ लोभ अपारा। क्रोध पित्त नित छाती जारा।।

Kaam baat kaph lobh apaaraa. krodh pitt nit chhaatee jaaraa

Lust is like wind, greed is boundless, anger is bile that constantly burns the chest.

प्रीति करहिं जौं तीनिउ भाई। उपजइ सन्यपात दुखदाई।।

Preeti karahin jaun teeniu bhaaee. upajai sanyapaat dukhadaaee

When these three brothers unite, there arises the painful fever of passion.

बिषय मनोरथ दुर्गम नाना। ते सब सूल नाम को जाना।।

Bishay manorath durgam naanaa. te sab sool naam ko jaanaa

The countless difficult desires for worldly objects are all thorns - who can name them all?

ममता दादु कंडु इरषाई। हरष बिषाद गरह बहुताई।।

Mamataa daadu kandu irashaaee. harash bishaad garah bahutaaee

Attachment is a tumor, envy is itch, excessive joy and sorrow are boils.

पर सुख देखि जरनि सोइ छई। कुष्ट दुष्टता मन कुटिलई।।

Par sukh dekhi jarani soi chhaee. kusht dushtataa man kutilaee

Burning upon seeing others' happiness is consumption, wickedness and mental crookedness are leprosy.

अहंकार अति दुखद डमरुआ। दंभ कपट मद मान नेहरुआ।।

Ahankaar ati dukhad damaruaa. dambh kapat mad maan neharuaa

Pride is an extremely painful tumor, hypocrisy, deceit, intoxication, and arrogance are dropsy.

तृस्ना उदरबृद्धि अति भारी। त्रिबिध ईषना तरुन तिजारी।।

Trisnaa udarabriddhi ati bhaaree. tribidh eeshanaa tarun tijaaree

Thirst is severe abdominal enlargement, the threefold desires are acute fever.

जुग बिधि ज्वर मत्सर अबिबेका। कहँ लागि कहौं कुरोग अनेका।।

Jug bidhi jvar matsar abibekaa. kahan laagi kahaun kurog anekaa

Doubt is a double fever, envy and ignorance - how long can I continue describing these countless ailments?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Garuda's seven questions yield Kakbhushundi's most comprehensive teaching: the value of human birth, the nature of saints and the wicked, supreme virtue and sin, and a remarkable medical metaphor mapping every spiritual malady to a physical disease.

एक ब्याधि बस नर मरहिं ए असाधि बहु ब्याधि।

पीड़हिं संतत जीव कहुँ सो किमि लहै समाधि।।121(क)।।

नेम धर्म आचार तप ग्यान जग्य जप दान।

भेषज पुनि कोटिन्ह नहिं रोग जाहिं हरिजान।।121(ख)।।

Eka byaadhi bas nar marahin e asaadhi bahu byaadhi

Peedahin santat jeev kahun so kimi lahai samaadhi.121(ka)

Nem dharm aachaar tap gyaan jagy jap daan

Bheshaj puni kotinh nahin rog jaahin harijaan.121(kha)

दोहा 122

One disease brings mortal end | But countless ills that never mend

Torment souls both night and day | No earthly cure can take away

From one disease alone, men die; but these many incurable diseases constantly torment every soul. How then can anyone find samadhi?

Religious vows, dharma, right conduct, austerity, knowledge, yajna, japa, charity: even millions of such remedies cannot cure these diseases, O devotee of Hari.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

The soul's predicament: countless spiritual maladies afflict it, and no amount of external practice can cure them without divine grace.

चौपाई 117
एहि बिधि सकल जीव जग रोगी। सोक हरष भय प्रीति बियोगी।।

Ehi bidhi sakal jeev jag rogee. sok harash bhay preeti biyogee

In this way, all beings in the world are afflicted with the disease of sorrow, joy, fear, attachment and separation.

मानक रोग कछुक मैं गाए। हहिं सब कें लखि बिरलेन्ह पाए।।

Maanak rog kachhuk main gaae. hahin sab ken lakhi biralenh paae

I have sung of some of the mental ailments; all beings suffer from them, but rare ones recognize them.

जाने ते छीजहिं कछु पापी। नास न पावहिं जन परितापी।।

Jaane te chheejahin kachhu paapee. naas na paavahin jan paritaapee

By knowing them, some sinful ones diminish slightly, but the tormented souls do not find complete destruction of their suffering.

बिषय कुपथ्य पाइ अंकुरे। मुनिहु हृदयँ का नर बापुरे।।

Bishay kupathy paai ankure. munihu hridayan kaa nar baapure

Finding the wrong diet of sensual pleasures, they sprout forth - what to speak of poor humans when even sages' hearts are affected.

राम कृपाँ नासहि सब रोगा। जौं एहि भाँति बनै संयोगा।।

Raam kripaan naasahi sab rogaa. jaun ehi bhaanti banai sanyogaa

By Rama's grace all diseases are destroyed, if such a favorable combination occurs.

सदगुर बैद बचन बिस्वासा। संजम यह न बिषय कै आसा।।

Sadagur baid bachan bisvaasaa. sanjam yah na bishay kai aasaa

The true guru is the physician, faith in his words is the medicine, self-restraint is the regimen, and freedom from desire for sensual pleasures is the diet.

रघुपति भगति सजीवन मूरी। अनूपान श्रद्धा मति पूरी।।

Raghupati bhagati sajeevan mooree. anoopaan shraddhaa mati pooree

Devotion to Raghupati is the life-giving herb, and complete faith and wisdom serve as the vehicle for taking the medicine.

एहि बिधि भलेहिं सो रोग नसाहीं। नाहिं त जतन कोटि नहिं जाहीं।।

Ehi bidhi bhalehin so rog nasaaheen. naahin ta jatan koti nahin jaaheen

In this way alone the disease is well cured; otherwise, even millions of efforts will not make it go away.

जानिअ तब मन बिरुज गोसाँई। जब उर बल बिराग अधिकाई।।

Jaania tab man biruj gosaanee. jab ura bal biraag adhikaaee

Know then, O Lord, that the mind is free from disease when the heart is filled with strength and intense detachment.

सुमति छुधा बाढ़इ नित नई। बिषय आस दुर्बलता गई।।

Sumati chhudhaa baadhai nit naee. bishay aasa durbalataa gaee

Good understanding and hunger for righteousness increase daily, and weakness from desire for sensual pleasures departs.

बिमल ग्यान जल जब सो नहाई। तब रह राम भगति उर छाई।।

Bimal gyaan jal jab so nahaaee. tab rah raam bhagati ura chhaaee

When one bathes in the pure water of knowledge, then Rama's devotion remains pervading the heart.

सिव अज सुक सनकादिक नारद। जे मुनि ब्रह्म बिचार बिसारद।।

Siv aja suk sanakaadik naarad. je muni brahm bichaar bisaarad

Shiva, Brahma, Shuka, the Sanaka sages, Narada, and those sages who are expert in contemplating Brahman.

सब कर मत खगनायक एहा। करिअ राम पद पंकज नेहा।।

Sab kar mat khaganaayak ehaa. karia raam pad pankaj nehaa

The opinion of all of them, O king of birds, is this: one should cultivate love for Rama's lotus feet.

श्रुति पुरान सब ग्रंथ कहाहीं। रघुपति भगति बिना सुख नाहीं।।

Shruti puraan sab granth kahaaheen. raghupati bhagati binaa sukh naaheen

All the Vedas, Puranas and scriptures declare that without devotion to Raghupati there is no happiness.

कमठ पीठ जामहिं बरु बारा। बंध्या सुत बरु काहुहि मारा।।

Kamath peeth jaamahin baru baaraa. bandhyaa sut baru kaahuhi maaraa

Sooner may hair grow on a tortoise's back, or a barren woman's son kill someone.

फूलहिं नभ बरु बहुबिधि फूला। जीव न लह सुख हरि प्रतिकूला।।

Phoolahin nabh baru bahubidhi phoolaa. jeev na lah sukh hari pratikoolaa

Sooner may various flowers bloom in the sky, but a soul opposed to Hari cannot find happiness.

तृषा जाइ बरु मृगजल पाना। बरु जामहिं सस सीस बिषाना।।

Trishaa jaai baru mrigajal paanaa. baru jaamahin sas sees bishaanaa

Sooner may thirst be quenched by drinking a mirage, or horns may grow on a rabbit's head.

अंधकारु बरु रबिहि नसावै। राम बिमुख न जीव सुख पावै।।

Andhakaaru baru rabihi nasaavai. raam bimukh na jeev sukh paavai

Sooner may darkness destroy the sun, but a soul turned away from Rama cannot attain happiness.

हिम ते अनल प्रगट बरु होई। बिमुख राम सुख पाव न कोई।।

Him te anal pragat baru hoee. bimukh raam sukh paav na koee

Sooner may fire emerge from ice, but no one who turns away from Rama can find happiness.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

The guru as physician, faith as medicine, Rama-bhakti as the sanjeevani herb: Tulsidas prescribes the only cure for the soul's maladies. The series of 'impossibilities' (adynata) hammers home the absolute necessity of devotion.

उबारि मथें घृत होइ बरु सिकता ते बरु तेल।

बिनु हरि भजन न भव तरिअ यह सिद्धांत अपेल।।122(क)।।

मसकहि करइ बिंरंचि प्रभु अजहि मसक ते हीन।

अस बिचारि तजि संसय रामहि भजहिं प्रबीन।।122(ख)।।

Ubaari mathen ghrit hoi baru sikataa te baru tel

Binu hari bhajan na bhav taria yah siddhaant apel.122(ka)

Masakahi karai binranchi prabhu ajahi masak te heen

Asa bichaari taji sansay raamahi bhajahin prabeen.122(kha)

दोहा 123क

From sand no butter, stone no oil | Without Hari's grace, endless toil

He lifts the low, humbles the great | Wise souls on Ram meditate

Sooner would butter come from churning water, or oil be pressed from sand, than one cross the ocean of existence without devotion to Hari. This truth is unshakeable.

The Lord can make a gnat into Brahma the Creator, and reduce the mighty Brahma to less than a gnat. Considering this, the wise abandon all doubt and worship Rama.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

God's absolute sovereignty is the final argument for surrender. He who can raise the lowest and humble the highest deserves unconditional devotion.

विनिच्श्रितं वदामि ते न अन्यथा वचांसि मे।

हरिं नरा भजन्ति येऽतिदुस्तरं तरन्ति ते।।122(ग)।।

Vinichshritan vadaami te na anyathaa vachaansi me

Harin naraa bhajanti ye'tidustaran taranti te.122(ga)

श्लोक 3

With certainty I tell you true, | my words are never vain;

Who worship Hari cross with ease | the world's most daunting main.

I tell you with certainty; my words are not otherwise. Those who worship Hari cross the most difficult ocean of existence with ease.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Poddarji's Commentary

मैं आपसे भलीभाँति निश्चित किया हुआ सिद्धांत कहता हूँ;मेरे वचन अन्यथा (मिथ्या) नहीं हैं कि जो मनुष्य श्रीहरि का भजन करते हैं, वे अत्यंत दुस्तर संसारसागर को सहज ही पार कर जाते हैं।

Notes

The definitive Sanskrit shloka, spoken with absolute authority: devotees of Hari cross even the ati-dustara (exceedingly difficult to cross) ocean of samsara.

चौपाई 118
कहेउँ नाथ हरि चरित अनूपा। ब्यास समास स्वमति अनुरुपा।।

Kaheun naath hari charit anoopaa. byaas samaas svamati anurupaa

I have narrated to you, O Lord, the incomparable story of Hari, briefly according to my limited understanding.

श्रुति सिद्धांत इहइ उरगारी। राम भजिअ सब काज बिसारी।।

Shruti siddhaant ihai uragaaree. raam bhajia sab kaaj bisaaree

This is the conclusion of the scriptures, O enemy of serpents: abandoning all other works, one should worship Rama.

प्रभु रघुपति तजि सेइअ काही। मोहि से सठ पर ममता जाही।।

Prabhu raghupati taji seia kaahee. mohi se sath par mamataa jaahee

Abandoning Lord Raghupati, whom else should one serve? Even upon a fool like me, He has shown His affection.

तुम्ह बिग्यानरूप नहिं मोहा। नाथ कीन्हि मो पर अति छोहा।।

Tumh bigyaanaroop nahin mohaa. naath keenhi mo par ati chhohaa

You are the embodiment of knowledge and are not deluded, yet the Lord has shown great love toward me.

पूछिहुँ राम कथा अति पावनि। सुक सनकादि संभु मन भावनि।।

Poochhihun raam kathaa ati paavani. suk sanakaadi sambhu man bhaavani

You have asked about the most sacred story of Rama, which delights the minds of Shuka, Sanaka and others, and Shiva.

सत संगति दुर्लभ संसारा। निमिष दंड भरि एकउ बारा।।

Sat sangati durlabh sansaaraa. nimish dand bhari ekau baaraa

Good company is rare in this world, even for a moment or an instant.

देखु गरुड़ निज हृदयँ बिचारी। मैं रघुबीर भजन अधिकारी।।

Dekhu garud nij hridayan bichaaree. main raghubeer bhajan adhikaaree

Look, Garuda, and consider in your heart whether I am worthy of devotion to Raghuvira.

सकुनाधम सब भाँति अपावन। प्रभु मोहि कीन्ह बिदित जग पावन।।

Sakunaadham sab bhaanti apaavan. prabhu mohi keenh bidit jag paavan

I am the lowest of birds, impure in every way, yet the Lord has made me known as pure throughout the world.

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Kakbhushundi's humility shines as he marvels at divine grace. Even the lowest can be purified through Rama's compassion and the rare gift of satsanga.

आजु धन्य मैं धन्य अति जद्यपि सब बिधि हीन।

निज जन जानि राम मोहि संत समागम दीन।।123(क)।।

नाथ जथामति भाषेउँ राखेउँ नहिं कछु गोइ।

चरित सिंधु रघुनायक थाह कि पावइ कोइ।।123।।

Aaju dhany main dhany ati jadyapi sab bidhi heen

Nij jan jaani raam mohi sant samaagam deen.123(ka)

Naath jathaamati bhaasheun raakheun nahin kachhu goi

Charit sindhu raghunaayak thaah ki paavai koi (123)

दोहा 123ख

Blessed am I today, though humble and small | Rama grants saintly company to all

I've spoken my heart, concealed nothing within | Who can measure His deeds' ocean therein?

Today I am blessed, supremely blessed, though lacking in every way. Knowing me as His own devotee, Rama has granted me the company of saints.

O Lord, I have spoken according to my understanding, holding nothing in reserve. Who can fathom the ocean of the Raghu King's divine deeds?

Commentary & Notes ↓

Notes

Kakbhushundi expresses profound gratitude for Garuda's companionship and acknowledges the infinite, unfathomable nature of Rama's lila.

चौपाई 119
सुमिरि राम के गुन गन नाना। पुनि पुनि हरष भुसुंडि सुजाना।।

Sumiri raam ke gun gan naanaa. puni puni harash bhusundi sujaanaa

Remembering the countless virtues of Rama, the wise Bhushundi rejoiced again and again.

महिमा निगम नेति करि गाई। अतुलित बल प्रताप प्रभुताई।।

Mahimaa nigam neti kari gaaee. atulit bal prataap prabhutaaee

The Vedas sing His glory saying 'not this, not this' - His incomparable strength, glory and lordship are beyond description.

सिव अज पूज्य चरन रघुराई। मो पर कृपा परम मृदुलाई।।

Siv aja poojy charan raghuraaee. mo par kripaa param mridulaaee

The feet of Raghurai are worshipped by Shiva and Brahma, yet He shows supreme compassion and gentleness toward me.

अस सुभाउ कहुँ सुनउँ न देखउँ। केहि खगेस रघुपति सम लेखउँ।।

Asa subhaau kahun sunaun na dekhaun. kehi khages raghupati sam lekhaun

Such is His nature - O king of birds, I neither hear nor see anyone comparable to Raghupati.

साधक सिद्ध बिमुक्त उदासी। कबि कोबिद कृतग्य संन्यासी।।

Saadhak siddh bimukt udaasee. kabi kobid kritagy sannyaasee

Spiritual seekers, accomplished sages, liberated souls, renunciants, poets, scholars, and grateful ascetics -

जोगी सूर सुतापस ग्यानी। धर्म निरत पंडित बिग्यानी।।

Jogee soor sutaapas gyaanee. dharm nirat pandit bigyaanee

Yogis, heroes, great ascetics, wise men, those devoted to dharma, learned scholars and scientists -

तरहिं न बिनु सेएँ मम स्वामी। राम नमामि नमामि नमामी।।

Tarahin na binu seen mam svaamee. raam namaami namaami namaamee

None can be saved without serving my Lord. I bow to Rama, I bow, I bow repeatedly.

सरन गएँ मो से अघ रासी। होहिं सुद्ध नमामि अबिनासी।।

Saran gaen mo se agha raasee. hohin suddh namaami abinaasee

Even one as sinful as me becomes pure upon taking His refuge. I bow to the imperishable Lord.

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Notes

Kakbhushundi's final devotional outpouring. No category of spiritual attainment suffices without Rama's grace. His triple 'namami' (I bow) echoes the Manas's deepest devotional current.

जासु नाम भव भेषज हरन घोर त्रय सूल।

सो कृपालु मोहि तो पर सदा रहउ अनुकूल।।124(क)।।

सुनि भुसुंडि के बचन सुभ देखि राम पद नेह।

बोलेउ प्रेम सहित गिरा गरुड़ बिगत संदेह।।124(ख)।।

Jaasu naam bhav bheshaj haran ghor tray sool

So kripaalu mohi to par sadaa rahau anukool.124(ka)

Suni bhusundi ke bachan subh dekhi raam pad neh

Boleu prem sahit giraa garud bigat sandeh.124(kha)

दोहा 125

His Name cures birth and death, | removes the threefold pain;

May that gracious Lord on us | forever kind remain.

May that compassionate Lord, whose Name is the medicine for the disease of worldly existence and who removes the three terrible afflictions, remain ever favorable to me and to you.

Hearing Bhushundi's auspicious words and seeing his love for Rama's feet, Garuda spoke with love and in a voice free from doubt.

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Poddarji's Commentary

जिनका नाम जन्म-मरणरूपी रोग की अचूक औषध है और तीनों भयंकर पीड़ाओं (आधिदैविक, आधिभौतिक और आध्यात्मिक दुःखों) को हरनेवाला है, वे कृपालु श्रीरामजी मुझपर और आपपर सदा प्रसन्न रहें।

Notes

Kakbhushundi's parting blessing: Rama's Name is 'bhava-bheshaj' (medicine for samsara) and relieves all three types of suffering (adhyatmika, adhibhautika, adhidaivika). Garuda, now freed from doubt, responds.

चौपाई 120
मै कृत्कृत्य भयउँ तव बानी। सुनि रघुबीर भगति रस सानी।।

Mai kritkrity bhayaun tav baanee. suni raghubeer bhagati ras saanee

I have become fulfilled and accomplished by hearing your words, which are imbued with the nectar of devotion to Raghuvira.

राम चरन नूतन रति भई। माया जनित बिपति सब गई।।

Raam charan nootan rati bhaee. maayaa janit bipati sab gaee

Fresh love for Rama's feet has awakened in me, and all the troubles born of maya have departed.

मोह जलधि बोहित तुम्ह भए। मो कहँ नाथ बिबिध सुख दए।।

Moh jaladhi bohit tumh bhae. mo kahan naath bibidh sukh dae

You have become a boat to cross the ocean of delusion, O master, and have given me manifold happiness.

मो पहिं होइ न प्रति उपकारा। बंदउँ तव पद बारहिं बारा।।

Mo pahin hoi na prati upakaaraa. bandaun tav pad baarahin baaraa

I cannot repay your kindness in any way; I bow to your feet again and again.

पूरन काम राम अनुरागी। तुम्ह सम तात न कोउ बड़भागी।।

Pooran kaam raam anuraagee. tumh sam taat na kou badabhaagee

You are fulfilled in purpose, devoted to Rama; there is none as fortunate as you, dear one.

संत बिटप सरिता गिरि धरनी। पर हित हेतु सबन्ह कै करनी।।

Sant bitap saritaa giri dharanee. par hit hetu sabanh kai karanee

Saints are like trees, rivers, mountains, and earth - all act for the welfare of others.

संत हृदय नवनीत समाना। कहा कबिन्ह परि कहै न जाना।।

Sant hriday navaneet samaanaa. kahaa kabinh pari kahai na jaanaa

The heart of a saint is like fresh butter, as poets have said, though it cannot be fully described.

निज परिताप द्रवइ नवनीता। पर दुख द्रवहिं संत सुपुनीता।।

Nij paritaap dravai navaneetaa. par dukh dravahin sant supuneetaa

Fresh butter melts from its own heat, but pure saints melt from others' sorrows.

जीवन जन्म सुफल मम भयऊ। तव प्रसाद संसय सब गयऊ।।

Jeevan janm suphal mam bhayaoo. tav prasaad sansay sab gayaoo

My life and birth have become fruitful; by your grace, all my doubts have vanished.

जानेहु सदा मोहि निज किंकर। पुनि पुनि उमा कहइ बिहंगबर।।

Jaanehu sadaa mohi nij kinkar. puni puni umaa kahai bihangabar

Know me always as your servant, says Garuda to Uma again and again.

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Notes

Garuda's overflowing gratitude. The butter metaphor is among the Manas's most tender: butter melts from its own heat, but saints melt from others' sorrow. The Kakbhushundi-Garuda dialogue draws to its close.

तासु चरन सिरु नाइ करि प्रेम सहित मतिधीर।

गयउ गरुड़ बैकुंठ तब हृदयँ राखि रघुबीर।।125(क)।।

गिरिजा संत समागम सम न लाभ कछु आन।

बिनु हरि कृपा न होइ सो गावहिं बेद पुरान।।125(ख)।।

Taasu charan siru naai kari prem sahit matidheer

Gayau garud baikunth tab hridayan raakhi raghubeer.125(ka)

Girijaa sant samaagam sam na laabh kachhu aan

Binu hari kripaa na hoi so gaavahin bed puraan.125(kha)

दोहा 126क

With love he bowed at holy feet | Then soared to Vaikuntha's seat

No blessing equals saints' embrace | Won only by the Lord's sweet grace

Bowing his head at those feet with love, the wise Garuda departed. He went to Vaikuntha, holding Raghuvira in his heart.

Girija, there is no gain equal to the company of saints. Without Hari's grace, this cannot come to be; so sing the Vedas and Puranas.

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Notes

The Kakbhushundi-Garuda dialogue concludes. Garuda departs for Vaikuntha. Shiva tells Parvati the supreme teaching: satsanga is the rarest gain, available only through divine grace.

चौपाई 121
कहेउँ परम पुनीत इतिहासा। सुनत श्रवन छूटहिं भव पासा।।

Kaheun param puneet itihaasaa. sunat shravan chhootahin bhav paasaa

I have narrated this supremely sacred history, hearing which through the ears breaks the bonds of worldly existence.

प्रनत कल्पतरु करुना पुंजा। उपजइ प्रीति राम पद कंजा।।

Pranat kalpataru karunaa punjaa. upajai preeti raam pad kanjaa

It is a wish-fulfilling tree for devotees and an embodiment of compassion, generating love for Rama's lotus feet.

मन क्रम बचन जनित अघ जाई। सुनहिं जे कथा श्रवन मन लाई।।

Man kram bachan janit agha jaaee. sunahin je kathaa shravan man laaee

The sins born of mind, action and speech are destroyed for those who listen to this story with attentive ears and heart.

तीर्थाटन साधन समुदाई। जोग बिराग ग्यान निपुनाई।।

Teerthaatan saadhan samudaaee. jog biraag gyaan nipunaaee

Pilgrimage to holy places, the multitude of spiritual practices, mastery in yoga, detachment and knowledge.

नाना कर्म धर्म ब्रत दाना। संजम दम जप तप मख नाना।।

Naanaa karm dharm brat daanaa. sanjam dam jap tap makh naanaa

Various karmas, religious duties, vows and charity, self-control, restraint, chanting, penance and numerous sacrifices.

भूत दया द्विज गुर सेवकाई। बिद्या बिनय बिबेक बड़ाई।।

Bhoot dayaa dvij gur sevakaaee. bidyaa binay bibek badaaee

Compassion toward all beings, service to brahmins and guru, learning, humility and the glory of discrimination.

जहँ लगि साधन बेद बखानी। सब कर फल हरि भगति भवानी।।

Jahan lagi saadhan bed bakhaanee. sab kar phal hari bhagati bhavaanee

Whatever spiritual practices the Vedas have described, O Bhavani, the fruit of all is devotion to Hari.

सो रघुनाथ भगति श्रुति गाई। राम कृपाँ काहूँ एक पाई।।

So raghunaath bhagati shruti gaaee. raam kripaan kaahoon eka paaee

That devotion to Raghunath which the scriptures have sung, someone obtains by Rama's grace alone.

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Notes

Shiva's summation to Parvati: all spiritual practices culminate in Hari-bhakti. The Ramcharitmanas itself is the sacred lake in which this devotion is found.

मुनि दुर्लभ हरि भगति नर पावहिं बिनहिं प्रयास।

जे यह कथा निरंतर सुनहिं मानि बिस्वास।।126।।

Muni durlabh hari bhagati nar paavahin binahin prayaas

Je yah kathaa nirantar sunahin maani bisvaas (126)

दोहा 126ख

What sages seek through lifelong prayer | men gain through faithful ear,

Who hear this holy tale with trust | find Hari's love draws near.

That devotion to Hari which even sages find difficult to attain, ordinary souls receive without effort: those who listen to this sacred story continuously, with faith and trust.

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Notes

The extraordinary power of shravana (listening): the path of hearing Rama-katha with faith is presented as more accessible than rigorous sadhana, yet equally transformative.

चौपाई 122
सोइ सर्बग्य गुनी सोइ ग्याता। सोइ महि मंडित पंडित दाता।।

Soi sarbagy gunee soi gyaataa. soi mahi mandit pandit daataa

He alone is all-knowing, virtuous and wise. He alone is the earth-adorning scholar and generous donor.

धर्म परायन सोइ कुल त्राता। राम चरन जा कर मन राता।।

Dharm paraayan soi kul traataa. raam charan jaa kar man raataa

He alone is righteous and the savior of his lineage, whose mind is colored with devotion to Rama's feet.

नीति निपुन सोइ परम सयाना। श्रुति सिद्धांत नीक तेहिं जाना।।

Neeti nipun soi param sayaanaa. shruti siddhaant neek tehin jaanaa

He alone is skilled in righteousness and supremely intelligent, who has well understood the principles of the scriptures.

सोइ कबि कोबिद सोइ रनधीरा। जो छल छाड़ि भजइ रघुबीरा।।

Soi kabi kobid soi ranadheeraa. jo chhal chhaadi bhajai raghubeeraa

He alone is a true poet, scholar and brave warrior, who abandoning deceit worships the hero Rama.

धन्य देस सो जहँ सुरसरी। धन्य नारि पतिब्रत अनुसरी।।

Dhany des so jahan surasaree. dhany naari patibrat anusaree

Blessed is that land where the celestial Ganga flows. Blessed is that woman who follows the path of devotion to her husband.

धन्य सो भूपु नीति जो करई। धन्य सो द्विज निज धर्म न टरई।।

Dhany so bhoopu neeti jo karaee. dhany so dvij nij dharm na taraee

Blessed is that king who practices righteousness. Blessed is that Brahmin who does not deviate from his dharma.

सो धन धन्य प्रथम गति जाकी। धन्य पुन्य रत मति सोइ पाकी।।

So dhan dhany pratham gati jaakee. dhany puny rat mati soi paakee

Blessed is that wealth which leads to the highest goal. Blessed is that mature intellect devoted to virtue.

धन्य घरी सोइ जब सतसंगा। धन्य जन्म द्विज भगति अभंगा।।

Dhany gharee soi jab satasangaa. dhany janm dvij bhagati abhangaa

Blessed is that moment when there is association with the holy. Blessed is that birth of a Brahmin with unwavering devotion.

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Notes

Tulsidas's grand litany of 'dhanya' (blessed): every quality, every station in life, finds its ultimate meaning only when connected to devotion to Rama.

सो कुल धन्य उमा सुनु जगत पूज्य सुपुनीत।

श्रीरघुबीर परायन जेहिं नर उपज बिनीत।।127।।

So kul dhany umaa sunu jagat poojy supuneet

Shreeraghubeer paraayan jehin nar upaj bineet (127)

दोहा 127

That house shines bright as morning star | where dwells a gentle heart,

Devoted to Raghubir's name | from worldly pride apart.

Listen, Uma: that family is truly blessed, worthy of the world's reverence, supremely pure, in which is born a humble soul devoted to the blessed Raghuvira.

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Notes

Shiva addresses Parvati: the highest blessing for any family is to produce a humble devotee of Rama. True nobility springs not from worldly status but from bhakti.

चौपाई 123
मति अनुरूप कथा मैं भाषी। जद्यपि प्रथम गुप्त करि राखी।।

Mati anuroop kathaa main bhaashee. jadyapi pratham gupt kari raakhee

I have spoken this story according to your understanding, though I had kept it secret at first.

तव मन प्रीति देखि अधिकाई। तब मैं रघुपति कथा सुनाई।।

Tav man preeti dekhi adhikaaee. tab main raghupati kathaa sunaaee

Seeing the great love in your heart, I then narrated the story of Lord Raghupati.

यह न कहिअ सठही हठसीलहि। जो मन लाइ न सुन हरि लीलहि।।

Yah na kahia sathahee hathaseelahi. jo man laai na sun hari leelahi

This should not be told to the foolish and obstinate who do not listen to Hari's divine play with focused mind.

कहिअ न लोभिहि क्रोधहि कामिहि। जो न भजइ सचराचर स्वामिहि।।

Kahia na lobhihi krodhahi kaamihi. jo na bhajai sacharaachar svaamihi

Do not tell it to the greedy, angry, or lustful who do not worship the Lord of all moving and unmoving beings.

द्विज द्रोहिहि न सुनाइअ कबहूँ। सुरपति सरिस होइ नृप जबहूँ।।

Dvij drohihi na sunaaia kabahoon. surapati saris hoi nrip jabahoon

Never narrate it to one who hates Brahmins, even if he becomes a king like Indra.

राम कथा के तेइ अधिकारी। जिन्ह कें सतसंगति अति प्यारी।।

Raam kathaa ke tei adhikaaree. jinh ken satasangati ati pyaaree

Those who are qualified for Rama's story are they who hold satsang most dear.

गुर पद प्रीति नीति रत जेई। द्विज सेवक अधिकारी तेई।।

Gur pad preeti neeti rat jeee. dvij sevak adhikaaree teee

Those who have love for the Guru's feet and are devoted to righteousness, such servants of Brahmins are qualified.

ता कहँ यह बिसेष सुखदाई। जाहि प्रानप्रिय श्रीरघुराई।।

Taa kahan yah bisesh sukhadaaee. jaahi praanapriy shreeraghuraaee

For one to whom Sri Raghurai is dearer than life, this story brings special joy.

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Notes

Shiva explains the adhikara (qualification) for receiving Rama-katha: love for satsanga, reverence for the guru, devotion to dharma, and above all, cherishing Rama as one's very life-breath.

राम चरन रति जो चह अथवा पद निर्बान।

भाव सहित सो यह कथा करउ श्रवन पुट पान।।128।।

Raam charan rati jo chah athavaa pad nirbaan

Bhaav sahit so yah kathaa karau shravan put paan (128)

दोहा 128

Who seeks love's nectar at Ram's feet | or freedom's highest prize,

Let him drink deep this sacred tale | through devoted ears and eyes.

One who desires love for Rama's feet, or one who seeks the state of nirvana: let that one drink this story with devotion through the cups of the ears.

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Notes

The Ramcharitmanas is the perfect remedy for both the bhakta (seeking divine love) and the mumukshu (seeking liberation). The metaphor of 'drinking through the ears' makes shravana an act of intimate, life-giving nourishment.

चौपाई 124
राम कथा गिरिजा मैं बरनी। कलि मल समनि मनोमल हरनी।।

Raam kathaa girijaa main baranee. kali mal samani manomal haranee

O Girija, I have narrated the story of Rama, which destroys the impurities of Kali Yuga and removes the dirt of the mind.

संसृति रोग सजीवन मूरी। राम कथा गावहिं श्रुति सूरी।।

Sansriti rog sajeevan mooree. raam kathaa gaavahin shruti sooree

It is the life-giving herb for the disease of worldly existence; the Vedas and sages sing this story of Rama.

एहि महँ रुचिर सप्त सोपाना। रघुपति भगति केर पंथाना।।

Ehi mahan ruchir sapt sopaanaa. raghupati bhagati ker panthaanaa

In this story are seven beautiful steps, which are the pathways to devotion for Lord Raghupati.

अति हरि कृपा जाहि पर होई। पाउँ देइ एहिं मारग सोई।।

Ati hari kripaa jaahi par hoee. paaun dei ehin maarag soee

Upon whomever the supreme grace of Hari falls, He places their feet upon this path.

मन कामना सिद्धि नर पावा। जे यह कथा कपट तजि गावा।।

Man kaamanaa siddhi nar paavaa. je yah kathaa kapat taji gaavaa

Those who sing this story abandoning deceit attain the fulfillment of their heart's desires.

कहहिं सुनहिं अनुमोदन करहीं। ते गोपद इव भवनिधि तरहीं।।

Kahahin sunahin anumodan karaheen. te gopad iva bhavanidhi taraheen

Those who speak, listen, and approve of it cross the ocean of existence as easily as a cow's footprint.

सुनि सब कथा हृदयँ अति भाई। गिरिजा बोली गिरा सुहाई।।

Suni sab kathaa hridayan ati bhaaee. girijaa bolee giraa suhaaee

Having heard the entire story with great joy in her heart, Girija spoke in sweet words.

नाथ कृपाँ मम गत संदेहा। राम चरन उपजेउ नव नेहा।।

Naath kripaan mam gat sandehaa. raam charan upajeu nav nehaa

O Lord, by your grace my doubts have departed, and fresh love for Rama's feet has arisen.

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Notes

Shiva's closing words and Parvati's response. The seven kandas are seven steps (sopanas) ascending toward Rama. The ocean of samsara becomes a puddle for those who embrace this katha. Parvati's own bhakti is renewed.

मैं कृतकृत्य भइउँ अब तव प्रसाद बिस्वेस।

उपजी राम भगति दृढ़ बीते सकल कलेस।।129।।

Main kritakrity bhaiun aba tav prasaad bisves

Upajee raam bhagati dridh beete sakal kales (129)

दोहा 129

Rama's tale destroys Kali's stain | cleanses every mental pain

Seven steps of devotion's way | lead to bliss that lasts for aye

I have become fulfilled now, by your grace, O Lord of the Universe. Firm devotion to Rama has arisen in me, and all sorrows have come to an end.

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Notes

THE FINAL VERSE OF THE RAMCHARITMANAS. Parvati declares herself kritakritya (fulfilled). The entire Manas, from Shiva's opening narration to this closing doha, forms one great circle: the arising of firm, unshakeable Rama-bhakti and the end of all sorrow. Tulsidas places the last word in the mouth of the Divine Mother, the universal listener who stands for every soul receiving this sacred gift.